[Ranger] wrote:

[alacat's Easy]
00:13:524 (2) - How about changer like 00:15:805 (1)? okey.

00:43:699 (1) - make this silder symmetry,like this nope.


[alacat's Hard]
00:37:559 (7) - How about like this? no , I want to put jump here

00:41:506 - add note here.it sounds good to me okey :3
00:43:875 - ^ no.

qkenan wrote:

alacat's Hard

1. 00:06:506 Add a circle ? Blank feels bad I dont think so .

B2IN wrote:

[alacat's Easy]
->Sliderが少し早いかも、、 1.0なので問題ないです。　(No problem imo)
残りは大丈夫 ~

[alacat's Hard]
-> OD5は意図的に？ yes .
00:58:962 (4) - ctrl + G ? nice ♪ fix

DarknessAngel wrote:

bakacat's Hard

1. 00:37:910 (1) - it is sudden jump,delete it and add a repeat at 00:37:559 (7). no.
2. 00:57:734 (1) - move the slider to (474,169) then its tail can stack with 00:56:155 (4)'s head completely. fix.
3. 01:21:945 (2,3,4,5) - why didn't you make some prettier pattern like this or something else ? current pattern looks not good though /.\ ... no.
4. a bit disappointed at messy placement,baka ! >< ;w; ._.

Xinely wrote:

[alacat's Easy]
00:02:296 (2) - make straight slider? nope.
00:37:383 (5) - x:204 y: 140 mm....no
00:43:348 (4,1) - how about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/572426 ? It's look bad

[alacat's Hard]
00:04:050 (6) - x:380 y: 268? no ><
00:19:138 (2) - try to in straight line with 00:19:840 (3) - ? I dont like to put straight.

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Easy]
00:24:752 (2) - this slider can blanket better　 okey.
00:56:331 (3) - ^ ^
01:01:945 - how about add finish here, will sound better It is loud imo >.<

[Hard]
00:15:805 (2,3,4,5) - this finishes should be louder imo, they don't fit the song with the current volume mm .. I want to put finish sound :3

Flask wrote:

[ alacat's Easy]

1. 00:00:191 (1) - Just suggest, but 70%~80% volume here? Really can't hear that finish a bit ;_; up to 60% volume :3
2. 00:08:612 (3) - nazi a bit but put the third node to x:416, y:288 is nice to me :3 nope
3. 00:35:278 (1,2) - If I were you, I'll make the rhythm like this because the vocal start at downbeat, end at 1st short white tick. Try it :3! no >.<
   
4. 00:49:313 (1) - I hear some clap sound at the slider tick here (00:49:489 - & 00:49:664 -). It's better if you can change them to 40% (or less) clap sound to make the pattern nicer owo! fix >w<
5. 01:06:155 (1) - I don't know why but I dislike some sound that really strong is at reserve. They should at note/slider begin! So change to this? lol Just suggestion, your pattern is good, too. I want to put finish sound ;_; so no change.
   
6. 01:16:331 (3) - (reserve) Inconsistent clap, sounds really unfit to me ;w; remove please since I don't hear any clap sound here no ><

[ alacat's Hard]

1. 00:06:506 - I'll highly recommend you to add a note here, for the clap consistent, and the music! There's a sound there. Some of the player will think (7) is 1/2 earlier since your clap rules... :3 I dont think so .
2. 00:11:243 (3) - (end) whistle here? Well just saw you add it at begin, but there's same sound at the end. lol okey ♪
3. 00:22:647 (5) - Actually I didn't see any reason to make a jump here. It's not fit with vocal imo :V 1.0x spacing is great here It's stronger sound imo , so I put jump.
4. 00:33:875 (5) - ^ (you can make a jump between (5,6) same as here.
5. 00:50:717 (5) - I would add NC here to fit with that strong vocal lol up 2 you anyway just suggestion no , break my pattern.
6. 01:09:313 (2) - well you should make jump between (1,2) not (2,3). Just ugly with that placement q.q mm.. I dont fit this jump.
7. 01:17:910 (2,4) - Add whistle at their begin, just like 01:19:138 (5) - . That's extremely fit!!! okey :3

Zero__wind wrote:

Hard diff : 00:06:682 (7,1) - http://puu.sh/1OPLa nope.

[Ranger] wrote:

M4M....maybe?

