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Aleks719
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 мая 2013 г. at 11:05:05

Artist: Dzeko & Torres
Title: 2012 in 10 Minutes
Tags: Ivan Gough Feenixpawl Georgi Kay In My Mind Axwell Qulinez Troll Gregor Salto Azumba Those Usual Suspects Walking Alone Acapella Sultan Shepard Quila Walls Skrillex Ruffneck Bass Swedish House Mafia Greyhound Knife Party Internet Friends Sander Van Doorn Julian Jordan Kangaroo Cedric Gervais Molly Hardwell Spaceman Deniz Koyu Bong Martin Solveig Night Out Calfan Ressurection Swanky Tunes Hard Rock Sofa Here We Go Sirah Bangarang Nicky Romero Toulouse Quasar Zedd Spectrum Afrojack Shermanology Alesso Sebastian Ingrosso Matthew Koma Calling Lose My Mind Dirty South Ruben Haze Dreams Otto Knows Million Voices Nari Milani Atom Jewelz Scott Sparks Toxic Rush Generation 303 The House Rage Valley Dada Life Kick Out Gotye Somebody The Doors Breaking Sweat Thomas Gold Sing 2 Me Tommy Trash Reload Porter Robinson Language Piano Chuckie Promise Land Amanda Wilson Breaking Up Steve Aoki Wynter Gordon Ladi Dadi Cazzette Beam Me Up Kill Mode M83 Midnight City Eric Prydz Don't You Worry Child mashup progressive dubstep
BPM: 126
Filesize: 14858kb
Play Time: 10:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Marathon (4,91 stars, 1419 notes)
Download: Dzeko & Torres - 2012 in 10 Minutes
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Yes, it's my 1st map for approve. Yes, it's not a masterpiece.
You can always check SoundCloud of these two guys. If you like this mix, you'll find something interesting for yourself!

There are 40 tracks inside, check list of them below! (if you can recognize at least half of them without watching list, you are really big fan of house, electro and progressive). :P
TRACKLIST (IN CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER):
1. Ivan Gough & Feenixpawl feat. Georgi Kay - In My Mind (Axwell Mix)
2. Qulinez - Troll (Original Mix)
3. Gregor Salto - Azumba (Rave Mix)
4. Dirty South & Those Usual Suspects - Walking Alone (Acapella)
5. Sultan & Ned Shepard ft. Quila - Walls (Original Mix)
6. Skirllex - Ruffneck Bass (Original Mix)
7. Swedish House Mafia - Greyhound (Original Mix)
8. Knife Party - Internet Friends (Original Mix)
9. Sander Van Doorn & Julian Jordan - Kangaroo (Original Mix)
10. Cedriv Gervais - Molly (Original Mix)
11. Hardwell - Spaceman (Original Mix)
12. Deniz Koyu - Bong (Original Mix)
13. Martin Solveig - Night Out (Acapella)
14. Michael Calfan - Ressurection (Axwel Re-Cut)
15. Swanky Tunes & Hard Rock Sofa - Here We Go (Original Mix)
16. Skrillex ft. Sirah - Bangarang (Original Mix)
17. Nicky Romero - Toulouse (Original Mix)
18. Hard Rock Sofa - Quasar (Original Mix)
19. Zedd ft. Matthew Koma - Spectrum (Acapella)
20. Afrojack ft. Shermanology - Can't Stop Me Now (R3Hab & Dyro Remix)
21. Alesso & Sebastian Ingrosso ft. Matthew Koma - Calling (Lose My Mind)(Acapella)
22. Alesso & Dirty South ft. Ruben Haze - City Of Dreams (Original Mix)
23. Otto Knows - Million Voices (Original Mix)
24. Nari & Milani - Atom (Original Mix)
25. Jewelz & Scott Sparks - Toxic Rush (Original Mix)
26. Nicky Romero - Generation 303
27. Afrojack - Rock The House (Original Mix)
28. Knife Party - Rage Valley (Original Mix)
29. Dada Life - Kick Out The Epic Motherfucker (Original Mix)
30. Gotye - Somebody That I Used To Know (Acapella)
31. Skrillex & The Doors - Breaking A Sweat (Zedd Remix)
32. Thomas Gold - Sing 2 Me (Original mix)
33. Sebastian Ingrosso & Tommy Trash - Reload (Original Mix)
34. Porter Robinson - Language (Piano)
35. Chuckie & Promise Land ft. Amanda Wilson - Breaking Up (Acapella)
36. Steve Aoki ft. Wynter Gordon - Ladi Dadi (Tommy Trash Remix)
37. Cazzette - Beam Me Up (Kill Mode)(Original Mix)
38. M83 - Midnight City (Eric Prydz Private Remix)
39. Dubvision - All By Myself (Original Mix)
40. Swedish House Mafia - Don't You Worry Child (Original Mix)
Last edited by Aleks719 , edited 25 times in total.
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How I got to this map
18:53 Aleks719: modmymap o3o
18:53 Quiz-chan: maybe later, haha
18:56 Aleks719: okay .3.
18:58 Quiz-chan: OOO-K, which map are we talking about here
19:00 *Aleks719 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/238121 Dzeko & Torres - 2012 in 10 Minutes]
19:00 Aleks719: ovo)/

