1. Since you start following that nice new chimes melody here, I really don't think this massive jump is fitting it much. It would be better as a repeating slider imo.
   you forgot the link, lol
   
2. 05:22:757 (5,6) - The jump is pretty surprising and hard to read imo after the 05:21:157 (1,2) wasn't a jump. Maybe move the 6 closer to the 5 to make it more obvious.
   nice, fixed
   
3. 06:10:890 (5,6,7) - The 1/12 rhythm is super hard to read. I think it would be better to avoid the 1/12 rhythms in this map because they take a bit away from the "relax" motif that you're going for here imo.
   it is 1/6 and there are PLENTY of 1/6 sliders before these. it's easy to read

1. Honestly, for the first 3 or so minutes I think you should replace all of the finishes that you used with whistles, or just delete them because they are very noisy and there isn't anything even resembling a finish in the music. I'm not a fan of adding noise like this. -.-

1. Kinda nazi, but still.. You combo colours are TOO similar, make them a bit different ;_;
   сделал различимее (твой тёмно синий слишком тёмный, плохо видно на фоне)
2. Try slider tick rate 2, i swear it sounds better to me.
   For example 03:53:557 - 04:10:357 - it feels better with STR 2.
   совсем нет, в начале очень шумно выходит
3. А для киаи место не нашлось? Хотя бы фонтаны! Ну есть же куда поставить >3< Красиво же будет.
   добавил в одном месте

1. 02:32:557 - uh.. I'd place 1/4 slider here to follow rhythm closer, not really sure, but I think it fits here.
2. 02:58:357 - на (3) похожее звучание, но при этом там был слайдер, а тут его почему-то не стало. Недобавишь нотку сюда?
   в таких штуках, как выше, я ставлю акцент на двух этих "колокольчиковых" звуках. потому между ними — ничего
3. 03:59:557 (1,2,3) - Cпокойная сложность должна быть спокойной. Я чуть с кресда не упал, когда ДЖАМП ОПАСНЫЙ пошел :< Давай чуть поменьше дистанцию :<
   поменьше сделаю, тут ты прав

1. Resubmit the map. When downloaded, it prompts me to update it.
2. 01:51:557 (2) - I see that this is meant to look symmetricall, but I feel it would be really smooth and rhythmic to move the red node to the same spot as the first slider-tick. Doing this causes the curve to move the slider-ball just at the right time to be in-time with the beat of the song.
   ok done
3. 02:11:157 (2,3) - I feel as if the way that this is mapped doesn't fit the previous nature of the map. In my opinion, you should change it to a repeat slider.
   okay
4. 02:15:157 (2) - Put a whistle at the beginning of this slider. It fits well because of the high pitched "ding" at this point.
   i didn't do it here 02:13:157 (4) - and will not do it there too
5. 02:27:957 (2,3) - It would create a really nice atmosphere to put a whistle on (2) and the beginning of (3) and gradually lower the volume between the whistles to match the music.
   unfortunately, the volume is already 10% and lowering the volume will not make the needed effect :c i wish i could set 1% volume
6. 02:33:157 (1,2) - This overlap doesn't really fit the way you've been mapping the entire time. I would change it something like this.
   done
7. 03:06:157 (2) - Shouldn't this have a whistle at the end of it? I believe the music calls for it.
   right, added
8. 03:47:557 (2) - This should be a bit closer to (1) according to previous occurences like this and the distance snap.
   nah. this is a tiny speed up before next spacing increase
9. 03:49:157 (3,1) - Once again, this overlap doesn't fit the previous mapping. I would make it so that they don't touch at all, or make them similar to what you did at 02:06:757 (4,1).
   these are fine. i like rare overlaps
10. 03:59:957 (2) - Having this being a slider seems rather odd due to the fact that there's really no beat where the slider ends. I would just make this a circle (preferably stacked with (1) or an anti-jump).
    there IS a beat
11. 04:15:557 (2,4) - The way (4) is under the slider-track of (2) looks a bit sloppy. Move and play around with it so that the start of (4) is perfectly under (2)'s slider track, like this.
    i was just waiting for somebody to point that out ;-; fixed
12. 05:37:957 (3) - Having this as a red node slider looks odd when (1), a slider in similar position and size, is a normal slider. I would just change this slider to be like (1) for neatness. For example, 05:39:557 (6,1). If (1) was a beizer (red node) slider, wouldn't it look a bit wonky?
    (3) has slightly different sound under it. and this really doesn't matter so much. making everything simply curved makes this boring map even more boring
13. 05:44:357 (2) - ^
    same music difference
14. 05:56:957 (2,3) - This overlap doesn't fit once again.
    keeping this one
15. 07:00:357 (2) - A whistle would go well at the end of this slider to fit the music.
    yupp

