This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 5. helmikuuta 2013 at 9:30:33

Artist: Metrosound
Title: Gill's Passover
Tags: breakbit rofltrax hiphop hip-hop rhodes ayu
BPM: 91
Filesize: 2692kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:

1. Ambient (0,81 stars, 56 notes)
2. Collab (4,98 stars, 189 notes)
3. Lounge (3,22 stars, 92 notes)

Download: Metrosound - Gill's Passover
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi.
Full album download: Rhodes

Ambient
Consider overriding the slider ticks to add your custom clap hitsounds.
I like the large circles on this.

Lounge
00:30:355 (3) - Clap on slider end


Collab
00:26:948 (2,3) - I think this would be better closer together. I like those jumps after the spinner tho.

I love this ~star

Both fixed, thanks!

[General]


[Collab]
00:45:410 (2,3) - Too hard...I think this is not a good
00:46:728 (5,6) - ^
00:48:047 (2,3) - ^
00:49:366 (5,6) - ^
01:16:509 (1) - Change into note.

[Lounge]
00:51:454 - add note?x296 y224
01:16:509 (1) - Change into note.

[Ambient]
01:16:509 (1) - Change into note.

[Other]
star,good luck to you

Won't change spinners into notes, extra note added in Lounge, asking Ayu to check his things soon. Thanks!

HAI o_o

[General]

very nice map
offset -2 from current (2,661)
express gratitude as add Ayu in tags

[Ambient]

00:19:146 (1) - why don't you adjust this slider more pretty like 00:10:575 (3) - this? IMO.
00:45:520 (1) - well.. about beat of this circle with spinner, if new players play this diff, they confuse this. because circle note appear suddenly when finish spinner. that's no problem. just suggestion
good map

[Lounge]

00:22:113 (1) - this sipnner start at 00:22:443 - here? I think if you start spinner that, music flow more good.
00:29:036 (1,2) - not perfect cover round like before. check please. this is useless opinion, but I think if you adjust that, your map's completeness is better than now
00:57:058 (3) - too close from 00:56:069 (2). if you want overlap with 00:54:750 (3), try respcaing whilom notes?
perfect!

[Collab]

00:07:825 (10) - remove this circle? give rest time for players. and I can't hear drum sound at here.
00:47:496 (1,2) - adjust this notes to perfect cover round
00:57:386 (6,1) - same as above opinion. well.. nvm my opinion if you don't want it
01:15:737 (5) - try Ctrl + G? I think flow is not playable now.

Dark Fang wrote:

HAI o_o

[General]

very nice map
offset -2 from current (2,661) - I agree
express gratitude as add Ayu in tags - how did i forget D: FIXED

[Ambient]

00:19:146 (1) - why don't you adjust this slider more pretty like 00:10:575 (3) - this? IMO. - adjusted
00:45:520 (1) - well.. about beat of this circle with spinner, if new players play this diff, they confuse this. because circle note appear suddenly when finish spinner. that's no problem. just suggestion - I see no problem either, so not changing at least yet
good map

[Lounge]

00:22:113 (1) - this sipnner start at 00:22:443 - here? I think if you start spinner that, music flow more good. - I think this fits better too, so fixed
00:29:036 (1,2) - not perfect cover round like before. check please. this is useless opinion, but I think if you adjust that, your map's completeness is better than now - adjusted a little bit
00:57:058 (3) - too close from 00:56:069 (2). if you want overlap with 00:54:750 (3), try respcaing whilom notes? - fixed
perfect!

[Collab]

00:07:825 (10) - remove this circle? give rest time for players. and I can't hear drum sound at here. - the kick is quite quiet, but since there is sound, it fits

Thanks! Will ask Ayu to check his things.
E: Ayu didn't want to change anything.

M4M.

Easy seems fine.

Normal seems fine too ._.

I cannot mod the collab.

Guess I'm late for the mod

Ohai, m4m from your queue

Creepy song O:

Ambient

00:17:166 - It feels a bit empty here, maybe add a note
00:50:792 (2) - x:240 y:328 for making this pattern symmetric
01:02:660 (3) - Curve this more for a better blanket

Lounge

00:05:298 (1) - Actually it's a bit ugly. A slider with a blanket like this is better in my opinion
00:21:122 (1) - I don't know if you really need this NC
00:41:562 (3) - Ctrl+g? It flows better in my opinion

Collab

00:21:452 (2,3) - They are overlapped and ugly Fix please
00:22:331 (4) - This slidertick is noisy and annoying, can you silence it?
00:42:221 (1) - What about silencing the end of the spinner?
00:51:342 - You missed a note here, I think
00:59:254 - ^
01:10:573 (8) - It's a bit asymmetric. Fix this by putting slider's tail 2 grids down (x:180 y:44)

This is what I found. Awesome map

RikiH_ wrote:

Ohai, m4m from your queue

Creepy song O: - I thought this at first too, but the more I listen to this, the less creepy and more calm it gets. One of my favs at the moment, also.

