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Nakae Mitsuki - Pure Love, True Love

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Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunedì 4 febbraio 2013 at 23:27:49

Artist: Nakae Mitsuki
Title: Pure Love, True Love
Source: LOVELY QUEST
Tags: Hook Hooksoft Meis Clauson Sumita Mao Hentai Eroge Gal Game Bishoujo Visual Novel Opening cRyo[iceeicee] h3k1ru Lally osuplayer111
BPM: 138
Filesize: 5748kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4,97 stars, 274 notes)
  2. Hard (4,77 stars, 210 notes)
  3. Lally's Easy (2,12 stars, 90 notes)
  4. Normal (4,22 stars, 168 notes)
Download: Nakae Mitsuki - Pure Love, True Love
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 168th Beatmap.

I hope you will like and enjoy it :3

Special thanks to Lally for the BG and to h3k1ru for the mp3 ^^

Mapset:

Lally's Easy - Done.
Normal - Done.
Hard - Done.
Collab - Done.
Last edited by Andrea , edited 25 times in total.
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
MOE MOE MOE :3~
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,733 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne

Lally wrote:

MOE MOE MOE :3~
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya

Lally wrote:

MOE MOE MOE :3~
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke

Lally wrote:

MOE MOE MOE :3~
L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P
mod 4 mod~

[Normal]
00:18:570 (2) - delete and add note at 00:19:440 - ? (sounds better and in sync with bg music to me here


[Hard]
00:12:483 (4) - volume 35?
00:12:592 (1) - ^ too, sounds better with headphone just sayin
00:46:613 - feel like really need to add a note, not only in sync with music but the whistle pattern were also missed...
00:55:526 (2) - cancel clap? sounds better to me as the bg sound effect was really nice here
00:58:353 (4) - ctrl+g? looks like it was a jump in hd, quite easy for some to misjudge
00:59:440 (6) - tail finish?
01:06:613 (1) - head finish? (really high pitched there, would wanna some strong effect to emphasize it
01:13:570 (5) - finish?
(those finish were suggested to make kiai more exciting haha)

[Insane]
00:00:527 (1,2,3,4,1) - make arrangement like a square or repeating triangle? now looks abit random
00:23:135 (2) - NC and 00:24:440 (1,3) - swap NC (makes sense in hd tho)
00:37:700 (1) - lower volume on tail little bit, like 45 or 35 something?
00:55:309 (5) - cancel clap at tail, sounds better to me as the bg sound effect was really nice here
01:06:613 (1) - head finish? (really high pitched there, would wanna some strong effect to emphasize it

love the song
~
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
[Insane]
00:04:440 (4,5) - make the same space like 3-4
00:10:526 (4) - I think this slider need end at red line
00:27:266 (1) - you dont need this nc I think
00:34:440 (2,3) - make same space like 1-2
00:37:700 (1) - you dont need this finish I think
00:42:048 (8) - whistle?
00:55:309 (5) - NC?
01:19:657 (4) - ^
01:25:961 (1) - this slider need end at red line
01:27:048 (4,1) - can make a small jump
01:29:222 (1) - use whistle to change the finish

[Hard]
00:22:700 (4) - Ctrl +g then move to x109 y214
00:38:353 (1,2,4) - because ar it will looks not very well when the player play it
01:03:570 (1) - move up

[Normal]
00:46:179 (2,3,4,5,6) - because ar it will looks mot very well when the player play it
Mirage
627 posts
Joined May 2011
Mirage
[Easy]
00:17:918 (4) - E' Strano mettere le new combo non sul main beat per poi metterlo qua: 00:24:874 (1) - , anche prima nella mappa.
Non capisco perchè le hai messe lì ma per me non hanno molto senso xD
00:42:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - Lunghetta la combo
00:56:179 (3) - Avrebbe piu' senso qua la NC che prima
00:57:918 (1) - Togli NC
00:59:657 (5) - Aggiungi NC
01:03:135 (1) - Troppo corta 1 combo

[Normal]
00:52:483 (1) - Suona bene così http://puu.sh/1SCJR
00:56:179 (3) - Ci starebbe bene qua la NC

[Hard]
00:24:874 (2) - La NC qua
01:11:613 (4) - Secondo me così è meglio http://puu.sh/1SCQQ

[Insane]
00:00:527 (1,2,3,4) - Just a square would be better
00:07:266 (4,5,6) - Follow NC as in 00:03:787 (1,2,3) -
00:10:961 (5) - NC?
00:27:266 (1) - No need absolutely for NC
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Well i try to mod this :s

Easy:

SPOILER
00:35:744 can u move a little the last slider point really i think it look better check it:

Normal:

SPOILER
00:10:961 move it to x:204 y:72 distance look better
00:27:483 remove NC?

