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nao - Komorebi Fresnel

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Topic Starter
Laurier
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月14日 at 20:02:03

Artist: nao
Title: Komorebi Fresnel
Source: 1/2 summer
Tags: ALcot Honey Comb
BPM: 202
Filesize: 6594kb
Play Time: 03:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.8 stars, 253 notes)
  2. Hard (4.98 stars, 523 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 745 notes)
  4. Normal (4.09 stars, 330 notes)
Download: nao - Komorebi Fresnel
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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LQA20Ans
From #modreqs

Because I'm novice modder... I not sure that my mod will help you.


[Easy]

-01:00:037 (4,1) - add a NC on first one and delete NC on other one.

-01:30:334 (1) - this spinner is too short for easy diff?
better making empty space instead of insert spinner imo.

-02:28:849 (3) - NC


[Normal]

-00:53:206 (5,6) - How about using one repeat slider?

-01:38:651 (2) - rotate this slider about -20?(origin - selection centre)

-01:49:938 (4,1) - add NC on circle and delete NC on slider

-01:50:532 (1,2) - how about this one?


-02:24:691 - Add circle?(+clap)

-02:34:196 - ^

-03:04:196 (2) - Add NC

-03:22:315 (2) - ^


[Hard]

-00:27:364 (1,2,3) - some suggestion.


-00:29:592 (1) - NC

-00:32:711 (6) - Ctrl + g

-00:33:008 (7) - ^

-00:33:750 (2,3) - change to one slider would be better imo.

-01:05:087 (3) - NC

-01:05:829 (5) - ^

-02:22:018 (2) - ^

-03:03:008 (1) - clap sound on slidertick looks weird... Did you forgot to use S:C1 or use S:C2 deliberately?

-03:23:206 (3) - NC


[Insane]

Everything is perfect!


Plz rank this. I can't wait it!

Laurier, You're so PRO!!! :) Take my star.
Topic Starter
Laurier
thanks !! accept some
Skyzo
I don't have anything to say... Everything is perfect.
Rank this, please.
Topic Starter
Laurier

skyzoderp wrote:

I don't have anything to say... Everything is perfect.
Rank this, please.
wow thanks!!
I will rank this map !!
[ Zzz ]
hi~ Laurier

Easy

03:13:404 (3) - Delete

02:51:721 (4) - http://puu.sh/2KrjY.jpg

03:39:839 (3) - http://puu.sh/2Krp4.jpg Can you try (Beat)

Normal

03:19:641 (3) - The tail of the slider Clap

03:20:829 (1) - http://puu.sh/2KrK9.jpg At the halfway point Clap

Hard

01:51:424 (7) - The tail of the slider Clap

02:19:938 (5) - ^

02:20:829 (1) - ^

Insane

01:10:730 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Kse5.jpg Slider +1

Good Map~
Topic Starter
Laurier
thanks ^^
SakiK
Insaneの音付けの提案

00:10:136 (3) - こっちはシンバルなってるしFinish合うと思う
00:10:730 (1,2) - ここのsliderendにデフォのWhistle音量抑え目入れるとアクセントついて面白いかも
00:11:325 (3,4) - 3→4で音量ちょっと上げてく感じでFinish
00:26:176 (1) - finish抜け
00:30:334 (2) - 頭Whistleの00:30:631 (3) - 頭Clap
00:49:641 (5) - Whistle
00:59:295 (6) - Clap欲しい
01:03:899 (4) - 頭Whistleでfinish前に貯めつくる
01:06:275 (5) - Whistle
01:25:211 (3) - 終わりもClap 微妙かなぁ
02:36:572 (4) - 頭Whistle 上と同じ
02:57:661 (3) - 真ん中Whistle
03:02:414 (3,4,5,6) - めんどいけどちょっとづつ音量上げて盛り上がらせたい 一番いいとこやし

配置と音取りは言うことなし gl
termerys
I wish I could find any mistakes in the mapset. But dayum, it's flawless!
I wish I have kd to give it to you, but I don't.
Go for the rank!

Ps. sry for not keeping in touch, I just came back from a trip
CrystilonZ
Aww Laurier
I can't mod this :( It's too perfect !!
I will give you a ticket instead, kay ?
Topic Starter
Laurier

CrystilonZ wrote:

Aww Laurier
I can't mod this :( It's too perfect !!
I will give you a ticket instead, kay ?
don't worry
thanks for chacked my map
Hanabi
awesome map.. i should practice your map ;)
ryza

Please make more maps!!
Topic Starter
Laurier
!?
pro!!
Satellite
good luck star~

really awesome!
InabaTewi
This is a good map :P
I love it XD
Topic Starter
Laurier

InabaTewi wrote:

This is a good map :P
I love it XD
thanks >w<
InabaTewi

Laurier wrote:

InabaTewi wrote:

This is a good map :P
I love it XD
thanks >w<
I will support you forever >///<
Otoha_old_1
Hi~ mod 4 mod as promised~

[General]
Inconsistency in Tags: Hard and Normal have one more space after "ALcot". please check.

[Insane]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:11:917 - snap to 00:11:919
(it's ok but if you snap it it will be the best)

00:08:800 - you can add a note with whistle to implement the rising tension
00:16:226 (5) - I think it's better if you put it at 00:16:003 - , and furthermore you can try adding clap on this note an on 00:15:928 -
00:21:275 (6,7,1) - increase the spacing cause the small spacing does not fit with the slider shape.
01:05:829 (3) - add NC
01:09:988 (5) - ^
01:10:730 (1) - use four 1/2 notes stacking on it seems to be better, like you did at the very beginning.
01:27:216 (3) - add NC
01:41:622 (3,4,5) - sounds somewhat strange. 01:41:696 (4) - should be at 01:41:547 - imo.
02:20:161 (3,4) - slightly increase spacing? looks a bit hard to read.
02:42:661 (5) - NC
03:03:008 (1,2) - both extend by 1/2 beats and silence the tick plays somewhat fits the music.
03:08:651 (3,1) - change back to P slider shape, if you are not intended to make them straight.
03:28:849 (5,6,7,8) - add clap or change to normal sample?
03:33:379 (4) - same as above. I think it should be at 03:33:230 -

[Hard]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:11:917 - snap to 00:11:919
(it's ok but if you snap it it will be the best)

00:15:037 (2,3) - blanket better if you like
00:19:790 (2) - ^
00:20:829 (5) - either rotate it a bit clockwise or anti-clockwise, to make it flow better with 00:20:235 (3) -
00:27:364 (1,2) - separate them a bit. spacing in Hard is not a problem.
00:31:226 (1,2) - I recommend exchange them in time, regarding to the music.
01:10:730 (1) - 0.5x seems to me somewhat to abrupt. 0.75x recommended.
01:27:810 (6,1) - reduce the spacing
01:45:037 (5,6) - exchange them in time
01:49:938 (2,3) - blanket better if you like
02:33:156 (7,8) - the 3-plet is too abrupt imo. maybe you can add clap on them, or delete 8.
02:35:681 (1) - reverse arrow overlapped
03:35:681 (5) - move upwards a bit to make a better flow

[Normal]
00:41:027 (2,4) - make better blanket
00:58:255 (3,4) - ^
02:32:117 (1,2) - ^
02:46:077 (4,1) - ^
02:47:859 (4,5) - ^
03:31:226 (4,3) - ^

[Easy]
Fine.

Good map and hardly find any obvious problems. Good luck~
Topic Starter
Laurier
thanks!
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