Ambient

00:17:166 - It feels a bit empty here, maybe add a note - no
00:50:792 (2) - x:240 y:328 for making this pattern symmetric - it doesn't really need to be symmetric, but I'll make it different so that it looks better in an other way.
01:02:660 (3) - Curve this more for a better blanket - done

Lounge

00:05:298 (1) - Actually it's a bit ugly. A slider with a blanket like this is better in my opinion - done

00:21:122 (1) - I don't know if you really need this NC - removed
00:41:562 (3) - Ctrl+g? It flows better in my opinion - true

Collab

00:21:452 (2,3) - They are overlapped and ugly Fix please - fixed
00:22:331 (4) - This slidertick is noisy and annoying, can you silence it? - muted
00:42:221 (1) - What about silencing the end of the spinner? - done
This is what I found. Awesome map

Thanks!

Star~

Akashi_S runs*

Good luck mapping xD maybe I'll mod it later x(

Hi! From me Modding queue!

[Ambient]
00:50:133 (1) Delete New Combo
00:50:792 (5) New Combo

[Lounge]
00:28:045 (4) NC
00:33:776 (2) ^

[Collab]
00:07:708 (10) NC
00:08:296 (1) Delete NC

Bye! Like Song!

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hi! From me Modding queue!

[Ambient]
00:50:133 (1) Delete New Combo - no
00:50:792 (5) New Combo - no

[Lounge]
00:28:045 (4) NC - no
00:33:776 (2) ^ - no

[Collab]
00:07:708 (10) NC - no
00:08:296 (1) Delete NC - no

Bye! Like Song!

senseless NC suggestions, but thanks for checking anyway

Hi ^^

Collab

00:08:924(4) - will be sounds better, if you end slider on 00:09:254
00:30:023(4) - ^

Lounge

00:11:562(2) - this slider not sound here~ better replace it on double slider 1/1 or 2 notes on white ticks
00:17:166(3) - make this slider more symmetric and put on centre Y http://puu.sh/1RVSH
00:19:803(2,3) - maybe make it more roundish? looks better for me http://puu.sh/1RVTO
00:37:935 - same as 00:11:562

Ambient

00:17:166 - this rhythm better follow for music http://puu.sh/1RVXZ
00:21:781(4) - better replace this note on slider 2/1 souunds better for me
00:34:309 - http://puu.sh/1RVZM

and don't forget correct hs ^^

It's all for me~ good luck :3

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi ^^

Collab

00:08:924(4) - will be sounds better, if you end slider on 00:09:254
00:30:023(4) - ^ - these two end on the kickdrum rather than on the hihat, so for me it's all fine

Lounge

00:11:562(2) - this slider not sound here~ better replace it on double slider 1/1 or 2 notes on white ticks - fixed in own way
00:17:166(3) - make this slider more symmetric and put on centre Y http://puu.sh/1RVSH - done
00:19:803(2,3) - maybe make it more roundish? looks better for me http://puu.sh/1RVTO - done
00:37:935 - same as 00:11:562 - I think this one fits, though

Ambient

00:17:166 - this rhythm better follow for music http://puu.sh/1RVXZ - fixed in own way
00:21:781(4) - better replace this note on slider 2/1 souunds better for me - sure
00:34:309 - http://puu.sh/1RVZM - no

and don't forget correct hs ^^ - i'm not really sure what this means >__<

It's all for me~ good luck :3

thanks!

Hi ♬
Sorry for the waiting
From my Modding Queue

General
Seems fine.

Ambient
00:08:595 (2) - Hmm, I don't know, this slider is a bit off in the grid, and it's not recommended placing objects under the lifebar. Can you put that slider just a bit lower on the grid?
00:25:078 - Why no object here? Adding a circle/slider might improve the flow and consistency, since it matches with your previous patterns.
00:56:067 (2) - Hmm, I'm quite don't like how this slider was placed on 00:53:430 (4) - fading posiiton. This may be hard for some players, since it's probably the first overlap on the diff. I suggest placing at the same place on the beginning of 00:56:067 (2) - http://puu.sh/1Syqn Well, that might ruin your next objects, yeah, but you should consider placing that slider somewhere else imo.