Hard:

SPOILER
00:12:048 (2,3,4) - This part gonna looke better in this way move 2 to x:256 y:60, 3 to x308 y:124 and 4 to x:256 y:192 in this way 4 was exactly in the center on the grid

01:06:396 move 6 to x:176 y:380 i think looks very good:


Insane

SPOILER
nothing to say i enjoy the map great job


great map haver my star
athiota33
547 posts
Joined January 2011
athiota33
M4M

[Easy]

Reduce the volume please, the finish hitsounds are too noisy
00:24:874 (1) - This slider is not symmetri. Make it symmetri
00:56:179 (3) - Move to something like this? http://puu.sh/1SBTv Becuse the current is confusing the beginner player imo
01:20:526 (1) - I don't think reducing volume until 10% is neccesary. I think 01:24:005 need finish sound

[Normal]

00:12:483 - The finish is too loud imo. Try to reduce the volume
00:27:048 (4) - Make this circle blanket with 00:27:700 (2). It'll looks more good imo
01:30:092 (1) - Add whistle in the begining?
Nice!

[Hard]

01:30:092 - Add whistle?

[Insane]

00:00:527 (1,2,3,4) - Arrange this circle like a square? http://puu.sh/1SD5u
00:05:309 (6) - Remove whistle in the end. There's nothing to follow
00:05:744 (7) - Delete this note?
00:17:918 - Add whistle in the end or you can reduce the volume. Finish too noisy imo
00:20:961 (4) - ^
00:24:874 (3) - ^
00:55:309 (5) - Add NC here?
01:19:657 (4) - ^
01:23:570 (4) - Remove whistle in the begining?
01:30:092 (4) - Add whistle?

That's it.
Good luck
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
Maddy

Maddy wrote:

[Easy]
00:17:918 (4) - E' Strano mettere le new combo non sul main beat per poi metterlo qua: 00:24:874 (1) - , anche prima nella mappa. allora ti spiego nella prima : seguo il vocal per le new combo se non lo noti e li nell secondo stessa cosa e poi ci stava bene
Non capisco perchè le hai messe lì ma per me non hanno molto senso xD
00:42:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - Lunghetta la combo lol wut ? ascolta il vocal plz
00:56:179 (3) - Avrebbe piu' senso qua la NC che prima peccato che il vocal cominci 00:55:309 - qui
00:57:918 (1) - Togli NC vocal vocal vocal
00:59:657 (5) - Aggiungi NC ^ again
01:03:135 (1) - Troppo corta 1 combo again^
athiota33

athiota33 wrote:

M4M

[Easy]

Reduce the volume please, the finish hitsounds are too noisy ok :3
00:24:874 (1) - This slider is not symmetri. Make it symmetri =w=) fixed a bit
00:56:179 (3) - Move to something like this? http://puu.sh/1SBTv Becuse the current is confusing the beginner player imo ok :O
01:20:526 (1) - I don't think reducing volume until 10% is neccesary. I think 01:24:005 need finish sound added 30% finish
Natsu

Natsu wrote:

Well i try to mod this :s

Easy:

SPOILER
00:35:744 can u move a little the last slider point really i think it look better check it: changed a bit ty :3

fix o3o
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Kawaii.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 55200
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Pure Love, True Love
TitleUnicode:Pure Love, True Love
Artist:Nakae Mitsuki
ArtistUnicode:Nakae Mitsuki
Creator:Andrea
Version:Easy
Source:LOVELY QUEST
Tags:Hook Hooksoft Meis Clauson Sumita Mao Hentai Eroge Gal Game Bishoujo Visual Novel Opening cRyo[iceeicee] h3k1ru Lally osuplayer111
BeatmapID:213934
BeatmapSetID:75761

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,128,255

[TimingPoints]
527,434.782608695652,4,2,1,50,1,0
56179,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
80526,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
80961,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
81396,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
81831,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
82266,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
82700,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
83135,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
83570,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
84005,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
84874,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
90961,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 254,194,158
Combo2 : 190,226,248
Combo3 : 254,243,169
Combo4 : 248,152,167
Combo5 : 179,180,227

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CXu
osu! Alumni
3,558 posts
Joined March 2009
CXu
I bet you're going to get 238484 mods now, and probably the same thing suggested 238484 times :P
Here's my contribution!