1. 01:57:957 (5) - здесь по идее должно быть нк, так как тут увеличивается громкость (на остальных секциях нк есть), но я в раздумьях от того, подойдет ли оно сюда по музыке. поразмысли чтоле над этим D:
   забыл, вроде бы о.о
2. 02:05:557 (2) - зачем здесь репит? имхо нотка на 02:05:957/цельный слайдер без репита подойдет лучше по этим колокольчикам
   не знаю, но так надо)
3. 02:33:157 (1,2) - оверлапятся между собой некрасиво, лучше бы (1) изогнуть вниз
   уже исравил в моде сверху о.о и почему всем не нравится
4. 03:02:957 (3) - на одну клетку вниз
   здесь не должно было быть прямой линии
5. 03:13:157 (3) - я б его вниз погнула ;w;
   так раньше было, но я уж оставлю как есть сейчас
6. 03:32:357 (5) - вистл на начало и на конец (тут лодка как-то громче скрипит, или что это, я не знаю ;w;)
   нее, вистлы у меня для другого предназначены
7. 04:17:157 (4) - подгони его ровнее под слайдер :<
   ага да о:
8. 04:34:757 (1) - нормал-финиш подошел бы тут лучше (там "пуф" мягче и как-то под атмосферу лучше подходит)
   агаа
9. 06:02:357 (9) - убрать клап с конца мб? я не заметила клапов в похожих моментах
   агаа
10. 06:37:957 (4) - нк сюда из-за секции
    ага
11. 06:53:957 (3) - сюда бы тоже, да вот нк на следующем слайдере :< подумай
    ну тут в конце нк съехали, но всё вообще нормально. по музыке подходит как-то
12. 07:08:357 (2,1) - стало ужасно лень делать красиво? D:< второй слайдер можно просто сделать с помощью новой системы, а код на первый внизу (если понравится офк)
    извини, но форма моего слайдера была тщательно подумана ;-; он такой, какой надо

07:22 grumd: hey, Byakugan
07:22 grumd: i see that you're kinda playing now
07:22 grumd: can you test my map then?
07:22 Byakugan249: oh? which map?
07:22 grumd: is away: afk
07:22 grumd: is editing BT - All That Makes Us Human Continues [Calm]
07:22 grumd: this one
07:22 grumd: but let me update first
07:22 Byakugan249: good thing i have it :P
07:23 grumd: lol
07:23 grumd: ok-ok, done
07:23 grumd: i'm specting you
07:30 grumd: \o/
07:30 Byakugan249: omg you have to be damn patient to play this D:
07:30 grumd: haha
07:31 grumd: i thought i had SS here once :D
07:31 Byakugan249: it wouldn't be a surprise if someone got a SS on this :P
07:31 grumd: even with DTHD
07:31 grumd: scoreboard will be full of that
07:31 Byakugan249: yup exactly
07:32 grumd: did you have any thoughts about the map while playing?
07:32 grumd: maybe suggestions? :o
07:35 Byakugan249: 03:03:157 (4) - mm~ the flow here made me feel uneasy and it feels awkward to follow IMO. maybe you can flip this to keep the flow steady?
07:36 grumd: yeah i'll redo this
07:37 grumd: done :D
07:39 Byakugan249: 04:09:157 - are you thinking of adding something here? because i feel that a wiggled slider should be here for that sound in the BGM D:
07:39 grumd: added a repeat to previous slider
07:39 grumd: kinda fits :s
07:40 Byakugan249: yea that's better
07:40 grumd: that part is a shitpart anyway
07:40 Byakugan249: oh? alright then :3
07:40 grumd: i mean that it's quite hard to map that part before spinner
07:40 grumd: so i just did something average there
07:41 Byakugan249: yea i can understand
07:41 grumd: actually, this whole song is hard to map xD
07:41 Byakugan249: really? how so o.0?
07:41 grumd:  well, it's almost ambient
07:42 grumd: and it was quite hard to find fitting rhythms sometimes
07:42 Byakugan249: ahh yea i can see that
07:42 Byakugan249: when i played it, it feels as if you had a bit of trouble what to put D:
07:43 Byakugan249: *on
07:43 grumd: i hope it turned out well anyway ;w;
07:45 Byakugan249: 04:59:157 (2,3) - i'm thinking of (3) being stacked on 04:58:157 (7) -. i feel that the transition would be smoother during gameplay. if you do this, then you have to adjust (2)
07:46 Byakugan249: http://puu.sh/1THpj
07:46 grumd: that doesn't make much sense imo
07:46 Byakugan249: oh? then we'll leave it :3
07:46 grumd: during gameplay you don't even remember about (7) when you press (3)
07:47 Byakugan249: true...i'm more of a neat freak when it comes to mapping so yea ><;
07:47 grumd: me too anyway ;3
07:48 grumd: 02:48:357 (6,1)- look at this stack, for example, hah
07:48 Byakugan249: ahh yes this one 
07:48 grumd: trying to make everything perfect
07:49 grumd: i could give you some kds btw
07:49 Byakugan249: that explains the non-grid mapping 
07:49 grumd: yeah
07:49 grumd: non-grid mapping ftw
07:49 Byakugan249: oh? hmm...if you insist, alright
07:49 grumd: yeah i need some SP i think xD
07:50 Byakugan249: "+16"
07:50 Byakugan249: maybe~ ;)
07:51 grumd: go post your log ;w;
07:52 Byakugan249: i'm at the 5min mark o.o
07:52 grumd: wut
07:52 Byakugan249: i mean i'm at 5mins
07:52 Byakugan249: now i'm at 6
07:53 grumd: i dont see any post o_0
07:53 grumd: maybe link?
07:53 Byakugan249: no i mean the IRC mod
07:53 Byakugan249: when i finish the whole song, i'll post it
07:53 grumd: LOL
07:53 grumd: i understand now xD
07:54 grumd: i thought you're already finished
07:54 grumd: hah, sorry
07:54 Byakugan249: dw about it :3
07:54 Byakugan249: not the 1st time this has happened to me :P
07:54 grumd: silly me ^^'
07:54 Byakugan249: ok that's it ^_^