The actual suggestions
19:15 Quiz-chan: Well, let's-a go
19:18 Quiz-chan: Now, just my opinion:
19:18 Quiz-chan: 02:22:882 (1) - This has an awkward shape.
19:19 Quiz-chan: But you can keep it if it doesn't look bad to you.
19:20 Aleks719: at least it's not 3-anchor-arc-all-the-time
19:20 Aleks719: wanna save o/
19:21 Quiz-chan: 03:42:644 (4,5) - This antijump kinda bugged me. It felt too sudden. And I dunno what this refers to, to a sound in the background that.... slows down or dunno?
19:22 Aleks719: i can stack
19:23 Quiz-chan: Would be an option.
19:23 Quiz-chan: What I really liked, was...
19:23 Aleks719: but i had troubles with stacking cuz of next pattern
19:23 Quiz-chan: 04:34:310 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - How you managed this part.
19:23 Quiz-chan: oh
19:26 Aleks719: fixed that stack
19:26 Quiz-chan: 04:49:072 (1) - This crumbled slider.... well, the shape is used for different kinds of sound but here, it is a man calling something out, sooo... I would expand/"relax" this slider, if you get my point in this.
19:27 Aleks719: i feel srceaming as speed up
19:28 Quiz-chan: maybe use a fast slider instead?
19:28 Quiz-chan: Not a wiggled one?
19:28 Aleks719: i use fast as last
19:29 Aleks719: after 2 wiggled
19:29 Aleks719: i think 2
19:30 Quiz-chan: 06:47:644 (1,2,3,4) - I would turn (3) and (4) clockwise (selection centre) by 20° and (1) and (2) maybe by 10° for increasing flow.
19:31 Quiz-chan: And then maybe increase spacing too
19:32 Quiz-chan: 07:04:786 (1,2) - This doesn't really have flow, you should re-arrange this
19:36 Aleks719: 1st : left jumps as they were
19:36 Aleks719: 2nd : changed shape
19:43 Quiz-chan: 09:46:929 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Weren't you overusing the drum whistles here?
19:43 Aleks719: no o/
19:43 Quiz-chan: mkay
19:44 Aleks719: same sound in music
19:44 Aleks719: just quiet
19:44 Quiz-chan: 09:56:215 (1,2) - Unappealing spacing
19:44 Aleks719: man, it's 1/1 with ar9
19:45 Aleks719: i can put it anywhere on playfield and you'll have to move mouse fast
19:45 Aleks719: if you use mouse ofc
19:45 Quiz-chan: What I mean, spacing just slowed down there all of a sudden
19:46 Quiz-chan: This is basically the same, just Ctrl + H
19:46 Quiz-chan: 09:54:310 (1,2,1,2) - 
19:47 Quiz-chan: But first (1,2) is right and second not really.
19:47 Quiz-chan: And I see no reason why it differs among the pattern.
19:48 Aleks719: well
19:48 Aleks719: made ctrl+g for second (2)
19:48 Quiz-chan: good to hear
19:49 Quiz-chan: and wow, used only one timing section for all this. OFC if the BPM is the same throughout the song
19:50 Quiz-chan: Maybe raise volume on some parts?
19:50 Aleks719: mmm, i tried
19:50 Aleks719: volume over 60% hurts my ears
19:50 Aleks719: so, idk
19:50 Aleks719: i rarely use loud hitsounds
19:51 Quiz-chan: Maybe you can use that on some parts that are really.... euphoric and enthusiastic or dunnowhat
19:51 Aleks719: what about one custom sound?
19:51 Aleks719: i got your point
19:51 Quiz-chan: w00t
19:51 Aleks719: can raise on 5-10% maybe there
19:51 Quiz-chan: now that you mentioned
19:51 Quiz-chan: I heard your custom hitfinish
19:51 Quiz-chan: didn't notice it, haha
19:52 Aleks719: heh
19:52 Aleks719: cool
19:52 Aleks719: didn't hear = fits
19:52 Quiz-chan: Truuuuee
19:53 Quiz-chan: well, I thought that cheering came from the song
19:53 Quiz-chan: But nice concept
19:53 Quiz-chan: Anyway, that was it!
19:53 Quiz-chan: Clean map as always
19:54 Aleks719: not concept
19:55 Aleks719: it has been stolen
19:55 Aleks719: well
19:55 Aleks719: i got permition
19:55 Aleks719: so, not stolen
19:55 Aleks719: just it has been used before o/
19:55 Quiz-chan: who cares, it sounds good ¯\(ºvo)/¯
19:56 Quiz-chan: okay then, Imma post to forums
~
Andrea
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~Marathon~
  1. AR9 feels a bit too stressing for such a long map, consider reducing it to 8 at least.
  1. 00:38:120 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not needed.
  2. 00:56:215 (4,5,6) - I'd make these circles a bit more curve for a better looking.
  3. 01:30:977 (10) - New combo due to the slowdown.
  4. 01:39:072 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not needed.
  5. 02:15:263 (1,2) - Make them a bit closer, it might be confusing to read otherwise.
  6. 02:22:882 (1,2) - Same as above for the same reason.
  7. 03:46:929 (4) - New combo due to the anti-jump so it will be easier to read.
  8. 04:54:786 - It feels like you're missing a note here.
  9. 06:19:072 (1) - Do not completely silence this slider start, it plays pretty bad imo.
  10. 06:23:834 (6,7) - Try to avoid this small overlap if possible, it doesn't look so good to me.
  11. 06:31:691 (5) - New combo due to the jumpy pattern, I guess.
  12. 06:51:453 (1) - Change the colour of this note to azure to follow your BG.
  13. 08:28:596 (1,2,3) - I find this pattern really hard to see actually, try to space them a bit more.
  14. 10:12:405 (1,2,3) - The overlap on this pattern looks really ugly, try to space them a bit more for a better looking.
Aleks719
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Andrea wrote:

~Marathon~
  1. AR9 feels a bit too stressing for such a long map, consider reducing it to 8 at least. mmm, i'll wait more opinions, no for now :x
  1. 00:38:120 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not needed. for raisinglevel of hp if you are close to die, if you have too little "life" you can fail without even 1 hit after break, with that additional bonus - you can't (o3o)7
  2. 00:56:215 (4,5,6) - I'd make these circles a bit more curve for a better looking. mm, yes
  3. 01:30:977 (10) - New combo due to the slowdown. discussed, have left as was
  4. 01:39:072 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not needed. explained above
  5. 02:15:263 (1,2) - Make them a bit closer, it might be confusing to read otherwise.mm, yes
  6. 02:22:882 (1,2) - Same as above for the same reason. mm, yes
  7. 03:46:929 (4) - New combo due to the anti-jump so it will be easier to read. stacked
  8. 04:54:786 - It feels like you're missing a note here. uh, no. ik, there are some empty downbeats n this part, yes, but i prefer to use constant main rhythm than those downbeats :S
  9. 06:19:072 (1) - Do not completely silence this slider start, it plays pretty bad imo. oO, it's normal 20% and hearable + whistle there oO
  10. 06:23:834 (6,7) - Try to avoid this small overlap if possible, it doesn't look so good to me. b-but i like D:
  11. 06:31:691 (5) - New combo due to the jumpy pattern, I guess. yes, agree
  12. 06:51:453 (1) - Change the colour of this note to azure to follow your BG. haha, did it on target :D for clear colour of approach circle
  13. 08:28:596 (1,2,3) - I find this pattern really hard to see actually, try to space them a bit more. done
  14. 10:12:405 (1,2,3) - The overlap on this pattern looks really ugly, try to space them a bit more for a better looking. kinda fixed too, imo
thank you for mod!
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General
  1. 1366×768
  2. Не знаю, насколько это ещё актуально, но хс на всякий случай хранят в .wav, чтобы не было возможной задержки при воспроизведении
  1. 00:15:977 (1) - надо поменять на ноты, как в 00:17:882 (1,2)
  2. 00:21:929 (4) - я бы реверснул, после прошлого слайдера мне так приятней
  3. 00:32:405 (3) - отсюда свисток можно снять, а на 00:33:120 (1) добавить
  4. 00:38:120 (1) - пришло в голову отодвинуть её подальше
  5. 01:18:358 (1) - на 1/4 назад, а каждый следующий должен начинаться на белом тике, чтобы под ритм и без паузы
  6. 01:25:024 (6,7) - можно поменять местами, но не принципиально
  7. 01:30:977 (1) - свисток на тело, наверное
  8. 01:55:263 (3) - финиш из софта, как и дальше?
  9. 02:16:334 (3) - чуть подальше от слайдера отодвинуть?
  10. 02:22:882 (1) - что с ним?
  11. 02:46:691 (5,6) - придётся разрушить симметрию: первый слайдер должен быть 1/2, второй — 1/4, иначе не в музыку
  12. 02:56:215 (9) - нк должно быть здесь, как и на 02:59:072 (9)
  13. 03:37:644 - хочется ноту поставить, чтобы связка между двумя частями голоса не пропадала
  14. 03:52:167 (1) - можно укоротить на 1/2, а на прошлый конец — ноту
  15. 04:57:405 (1,2) - должно быть так: http://puu.sh/2Ar9m
  16. 05:20:024 (1) - приглуши звук у всей этой секции на 10%, а на 05:35:263 верни обратно
  17. 06:21:691 (4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/2Arfa, так же и в остальных похожих моментах далее, где у тебя триплы вместо двух двоек
  18. 06:51:453 (1) - надо сделать на 20% тише, потому что хитнормал слишком громкий
  19. 07:04:786 (1) - убери свисток с конца?
  20. 07:14:786 (2,3) - такие штуки очень желательно заменить на ноты, как дальше замапано. Но мне кажется, ты это не поменяешь
  21. 07:34:786 (4) - это не 1/3, а 3/8 (лол), то есть как-то так: http://puu.sh/2Artr (конец попадает на жёлтый тик)
  22. 07:42:524 (4,5) - аналогично, должно быть так: http://puu.sh/2Arux (синий-жёлтый-белый), иначе по звуку расходится
  23. 07:58:120 (1,2) - поменяй на четыре ноты, чтобы был разгон, а не одно и то же катание слайдеров
  24. 08:13:834 (3) - хлопок на начало не нужен
  25. 08:59:310 (1,2) - не уверен, зачем, но мне так понравилось больше: http://puu.sh/2ArAC
  26. 09:14:786 (4) - поменяй на две ноты
  27. 10:18:834 (1) - мне определённо кажется, что лучше вместо него замапать те же тики, что и на 10:16:929 (3,4,5,1,2)
Наверное, это всё. А, нет, ещё хотелось бы, чтобы ты замапал кусок после 00:38:120. Иначе игра прерывается перерывом в самом начале, а так неинтересно, потому что там музыка, и вообще.
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  1. Добавьте все песенки в теги, пожалуйста =3=
  2. 2230 комбо :С
Marathon