Please take anything I say as a suggestion, and feel free to ignore my mod post~

[General]
  1. Everything looks fine here :)
[Easy]
  1. 00:15:309 (1) - Move the red point 1 gridlvl4 up. Your blanket is a little bit off.
  2. 00:18:353 (1) - ^
  3. 00:37:918 (4) - A little off to be completely symmetrical. Stack it on (2), then ctrl+h.
  4. 00:54:440 (3) - The overlap with 00:56:179 (3) is a bit ugly. Change the endpoint to 316;92, then stack 00:56:179 (3) underneath the slider-tail?
  5. 01:05:744 (1) - This is probably a bad idea. While you can see the track in god time before you actually have to hit this note, the difficulty is Easy; a beginner will be very confused by the slidertrack stacking. Do something like this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/584020
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:961 (4,5,6) - Move this pattern up a bit, it's dangerously close to the edge (a smaaaall part of the slidertrack to (6) is actually off-screen). Just moving it up 1 or 2 grids will help a lot.
  2. 01:03:570 (2,4) - Space these two a little bit, to create a perfect triangle with even spacing. (looks better imo)
  3. 01:04:874 (5) - And line this up with (4) :P
  4. 01:19:005 (2) - Whistle on end?
  5. 01:27:266 (5) - Maybe lining this up with (4) as well.
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:048 (6) - This feels weird. I know you're following the piano, but after that you stop following it, so this part feels a bit awkward. I would probably have this slider begin at 00:01:831, as it plays much better imo.
  2. 00:22:266 (3,4) - These look a little out of place. I think it's that they're too curvy; might wanna reduce the curviness a bit here.
  3. 01:04:657 (2,3) - You don't semi-overlap anywhere else in this map other than here and 01:26:179 (6,7), and they're not even on the same part of the song either, so they only feel really random in a map that otherwise seems to consist of clean notes or full overlaps. Imo, you should change these two patterns a bit.
[Insane]
  1. 00:27:700 (3) - First anchor point to 196;300
  2. 00:50:092 (1) - I was seriously expecting another slider here :p The hitburst from 00:49:222 (3) was covering most of this note, and since it was a bit off the slider-tail, I thought it'd be another slider. Could just be me though.
  3. 00:50:309 (2) - 1 gridlvl4 right.
  4. 00:55:309 (5) - NC
  5. 01:19:657 (4) - ^
  6. 01:26:396 (2) - Reduce this by 1/4. Feels better.
Bakandrea making good maps ;w;
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea
Updated, thanks everyone!
Deni
Deni
General

normal : should fix
italic : suggestion
red: unrankable, have to fix

Hi, got this map from Lally ! (＾∇＾)

Easy

00:14:759 - A inherited point with 35 / 40% volume fits perfect for this part imo, since the music is very quietly and soft..
00:28:781 - Add a inherited point with 50% volume here if you apply above! :)
00:45:736 (3) - Finish fits very well to the end of this slider!
01:17:475 (1) - Move the end of this slider a bit to the right so that the transition between (1) and (2) gets a bit better.
nom nom slider

nice diff >w<

Normal

00:12:694 (3) - The finish on this slider's end is too loud! Inherited point with 35% or maximum 40% volume will fit better to the song..
00:14:759 - Same like in Easy..
00:28:781 - ^ but with 60% volume like you did in the beginning..

Otherwise than that everything fine!

Hard

00:12:911 (4) - same as in Normal !
00:14:759 - Same like in Normal..
00:28:781 - ^^^
00:20:737 (5) - Flip this slider (CTRL+G), looks a bit better imo.
Example
01:06:824 (6,1) - 6 and 1 are overlapping a bit, I suggest you to move 1 a bit away..