[General]
개인적으로 히트사운드 소리가 너무 작은것 같습니다.좀 키워보는게 어떨까요? 더 키우면 요란스러움 ㅠ
노멀,인센 한정입니다. 00:07:208 (1) - 여기는 피니시가 더 잘 어울리는것 같아요 ok

[Normal]
CS-1? 그냥 제안입니다 필요없다고 생각함. 1/2로 바꿨음.
00:00:191 (1) - 노멀인데 이건 좀 어렵다고 생각합니다. 다르게 바꿔보시는걸 추천해요
00:33:699 (3) - 위로 한칸 오른쪽으로 한칸 poor modding ok
00:40:190 (7) - 끝부분에 클랩보다 피니시가 나을것같아요 ^

[Rika]
00:28:787 (1) - 여기 슬라이더를 한번 반복되게 해보는건 어떠실련지? 안어울리는..
01:14:752 (9) - 이 슬라이더 지우고 01:14:752 , 01:15:103 이 두부분에 노트 추가도 괜찮은것 같아요 체인지 노트.

모딩할게 없어요ㅠ

qkenan wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

Hi Rika~m4m _(:з」∠)_

Rika

1. 00:04:401 (1) - Not comfortable.Split it into 1/2slider+1/4circle or put closer?? tested and fine imo.
2. 00:21:243 (1,2) - Place closer？Its a little hard to read the pattern with ar9 it's readable.
3. 00:29:313 (3,4,5,6,1) - I prefer closer but decide by you. changed.
4. 00:36:769 (5,6,7) - Too far from previous slider.And the ⑤circle nearly hidden by ④slider make it hard to read the pattern same reason as 00:21:243 (1,2).
5. 01:07:910 (5,6,7) - +Whistle? no need.
6. 01:17:033 (9) - Head+Finish ^

Normal

1. 00:11:243 (2) - Not following DS not a issue.
2. 00:31:243 Add a circle ? Feel more fluent and easy to play i keep 1/2 to here.
3. 00:38:085 (1,2,3) - Use a 2/2 slider to replace it ? nope.
4. 00:38:962 Add a circle ? ^
5. 00:57:734 (1) - +Finish ^
6. 01:15:629 (5) - End + Finish? ^

B2IN wrote:

Hi~ Kawayi Rika :3
m4m

[General]
fine

[Normal]
01:20:190 (1) - 슬라이더 끝에 피니시 빠졌어요. 안빠졌는데요?
01:15:103 (3,4,5) - 이건 그냥 제안인데 이런식으로 대칭 써보시는게 어떠세요 ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/572398 많이 사용했던..

[Rika]
00:19:664 (5) - 00:19:840 여기부분 강박이 비어서 비트가 약간 허전해보이는데, 1/2 박자를 써보시는게 어떠세요 ? 괜찮다고 생각함.
01:01:945 (1) - 여기 피니시 대신에 01:02:120 (2) 여기 슬라이더 시작 부분에 쓰는게 더 어울린다고 생각해요. 거긴 드럼이에요...

나머진 별로 건들데가 없어보여요. 랭크의 기운이 감도는 맵이군요.

랭크되길 빌께요 ~

DarknessAngel wrote:

as your m4m request from modding queue o.o/

Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = the thing I think it must be fixed
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

Rika

1. 00:01:595 (1) - 頭上不加個finish麼 ? 很明顯的鑼聲而且是段落需要 ok
2. 00:28:787 (1) - ctrl + g，我覺得目前這樣挺不順.. 从上往下我觉的好啊.
3. 00:37:559 (1,2,3) - 我更喜歡這樣 ok
4. 00:58:261 (3) - ctrl + g比較有創意o.o (而且我覺得更有趣點) ^
5. 01:00:892 (2,3) - (2)移到(272,40);(3)移到(240,128)，原因是這2個物件靠太近不是很好看 ok
6. 01:06:682 (2) - 這裡這麼重的音就跳一下嘛，這樣的間距很含蓄的感覺不好，(3)也調整下，弄這樣
   話說slider看能不能盡量弄得左右對稱，會好看一些 这个我觉的还可以.
7. 01:13:875 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這些串的起頭應該在01:13:875，01:13:875 (2)的1/2節奏讓我覺得很怪異所以建議改成1/4拍節奏 (就算不用25%速度聽也滿明顯的...鼓聲) 我是从wa字开始1/4的,所以没事.

Normal

1. circle size +1,對diff spread來說有很大改善 不觉的..整个图要重做.
2. 00:42:998 (2,3) - 這之間間距也太短:O，為了對稱而作不合理的間距縮短是不可行的(尤其是在N和E難度，這麼做容易造成玩家誤判)，應該用其他方式改掉 这个漏掉了..

[/list]

總覺得節奏還能豐富點:O
但是依然好圖喔
加油速rank ww

Xinely wrote:

hi Rika ~ :3

[Normal]
00:00:541 (2,3) - how about change to slider? maybe like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/572435? i change (1) to circle.
00:01:594 (1) - finish in head slider? ok
00:04:401 (1,2,3) - make this like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/572437? it's fine imo.
00:11:243 (2) - use 1,00 DS please nope,1.00 is ugly touch with slider.
00:50:892 - use S:C2 like 00:49:489 - ? no have drum to here.
01:24:576 - make slider 4/4? nope.

