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Girl's Day - Expectation

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Topic Starter
Pink Agate
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年5月25日 at 18:25:52

Artist: Girl's Day
Title: Expectation
Tags: Expect kpop k-pop Sonnyc
BPM: 127
Filesize: 16404kb
Play Time: 03:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.93 stars, 466 notes)
  2. Normal (2.78 stars, 209 notes)
  3. Sonnyc's Hard (4.63 stars, 329 notes)
Download: Girl's Day - Expectation
Download: Girl's Day - Expectation (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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nimi
Modding as requested! (can't promise it'll be a good mod, though. Haven't done this in a while and I'm kinda in a hurry :p)

[General]
Your diff spread isn't thaat nice, plus people have been complaining about 2 diffs mapsets. I suggest you to map another one, but that's up to you.
BG size is quite small :/ would be better if you could find one in a bigger size.

[Normal]
00:42:405 (5) - this isn't that necessary, but add new combo?
00:50:909 (1) - this note sounds very loud for a part of the song that is quiet. please add timing sections to lower the volume here, it sounds odd now
01:27:760 (7) - add a note here
01:29:886 (4) - new combo
01:44:767 (1) - if I were you I'd replace it for two shorters spinners, the first one starting from 01:44:767 to 01:46:421 or 01:46:539 and the second from 01:46:657 to the end of the previous one. aalso, please lower the volume by its end
02:00:830 (5,7) - replace them for a 1/2 spinner with a repeat on it? sounds way better imo http://puu.sh/2yX9G
02:09:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - just wanted to point out that I liked the way you mapped this. :) would make me happier if you repeated this pattern on the other parts similar to this instead of the spaced notes
02:15:004 (4) - add new combo
02:37:681 (1) - this spinner is just TOO long, it's extremely exhausting :/ replace it for other stuff, please. my suggestion is to remove this spinner, add one from 02:37:681 to 02:39:571 and another from 02:39:689 to 02:41:460, add three notes, at 02:41:933 (1), 02:42:405 (2), 02:42:878 (3) and then another spinner starting at 02:43:350 (1). this last spinner you can keep ending where the current one ends, but I think it sounds way better to finish it at 02:45:240. Here's the code if you want it:

SPOILER



[HitObjects]
256,192,157681,12,0,159571,0:0:0:0:
256,192,159689,12,0,161460,0:0:0:0:
136,128,161933,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,168,162405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,232,162878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,163350,12,0,165240,0:0:0:0:

03:15:476 (2) - add new combo since this comes after a spinner

[Hard]
00:25:515 (2,4) - sorry, I really don't understand why this notes are here. if you slow the song down and carefully listen to it you'll notice that they're not following anything. I suggest placing (2) at 00:25:634 and (4) at 00:26:107 instead
00:32:484 (5) - why don't you keep the slider pattern you used for the two previous sliders? looks and flows better imo <:


00:46:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - this combo is toooo big ): change this by adding a new combo at 00:48:075 (7)!
00:49:492 (16) - move this slider a grid to the left so it doesn't touch the previous slider
00:53:980 (6,7,8) - make this a jumpy pattern!
01:24:216 (3) - add a note here?
01:24:689 (6) - ^
01:34:374 (3) - make this slider symmetrical, it'll look way better
01:35:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this jumps seem pretty pointless to me. it's okay if you wanna keep it though
01:46:657 (13) - add new combo
01:57:996 (1,2) - weird overlap
02:02:720 (3) - I'd shorten this slider by 1/2 and add a note at 02:03:429 (4) instead. this slider sounds a little off
02:14:059 (7) - add a note here
02:14:767 (9) - add new combo
02:17:838 (5) - add a note
02:35:791 (1,1,1) - same as I said for [Normal]. long spinners like this are not only boring but also extremely tiring. please do something else here
02:56:578 (1,2) - weird overlap. make both of them a little more distant:


03:09:334 (3,1) - insert break time between them

That's all! I hope this was helpful for you. Lemme know if you want a recheck :)
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

Wiinter wrote:

Modding as requested! (can't promise it'll be a good mod, though. Haven't done this in a while and I'm kinda in a hurry :p)

[General]
Your diff spread isn't thaat nice, plus people have been complaining about 2 diffs mapsets. I suggest you to map another one, but that's up to you.
BG size is quite small :/ would be better if you could find one in a bigger size.

