1. Hard (4.45 stars, 302 notes)
2. Insane (4.98 stars, 416 notes)
3. Normal (2.51 stars, 191 notes)

~ Mapset ~
Normal : 100%
Hard : 100%
Lunatic : 100%
SB : 100%

~ Special Thanks ~
1) TicClick (MOD)
2) Andrea (MOD)
3) Rare (MOD)
4) BCI (MOD)
5) RikiH_ (MOD)
6) Satellite (MOD)
7) BeatofIke (MOD)
8) Verlaren (MOD)
9) orioncomet (MOD)
10) Niva (MOD)

1. You have a misspelled tag, "avetchno" (or "avtechno")

1. 00:48:770 (1,2,3) - these linear sliders look boring to me. How about bendind them or something like that?
2. 00:55:030 (1,2,3) - ^
3. 01:22:161 (1) - consider removing a repeat to make it play better (it's Normal anyway)
4. 02:15:900 (5) - I'd rather not skip the downbeat
5. 02:31:030 (1) - "consider removing a repeat to make it play better (it's Normal anyway)"
6. 03:08:596 (1) - add finish from default soft sampleset here

1. 01:17:987 (1) - move its central anchor point 1 grid left to make it nicer
2. 03:08:596 (1) - "add finish from default soft sampleset here"
3. 03:16:943 (3) - I'd break the pattern and move it somewhere else, because there's a new sentence in vocals there

1. 00:55:813 (3,1,2) - better space them out, plays better
2. 01:16:422 (2) - move it few grids up (^)
3. 01:33:509 (3) - make it 1/4 shorter and add a note on the red tick to follow vocals better
4. 02:04:422 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - zzzzzz you need to space them out, else your difficulty feels a bit boring, just like a Hard one
5. 02:24:770 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 02:39:770 (2) - better change its head's sampleset to normal (yeah I know it should be 1/4 later but anyways)
7. 02:41:856 (2) - start a slider here to follow vocals
8. 02:45:639 (1,3,2,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe http://puu.sh/2BfMa? This is lots better
9. 03:10:683 (1,3,4,5,6,7) - what a mess, either make a proper curve or space them correctly using grid size 4
10. 03:16:421 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ (also, I'd replace these two with repeating sliders, because of the slow part)
11. 03:34:030 (2) - add a hitnormal on head? Feels a bit empty without it
12. 03:36:117 (2) - ^ (I guess I skipped some of such sliders in the past)
13. 03:36:639 (3) - "make it 1/4 shorter and add a note on the red tick"

TicClick wrote:

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General

1. You have a misspelled tag, "avetchno" (or "avtechno")

[Normal]

1. 00:48:770 (1,2,3) - these linear sliders look boring to me. How about bendind them or something like that?
2. 00:55:030 (1,2,3) - ^
3. 01:22:161 (1) - consider removing a repeat to make it play better (it's Normal anyway) // No, it's follows the vocal
4. 02:15:900 (5) - I'd rather not skip the downbeat
5. 02:31:030 (1) - "consider removing a repeat to make it play better (it's Normal anyway)" // No, it's follows the vocal
6. 03:08:596 (1) - add finish from default soft sampleset here

Hard
I don't know, it feels kind of monotonous without triplets, try adding some (for example, put a note on 01:32:465)

1. 01:17:987 (1) - move its central anchor point 1 grid left to make it nicer
2. 03:08:596 (1) - "add finish from default soft sampleset here"
3. 03:16:943 (3) - I'd break the pattern and move it somewhere else, because there's a new sentence in vocals there

[Insane]

1. 00:55:813 (3,1,2) - better space them out, plays better // It could break the flow
2. 01:16:422 (2) - move it few grids up (^)
3. 01:33:509 (3) - make it 1/4 shorter and add a note on the red tick to follow vocals better
4. 02:04:422 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - zzzzzz you need to space them out, else your difficulty feels a bit boring, just like a Hard one //Fixed, but my changes is really what you mean?
5. 02:24:770 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 02:39:770 (2) - better change its head's sampleset to normal (yeah I know it should be 1/4 later but anyways)
7. 02:41:856 (2) - start a slider here to follow vocals
8. 02:45:639 (1,3,2,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe http://puu.sh/2BfMa? This is lots better
9. 03:10:683 (1,3,4,5,6,7) - what a mess, either make a proper curve or space them correctly using grid size 4
10. 03:16:421 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ (also, I'd replace these two with repeating sliders, because of the slow part)
11. 03:34:030 (2) - add a hitnormal on head? Feels a bit empty without it
12. 03:36:117 (2) - ^ (I guess I skipped some of such sliders in the past)
13. 03:36:639 (3) - "make it 1/4 shorter and add a note on the red tick"

The main problem your Insane has is quite low spacing. Please please please, you better increase spacing between all the objects, or try to get someone to test play it and ask their opinion. // It plays fine, and sorry no change for increasing a spacing. If someone say this again, i'll fix

TMAstraf wrote:

Normal:
00:58:943 Add Circle
03:09:639 Add Cirlce

Hard:
Maybe Make Distance Spacing 1,2x
03:08:596 - 03:23:204 Add more circles and sliders, its hard difficulty =)

I hope its will help, thats all =)
Can I hope for M4M? :3

1. Add epilepsy warning due to the storyboard effects and pulses.

1. Settings are way too high for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, reduce HP OD and AR by 1 tick at least.

