1. Insane (4.69 stars, 345 notes)
2. Normal (2.05 stars, 150 notes)
3. yf's Easy (1.69 stars, 101 notes)
4. yf's Hard (3.2 stars, 240 notes)

eLtigreXXx wrote:

hi ^^ m4m from my queue

suggestion

1# kiai time 00:45:281 - start kiai time 01:05:948 - end FIXED
2#kiai tiem 01:06:614 - start kiai tiem 01:16:614 - end FIXED

general

Combo Colours FIXED
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Aladdin] :
Combo1 : 193,187,191
Combo2 : 255,0,0
Combo3 : 249,253,77
Combo4 : 20,109,199

- [DB's Alibaba] :
Combo1 : 248,118,228
Combo2 : 55,251,55
Combo3 : 70,70,251
Combo4 : 252,95,95
Combo5 : 255,155,6
Combo6 : 255,255,38

- [DB's MAGI] :
Combo1 : 248,118,228
Combo2 : 55,251,55
Combo3 : 70,70,251
Combo4 : 252,95,95
Combo5 : 255,155,6
Combo6 : 255,255,38

- [jameskong1's MAGI] :
Combo1 : 248,118,228
Combo2 : 55,251,55
Combo3 : 70,70,251
Combo4 : 252,95,95
Combo5 : 255,155,6
Combo6 : 255,255,38

- [Morujiana] :
Combo1 : 193,187,191
Combo2 : 255,0,0
Combo3 : 249,253,77
Combo4 : 20,109,199

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Aladdin] : 44448
- [DB's Alibaba] : 44399
- [DB's MAGI] : 44399
- [jameskong1's MAGI] : 44399
- [Morujiana] : 44448

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Aladdin] : Anime Ending dennisboy38 jameskong1
- [DB's Alibaba] : Anime Ending
- [DB's MAGI] : Anime Ending
- [jameskong1's MAGI] : Anime Ending
- [Morujiana] : Anime Ending

[Aladdin]
Snapping
00:03:284 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). FIXED
00:03:284 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). FIXED
00:12:448 (2,3) - finish to increase that is heard in the background ADDED
00:22:448 (1) ^ ADDED
00:37:281 - ^ ADDED
00:37:948 - ^ ADDED
00:38:614 - ^ ADDED
00:55:948 - ^ ADDED
Spinner New Combo
00:44:614 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. I think it's okay :3

[jameskong1's MAGI]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:06:594 - snap to 01:06:614

[Morujiana]
Snapping
00:01:933 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). FIXED
00:01:933 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). FIXED
00:03:284 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). FIXED
00:03:284 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). FIXED
00:03:941 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). FIXED
00:03:941 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). FIXED
00:04:597 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). FIXED
00:04:597 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). FIXED
00:05:948 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end). FIXED
00:13:960 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). FIXED
00:13:960 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). FIXED
00:14:626 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). FIXED
00:14:626 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). FIXED
00:15:292 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). FIXED
00:15:292 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). FIXED
00:15:958 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). FIXED
00:15:958 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). FIXED
00:16:624 (1) - Unsnapped circle. FIXED
00:17:293 (2) - Unsnapped circle. FIXED
00:17:954 (3) - Unsnapped circle. FIXED
00:21:953 (1) - Unsnapped circle. FIXED
00:24:285 (1) - Unsnapped circle. FIXED
00:24:618 (2) - Unsnapped circle. FIXED
00:24:951 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). FIXED
00:24:951 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). FIXED
00:25:950 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). FIXED

[morujiana]
00:00:615 (1,2) -easy diif I don't suggest to stack any objects. That may confuse beginner players FIXED
00:24:285 (1,2) - ^ FIXED
00:26:949 (1,2) - ^ FIXED
00:33:114 -finish ADDED

nattap wrote:

Hi

[Morujiana]
I think there is too much 1 note long combo
just suggest but if it is about color it may be okay(I have no idea with this)
00:07:948 (1,1) - can be combined i think it is fine
00:13:960 (1,1,1,1) - ^ i think it is fine
00:19:281 (1,1,2) - this is the same sentence and same bar should be 1,2,3 FIXED
00:34:948 (1,1,1) - combine ? i think it is fine
00:39:281 - add a note ? ADDED
01:21:948 (1,1,1,1) - combine ? i think it is fine

[Alibaba]
Too slow slider,I think
How about 1.4 SV and x1.0 spacing In fact, Dennis intentionally uses this setting
00:39:281 - add a note ? ADDED

[Aladdin]
00:16:614 (1) - Remove combo Why?
00:47:948 (1) - ^ ^
01:00:614 (1,1,1,1,1) - combine ? too easy
01:19:281 (1,2,1,2) - try http://puu.sh/1O5Hc FIXED