:arrow: sorry I don't like the bigger size BG,1024*768 is a standard size,and just 2 diffs enough,bcz I am a lazy guy.

[Normal]
00:42:405 (5) - this isn't that necessary, but add new combo? :arrow: fix
00:50:909 (1) - this note sounds very loud for a part of the song that is quiet. please add timing sections to lower the volume here, it sounds odd now
:arrow: fix
01:27:760 (7) - add a note here:arrow: I think that no fit the song
01:29:886 (4) - new combo:arrow: fix
01:44:767 (1) - if I were you I'd replace it for two shorters spinners, the first one starting from 01:44:767 to 01:46:421 or 01:46:539 and the second from 01:46:657 to the end of the previous one. aalso, please lower the volume by its end
:arrow: i think most new player don't adapt to two spinner
02:00:830 (5,7) - replace them for a 1/2 spinner with a repeat on it? sounds way better imo http://puu.sh/2yX9G
:arrow: I sorry , I really don't like add more spinner in a normal diff ,and your img can't open
02:09:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - just wanted to point out that I liked the way you mapped this. :) would make me happier if you repeated this pattern on the other parts similar to this instead of the spaced notes :arrow: i will try
02:15:004 (4) - add new combo :arrow: you are right
02:37:681 (1) - this spinner is just TOO long, it's extremely exhausting :/ replace it for other stuff, please. my suggestion is to remove this spinner, add one from 02:37:681 to 02:39:571 and another from 02:39:689 to 02:41:460, add three notes, at 02:41:933 (1), 02:42:405 (2), 02:42:878 (3) and then another spinner starting at 02:43:350 (1). this last spinner you can keep ending where the current one ends, but I think it sounds way better to finish it at 02:45:240. Here's the code if you want it:

SPOILER



[HitObjects]
256,192,157681,12,0,159571,0:0:0:0:
256,192,159689,12,0,161460,0:0:0:0:
136,128,161933,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,168,162405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,232,162878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,163350,12,0,165240,0:0:0:0:
:arrow: i use your code but I change something myself
03:15:476 (2) - add new combo since this comes after a spinner :arrow: fix

[Hard]
00:25:515 (2,4) - sorry, I really don't understand why this notes are here. if you slow the song down and carefully listen to it you'll notice that they're not following anything. I suggest placing (2) at 00:25:634 and (4) at 00:26:107 instead
:arrow: Oh ,I just want to use cirlce to Replace the slider,if I user 1/2 cirle ,I will think that nor fit the song and durm
00:32:484 (5) - why don't you keep the slider pattern you used for the two previous sliders? looks and flows better imo <:


:arrow: fix

00:46:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - this combo is toooo big ): change this by adding a new combo at 00:48:075 (7)! :arrow: fix
00:49:492 (16) - move this slider a grid to the left so it doesn't touch the previous slider :arrow: i think it is good enough
00:53:980 (6,7,8) - make this a jumpy pattern! :arrow: um I think is good now
01:24:216 (3) - add a note here? :arrow: no
01:24:689 (6) - ^ :arrow: ^
01:34:374 (3) - make this slider symmetrical, it'll look way better :arrow: it is symmetrical now
01:35:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this jumps seem pretty pointless to me. it's okay if you wanna keep it though :arrow:keep it
01:46:657 (13) - add new combo :arrow: fix
01:57:996 (1,2) - weird overlap :arrow: really?!
02:02:720 (3) - I'd shorten this slider by 1/2 and add a note at 02:03:429 (4) instead. this slider sounds a little off
:arrow: I just follow the voice
02:14:059 (7) - add a note here :arrow: why?
02:14:767 (9) - add new combo :arrow: fix
02:17:838 (5) - add a note :arrow: why?
02:35:791 (1,1,1) - same as I said for [Normal]. long spinners like this are not only boring but also extremely tiring. please do something else here
:arrow: it is good to me
02:56:578 (1,2) - weird overlap. make both of them a little more distant: :arrow: it is good to me,maybe fix next time


03:09:334 (3,1) - insert break time between them :arrow: fix

That's all! I hope this was helpful for you. Lemme know if you want a recheck :)
:arrow: your mod is helpfulness,thanks,your are good friend :)
IchiGUN
Hi Pink Agate 8-)