That's it! If you have any question ask me via PM or ingame!
Andrea
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Topic Starter
Andrea
Waiting for more mods ^.^
Dark_Ai
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Joined July 2010
Dark_Ai
Hey ~ Random Mod *hui*



Fix it please
It's only what I think

General

  1. looking fine


[Lally's Easy]

  1. Ar +1 is fine too
  2. 00:02:693 (3) - 1 grid up to make the spaing fine
  3. 00:05:736 (2) - stack this with 00:03:997 (4) maybe
  4. 00:12:258 (2) - stack it with (4) look bette
  5. 00:29:215 (1) - It doesn't really need whistle at the begin too =~= clap is enough
  6. 00:30:954 (3) - same as above
  7. 00:32:693 (1,2,3) - ^ same hmm... maybe you did it everywhere, but it doesn't really need it at all (_ _)
  8. 00:36:171 (1) - stack it better with 00:33:562 (2)
  9. 00:45:736 (3) - 1 grid down to fit it with 00:44:867 (2)
  10. 00:47:910 (5) - stack it better with the slider end from 00:45:736 (3) please
  11. 00:58:345 (1) - remove NC here and add it on the next Note
  12. 01:06:171 (1) - Don't hide this slider behind the slider before please :C
  13. 01:12:693 (2) - stack it with 01:10:084 (4) (_ _)

[Normal]

  1. 00:05:303 (2) - 1 grid down to fit it with 00:04:433 (1)
  2. 00:09:650 (5) - move this note to x: 440 y: 260 to follow the pattern with (1) =~=
  3. 00:28:129 (3) - blanket it better
  4. 00:40:520 (4) - add NC here and remove the next one :o
  5. 01:01:607 (1) - 1 grid left
  6. 01:08:346 (4) - add NC here and remove the next one :o

[Hard]

  1. 00:17:041 (5) - 1 grid to fit it with 00:16:172 (3)
  2. 00:51:172 (4) - stack this slider end better with 00:49:868 (2)
    That's all I guess


Good Luck ~
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I was GOING to mod this, but my entire modpost got erased. Lucky me. >_>
Andrea
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Andrea
Updated o3o
Lally
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Lally
CXu

CXu wrote:

[Lally's Easy]
  1. 00:15:309 (1) - Move the red point 1 gridlvl4 up. Your blanket is a little bit off. done
  2. 00:18:353 (1) - ^-^
  3. 00:37:918 (4) - A little off to be completely symmetrical. Stack it on (2), then ctrl+h. ty fixed
  4. 00:54:440 (3) - The overlap with 00:56:179 (3) is a bit ugly. Change the endpoint to 316;92, then stack 00:56:179 (3) underneath the slider-tail? hope done D:
  5. 01:05:744 (1) - This is probably a bad idea. While you can see the track in god time before you actually have to hit this note, the difficulty is Easy; a beginner will be very confused by the slidertrack stacking. Do something like this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/584020 i like it done :3
Deni

Deni wrote:

General


Hi, got this map from Lally ! (＾∇＾)

Lally's Easy

00:14:759 - A inherited point with 35 / 40% volume fits perfect for this part imo, since the music is very quietly and soft.. yap u.u
00:28:781 - Add a inherited point with 50% volume here if you apply above! :) agree
00:45:736 (3) - Finish fits very well to the end of this slider!u-u yup
01:17:475 (1) - Move the end of this slider a bit to the right so that the transition between (1) and (2) gets a bit better.uguu


nice diff >w< ty >u<)/
Dark_Ai

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey ~ Random Mod *hui*



Fix it please
It's only what I think

General

  1. looking fine


[Lally's Easy]

  1. Ar +1 is fine too nope owo
  2. 00:02:693 (3) - 1 grid up to make the spaing finedone
  3. 00:05:736 (2) - stack this with 00:03:997 (4) maybe i like it how it is o3o
  4. 00:12:258 (2) - stack it with (4) look bettewhen i mapped it i wanted not to stack it so no
  5. 00:29:215 (1) - It doesn't really need whistle at the begin too =~= clap is enough ok
  6. 00:30:954 (3) - same as above-^
  7. 00:32:693 (1,2,3) - ^ same hmm... maybe you did it everywhere, but it doesn't really need it at all (_ _) i like it here
  8. 00:36:171 (1) - stack it better with 00:33:562 (2) lol wut so far from each other is not nedded btw. no
  9. 00:45:736 (3) - 1 grid down to fit it with 00:44:867 (2)
  10. 00:47:910 (5) - stack it better with the slider end from 00:45:736 (3) please kay even if it ruin the prev pattern
  11. 00:58:345 (1) - remove NC here and add it on the next Noteit was fixed in the prev mod
  12. 01:06:171 (1) - Don't hide this slider behind the slider before please :C i changed this pattern
  13. 01:12:693 (2) - stack it with 01:10:084 (4) (_ _) how i said before no

