1. Forgotten (3,13 stars, 117 notes)
2. Haunted (4,64 stars, 192 notes)
3. Mysterious (0,78 stars, 67 notes)

~random from #modreqs~

1. 00:29:861 (1) - swap whistle head to tail
2. 00:41:445 (3) - add whistle head
3. 00:45:534 (1) - remove soft-sliderwhistle
4. 00:56:437 (1) - ^
5. 01:00:525 (3) - add whistle head
6. 01:14:154 (3) - ^
7. 01:22:263 (1) - swap whistle head to tail
8. 01:35:210 (1) - add whistle head
9. 01:41:002 (1) - add whistle

1. 00:26:454 (1) - remove soft-sliderwhistle
2. 00:50:985 (1) - add whistle head
3. 00:56:437 (1) - remove soft-sliderwhistle
4. 01:00:525 (5) - add whistle
5. 01:07:340 (1) - add whistle head
6. 01:08:703 (2) - add whistle
7. 01:29:077 (4) - remove whistle head
8. 01:39:299 (3) - add whistle head

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

[General]
find someone who is good with finding BPM because this map has multiple offset. I just noticed from 01:18:243 - 01:21:582 yea, gonna find someone o3o/
Title should be "Haunted House Story" ? / it isn't o3o
and diff name too? [Forgotten] & [Haunted] uh.. i'd keep it this way, it's stylized o3o/
why not try to add silence soft-sliderslide? yea.

[TimingPoints]
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44820,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0
79581,882.352941176471,4,2,0,45,1,0
80022,909.090909090909,4,2,0,45,1,0
80476,1034.48275862069,4,2,0,45,1,0
80993,1176.47058823529,4,2,0,45,1,0
81581,681.585823014881,4,2,0,30,1,0
102028,800,4,2,0,30,1,0
102828,1000,4,2,0,30,1,0
103328,1090.90909090909,4,2,0,30,1,0
103873,923.076923076923,4,2,0,30,1,0

1. Make an Easy difficulty, this difficulty spread doesn't look so good to me, the song it's really short so I think it won't be a problem.

1. Rename this difficulty to "Forgotten", if it's capitalized it looks much better.

1. 00:44:820 (4,1) - Try avoid stacking these together, they might be confusing for beginners to read.

1. Rename this difficulty to "Haunted", if it's capitalized it looks much better.

1. 00:16:875 (3,4,5,6,7) - Inconsistent spacing in this pattern, please make sure to fix this manually.
2. 00:41:412 (7) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Make an Easy difficulty, this difficulty spread doesn't look so good to me, the song it's really short so I think it won't be a problem. forced to \:D/

~forgotten~

1. Rename this difficulty to "Forgotten", if it's capitalized it looks much better.

i'll do it

1. 00:44:820 (4,1) - Try avoid stacking these together, they might be confusing for beginners to read. yea

~haunted~

1. Rename this difficulty to "Haunted", if it's capitalized it looks much better.

oh.. well.. since it fis with song's title.. done

1. 00:16:875 (3,4,5,6,7) - Inconsistent spacing in this pattern, please make sure to fix this manually. ~
2. 00:41:412 (7) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.uh.. but it will ruin consistency. need to think it over, keeping for now :<

1. 01:03:223 (4) - Add a whistle on both slider start and end to emphasize with the piano.

1. 01:45:719 - what about to finish last spinner in all diff here + silence a bit like 15 - 20 % volume so it will finish when the girls stop to sing

1. 00:22:328 (1) - what about to do this slider like this? so you'll have a little blanket for the next circle
   
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2. 00:52:999 (4) - what about to move this circle like : x: 244 y: 160 ?
3. 00:52:999 (4,1) - what do you think about this ? :
   
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4. 01:05:268 (1) - it is better to place this circle up and not down the slider for a better flow
   
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5. 01:17:536 (2) - i'll suggest here for a better flow to follow the sliderline and to place it like this:
   
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1. 00:45:502 (1,2) - spacing is a bit close here
2. 00:58:793 (5,1) - same about here^
3. 00:20:624 (4) - what about to place this circle like this: for a better flow so you'll have same pattern like 00:21:987 (2,3) - o3o
   
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4. 00:26:077 (4) - i think it will be better if you stack it with 00:24:714 (2) -
5. 00:40:049 (1,3) - are non perfectly stacked ( / . \ )

1. 00:26:418 (1) - i'm not so sure how it sound this slider :/ why don't you try to do it like :
   
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Lally wrote:

Hi baka =w=)/ hai-hai, Nyally!

[Mysterious]

1. 00:22:328 (1) - what about to do this slider like this? so you'll have a little blanket for the next circle but what about my triangle? ;_;/
2. 01:05:268 (1) - it is better to place this circle up and not down the slider for a better flow not really sure here. I'd prefer my pattern, sorry. ;_;
   
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3. 01:17:536 (2) - i'll suggest here for a better flow to follow the sliderline and to place it like this: but there's already goood flow, it's all about triangles here
   
   bakari's paint madskill

   
   sound at 01:17:196 - feels like it goes doooooown, so flow here is understandable!
   

[Forgotten]

1. 00:26:077 (4) - i think it will be better if you stack it with 00:24:714 (2) - nah, it looks messy and ruins my triangle flow here :<

[Haunted]

1. 00:26:418 (1) - i'm not so sure how it sound this slider :/ why don't you try to do it like :uh.. not really sure, It's more like 1/8 pattern here. But I don't want to use it because it doesn't plays good enough here :<
   
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good job baka o3o/ good luck <3

Raging Bull wrote:

You know this is not really something I mod music wise lol.


Hard:
00:26:418 (1) - Personally I would remove this slider like your other two diffs. The slider seems to play and end awkwardly. The music is decrescendo state(?) and the spinner sounds very fitting. I'm keeping it because I feel like it's needed here. It fits with sound and spinner here feels different.
01:16:003 (2) - Perhaps remove this slider and add 2 1/4 notes here after (1) instead? I felt the repeat was unneeded but it also felt weird to have a 1/4 slider at this part. Fixed, but I still have one 1/4 slider here
01:18:218 (1) - Why not just add 1/4s here? You've been doing it (I think at all) sections with the 1/4s piano. The slowdown is also not at this area yet so there shouldn't be any reason players would click too early at this area. I feel like using 1/4 notes here is too much for [Hard] diff.

Normal:
00:29:825 (1,1,2,3) - Perhaps something like this? http://puu.sh/2vwt0
The way you mapped this area isn't really too my taste. You start the slider on upbeat, but end it on downbeat which feels really awkward. You can hear as the slider ends you hear a big bass (?) sound in the back. It would feel a lot better if you start a slider as the bass plays. I was thinking abou it and decided to keep it as is for now. It fits with music, and it feels easier to play
01:22:262 (1,2) - Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/2vwz9 same reason as above, sorry
Just kinda same reasoning as above. Plus the long slider as 2 follows the music pretty well and consistent with the way you map the downbeat after this.

Easy:
01:03:223 (4) - Perhapsyou should just remove repeat and add a circle with NC? This is like your combo breaking NC pattern at this area :s I understand your point here, but it still sounds good here. I don't really want to change it, what's more flow here feels really good and I'd like to keep it!

not really much but this isn't something I usually mod. lol