  • General
    ● you have 2 red offset lines, I think they are not needed, so remove first red line 00:00:432
    ● change a little offset 8388 is correct
===========================
  • Normal
    >Settings
    ● Good
    >Mapping
    ● 02:18:783 (1,2,3) - maybe change a little slider form, for example:
    >Hitsounds
    ● 02:06:500 (2) - add finish
    __________________
    Not bad, i can't find more problem :(
===========================
  • Hard
    >Settings
    ● CS + 1 (I thinks it's really need, cuz big circle looks not good and creates many overlaps)
    ● HP DR +1?
    >Mapping
    ● 00:08:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - select this part and move x:256 y:112, than select 00:10:752 (7) and move on x:312 y:192...now we get symmetric pattern ;)
    ● 00:12:169 (1,2) - move on x:256 y:144 looks more accuracy
    ● 00:18:783 (4,5,6,7) - hmm, I think you not need to use this rhytm, try this:
    ● if you take ^ move this notes like a picture:
    ● 00:23:508 - add note and Finish hitsound
    ● 00:25:397 (1,2,3,4) - as 00:18:783 ^
    ● 01:06:500 (12) - change this note on the slider, sounds better

    ● 01:23:980 (1,2,3,4) - again this part
    ● start your fisrt break line from here 01:16:421, looks nice :)
    ● 02:01:775 (1) - down this slider, cuz overlap on HP bar
    ● 02:14:059 - add note
    ● 02:14:531 - ^
    ● 02:17:838 - ^
    ● 02:18:311 - ^
    ● start your second break line from here 02:22:563 , looks nice too 8-) >Hitsounds
    ● Sounds good
    ___________________
    Yep, good diffs :)
===========================

That's all, I hope it's help you :)
I really like this song <3
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

IchiGUN wrote:

Hi Pink Agate 8-)

  • General
    ● you have 2 red offset lines, I think they are not needed, so remove first red line 00:00:432
    :arrow: maybe the red timing is helpful,some mat and bat will check the timing change
    ● change a little offset 8388 is correct

:arrow: right
===========================
  • Normal
    >Settings
    ● Good
    >Mapping
    ● 02:18:783 (1,2,3) - maybe change a little slider form, for example:
    :arrow: fix
    >Hitsounds
    ● 02:06:500 (2) - add finish :arrow: fix
    __________________
    Not bad, i can't find more problem :(
===========================
  • Hard
    >Settings
    ● CS + 1 (I thinks it's really need, cuz big circle looks not good and creates many overlaps)
    ● HP DR +1? :arrow: I can't do that bcz it will be so hard for a hard diff
    >Mapping
    ● 00:08:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - select this part and move x:256 y:112, than select 00:10:752 (7) and move on x:312 y:192...now we get symmetric pattern ;)
    :arrow: fix
    ● 00:12:169 (1,2) - move on x:256 y:144 looks more accuracy :arrow: fix
    ● 00:18:783 (4,5,6,7) - hmm, I think you not need to use this rhytm, try this:
    :arrow: oh,Temporary don't want to change
    ● if you take ^ move this notes like a picture:
    ● 00:23:508 - add note and Finish hitsound :arrow: I just follow the singer's voice
    ● 00:25:397 (1,2,3,4) - as 00:18:783 ^ :arrow: Temporary don't want to change
    ● 01:06:500 (12) - change this note on the slider, sounds better :arrow: um I think circle is good

    ● 01:23:980 (1,2,3,4) - again this part :arrow: I will change when another people say that
    ● start your fisrt break line from here 01:16:421, looks nice :) :arrow:
    ● 02:01:775 (1) - down this slider, cuz overlap on HP bar :arrow: fix
    ● 02:14:059 - add note :arrow: fix
    ● 02:14:531 - ^
    ● 02:17:838 - ^:arrow: fix
    ● 02:18:311 - ^
    ● start your second break line from here 02:22:563 , looks nice too 8-) >Hitsounds :arrow:
    ● Sounds good
    ___________________
    Yep, good diffs :)
===========================

That's all, I hope it's help you :)
I really like this song <3
;) thanks your mod ,it helpful
wonders
hi
nice map~
[Hard]
00:33:899 finish
00:35:789 ↑
00:38:033 clap
00:38:388↑
00:39:923↑
00:40:277↑
这些音效只是一些建议
01:36:734 后面一个用了蓝线过度,这里压在白线上好吗?而且这一段音效也有点平,在2和5上用三连?
01:42:876-01:45:474 这一段好评,不过鉴于是hard难度还是用NC提示一下吧,奇数全加上NC帮助分成两个一组
03:01:773 哨声尽量不要单独用,太突兀了
03:07:915- 还是蓝白问题