1. 01:22:161 (1) - A slider with so many slider repeats might be confusing for beginners to read, try to do something else instead.
2. 02:31:030 (1) - Same as above for the same reason, please fix this.
3. 03:22:161 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.

1. Reduce HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 01:23:726 (5,1) - New combo should go on (5) and not on (1) since the new section actually begins there.
2. 02:15:899 (4) - Unsnapped slider end, please make sure to resnap it correctly.
3. 03:34:160 (2) - Same as above for the same reason.
4. 03:38:334 (3) - Once again, unsnapped slider end.

1. 00:46:683 (1) - It would be better if you stack this slider correctly to the previous circle.
2. 02:03:639 (6,1) - Wrong spacing, please make sure to fix this with using distance snap properly.
3. 02:08:074 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.
4. 02:08:074 (1,2) - Once again wrong spacing, they're too close each other.
5. 02:24:247 (6) - Unsnapped slider end, please make sure to resnap it correctly.
6. 02:33:117 (9,1) - New combo should go on (9) and not on (1) since the new section actually begins there.
7. 03:15:247 (2) - Same as above for the same reason.

1. I'd like to see also ryuusei-P as a variation (ya know it makes the search easier+we have ranked maps with - between composer and P)
2. why .psd in SB folder DD:
3. try 120,46,165 for 3rd (light violet) colour, I bet your colour now doesn't fit at all cause of its bright
4. why not using more fade at that things in angles (01:09:387 - ) now it's too, too bright and covert Luka's eyes, I'd made it more soft

1. any reasons for OD4? 3 makes it more balanced and easier for easiest diff
2. 00:42:770 (2) - by swimming through the map, it's only one 1/2 place in this phytmn, consider to delete that note
3. 00:44:596 (1,2,3) - how about remaking the pattern like http://puu.sh/2HuqE.jpg (ofc you can make it better) it'll increase flow with (3) and next (1)
4. 01:02:856 (4,1) - move (4) to 328|248 and (1) to 304|114 for making a perfect pentagon, don't forget to change spacing at other objects for making it stable
5. 01:23:726 (1) - why NC here? feel pointless+breaks your NC pattern. RNC pls
6. 02:38:335 (3,1) - inconsistent spacing
7. 02:40:161 (2) - no no and no that red end doesn't make any sence, both vocal and music ends at 02:40:422 - you'd better follow the vocal and end this slider there
8. 03:21:117 (5) - NC here, for new part of vocal and NC pattern
9. 03:26:596 - end the spinner here, it'll give more time for spinning+your current end feels off D:
10. 03:37:813 (4) - missed NC cause of your NC pattern

1. 03:12:770 (3,1) - swap NC pls for vocal changes and combopattern
2. 03:21:117 (5) - NC for ^

1. why HP/OD 8 DDDDDDD: -1 to both pls, your Insane isn't that hard

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[General]
add "Nico Douga" tag?
Check AiMod plz many unsnap note

[SB]
01:21:639 - よかった・・・
02:30:509 - できない・・・
forget "・・・" ? // all was intentional

[Insane]
HP-1?
00:45:900 (4) - nazi sorry 1grid up // I think it's fine. This is how the grid snap works, I think
00:47:465 (3,4,5,6,7) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. // I think the current one is fine

01:23:465 - add note? // no
01:27:770 (5) - remove note or 01:31:943 - add note? // no
02:32:335 - ^ // no
03:30:901 (5) - ^ // no

[Hard]
HP-1? If you modify the above (insane drain)
other good :3

[Normal]
00:42:248 - add note
00:58:943 - ^
02:38:074 (2) - remove note?
03:23:204 (1) - spinner last 03:25:291 - here?
really good :3

sorry short modding ;_; go ranked~

1. Nice Storyboard! :3

1. 00:45:639 (3) - I would copy/paste the slider at 00:44:596 (1) to replace this slider. Just a suggestion.
2. 01:20:074 (1,3) - I would suggest curving these sliders a bit for a more interesting flow.
3. 01:23:726 (2,3,1) - Optional, but stacking these circles would make the pattern more readable. I would admit that the current pattern is still good!
4. 03:19:030 (2,3) - You have inconsistent spacing here including one at 03:21:117 (1,2).

1. Since it's a slow map, I would reduce the approach rate to 6. Just a suggestion.
2. 01:12:248 (2) - Try reverse selection. It gives a loop-like flow to the map when playing.

1. I would reduce the drain rate to 7, but KEEP the overall difficulty to 8, since it's a long map. You don't have to fix since it's Insane difficulty, but I would recommend it.
2. 00:36:117 (1) - Try adding a soft-whistle ONLY at the start of this slider. It gives a nice emphasis with the piano playing. If you like, add it to the rest of these sliders for consistency: 00:38:204 (1), 00:44:465 (1), 00:52:813 (1), 02:01:683 (1), 02:03:770 (1), 02:10:030 (1).