  1. 00:28:120 (2,3) - поломанная звезда у вас тут
  2. 02:17:763 (3,4) - а у вас тут ритм ломается, поправите может?
  3. 02:19:667 (3,4) - и тут
  4. 02:23:953 (3,4) - может их дальше перенести? а то такое же расстояние, как между 02:22:882 (1,2) -
  5. 02:30:858 (2) - ctrl+g?
  6. 02:48:120 (2) - может состаковать с (1)?
Все вроде :О Я теперь эту песню каждый день слушаю
Aleks719
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TicClick wrote:

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  1. 1366×768 да, видал. но у меня ж окно, вайдскрин выглядит коряво. + слишком яркий желтый я затемнял, ибо бил глаза. пока путь полежит в треде.
  2. Не знаю, насколько это ещё актуально, но хс на всякий случай хранят в .wav, чтобы не было возможной задержки при воспроизведении
    н-но этой строки же не было сначала... это до сих пор актуально, но если ты глянул, что за саунд в мп3 и его продолжительность, то наверно его "точность" не так принципиальна, он же для эффекта. Для саунда добавил свистки. или если что, могу переименовать в кастом вистл и на нотах оставить точные "финиши" и эту расплывчатую ерунду.
  1. 00:15:977 (1) - надо поменять на ноты, как в 00:17:882 (1,2) мм, окей
  2. 00:21:929 (4) - я бы реверснул, после прошлого слайдера мне так приятней переработал паттерн
  3. 00:32:405 (3) - отсюда свисток можно снять, а на 00:33:120 (1) добавить не снял, но 2й добавил
  4. 00:38:120 (1) - пришло в голову отодвинуть её подальше тоже думал, но вытаскивать в другию сторону не хочется, к краям лепить плслдние ноты тоже,пусть уж так
  5. 01:18:358 (1) - на 1/4 назад, а каждый следующий должен начинаться на белом тике, чтобы под ритм и без паузы хм, да, так мне больше нравится
  6. 01:25:024 (6,7) - можно поменять местами, но не принципиально тогда не буду :Y
  7. 01:30:977 (1) - свисток на тело, наверное не, тут не очень
  8. 01:55:263 (3) - финиш из софта, как и дальше? ок
  9. 02:16:334 (3) - чуть подальше от слайдера отодвинуть? да уж да, одному длинно, другому коротко, сделал одинаково :D
  10. 02:22:882 (1) - что с ним? его колбасит \m/
  11. 02:46:691 (5,6) - придётся разрушить симметрию: первый слайдер должен быть 1/2, второй — 1/4, иначе не в музыку симметрия сохранена, объекты сменены на таймлайне. за джампы сойдет :3
  12. 02:56:215 (9) - нк должно быть здесь, как и на 02:59:072 (9) я не понял почему, поэтому не трогал
  13. 03:37:644 - хочется ноту поставить, чтобы связка между двумя частями голоса не пропадала ладно, но не уверен
  14. 03:52:167 (1) - можно укоротить на 1/2, а на прошлый конец — ноту true
  15. 04:57:405 (1,2) - должно быть так: http://puu.sh/2Ar9m ок
  16. 05:20:024 (1) - приглуши звук у всей этой секции на 10%, а на 05:35:263 верни обратно 10 мало, 25 сделал
  17. 06:21:691 (4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/2Arfa, так же и в остальных похожих моментах далее, где у тебя триплы вместо двух двоек теряю даунбит, сделал пятерней