[Normal]
00:51:380 意义不明,而且durm的clap也是相性比较差的音效,不如finish
01:59:884 红点稍微明显一点
02:09:805、02:10:750可以取消掉这两个clap然后突显一下后面的节奏
[-Google-]
第一次去试着mod别人的图诶;w;感觉真的没什么要改的0.0
但是既然说说我觉得奇怪的地方就好,那我就试着写写吧 >x<
都是个人意见啦
如果没有写就是“这里觉得有点奇怪但不知道怎么改好了”o.o

[OvO]
为什么有两根红线?
[Hard]
00:18:781 (4,5,6,7) - 觉得非常奇怪。。但是如果都改成1/4感觉又单调了
00:25:395 (1,2,3,4) - 改成两个三连音么?
00:45:238 (5,6,7,8) -
01:16:301 - 按照视频来看的话……这里是一段视频的结束……所以不要提早进入break?
01:23:978 (1,2,3,4) - 和 00:25:395 (1,2,3,4) 感觉差不多……
01:36:262 (5,6,7) - 这里是连音……滑条好点?
01:46:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 这里估计是我戳泡泡水平不够0.0
02:02:718 (3) -
02:05:553 (1,2,3,4,5) - 实际上歌曲一开头我就觉得这里用note和滑条混合好点诶;w;嘛这里是repeat
02:14:529 - 为什么这里反而不是三连了0.0
02:18:309 - 同
02:50:907 (1,2,5,6) - 换成两滑条?
02:57:521 (3) -
03:08:151 (2) -

[Normal]
我自己不喜欢slider tick 2……感觉不”干净“ ←无视我
03:05:080 (5) - 换成一个来回滑条0.0?
03:08:860 (5,6) - 同上

我自己的排列就很渣0.0音效更是不会T^T所以看不出来什么问题QxQ
大概就是这些了吧O.o
Norman
Hi Pink Agate~

My simple modding! o.o

[Normal]

  1. 00:37:681 (3) - Slider something like this picture?
  1. 00:42:878 (6) - 2 Gird UP and 2 Gird left
  1. 01:01:301 (4,5) - Try this!

  1. 03:00:828 (4) - move X:192 y:120

[Hard]

  1. HP+1, It's nice settings
  1. 01:03:663 (2) - Try ctrl + g to here.
  1. 01:04:136 (3) - ^ It's looks better
  1. 01:32:482 (3,4) - Try this

P A N
[General]
Fine

[Normal]

Hp drain -1 or 2? I think 5 is hard for the easiest diff.
00:09:332 (2,3) - move both right 1 grid
00:11:222 (4) - move to 368|280
00:19:254 (3) - left 2 grid
00:42:403 (1) - move to 360|168
01:32:482 (2) - move tail down 1 grid
01:34:372 (5) - move center and tail left 1 grid
01:37:206 (5) - move to 104|112
01:57:994 (1) - move tail to 392|152
02:12:167 (5) - down 3 grid
02:14:057 (3) - left 1 grid
02:16:891 (1) - move to 48|248 and move center to 80|312

[Hard]

Hp drain +1 or 2?
00:14:057 (9) - NC
00:18:781 (4,5) - move both right 1 grid
00:23:506 - add note?
00:27:758 (10) - move tail right 1 grid
00:37:679 (5) - NC?
00:42:876 (2) - move to 256|56
00:53:506 (4,5) - move both down 2 grid
01:08:860 (7) - NC
01:25:632 (8) - down 2 grid
01:34:372 (3) - move right 1 grid and move red point left 1 grid
01:40:041 (5) - move tail right 2 grid
01:45:710 (5) - NC I think this stream not beautiful >_>
01:51:143 (2,4) - left 1 grid
02:01:301 (7) - right 1 grid down 1 grid
02:14:529 - add note
02:19:490 (5) - left 1 grid?
02:35:789 (1,1,1) - I love this part :D
03:01:773 (3) - move to 400|104