ty for modding :3


rawwwr o3o
osu file format v11

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
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Countdown: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Pure Love, True Love
TitleUnicode:Pure Love, True Love
Artist:Nakae Mitsuki
ArtistUnicode:Nakae Mitsuki
Creator:Andrea
Version:Lally's Easy
Source:LOVELY QUEST
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DarknessAngel
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Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
Seems your m4m queue was opened before 4 days ago, I have no chance to get your mod haha /o/. Just a ramdom mod, ignore it if you dislike.




Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = the thing I think it must be fixed
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice




General

  1. Change soft-hitfinish3 to this sound. Current one doesn't match that voice cRyo want to follow very well imo.

Collab

  1. 00:07:259 (3) - I prefer ctrl + g for this slider. Current flow is awekward to me, I think ctrl + g is much better.
  2. 00:13:020 (1) - Add a note instead, and add a spinner start at 00:13:020. I would not skip the symbal at 00:13:020, if you can add a note with finish sound,it would be great to me.
  3. 01:02:911 (1,2) - Make them like this ? or change them to something else. Since you add NC at 01:02:911 (1), why didn't you have some changes for 01:02:911 (1,2). And it would be looks good if you changed them to a "obvious jumps".
  4. 01:06:172 (1) - Ctrl + g for the slider,and move it to (40,120). You should know this kind of forced-back is really not comfotable to play, I personally hate this kind of flow though .. ;w;
  5. 01:15:085 (1) - Move the note to (324,312). The spacing between 01:15:085 (1,2) is a bit large that would let players feel awekward when they testing. Also there is no reason to make a large jump for no heavy beat. so I suggest decrease the spacing between 01:15:085 (1,2) by moving the object at 01:15:085 (1).
  6. 01:30:737 (1,2,3) - Keep their distance consistent. I couldn't get why you changed the spacing bettween them, it is meaningless and looks not good.

Hard

  1. 00:12:911 (4) - Should add a inheriting section with 45% for this note. The finish sound is now too loud and break the feeling for this soft part imo.
  2. 00:13:020 (1) - Should adjust the volume to 45% for the end of spinner,too. The reason is the same with what I said above.
  3. 01:19:215 (5,6) - I highly suggest make them like this. The stack here is so weak that it is not enjoyable at all. To symmetry you like, that is the pattern I have done, to match the strong voices/symbals. Btw,maybe you'll worry about 01:19:433 (6) will touch 01:17:476 (1)'s body,and it would looks bad, but it is ok because the slider quickly disappear and we can not see the stack though. (:

Normal

  1. 00:12:911 - Same as what I said on Hard.
  2. 00:13:020 (1) - ^
  3. 00:28:129 (3) - nazi here.Move 1 grid down for third point on slider. It would look better if you did it.
  4. 01:15:520 (1) - Sorry nazi again /o/, Move to (127,247) for third point on slider. That would look nice actually. ><

Lally's Easy

  1. 00:14:868 - Should add a inheriting section with 45% for the end of spinner. The finish sound is now too loud and break the feeling for this part imo.
  2. 00:38:345 (4) - Remove finish. Maybe add clap instead, or use softfinish3, like cRyo did for Collab. I know you follow the voices to add finish, but the finish sound doesn't match that voice at all. I think you should try different way to handle the voice.
  3. 00:38:780 (1) - And so is the sound on slider's repeat. The reason I motioning here is same as what I said above.
  4. 00:47:910 (5) - Move this slider to (149,248). To the prettier symmetry.
  5. 01:20:954 (1) - remove those inheriting sections. They are exactly meaningless since the volume of the music here still the same as usual.
  6. 01:30:954 - the inheriting section should not be at here,it should be at 01:31:389. You should know that there is still a drum you should follow,it is really weird if the drum is skipped.


That's it ~ good luck with rank ! :)
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