Lounge
00:22:441 (1) - Well, I honestly think this spin doesn't play nice here, considering the fact that you haven't added one that previous diff, this spin looks kinda inconsistent, and besides, I don't really think it matches with the song. But if you have your reasons to keep that, it's fine.
Nothing much to add here.

Collab
00:09:254 - Why no object here? I felt "unsafe" when playing the previous slider 00:08:924 (4) - It feels like something is missing.
00:16:507 (2) - Try avoiding placing sliders that high on the grid.
00:27:386 (4,5) - Could've improved the blanket a bit more. Maybe giving a more considerable space between them.
00:30:353 - Same as 00:09:254
00:46:177 (4) - Pretty much the same as 00:16:507 (2) But this time I think you should move this slider since it's under the lifebar.
00:50:133 (1,2) - This stacks kinda ruin the flow imo, you could've worked on a better pattern, and besides, just look at the next objects and below my next suggestion, you can see how kinda repetitive that section is.
00:51:452 (4,5) - ^
00:52:770 (1,2) - ^
00:54:089 (4,5) - ^
00:55:408 (1,2) - ^

Good luck.

Wolf wrote:

Hi ♬
Sorry for the waiting
From my Modding Queue

General
Seems fine.

Ambient
00:08:595 (2) - Hmm, I don't know, this slider is a bit off in the grid, and it's not recommended placing objects under the lifebar. Can you put that slider just a bit lower on the grid? - done
00:25:078 - Why no object here? Adding a circle/slider might improve the flow and consistency, since it matches with your previous patterns. - no thanks, this is supposed to be an easier diff for beginners, not another normal-ish
00:56:067 (2) - Hmm, I'm quite don't like how this slider was placed on 00:53:430 (4) - fading posiiton. This may be hard for some players, since it's probably the first overlap on the diff. I suggest placing at the same place on the beginning of 00:56:067 (2) - http://puu.sh/1Syqn Well, that might ruin your next objects, yeah, but you should consider placing that slider somewhere else imo. - i don't see a reason, since it's clearly visible for almost 2 seconds

Lounge
00:22:441 (1) - Well, I honestly think this spin doesn't play nice here, considering the fact that you haven't added one that previous diff, this spin looks kinda inconsistent, and besides, I don't really think it matches with the song. But if you have your reasons to keep that, it's fine. - keeping it
Nothing much to add here.

Collab
00:09:254 - Why no object here? I felt "unsafe" when playing the previous slider 00:08:924 (4) - It feels like something is missing. - mentioned in my answer for Katty Pie's mod
00:16:507 (2) - Try avoiding placing sliders that high on the grid. - since it's not touching scores or hp bar, not changing
00:27:386 (4,5) - Could've improved the blanket a bit more. Maybe giving a more considerable space between them. - done
00:30:353 - Same as 00:09:254 - same as 00:09:254

Good luck.

Thanks!

Hi :3/

Hi~SNB
M4M~

[Ambient]
Seems fine~

[Lounge]
00:45:518 (1) - Draw it like this might be better:

[Collab]
00:09:254 - You can hear the Click here.. add a note might fit it.

00:20:133 (6,7) - Actually using this flow will be more fluent during my test:
(And don't forget to adjust the sliders ^^)

00:27:056 (3,4) - Adjust a little to let the sliders point to the circle in the middle:

00:44:858 (1) - This note is just 2/4 beat after the spinner, which is kind of too intense, let the spinner ends at 00:44:199 might be better.

Actually the rhythm and flow remains the same from 00:50:133 to 01:00:353, which is alittle boring.Here is my suggestion:
You can hear the slight drum such as 00:51:287 and 00:53:924 and so on.I think you can use them to make the rhythm more diversified.For example:

Add a note at 01:01:891 and using the distance snap to notify the players:

This is just a suggestion.The rhythm is nothing wrong after all.

That's all. Good Luck!

Hellzero wrote:

Hi :3/

Lounge

00:13:210 (1) - add finish?
00:22:441 (1) - ^
00:42:221 (1) - ^
00:55:408 (1) - ^
01:05:957 (1) - ^ - just earlier removed all of them because they didn't sound well

Ambient

The same as ''Lounge'' - the same as lounge

Collab

The same as ''Lounge'' - the same as lounge
00:07:606 (9) - Why so different spacing? It's very confuse - i don't see why
00:27:386 (4) - Too suddenly - no it isn't

unless Ayu wants to change something, I can't really give kd... thanks for check anyway