Good Luck :D
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

angelfix wrote:

hi
nice map~
[Hard]
00:33:899 finish
00:35:789 ↑
00:38:033 clap
00:38:388↑
00:39:923↑
00:40:277↑
这些音效只是一些建议 :arrow: 改了一些音效为soft
01:36:734 后面一个用了蓝线过度,这里压在白线上好吗?而且这一段音效也有点平,在2和5上用三连?
01:42:876-01:45:474 这一段好评,不过鉴于是hard难度还是用NC提示一下吧,奇数全加上NC帮助分成两个一组
03:01:773 哨声尽量不要单独用,太突兀了 :arrow: 我觉得不会,因为这个哨音音量刚刚好和歌词结尾对上去强调一下
03:07:915- 还是蓝白问题 :arrow: 没明白什么意思

[Normal]
00:51:380 意义不明,而且durm的clap也是相性比较差的音效,不如finish
01:59:884 红点稍微明显一点
02:09:805、02:10:750可以取消掉这两个clap然后突显一下后面的节奏 :arrow: 不觉得啊

[-Google-] wrote:

第一次去试着mod别人的图诶;w;感觉真的没什么要改的0.0
但是既然说说我觉得奇怪的地方就好,那我就试着写写吧 >x<
都是个人意见啦
如果没有写就是“这里觉得有点奇怪但不知道怎么改好了”o.o

[OvO]
为什么有两根红线? :arrow: 为了炫酷
[Hard]
00:18:781 (4,5,6,7) - 觉得非常奇怪。。但是如果都改成1/4感觉又单调了 :arrow: 暂时这样吧
00:25:395 (1,2,3,4) - 改成两个三连音么?
00:45:238 (5,6,7,8) -
01:16:301 - 按照视频来看的话……这里是一段视频的结束……所以不要提早进入break?
01:23:978 (1,2,3,4) - 和 00:25:395 (1,2,3,4) 感觉差不多……
01:36:262 (5,6,7) - 这里是连音……滑条好点?
01:46:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 这里估计是我戳泡泡水平不够0.0
02:02:718 (3) -
02:05:553 (1,2,3,4,5) - 实际上歌曲一开头我就觉得这里用note和滑条混合好点诶;w;嘛这里是repeat
02:14:529 - 为什么这里反而不是三连了0.0
02:18:309 - 同
02:50:907 (1,2,5,6) - 换成两滑条?
02:57:521 (3) -
03:08:151 (2) - :arrow: 修改了一下

[Normal]
我自己不喜欢slider tick 2……感觉不”干净“ ←无视我
03:05:080 (5) - 换成一个来回滑条0.0?
03:08:860 (5,6) - 同上

我自己的排列就很渣0.0音效更是不会T^T所以看不出来什么问题QxQ
大概就是这些了吧O.o
谢谢你们的MOD
Hestia-
nice map
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

RebelSlayer wrote:

I really like this song~!
So I made a difficulty for it! This is my first map and my first post.
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Girl's Day - Expect.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51736
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Expectation
TitleUnicode:기대해
Artist:Girl's Day
ArtistUnicode:걸스데이
Creator:Pink Agate
Version:ShurykaN's Normal
Source:
Tags:Expect kpop k-pop
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Girl's Day - Expect.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
2,108745,109685
2,140871,165905
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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8388,472.44094488189,4,1,0,45,1,0
49962,-100,4,1,0,25,0,0
51852,-100,4,1,0,45,0,0
74057,-100,4,1,0,45,0,1
74175,-100,4,1,0,45,0,0
110435,-100,4,1,0,45,0,1
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166655,-100,4,1,0,30,0,1
167128,-100,4,1,0,45,0,1
189332,-100,4,1,0,45,0,0
195474,-100,4,1,0,45,0,0
195592,-100,4,1,0,45,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,0,0
Combo2 : 210,210,210
Combo3 : 255,0,0

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:arrow: I sorry ,I don't need more diff, 2diff enough :o
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

Norman wrote:

Hi Pink Agate~

My simple modding! o.o

[Normal]

  1. 00:37:681 (3) - Slider something like this picture?
  1. 00:42:878 (6) - 2 Gird UP and 2 Gird left
:arrow: fix
  1. 01:01:301 (4,5) - Try this!