[jameskong1's MAGI]
01:03:281 (9,10) - This is the same rhythm length as 01:01:948 (5,6) and 01:02:614 (7,8) but greatly farther It may be too hard
01:09:614 (3,4,5,6) - make them like 01:08:614 (1,2,3,4,1,2)

This diff has different kiai time consider changing it I will inform him about this

[DB's MAGI]
00:55:281 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I think combo arrangment should be 00:55:281 (1,1,2,3) and 00:56:114 (4,5,1,2,3) FIXED


Note: MAGI diff is far harder than my skill so I can't mod much

shARPII wrote:

Hi! here's my mod for M4M.

[General]
Add timing point with same BPM, offset : 7948. (I was confused at the beginning ^^ you have the good timing but the first
tick has to be on the beat (not the third)) cannot understand ;w;

[Morujiana]
00:18:614 (4) : moves to x: 104 y: 128 FIXED
00:34:947 (1) : go to 00:34:614 : (easier for beginners) but it does not resonance the lyrics D:
00:40:614 (1) : go to 00:39:947 FIXED
00:41:947 : add a circle here ADDED
(You have changed this part since last night so take this or keep what you've done, it's good too)
01:14:281 (1) : remove and add 3 circles 01:14:281 / 01:14:614 / 01:14:947 FIXED
01:23:281 : remove NC changed to two in a combo color. it sounds better i think
01:24:281 : ^ ^
(^^ ok you have colors but i think that's not useful. I have seen an other part like that.Iif it was me, i'll change this but that's just an advice)
EDIT : I've done this mod last night so some points can not match with the latest version

[Alibaba]
00:13:281 (8): NC FIXED
00:13:614 (1) : remove NC FIXED
00:16:114 : i don't like all these NC but it seems to be your choice :p YA
00:23:947 : add a circle (on the beat no? even if you use the singer on this part) ADDED
00:25:448 (5) : NC FIXED
00:38:614 to 00:40:281 : add something in this space / edit: (outdated?) ADDED
00:42:614 to 00:44:614 : ^ ADDED
01:02:614 (4) : NC FIXED
01:23:948 (5) : ^ FIXED
01:24:614 (8) : moves to x: 296 y: 128 FIXED
For new combo, just check when the beat starts with the new timing point and try to adapt that. (Y)[color]

[Aladdin]
00:16:114 (1) : snapping? (with 1.0x)
00:16:614 (1) : remove NC FIXED
00:17:114 (1) : remove NC (i agree with nattap here, just use the new timing point and count "1-2-3-4" in your head ^^ combo have this utility (even if you don't have your circle or spinner on the beat). FIXED
00:17:614 (2) : NC FIXED
00:18:948 (1) : remove NC FIXED
00:20:114 (5) : NC FIXED
I have nothing much to say, it's an enjoyable beatmap, the big problem for me is the moment when you choose to add NC or not. Just think about it ^^

[DB's Magi]

00:59:448 (10) : Be careful with that, you shouldn't add objects that high on the grid, consider lowering it on the grid. FIXED
01:18:614 (1) : ^ FIXED

Magi in general:
Too difficult for me. There is so many different distance spacing (you have a better level than me so I think that you can know if it's weird or not contrary to me). I think it's weird because sometimes the distance is too big for a fast bpm beatmap.
I can't give you any advice here, sorry. That's fine

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M from your queue
General
there are some unsnapped notes here, so please resnap all notes. FIXED easy diff. In fact both DB and I changed the distance spacing in the middle of the song in hard and normal diff. I ask nold_1702 and he said it is acceptable ;w;
Hard: 1.5 1.0 1.2
Normal: 1.4 2.0
Morujiana
maybe this diff worth Easy so OD-1 & HP-1 better for newbie
changed it OD-2 & HP-2 instead
both 1 I think it is too easy

Placement
I don't agree with your NC spamming in easiest diff bacause maybe newbie will be confused. e.g ) 00:13:614(1,1,1,1) and more...
00:24:281(1,2,3) to be beautiful like this? FIXED

SPOILER

00:28:614(4,1,2,3) ^ FIXED

SPOILER

00:37:947(2) to be nice flow, like this? FIXED

SPOILER

01:11:281(1) ^ FIXED

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:34:614 add a note here bacause the back music has a finish. ADDED

DB's Alibaba
maybe this diff aims Normal diff I suppose, so please make lower AR & OD under 5. it's not Rankable. FIXED
I suggest you don't change slider velocity in this diff for newbie. and same suggestion for spacing.
Placement
00:02:614(2) I suppose this note makes confusing for newbie. FIXED
00:05:281(5)^ FIXED
00:18:947(1)^ FIXED
00:16:114(1,1,1) this jumping reaches Hard diff. please not to jump FIXED
00:39:947(10,1) swap NC FIXED

Aladdin
AR6 seems nice. FIXED
Placement
00:24:614(2,1,2) it's more nice flow like this? FIXED
00:45:281(4) add NC? FIXED

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:05:281(4,1) to follow the music, maybe this would be better.

