Hey :3
You'll receive your second mod now haha :b
!! These are only SUGGESTIONS. There is no need to change them! Feel free to, if you like one or two ideas. !!
[General]
- You should somehow show that Shooting Stars is Insane (Just write it on this text, when you upload it)
- Remove airplanes from your tags, since it's already in the song's title.
- I think you can remove 'and' as well.
- Since the song ends soon, try to lower the hitsounds a bit 03:45:226 (1) - in this part (like 10%)
[Hard]
First impression: Nice to play, also with hidden, not much to complain here.
01:19:271 (4) - How about moving this one a bit down? It's a bit boring how it currently is.
01:58:709 (1) - I don't really like this stacking, maybe just put it to somewhere else.
02:04:102 (1) - You could also move this one a bit down, so the slider end of 4 will be in that curve of 1.
If you look what i disliked in the Shooting Stars map (i modded it first). Here, I think, it's better. It's the same rhythm yeah, but with this distance snap you can catch it more easily. I think you could make this part the same in the Shooting Stars, since I think it should be a 'break' part, with some easy parts.
[Shooting Stars]
First impression: Very nice beatmap!! love it XD There was only one part i really dislike, it's very confusing.
00:23:990 (3) - I think the flow of this circle isn't that well. You got a curve to the left in your slider, so i recommend some placing to the left of the slider, just for a better flow.
00:30:395 (3) - It breaks the flow of your extended slider pattern a bit, but I think a reverse slider fits better here. She's saying no-ow <- somehow like this, that's the reason why. If you do it, delete the next slider as well, otherwise it'll overlap.
00:37:642 (6) - Move this one to x: 224 y: 248, so it'll form a triangle with 2 and 3.
00:41:518 (5) - Could you move this one a bit to the right? Imo it's a bit weird if it's that near to a slider
(only a little bit ofc)
00:52:305 (5) - I would move the last white point like this, so it gets a 'curve' in compare with 4. Let me show you what i mean:
Example[img]http://puu.sh/2zlK2
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You only have to make the angle of it a bit tighter.
The part i kinda dislike is this one: 02:31:237 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) -
It's very confusing, the rhythm in the song (lyrics and beat) sometimes just have no relations with the rhythm created.
02:37:810 (5,1,2) - For exmaple this : If you wanna do something like this, try to lower the DS, since it's so surprising if it's just there.. and yeah :c i hope you know what i mean?
02:32:586 (1,2,3,4) - Or this one. I think it's a on-going rhythm, but there is a, let's call it break, between 2 and 3. It's really hard to get if you first time play it! I hope you can change some things in that part.
02:48:597 (1,2,3) - This is the most confusing one :c i think you have to use DS here badly xD02:57:361 (3) - Move this one a bit up? so it flows better with the slider before.
03:07:473 (1) - Make this big slider to a little slider and a circle.
03:08:316 (5) - Remove this one? He doesn't sing anymore.. i think it would be better like that. It also creates some tension for the next circles.
good luck! i hope this was a bit helpful for you.