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Bran Van 3000 - Go shoppin'

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[DBF]
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 мая 2009 г. at 2:17:11

Artist: Bran Van 3000
Title: Go shoppin'
BPM: 117,26
Filesize: 4810kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,79 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Hard (4,47 stars, 285 notes)
Download: Bran Van 3000 - Go shoppin'
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Str1perella
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Str1perella
Отлично сделано!))))) Так держать)
[DBF]
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[DBF]

Str1perella wrote:

Отлично сделано!))))) Так держать)
Cпасибо.
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GoLiMaR_old
GoLiMaR_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
[DBF]
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[DBF]

Dark Reiz wrote:

Хорошая мапа, надеюсь будет ранкед.
Cпасиб ;)
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anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
General
Your notes are off, which kills your timeline. For your easier difficulty, most of your notes should lie on the white tick (1 beat).
Use an offset of 15491 ms and a BPM of 117.260 to get you started. Be sure to resnap your notes.

Easy/Normal
00:29:81 (2) - New combo.
00:30:xx (1) - (Spinner) Replace with notes at 00:30:84 (1) and 00:31:35 (2).
00:31:86 (x) - Hit Insert Break Time.
00:48:23 (2,3,4,5) - New combos for each.
01:00:51 (2) - Insert break time.
01:15:61 (3) - Unstack.
01:17:66 (4,5) - New combos for each.
01:19:70 (1) - Too long. Make shorter.

Hard
Retimed version is attached. Will mod this later.

Download: Bran Van 3000 - Go shoppin' ([DBF]) [Go shoppin!].osu
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
General
Colours are nice, but the blue is too dark and blends into the background too much. Make the blue brighter.
The music is loud. Tone it down.
You need to incorperate some hit sounds. For example, on 00:28:53 (7,8,9) in Hard you can have Clap-Clap-Finish.

Easy
Rename to Easy.
Decrease HP drain rate.
You didn't retime this. Should I?
Try a slider tick rate of 2 instead of 4.

01:11:34 (1) - End at 01:12:81.
01:17:72 (1) - Move 1/2 forward to 01:17:92 (1).
01:18:75 (2) - Move 1/2 forward to 01:18:94 (3).
01:23:02 (1) - Move closer to 01:22:00 (2).
01:25:64 (2,3,4,5) - New combos for each.

Hard
Rename to Hard.

00:30:58 (13) - Weird slider. Retime it and add a new combo.
00:37:36 (3) - Unstack.
00:54:89 (1) - This is crooked.
01:05:12 (1,1,1) - Unstack these.
01:10:24 (1) - This is crooked.
01:20:85 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Delete these. Only one is good. Replace with a break.
01:40:68 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Ew. Make a nice pattern with this.
01:53:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Beautiful, and creative. <3
02:08:57 (8) - New combo.
02:12:66 (5) - New combo.
02:13:94 (6) - New combo.
02:19:06 (2) - New combo.
02:26:48 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Same comment as before.
Dartmir
198 posts
Joined March 2009
Dartmir
отличный битмап =)
MennyRuS
36 posts
Joined September 2008
MennyRuS
Хороший Битмап :)
[DBF]
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[DBF]
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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Doomsday
osu! Alumni
1,960 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

[SHOOPIN-_-] (don't you mean shoppin-_-)

00:22:091 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 1, 2) - move these forward, onto the white ticks
00:20:687 (10, 1) - these 2 are too close together. i'd move (1) away from (10) with distance snap.
00:25:153 (6, 7) - this mini jump seems a bit random. its fine with me, but it might not be with others. maybe replace (6) with a slider.
00:29:875 (2) - move this onto the white tick
00:30:832 (1) - seems a little short for a normal

[GO SHOPPIN!]

00:22:654 (4) - end this on the white tick.
00:37:365 (3) - this would sound better if it was only 1/8 long, and repeated until the red tick
02:32:596 (1) - long sliders are boring. maybe replace this with a spinner

also, you'll need to add hitsounds to both difficulties.
not a bad map.
star'd
Kannon
3 posts
Joined January 2009
Kannon
удачи тебе с новом мапой! ;)
[DBF]
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[DBF]
Update.
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ProF
435 posts
Joined February 2008
ProF
Звезда.
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Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Go shoppin']
00:26:49 (1) - Align with 2
00:30:58 (1) - End 1 1/4 tick earlier
00:38:77 (7) - Align with 5
01:11:77 (3) - The spacing seems a little off here. Resnap it on the grid and align it properly
01:40:450 - Inherit the timing sections here
02:32:62 (1) - End 1 1/4 tick later (to the right --->)

Remind me to mod the other difficulty later
[DBF]
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[DBF]
Thanks for star's and fixes! :) Update!
Behon
Elite Mapper
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Behon
I kind of feel that this would be better if you turned the countdown off. It's rarely a good idea to leave it in when people are talking or singing at the same time.
funnylover
31 posts
Joined February 2009
funnylover
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
Catchy song. :3

Before I tell you anything, you got to change the Timing ASAP.

BPM: 117.55
Offset: 15521

Resnap all notes. This will take care of all problems with the notes being at 1/8. Songs generally don't land on 1/8 unless they're pretty unique or strange...This song doesn't meet that exception. If you're using 1/8 to make the song sound better, consider that you have a bad offset. :(

[shooppin-_-]:
00:20:68 (10) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 3.
00:51:37 (4) - Move this fella to the white tick before and respace accordingly.
00:53:86 (4) - This slider should end at a white tick, not some odd 1/8. Try reshaping it to make it end there?

[Go shoppin!]:
01:29:68 (1,2,3,4) - It would be cool if these were like...horizontally even with each other, you know?
01:33:77 (1,2,3,4) - Same here, I guess. xD
02:32:62 (1) - Holy crap, what an eyesore. <3?

Inherit those time sections. I don't know the giant problem of it, but inherit the 2nd timing section and up. That's what those things are usually used for. The red bars are good for changing BPM and all. If you want to keep the same BPM, just make it inherited (Green bars~)

That's pretty much it...I think. Hope you can settle with the timing of this quickly. The map itself isn't bad, just messy around some areas.

Good job! Star.
[DBF]
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update!
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