  18. 06:51:453 (1) - надо сделать на 20% тише, потому что хитнормал слишком громкий сделал хитсофт
  19. 07:04:786 (1) - убери свисток с конца? там под пианину жеж
  20. 07:14:786 (2,3) - такие штуки очень желательно заменить на ноты, как дальше замапано. Но мне кажется, ты это не поменяешь классные штуки :<
  21. 07:34:786 (4) - это не 1/3, а 3/8 (лол), то есть как-то так: http://puu.sh/2Artr (конец попадает на жёлтый тик) fffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuu, а я-то думал, что за херь, и так криво, и так криво, до 3/8 не додумал
  22. 07:42:524 (4,5) - аналогично, должно быть так: http://puu.sh/2Arux (синий-жёлтый-белый), иначе по звуку расходится да, конечно
  23. 07:58:120 (1,2) - поменяй на четыре ноты, чтобы был разгон, а не одно и то же катание слайдеров изменил, но лучше ли стало
  24. 08:13:834 (3) - хлопок на начало не нужен
  25. 08:59:310 (1,2) - не уверен, зачем, но мне так понравилось больше: http://puu.sh/2ArAC как-то лепнина D: там даже битов нету. зато забил пустой красный рядом
  26. 09:14:786 (4) - поменяй на две ноты да, этот паттерн мне вре равно не нравился
  27. 10:18:834 (1) - мне определённо кажется, что лучше вместо него замапать те же тики, что и на 10:16:929 (3,4,5,1,2) лады
Наверное, это всё. А, нет, ещё хотелось бы, чтобы ты замапал кусок после 00:38:120. Иначе игра прерывается перерывом в самом начале, а так неинтересно, потому что там музыка, и вообще.
ну там я пока хз как мапать, поэтому не буду трогать. пасибо, Клик о/ май мэп лукс мач бэтта нау й хоуп.

Reiji-RJ wrote:

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  1. Добавьте все песенки в теги, пожалуйста =3= потом мб
  2. 2230 комбо :С уже другое число о/
Marathon

  1. 00:28:120 (2,3) - поломанная звезда у вас тут было специально. ну ок
  2. 02:17:763 (3,4) - а у вас тут ритм ломается, поправите может? я не понял, что ты имеешь в виду, поэтому пофиксил вистлы. немного.
  3. 02:19:667 (3,4) - и тут и тут
  4. 02:23:953 (3,4) - может их дальше перенести? а то такое же расстояние, как между 02:22:882 (1,2) - ок, это все моддеры, этот паттерн каждый раз трогаю
  5. 02:30:858 (2) - ctrl+g? да, глюкануло наверно
  6. 02:48:120 (2) - может состаковать с (1)? не, не надо
Все вроде :О Я теперь эту песню каждый день слушаю хахахах, нуб.
Спасибо за мод о/
Roxas
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Heya :D/

[General]

Why don't you add tags? Add these words: Ivan Gough Feenixpawl Georgi Kay In My Mind Axwell Swedish House Mafia Greyhound Michael Calfan Resurrection Skrillex Bangarang Ingrosso Alesso Calling (Lose My Mind) Ryan Tedder Afrojack Shermanology Can't Stop Me Otto Knows Million Voices Nari Milani Atom Don't You Worry Child John Martin (...wait for other tags ;_;)