SPOILER

00:14:447(2,3,4,5) like this? FIXED

SPOILER

01:25:281(1) end at 01:26:281 FIXED

DB's MAGI
Placement
00:45:281(6) NC here FIXED
Rhythm
00:13:864(2) maybe start at 00:13:947 FIXED
00:14:281(3) maybe this

SPOILER

FIXED
00:46:697(6,7) delete these notes. FIXED

well, you need more work but it's not bad for newbie mapset. I support newbie mappers so here is my star, please make better~

sammy711 wrote:

會造成不能被rank的重要問題:紅色
比較重要的問題:粉色
建議:黑色
吐槽:綠色
General
1.背景圖片請使用800×600的大小 可以使用畫圖軟件在下方增加一小條和原背景顏色相似的部份 現在的是800×588 於是造成了這樣的情況：

SPOILER

有一條是黑的

2.注意！video的尺寸大小必須控制在800×600以內 現在的為1280×720 請用格式工廠等軟件壓縮視頻到800×600以下[/color]
FIXED
3.offset好像不是特別準確 我聽了一遍確認黃線的offset更貼近7973 這個數值 可以將速度放慢到1/4并感受一下差別(別只改一個難度哦)，并resnap一下音符，別都不在線上了(之前那些人提醒你不在線上就是因為offset不准確 就算聽的是准的也不在線上)
我覺得還可以
4.難度問題 這幾個難度雖然貼切歌曲 可並不能看出來難度的大小 建議改成 "Crazy Aladin"一類的難度(自己再構思一下其他的表示難度的詞放在哪裡)，避免混淆
這個嘛 其實這裡有清楚表明:3
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/70589

Morujiana
1. 00:19:306 (1,2,3)
這三個音符擺放的樣子不太好看，1的座標為(272,56) 2為(288,160) 3為(288,264) 顯然1 2 3不在一條直線上 而且1和3的橫座標也不同
可以選擇將3改為(272,264) 也可以選擇將1改為(288,56) 請自行選擇
FIXED
2. 00:21:972
可以在note1與note2之間再加一個note 聽起來更舒服
再加的話就不是easy了
3. 00:34:972
這一段的顏色太多了 有點花哨 將slider的顏色統一一下如何？
14秒也有這個問題 沒必要用那麼多顏色
這是故意的 D:
4. 00:41:639
在1和2之間再加個note？個人認為這裡應該再有一個音 聽起來比較舒服
ADDED
5. 00:56:306
這個地方略奇怪啊 歌的重音在這裡都變成了滑條中間的tick
推薦這麼改:將第二個滑條向後挪半拍 將單點note刪掉 變成這樣：

SPOILER

聽起來會舒服很多
FIXED
6.01:04:639(1)
仔細聽歌曲 可以聽出來 這個單note更應該向左移動半拍移到紅線上
你可以將音效打開 會發現音效和背景音樂的鼓點是錯開的
FIXED
7.01:23:306(1)
不用再開一個新combo吧 上面的一個才到2就開新combo總覺得有點亂
FIXED
總的來說 音效處理的不錯 沒有特別大的問題

DB's Alibaba
1.00:02:614(5)
這個reverse放的很不人道啊，reverse的箭頭方向是向下，這種會造成人不解的reverse是不允許擺放的
更改方法 如圖

SPOILER

FIXED
2.00:05:281(5)
同(1)箭頭的方向太坑 把(1)中更改完的倒置 就可以了
FIXED
3.整首曲子中的短slider太短了 不好看建議將slider速度從0.7調到1.0或1.2 讓短slider稍微長一點
FIXED
4.00:38:938(7)
這串里竟然有11個note。normal中一串儘量少超過5個 可以在第7個這裡分開 創造一個新combo
FIXED
5.最後一個轉盤的音效略有點大 可以考慮減小一點音量
FIXED

