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anNina - Taishou a (TV Size)

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Andrea
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercoledì 6 marzo 2013 at 21:57:03

Artist: anNina
Title: Taishou a (TV Size)
Source: Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai
Tags: Lally xxheroxx Mafiamaster osuplayer111 ending
BPM: 174
Filesize: 12374kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Andrea (4,78 stars, 174 notes)
  2. Hero (4,15 stars, 136 notes)
  3. Lally (2,35 stars, 84 notes)
  4. Mafia (4,99 stars, 213 notes)
Download: anNina - Taishou a (TV Size)
Download: anNina - Taishou a (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 171st Beatmap.

I hope you will like and enjoy it ^^

Special thanks to Lally for the BG and to xxheroxx for the Timing and Video :3

Mapset:

Mafia (Insane) - Done.
Andrea (Hard) - Done.
Hero (Normal) - Done.
Lally (Easy) - Done.
Last edited by Andrea , edited 40 times in total.
Lally
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Lally
o3o ♥
Aurele
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Aurele
woot
Garven
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Garven
Yep, lazy. Here's the IRC mod for the Lally diff
SPOILER
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc

Garven wrote:

..?
Andrea
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Andrea
SPOILER
01:09 Andrea: how's it?
01:10 Garven: Has a nice feel to it
01:10 Andrea: yaaaay <3
01:10 Garven: Your combos still bug the crap out of me though :P
01:10 Andrea: suggestions for them?
01:10 Andrea: I'll accept them!
01:11 Garven: The problem is that you set your combos according to how you map patterns
01:11 Andrea: true...
01:11 Garven: And the patterns you make don't quite fit with the musical phrasing
01:11 Garven: So if we change combos where it would fit musically, it would look stupid with your patterns
01:11 Andrea: yeah D:
01:11 Andrea: I have a weird comboing
01:12 Andrea: but I really love how I mapped it
01:12 Garven: 00:41:759 (3) - ctrl h for better flow
01:12 Andrea: fixed
01:12 Garven: 00:54:001 (1) - This spinner feels badly placed.
01:12 Garven: I just wouldn't have a spinner there.
01:13 Andrea: why :(
01:13 Garven: It doesn't really hold that spinner feel
01:13 Garven: It was quite surprising to even see it there when it came up the first time
01:13 Andrea: I like it though ;w;
01:14 Garven: 00:56:242 (2,3) - This looks nice
01:14 Garven: but when it's reversed at 00:57:794 (5,6) -
01:14 Garven: The overlap turns to the ugly side
01:14 Garven: I know it's copy/pasted, but since the priority lies on the first hit object, it just makes it look wrong while playing
01:15 Andrea: I have an idea
01:15 Garven: Aaaah giant circles in the easy
01:16 Andrea: blame my gf lol
01:16 Andrea: she loves them xD
01:16 Garven: In general it feels dense rhythmically
01:17 Garven: But oh well, just a style, I suppose. Doesn't feel well-executed though with some of the longer sliders
01:17 Garven: They feel like they're tryin gto cover a set of rhythms, but then they keep going and end on an awkward phrase
01:17 Garven: btw
01:17 Garven: Set the time signature to 6/4 since you have the bpm doubled
01:19 Andrea: alright
01:20 Andrea: btw post and I kd you o3o

Lazy Garven o3o
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
loool
Gero
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Gero
GO GO Andrea \:3/
Andrea
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Andrea
Moved to Pending :)
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Diasios
Lazymod!


General

  • • Aggiungi il video, baka!
    • Sò che sei testardo e che non vuoi cambiare i settings della mappa ma almeno OD +1 in tutte le diff.
    • Aumenta un pò il volume del drum-hitwhistle.

Hard

  • Come al solito le new combo mi fanno venire il mal di pancia, bravo. /clap
    • 00:06:070 (2) - Fai finire questo slider 1/1 dopo, così segui meglio la musica. (o aggiungi una ripetizione)
    • 00:08:138 (6) - ^
    • 00:10:897 (5) - ^
    • 00:47:276 (2) - Muovilo a x:256 y:12.

Lally's Easy

  • • 00:56:759 (2,3) -
    • 01:03:656 (1,2,3) -
Lally
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Lally
fixato tutto o3o/

le fix o3o
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Pls.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54773
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Taishou A (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Taishou A (TV Size)
Artist:anNina
ArtistUnicode:anNina
Creator:Andrea
Version:Lally's Easy
Source:Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai
Tags:Lally xxheroxx osuplayer111 ending
BeatmapID:224225
BeatmapSetID:80617

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Andrea
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Topic Starter
Andrea
Updated :3
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo


[Lally's Easy]
you're mapping with stuff that doesn't really exist in the song, and that kinda plays unnatural... I'll point some suggestions how to improve the flow of that beatmap.
00:09:863 (1) - the way you start that slider here sounds pretty meh, and doesn't really follow the song... consider using a single note before (2) slider.
00:18:138 (1) - ^
00:22:276 (1,2) - a pattern like this will fit A LOT better. don't mind the way I spaced the notes, just take a look at the timeline.
00:24:345 (1) - ^
00:34:690 (1,2,3) - something like should play better. once again, I mean the timeline.
00:38:828 (1) - same as 00:09:­863 (1).
00:40:897 (1,2,3) - well, an another timeline suggestion. click!
01:12:276 (3) - add a finish?