[Marathoooon]

00:14:786 (6) - Move on 240|264 for stacking this on (7) I think it's better
00:20:501 (2) - Soft finish?
02:01:929 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this antijumps, why don't you make a thing like 01:58:120 (1,2,3,4) - ?
02:45:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - BA-BA-BA-BA-BANGARANG *___*
02:56:334 (1) - Remove NC here and add NC here 02:56:215 (9) -
02:59:072 (9,1) - Same D:
03:21:929 (8) - Move in 84|272
03:26:691 - Add a beat stacked on 03:26:810 (4) - this?
03:30:501 - Here the same, stacked on (4)
04:26:691 (1) - Rotate like this?
SPOILER
04:42:048 (1,4,7) - In parts like these, add drum-finish in those beats (I mean in every pattern :P) (with lower volume it's better). If you don't like try on (2,5,8) too, I like both of them, and you can try with drum-normal instead of drum-finish
08:09:072 (7,1) - 1.0x distance
08:22:643 (5,1) - ^
08:24:786 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a thing like this (I was random with position but this is the idea of pattern for avoid autounstack)
SPOILER
09:06:215 (1,2,3,4) - You forgot some soft-whistles or it's done on purpose? LOL
Aleks719
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Roxas wrote:

Heya :D/

[General]

Why don't you add tags? Add these words: maybe later orz

[Marathoooon]

00:14:786 (6) - Move on 240|264 for stacking this on (7) I think it's better oh well, since concept is broken already anyway...
00:20:501 (2) - Soft finish? no, why..
02:01:929 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this antijumps, why don't you make a thing like 01:58:120 (1,2,3,4) - ? i'd like to leave them
02:45:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - BA-BA-BA-BA-BANGARANG *___*
02:56:334 (1) - Remove NC here and add NC here 02:56:215 (9) - no, why
02:59:072 (9,1) - Same D: same
03:21:929 (8) - Move in 84|272 don't see a resaon, tried, returned
03:26:691 - Add a beat stacked on 03:26:810 (4) - this? this is empty downbeat in music, no need to orz
03:30:501 - Here the same, stacked on (4) same
04:26:691 (1) - Rotate like this? okay
04:42:048 (1,4,7) - In parts like these, add drum-finish in those beats (I mean in every pattern :P) (with lower volume it's better). If you don't like try on (2,5,8) too, I like both of them, and you can try with drum-normal instead of drum-finish yes, but those beats should be on white, not on blue, added anyway.
08:09:072 (7,1) - 1.0x distance no ;3
08:22:643 (5,1) - ^ no ;3
08:24:786 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a thing like this (I was random with position but this is the idea of pattern for avoid autounstack) okay, but i like how next stack goes
09:06:215 (1,2,3,4) - You forgot some soft-whistles or it's done on purpose? LOL yes, forgot one
thank you for mod!
Flower
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Joined August 2011
Flower
Hi~ m4m~

[Marathon]
As said by Andrea, I suggest AR8. Patterns are easy to read in this AR and don't look to empty.
00:05:739 - suggest a spinner until 00:07:644 -
00:16:691 (3) - add soft whistle?
00:18:596 (3) - ^
00:30:501 - the whistle sounds a bit strange imo. delete it and 00:29:548 (5) - add soft whistle
00:33:120 (1) - delete whistle, sample change to drum. if you take this, then
00:33:358 - soft whistle
00:34:072 (3) - remove whistle
00:53:834 - drum whistle?
00:55:739 - ^
00:57:644 - ^
00:59:548 - ^
01:00:024 (4) - recommend a 1/4 repeating slider instead
01:01:453 (3) - left 1 grid for easy reading
01:02:882 (3) - remove soft whistle
01:30:263 (5,6,7) - suggest move 3 grid upwards
01:38:715 (4,5,6,1) - slightly increase spacing?
01:50:501 (1,2,3,4) - gradually increase volume
01:54:310 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:07:167 (1) - extend to a 3/4 slider, better feeling imo.
03:40:977 (1) - slider body add soft whistle as music sounds really like slidewhistle.
03:42:167 (2) - add soft whistle
04:35:977 (1,2) - exchange NC
04:43:239 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - is that spacing inconsistency?
05:00:382 - I think the clap could be removed, which sounds more dynamic
07:28:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't look quite good imo. maybe still make into a regular pentagon
07:32:524 - add a note. I think this plays good, but may be overmap? it's up to you
07:42:524 (4) - Though music has the sound, I think it's a little off beat. There is no need rigidly following the clang in the music.
07:58:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - I wonder if you used Ctrl+Shift+D to create the shape. It's a little irregular.
08:07:048 - add a note? it feels better.
08:13:358 (1,2) - make like this:
SPOILER
08:14:310 (1,2,3) - ^
08:28:596 (1,2) - make like this:
SPOILER
08:56:096 (4) - delete this, I think it's overmap
08:56:453 - add a note?
09:30:501 (3) - extend to 3/4 ?