Aladdin
1.00:51:00
這附近音符跟的線很不明 剛開始的00:51:781(3)跟的是旋律 而下面轉的滑條馬上就回到歌詞，讓人十分摸不著頭腦
建議刪掉00:51:781(3) 這樣旋律便會清晰很多
FIXED
2.00:54:281(1)
這個reverse加的真不好 明明只需要三拍 卻用一個reverse+單note硬是改成了四拍 而且reverse除了開頭都不在線上
建議:reverse改成slider 讓slider的結尾在單note左側的紅線上
FIXED
3.01:18:614(1)
建議將這個音符去掉new combo 明顯它和前面的slider應該在一起
FIXED

jameskong1's MAGI
1.這張圖有一點：節奏太難把握 也就是說很難抓住歌曲的節奏並按節奏擊打note
在這種情況下使用高AR有一些不妥 對於這個難度來說 AR6足够了。除此之外 這首歌的節奏也不是很適合高AR的設置
2.這個圖的特點是跳 不妨把名字設為"jameskong1's JUMPING MAGI"如何？一眼就能看出來這張圖的特點
3.00:08:864(9)
這裡的三連真的十分不妥 最好刪去這個音符 這樣才更適合此處的節奏
4.00:29:781
這個地方再加一個note？總覺得少了點東西
位置最好在圖上1和2連線的中點處 也就是這裡 座標(334,271)

SPOILER

5.00:34:869
這裡開始slider速度應該降低一些 聽起來更舒服
6.00:49:114(4,5)
這個地方的4,5是違規的 因為無法判斷究竟滑條的開頭是4還是5 請適當將滑條右移
7.01:25:281
此處應加一個轉盤 持續至1:26:614
總的來說 這個難度做的還不錯 就是擺放的有點隨意了 另外掉血太快了 建議減慢一點

DB's MAGI
1.注意！ 當兩組速度不同的單note組出現時 請選擇①將距離變得不同②增加new combo
變速等距離打或有空拍最好增加新combo 不然沒人能認出來
標準的例子: 00:14:947
時間軸上清楚地能看出來 分組應該是3 2
所以請把2的第一個標記出來 讓人注意它 就能知道有空拍了
同樣的道理:00:36:947 既然是等速打 這裡開那麼多new combo就有點沒道理了
FIXED
2.00:50:947(6)
這個note放歪了 請把座標改為(416,48)
FIXED
3.00:39:614
這地方放4個note的跳略有點奇怪 可以跟著背景 將前面連打減少2個 跟著背景放5個note的跳(推薦正五邊形)
FIXED
4.00:47:614(4) 00:48:947(8) 00:50:281(4) 00:51:614
這幾個note都歪了 座標都改成(88,328)
FIXED
5.01:04:614(6)
把這個note移到前面的白線 和音樂的鼓點對應
然後把下一個note變成new combo
FIXED
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大概就這些 第一次mod 自己選擇一下吧~

sammy711 wrote:

嗯 加油 坐等rank

- t e n n y a - wrote:

~Requested via PM~
Sorry for the wait orz.

[General]

1. Remove anime from the tags. FIXED
2. Change the bg into .JPG to save memory FIXED
3. Add muted sliderslide? sound so noisy FIXED
4. 2nd kiai time end at 01:22:614 I suppose I think it is okay now

[Morujiana]

1. 00:07:948 (1)- : add finish on the head? FIXED
2. 00:10:614 (1)- : remove nc, the slider is same so there's no need to add nc there FIXED
3. 00:14:281 (1,1,1,1)- : remove nc.. FIXED
4. 00:24:281 (1,2)- : ctrl+g them to make a better flow FIXED
5. 00:34:947 (1,1,1)- : remove nc FIXED
6. 00:47:947 (2)- : move it 1 grid down? it'll make a better placement FIXED
7. 00:56:614 (1)- : remove nc FIXED
8. 01:12:281 (1,1)- : remove nc FIXED

[Aladdin]

1. 00:47:281 (1,1)- : remove nc FIXED
2. 01:00:947 (1,1,1,1)- : ^ FIXED

[DB's MAGI]

1. 00:17:114 (1)- : remove nc FIXED
2. 00:57:697 (6,7)- : remove this, it'll fit the lyric FIXED
3. 01:00:364 (11,12)- : ^ FIXED
4. 01:08:281 - : add note? ADDED
5. 01:08:447 - : ^ I think it is okay now
6. 01:25:281 (1-13)- : omg prefer to change this to spinner >< FIXED

That's all I can find, You need to strengthen your placement and rhythm, next time try to use clap or whistle hit sounding

1. PreviewTime is not same between diffs. you must fix jameskong1's MAGI.
2. offset is same as above.
3. not work video other than Morujiana. you must add it to other diff.

1. 00:03:284 (1) - unsnaped note.

1. some notes are unsnaped. please check to use AIMod.