[Normal]
00:55:035 (2) - I guess a simple 1/2 slider plays a lot better here.
00:58:828 (4) - you're missing a whistle here.
01:12:276 (1) - add a finish?

[Hard]
I guess CS5 will play A LOT better in that map.
00:14:690 (1,2) - maybe that's just me, but these sliders have a curve that's a bit too huge in comparison with the rest of the sliders in that map, consider something more subtle, like this.
00:20:897 (1) - ^
01:02:449 (2) - ^
01:11:932 (1) - add a finish at its end?
01:11:932 (1,2) - swap new combos, or fix 00:28:828 (6,1)­.
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
o3o

[General]
00:55:725 - 70% volume fits better on this part imo

[Hard]
00:21:414 (3,4) - Would look better if you moved it up a few grids
01:18:138 (5,6) - one grid left and 01:17:104 (4) - 1 grid down. It'll look like this
SPOILER
01:26:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - Having the doubles on each side instead plays/looks much better imo (still symmetric)
SPOILER


Maybe you're against the spacing though

[Normal]
So many objects that appears before/while hitting the previous objects. I think you should consider increasing the AR by 1. Plays much smoother imo
00:42:276 (3,1) - I don't think you should hide it like this lol
00:55:035 (2) - this was kinda random imo. 1/2 would be better.

[Easy]
01:22:966 (2,3,4) - this looks kinda mean while playing by having the exact same spacing, and the slider is not pointing downwards either :p


Good luck with this /o/
Andrea
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Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks to both of you, really useful mods. <3
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Hey Andrea! Need a mod? :D
Andrea
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Topic Starter
Andrea

BeatofIke wrote:

Hey Andrea! Need a mod? :D
Yes, please. :3
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
rEdo

rEdo wrote:

[Lally's Easy]
you're mapping with stuff that doesn't really exist in the song, and that kinda plays unnatural... I'll point some suggestions how to improve the flow of that beatmap. =w=)
00:09:863 (1) - the way you start that slider here sounds pretty meh, and doesn't really follow the song... consider using a single note before (2) slider.fixed
00:18:138 (1) - ^here is fine no changes
00:22:276 (1,2) - a pattern like this will fit A LOT better. don't mind the way I spaced the notes, just take a look at the timeline.no changes here :X i think this is ok
00:24:345 (1) - ^-^
00:34:690 (1,2,3) - something like should play better. once again, I mean the timeline.^
00:38:828 (1) - same as 00:09:­863 (1). fixed
00:40:897 (1,2,3) - well, an another timeline suggestion. click!here is fine for me no changes
01:12:276 (3) - add a finish?no since andrea didn't add in the other diff
@Saten: fixed o3o
le fix o3o
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Pls.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54773
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Taishou a (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:対象a (TV Size)
Artist:anNina
ArtistUnicode:anNina
Creator:Andrea
Version:Lally's Easy
Source:Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai
Tags:Lally xxheroxx osuplayer111 ending
BeatmapID:224225
BeatmapSetID:80617

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea
Here we go, updated.
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
Hi Andrea \o3o/ Sorry for the delay..

[General]

Nice Song -3-

[Lally :3!]

all are suggestions ><

(*) 00:13:311 (6,1,2) - why not try this, it looks better, this if you do not like it ignore it
(*) 00:28:828 (4,2) - why not try stacking this note with the end of the slider?
something like this:
SPOILER
(*) 00:43:311 (1) - would be nice if you added a whistle here,to better effect , (*) 01:06:414 (4) - well as you did here
SPOILER
(*) 01:04:001 (1,3) - hey could you make these sliders equal, to maintain consistency and look more aesthetic

[xxheroxx's ><]

(*) 00:10:035 (1) - has broken the spacing distance here , could you please check this circle
(*) 00:28:828 (1) - ^
(*) 00:16:070 (3) - This part feels a bit empty, I think you could add a circle.
(*) 00:42:276 (3,1) - I think this is a bit hard to read for new players? therefore and miss the note, recommend moving elsewhere to not be as confusing x.x, perhaps something like this
(*) 00:56:242 (2,3) - it's complicated, because you do not change these 2 circles for slider, This
(*) 01:02:449 (2,3) - Same ^

[Andrea :3]

(*) I could not find anything * BUUU ;w;*!

*Give Star*
Good luck in the rank :3 GO GO!
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