[Rika]
00:16:155 (2) - if in this want make little jump, crtl+G maybe? no need,that's weird.
nice as usual

That's all ~
Good Luck

wcx19911123 wrote:

m4m

[General]
lead-in = 2000 at least please ok

[Normal]
00:00:191 (1) - 不推荐用1/4slider在Normal难度，用1/2一样合曲 ok
00:10:015 (1,2) - 这里spacing错了，建议改下00:10:015 (1) - 的形状，或者00:11:243 (2,3) - 之间用同样的spacing 故意的.
00:28:261 (1,2,3) - 建议用折返slider代替或者缩小spacing，这里对Normal来说难了点 不难.
00:41:945 (2,3) - spacing错了。。 已改.

[Insane]
00:13:524 (2,3) - 建议挪到00:13:348 - ，然后slider延长至00:13:875 - ，会更合曲 这样也不坏.
00:16:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种地方spaicng可以大一点，现在感觉没有体现出歌曲的跳跃感 没必要.
00:18:962 (3,4,5) - 这些slider都vocal off了，听起来很违和。。 往前或往后挪1/2好点 ok
00:33:699 (6) - 这里也vocal off了，建议换成circle然后slider从00:33:875 - 到00:34:226 - ，之后可以delete掉00:34:226 (1) - k
00:37:383 (9,1,2) - 这spacing看起来巨违和，为啥不弄对称点 不懂.
00:56:857 (3,4) - 这里没叠好 ok
00:58:261 (3) - 这里ctrl+g一下flow会更好点其实 ^
00:59:489 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:02:647 (3,1) - 这里anti-jump感觉不合曲，而且会影响读图，建议放到01:01:945 (1) - 的对称位置 ok
01:06:682 (2) - 这个slider也可以ctrl+g一下然后尾叠circle，更合曲点 ^
01:12:296 (6) - ^，这里是flow会更好点 ^
01:24:576 (6) - 这里可以blanket更好点0.0 没看出啥问题来.

Flask wrote:

日卡又開坑QwQ M4M

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]

1. Audio Lead-In 2000或2500 1750有點太快 ok

[ Normal]

1. 00:00:191 (1) - 覺得有點來的太突然 一開始就是1/4折返滑條orz能用1/2一個代替嗎? 改了.
2. 00:05:103 (2,3) - 這邊比較偏向於這樣的節奏 滑條結尾在重音有點突顯不出這裡的急促感 没啥区别.
   
3. 00:14:226 (4) - 這顆note感覺可以刪掉 反正是Normal空一點比較難233 而且也聽不到這裡有啥音 不删才好.
4. 00:32:120 (5) - ctrl+J這個方向比較順 只调了下方向.

[ Rika]

1. 00:09:664 (4) - 如果要我來擺我就end在藍線然後note在白線 只是建議啦 不過滿帶感的 (? 不想..
2. 00:10:190 - 然後這裡要NC 因為前面也都有!! ok
3. 00:33:699 (6) - 這裡突然來1/1有點不太fit 像是前面的00:22:471 (6,1) - 這個就還滿不錯的 就改成note + 1/1 slider吧! 已改成别的.
   好厲害的diff啊 orz

加油! 沒星星了射不了orz

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi 日卡 Q^Q
本来写了蛮长一篇mod……
post出去的时候浏览器卡了一下就把我写的东西全都吞了……
实在桑心了不想再写了
把刚才截的几张图贴上来吧……如果好歹有点儿帮助的话
Rika diff ： 00:34:752 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/1OPC9 差不多的样子.
00:39:664 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/1OPFq 这样不顺..

伤心了……睡觉去……

Rotte wrote:

[alacat's Hard]

OD+1 no , I think it is sufficient in this state

00:11:769 (4,5) - Consider to mod this spacing if you are not make it on purpose.　 Is that so ? I put jump with constant rhythm.
00:26:857 (2) - I think you should create new combo in this slider，not the previous circle. break my pattern about new combo >.< so it's not fit
00:34:752 (7) - NC and remove nc in 00:35:103 (1) - ^
00:49:138 (1) - If this circle in here，the blank is make no sence in previous beat. same as above.

Rotte wrote:

nyan~ from in-game.

[Normal]

00:39:138 (5,7) - 没叠好 fixed

[Insane]

00:06:067 (2,3,4) - 节奏感觉有些不符,就算是喇叭的音效也怪怪的建议修改 不怪.1/2才无聊


00:15:278 (7) - drum clap更好听 不好听.
00:15:453 (9) - drum finish ^

00:24:050 (1) - slider 的头上加个finish？ 不合适.
01:00:541 (1) - slider 的头上加个finish？ ^

01:08:962 (1,2,3) - 建议修改成这样，这样的话flow上会更好 现在这样就好.