Good luck~
Aleks719
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Flower wrote:

Hi~ m4m~

[Marathon]
As said by Andrea, I suggest AR8. Patterns are easy to read in this AR and don't look to empty. as i said, there are opinions about it, but quantity of them are less...
00:05:739 - suggest a spinner until 00:07:644 - hum, why not
00:16:691 (3) - add soft whistle? ok
00:18:596 (3) - ^ ok
00:30:501 - the whistle sounds a bit strange imo. delete it and 00:29:548 (5) - add soft whistle added without deleting
00:33:120 (1) - delete whistle, sample change to drum. if you take this, then ok
00:33:358 - soft whistle ok
00:34:072 (3) - remove whistle nope
00:53:834 - drum whistle? no, prefer as is
00:55:739 - ^^
00:57:644 - ^^
00:59:548 - ^^
01:00:024 (4) - recommend a 1/4 repeating slider instead there is no 1/4 in music here
01:01:453 (3) - left 1 grid for easy reading 1grid, lol, kay
01:02:882 (3) - remove soft whistle no, i use in every 2 downbeats Oo
01:30:263 (5,6,7) - suggest move 3 grid upwards why? :O it's okay as is
01:38:715 (4,5,6,1) - slightly increase spacing? fine
01:50:501 (1,2,3,4) - gradually increase volume yes
01:54:310 (1,2,3,4) - ^ no, i feel increasing sound only there ^
02:07:167 (1) - extend to a 3/4 slider, better feeling imo. disagree here
03:40:977 (1) - slider body add soft whistle as music sounds really like slidewhistle. eh, okay, hard to hear anyway
03:42:167 (2) - add soft whistle yes
04:35:977 (1,2) - exchange NC imo, it's okay now, if i'd cut slider in slider+note, then it would be have sense
04:43:239 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - is that spacing inconsistency? seems one one was set wrong, fixed i think
05:00:382 - I think the clap could be removed, which sounds more dynamic no, it fits :O
07:28:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't look quite good imo. maybe still make into a regular pentagon nah
07:32:524 - add a note. I think this plays good, but may be overmap? it's up to you
07:42:524 (4) - Though music has the sound, I think it's a little off beat. There is no need rigidly following the clang in the music. it's already doesn't sound off, thaks to Ticky~
07:58:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - I wonder if you used Ctrl+Shift+D to create the shape. It's a little irregular. i used it. just used ctrl+g somewhere
08:07:048 - add a note? it feels better. agree
08:13:358 (1,2) - make like this: yes, i thought it's hard, but now i think it's okay
08:14:310 (1,2,3) - ^^
08:28:596 (1,2) - make like this: yes, looks cool
08:56:096 (4) - delete this, I think it's overmap okay, agree
08:56:453 - add a note? I think it's overmap :D
09:30:501 (3) - extend to 3/4 ?no need to :3

