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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 kwietnia 2009 at 21:45:10

Artist: Pakito
Title: Electro Music
BPM: 135
Filesize: 6150kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  • Hard (4,81 stars, 270 notes)
  • Normal (4,72 stars, 185 notes)

Download: Pakito - Electro Music
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Edit1:SFG fixes and added Kiai time effects(i love it :D)
Edit2:Added Normal and moved to Pending.
Edit3/4:Fix.
Edit5:Added skin elements.
Edit6/7/8/9/10:Fix.
Last edited by SteRRuM on , edited 30 times in total.
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Denied kudosu.
I see no problems with it. I even managed to pass this despite me being fucking horrible what with me only mapping.
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Hard
00:21:75 (1,2,3,4) - stack under fading 4
00:29:75 (5,6,7) - hitcircles hiding part of slider
00:33:97 (4,5) - can you make these parallel?
00:53:53 (7) - add a finish maybe
01:09:31 (6) - new combo
01:12:86 (5,6) - stack the endpoints
01:41:31 (6) - add a whistle
01:55:08 (1) - add a finish
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01:37:97 (1) - stack on the fading end of 10
as for using kiai time, i think you did pretty well, i like the little touch at the end :P but thats all i could find to mod up there XD make your other difficulty(ies) so i can sick a BAT on it after nitpicking them~
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Normal
00:25:08 (1,2,3...) - constant rhythm is getting repetitive
other than repetitive rhythm this all looks good...moving onto Hard



Hard
00:42:31 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - imperfect stacking
01:15:53 (8) - yknow whatd be really epic is if you hitsounded this~
01:53:36 (9) - again I can see this having epic hitsounds but that might just be me~
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Normal
00:25:08 (1,2,3,4...) - the constant rhythm is getting annoying...please change it a little in at least one place by or at this point in time
00:48:42 (1,2,3,4,5...) - itd be cool if you made this entire stream decrescendo
01:15:08 (6) - all else failing, can you end this with a finish at least?
rhythm got repetitive at the end too, even with the small changes



Hard
awesome as ever~
oh right, judging by what peppy said about kiai earlier today your kiai section is too long ^^U might wanna work on that
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Normal
00:25:11 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - please add or delete a note somewhere in this combo that breaks the constant rhythm
01:28:44 (3,5) - imperfect stacking :P



Hard
beautiful~
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Hello,

~Comments here are not final decisions, you can always decide by yourself~


Normal


00:28:00 (6) - spacing
00:33:55 (4) - allign with 00:33:11 (3) - end
00:51:55 (5) - allign with 00:51:11 (4) - end
00:57:78 (5) - this is overlapping 00:59:11 (8) -
(maybe instead of using 00:57:78 (5) , you could use somthing like 00:59:55 (9) -)
If you do maybe take away 00:58:22 (6) too, and use another one of 00:59:55 (9)
01:21:78 (6) - allign with 01:21:33 (5) - end
01:24:22 (4) - check spacing here
01:25:55 (7) - Put this slider's end on top of fading (1)



Hard


Spacing for this difficulty is: 0.8

00:23:75 (6) - maybe you can make this slider go down, so this one 00:23:97 (1) - goes down too and these beats 00:23:08 (3,4) - dont overlap it. *you circle the beats with the slider, avoiding them*
If you do this you will also help 00:25:31 (1) - so that you dont have to allign it with fading beats.
00:30:19 (7) - allign with 00:29:75 (5,6) -
00:30:75 (1) - move ending to previous white tick, 00:32:53 move this timing section to previous red tick, and add a beat here 00:32:53 (like you did at normal)
00:33:97 (4) - Put slider's end on top of fading (1) and move this 00:34:42 (5) - a bit so fading (2) doesnt overlap it.
00:37:31 (10) - Put slider's end on top of fading (6)
00:44:64 (5) - put on top of fading (2)
00:45:08 (1) - move ending to previous white tick, 00:46:75 move this timing section to previous red tick, and add a beat here 00:46:64
00:50:42 (8) - spacing
00:52:42 (2) - spacing
00:53:53 (7) - how about putting this 7 under fading 1 so it completes the "beat design"? (not on top, under)
01:02:19 (6,7) - Put on top of fading beats.
01:04:86 (7) - how about putting this 7 on the previous blue tick so the 4 beats stack same timing?
(If you do so, fix spacing on the next upcoming beats and redesign a bit)
01:16:97 (1) - move ending to previous white tick,01:20:42 move this timing section to previous red tick, and add a beat here 01:20:42
01:30:64 (12) - Move this slider's end a bit to the right so it points 01:31:08 (1) - start
01:33:53 (7) - allign this with 01:33:08 (6) - end, and move 01:33:75 (8) - once to the right, then move 01:33:97 (9) - twice to the left.
01:47:08 (1) - move ending to previous white tick, add a beat here 01:48:86
add a beat here 01:51:53, put it infront of 01:51:31 (6) - end
add a beat here 01:51:97, put it infront of 01:51:75 (7) - end
(If you do so, snap 01:52:19 (8) - and 01:53:36 (9) -

(The Following is rather optional)
01:07:75 (2) - allign this with 01:07:31 (1) - end; Then allign 01:08:19 (3) - with 01:07:75 (2) - end;
Then allign 01:08:64 (4) - with 01:08:19 (3) - end and after that fix spacing here 01:09:08 (5) -

Good map so far~
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Hard
00:23:53 (5) - Spacing.
00:24:53 (2) - ^
00:56:31 (2) - ^

DOUBLE STARRED.
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Hard
00:34:42 (6) - Too close to (5).
01:15:53 (8) - WTF overpowering much?
01:53:36 (12) - ^
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Timing
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11. Offset: 60,087ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
12. Offset: 76,948ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
13. Offset: 80,198ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
Duplicate sections; Remove the later one

14. Offset: 94,643ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
...

Kiai Time
Hard:
01:20:42 - 01:55:08
01:55:97 ~
Start an inherited section at the first time, adjust the second last section to the second time.
Mark the the section at the first time as Kiai time. All sections that cross the part in between should also be marked Kiai.

Normal:
01:20:42 - 01:32:89
01:34:66 ~

Hard
01:13:75 (7) - Uhh, what is this repeat to? Resnap to 1/4
01:52:19 (11) - ^

Normal
Not much to say, looks good
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Normal
All right.

Hard
Using grid 3
00:27:75 (2) - 1 square to the left
01:28:42 (4) - 1 down



Nice work! Starred~!
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