  1. 03:00:828 (4) - move X:192 y:120
:arrow: fix something

[Hard]

  1. HP+1, It's nice settings
  1. 01:03:663 (2) - Try ctrl + g to here.
  1. 01:04:136 (3) - ^ It's looks better
  1. 01:32:482 (3,4) - Try this


P A N wrote:

[General]
Fine

[Normal]

Hp drain -1 or 2? I think 5 is hard for the easiest diff.
00:09:332 (2,3) - move both right 1 grid
00:11:222 (4) - move to 368|280
00:19:254 (3) - left 2 grid
00:42:403 (1) - move to 360|168
01:32:482 (2) - move tail down 1 grid
01:34:372 (5) - move center and tail left 1 grid
01:37:206 (5) - move to 104|112
01:57:994 (1) - move tail to 392|152
02:12:167 (5) - down 3 grid
02:14:057 (3) - left 1 grid :arrow: fix
02:16:891 (1) - move to 48|248 and move center to 80|312

[Hard]

Hp drain +1 or 2?
00:14:057 (9) - NC
00:18:781 (4,5) - move both right 1 grid
00:23:506 - add note?
00:27:758 (10) - move tail right 1 grid
00:37:679 (5) - NC?
00:42:876 (2) - move to 256|56
00:53:506 (4,5) - move both down 2 grid
01:08:860 (7) - NC
01:25:632 (8) - down 2 grid
01:34:372 (3) - move right 1 grid and move red point left 1 grid
01:40:041 (5) - move tail right 2 grid
01:45:710 (5) - NC I think this stream not beautiful >_>
01:51:143 (2,4) - left 1 grid
02:01:301 (7) - right 1 grid down 1 grid
02:14:529 - add note
02:19:490 (5) - left 1 grid? :arrow: fix
02:35:789 (1,1,1) - I love this part :D :arrow: thanks
03:01:773 (3) - move to 400|104

Good Luck :D
thanks mod
Sonnyc
General:

-- There are some things to change by using .osu file. First, change your BG code to 0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0. Then change add a slider border below.
[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,0,0
Combo2 : 247,228,2
Combo3 : 128,0,255
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
-- 00:51:864 should be the preview time.
-- 00:51:864 is missing a kiai.
-- Starting the kiai from 02:47:140 will fit the song better.

Normal:

00:33:911 (3) - Delete Finish at the start. Also reduce 1/2 to avoid jump with 00:34:856 (1).
00:42:888 (2,3) - Change this spacing.
02:01:785 (1) - Add Finish at the start.
02:58:478 (1) - ^
03:01:313 (3) - Uhh,, this whistle doesn't sound nice.
03:09:817 - Add a break like Hard.

Hard:

-- Using Stack Leniency 5 will be nice because of patterns like 01:05:092 (1,3) etc.
-- Drag break to 02:22:573.
-- Circle Size 4 and OD 7. Current diffs are too low.

00:17:848 (2) - NC will emphasize 00:17:376 (1) better.
00:20:683 (5) - Add a clap at the end to follow the music.
00:24:462 (4) - ^
00:28:478 (4) - Clap
00:32:022 (4) - Clap at the end
00:47:140 (5) - Add a reverse.
01:02:258 (5) - 2 Grids up will be nice.
01:09:817 (4,6) - Add Finish
01:30:604 (4) - Delete Clap
01:32:494 (3,4) - These looks like a 1/4 and quite confusing. So ctrl+G 01:32:966 (4) and 01:33:911 (2) each will be the ideal solution.
02:01:785 (1) - Delete Finish at the end.
02:03:911 (2,4,6) - Delete Finish. Currently is too loud.
02:11:234 (1,2) - Imo, this kind of slider doesn't fit the song.
02:35:801 (1) - The tempo of the music changes from 02:37:691. So deleting this spinner will be better.
02:48:085 (3) - Delete Finish at the start.
02:50:919 (1) - Add Finish?
03:01:549 (4) - Delete Finish
03:01:313 (3,5) - 3 Grids down will be better because 03:00:840 (2,3) will make a better line.
03:05:092 (4) - Finish

Imo, this set is like Normal - Insane which is missing a Hard.
BeatofIke
Sorry for the huge delay, busy irl. Anyways, if you still want mod, I can gladly mod this map. :3
Ceani
Do you need an Easy diff? I'd be happy to make one ^^
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

iYoonaRawrx wrote:

Do you need an Easy diff? I'd be happy to make one ^^
:arrow: :? OH thanks ,But I want to ask a bubble for this map as soon as possible,so ,maybe you can make easy diff for
my another map ,
I'm mapping this song

now ,you can make a easy diff when I finish it and upload it, I'll happy to accept it
orioncomet
[General]
- Make sure all diffs have same Preview point (Sonnyc's Hard got the different ones).

[Normal]
01:55:171 (2) - Hidden slider. Could you change it to something else, maybe like this.