Good luck~

yay, thank you for mod! i'll post mine soon
h3k1ru
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SPOILER
2013-04-20 22:32 h3k1ru: вот ар хз
2013-04-20 22:33 h3k1ru: либо я разучился играть либо 8 получше будет
2013-04-20 22:33 h3k1ru: читается и играется получше
2013-04-20 22:33 h3k1ru: но
2013-04-20 22:33 h3k1ru: динамики немного нехватает
2013-04-20 22:33 h3k1ru: его АР9 дает
2013-04-20 22:33 Aleks719: вот тем же руководствовался
2013-04-20 22:34 Aleks719: там нет диких 1/4 все время для ар9
2013-04-20 22:34 h3k1ru: как то АР8 поправильней тут будет
2013-04-20 22:34 Aleks719: но ар8 слишком халявно
2013-04-20 22:37 h3k1ru: да оставляй 9, пофиг XD
2013-04-20 22:37 h3k1ru: норм и так и так
2013-04-20 22:37 Aleks719: лады :3
2013-04-20 22:39 h3k1ru: 01:29:429 -
2013-04-20 22:39 h3k1ru: вот етот момент плохо игрался
2013-04-20 22:40 h3k1ru: в основном изза трипла внизу
2013-04-20 22:40 h3k1ru: слишком он далеко
2013-04-20 22:40 h3k1ru: за 2 тестплея ниразу не попал
2013-04-20 22:41 h3k1ru: както
2013-04-20 22:41 h3k1ru: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713939
2013-04-20 22:42 h3k1ru: сюда чтоли
2013-04-20 22:42 h3k1ru: ну и нк с 10 начать чтоб несмущало, перед етим у тебя нк с синего тика начинались
2013-04-20 22:42 h3k1ru: поетому и тут
2013-04-20 22:43 Aleks719: оке
2013-04-20 22:43 Aleks719: подыму немного
2013-04-20 22:57 h3k1ru: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713958
2013-04-20 22:57 h3k1ru: 02:46:572 -
2013-04-20 22:57 h3k1ru: вот в етом большом куске на скрине комбо поставлены так как я бы поставил
2013-04-20 22:57 h3k1ru: начиная от 02:45:144 -
2013-04-20 22:57 h3k1ru: 02:47:882 - тут самое главное
2013-04-20 22:57 h3k1ru: ну и 02:48:953 -
2013-04-20 22:58 h3k1ru: тогда все куски одинаковыми получатся
2013-04-20 22:58 Aleks719: понял
2013-04-20 22:58 h3k1ru: как было до и будет после
2013-04-20 22:58 Aleks719: да, наверно
2013-04-20 22:58 Aleks719: есть в этом логика
2013-04-20 23:00 Aleks719: 02:44:905 (2,3) - не дает антижампа?
2013-04-20 23:00 h3k1ru: нет
2013-04-20 23:00 h3k1ru: по ритму играется
2013-04-20 23:01 Aleks719: лады
2013-04-20 23:13 h3k1ru: 05:21:572 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713977
2013-04-20 23:13 h3k1ru: ?
2013-04-20 23:13 Aleks719: да, ты ж их
2013-04-20 23:13 Aleks719: не любишь
2013-04-20 23:13 Aleks719: окей
2013-04-20 23:13 h3k1ru: XD
2013-04-20 23:24 h3k1ru: 08:51:096 -
2013-04-20 23:24 h3k1ru: свистульку на реверт?
2013-04-20 23:25 h3k1ru: и тут 08:51:691 (2) - на конец я бы поставил
2013-04-20 23:25 Aleks719: ок
2013-04-20 23:25 Aleks719: я синие пропускал кое-где
2013-04-20 23:28 h3k1ru: обновишь?
2013-04-20 23:29 h3k1ru: мапа подошла к концу больше ничо не вижу, норм все, ну кроме 1.0х стримов я бы их все удалил XD
2013-04-20 23:38 Aleks719: обновил
2013-04-20 23:38 Aleks719: есси что
2013-04-20 23:46 h3k1ru: ну ок все

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Kurai
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Kurai
You should add all the artists in tags so that I can bubble it.
Kodora
Kodora
dat tags

hope i'll mod this before bubble
Arrival
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Arrival
Longer tag i've seen
Kodora
Kodora
[General]

Add "remix" to tags? lol more tags pls xD
And.. maybe rename diff? Just "marathon" looks... boring, imho.

[Marathon]

About approach rate: yes, it seems quite fast is quiet parts, but some jumps here are just unreadable with 8, so i suggest you keep it with 9.
And maybe drain +1? It feels too easy now, i can miss a lot of notes and still alive.

00:24:786 (3) - Ctrl+g? Will look more interesting imho.
00:38:120 (1) - Try to add kiai fountain on this note. Looks very nice for me!
01:18:239 (1,1,1) - this is just boring imho :\ Please, map first 2 spinners, it really feels too boring for now.
01:39:072 (1) - how about kiai flash on this note too?
03:02:882 (1) - ^
03:10:739 - 03:40:739 - how about silence sliderticks on this part? Dont like how they sounds now :\
03:44:786 (1,2,3) - maybe try something like this? for better flow

SPOILER

04:11:453 - 04:18:596 - please, try to change some patterns here. those stars are nice, but just... boring, imho.
04:26:691 - 04:33:834 - same about slidertick here, they all sounds kinda weird. try to silence them?
04:49:072 (1) - add kiai on slider?
04:54:667 (12) - idk why, but i didnt read this note first try. please, move it avay from stream, it hard to read
06:47:644 (1,2,3,4) - try to make them perfect symmetrial?
07:01:929 (3) - silence slidertick?
07:09:548 (3) - ^
07:12:405 (1) - ^
07:48:834 (1) - map this spinner? 2 spinners looks too boring imho
08:30:501 (1) - add kiai to this note?
09:42:882 - 09:43:834 - add spinner here?
10:12:763 (2,3) - dont like this overlap :\ maybe fix it?

Good luck!
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