02:19:738 (3) - Add finish at the end of slider?

[Sonnyc's Hard]
03:15:486 (1) - Add finish?
All cool, fine diff~

[Hard]
- Maybe OD +1 or +2 is better, imo. 6 is a bit low.
01:32:494 (3) - Suggestion, add new combo here to make it easier to tell that spacing is changed?
01:36:746 (7) - Suggestion, add new combo here?
01:42:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - They look kind of random here, maybe add some new combo may help a bit, try adding new combo at 01:44:069 (6) ?
01:45:722 (5) - Suggestion, add new combo here?
02:04:384 (4) - ^ Look better and easier, imo.
02:06:510 (4) - Looked so wrong spacing, imo. maybe move it a bit closer to (3) or add new combo. But I'd rather have it move closer though :P
02:39:699 (1) - wow, this is some super long spinner lol, well I guess it's fine since HP is kinda low~ But if you would like to, you can change it to sliders as I've looked at [Normal] or [Sonnyc's Hard], they were some interesting sliders. Plus of you changed this spinner, please +1 or +2 on HP Drain Rate.
02:51:864 (5) - Suggestion, add new combo here?
02:55:644 (4) - Looked so wrong spacing, imo. maybe move it a bit closer to (3) or new combo. But I'd rather have it move closer or something.
03:01:313 (3) - Suggestion, add new combo here? If you're agree, you may remove new combo here 03:00:368 (1) to make it look better.
03:05:092 (4) - Suggestion, add new combo here to make it easier to tell that spacing is changed?
03:08:872 (5) - Suggestion, add new combo here?
03:14:541 (5) - ^
These new combo are just suggestion, to make them not too messy, btw. but I'd be glad if you change them or some of them.

Good job~ :)
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- Make sure all diffs have same Preview point (Sonnyc's Hard got the different ones).
:arrow: fix

[Normal]
01:55:171 (2) - Hidden slider. Could you change it to something else, maybe like this.
:arrow: fix

02:19:738 (3) - Add finish at the end of slider?
:arrow: fix

[Sonnyc's Hard]
03:15:486 (1) - Add finish?
:arrow: fix
All cool, fine diff~

[Hard]
- Maybe OD +1 or +2 is better, imo. 6 is a bit low. :arrow: I think OD+1 will make the hard become a very hard.so no change,sorry
01:32:494 (3) - Suggestion, add new combo here to make it easier to tell that spacing is changed?
:arrow: fix
01:36:746 (7) - Suggestion, add new combo here?
:arrow: fix
01:42:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - They look kind of random here, maybe add some new combo may help a bit, try adding new combo at 01:44:069 (6) ?
:arrow: fix,and add more NC in here
01:45:722 (5) - Suggestion, add new combo here?
:arrow: fix
02:04:384 (4) - ^ Look better and easier, imo.
:arrow: fix
02:06:510 (4) - Looked so wrong spacing, imo. maybe move it a bit closer to (3) or add new combo. But I'd rather have it move closer though :P :arrow: about this ,I add new combo in here but I don't want to close to them,I keep this symmetry
02:39:699 (1) - wow, this is some super long spinner lol, well I guess it's fine since HP is kinda low~ But if you would like to, you can change it to sliders as I've looked at [Normal] or [Sonnyc's Hard], they were some interesting sliders. Plus of you changed this spinner, please +1 or +2 on HP Drain Rate
:arrow: do HP+1,I think long spinner is a about the challenge of endurance,for players to create higher scores
02:51:864 (5) - Suggestion, add new combo here?
:arrow: fix
02:55:644 (4) - Looked so wrong spacing, imo. maybe move it a bit closer to (3) or new combo. But I'd rather have it move closer or something.
:arrow: about this ,I add new combo in here but I don't want to close to them,I keep this symmetry,it really not hard for someone to read it,really
03:01:313 (3) - Suggestion, add new combo here? If you're agree, you may remove new combo here 03:00:368 (1) to make it look better.
:arrow: fix
03:05:092 (4) - Suggestion, add new combo here to make it easier to tell that spacing is changed?
:arrow: fix
03:08:872 (5) - Suggestion, add new combo here?
:arrow: fix
03:14:541 (5) - ^:arrow: fix
These new combo are just suggestion, to make them not too messy, btw. but I'd be glad if you change them or some of them.

Good job~ :)
thanks your mod :)
orioncomet
Bubbled, good luck!
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