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Horie Yui - Vanilla Salt (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Darksonic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 31 de enero de 2013 at 20:08:16

Artist: Horie Yui
Title: Vanilla Salt (TV Size)
Source: Toradora!
Tags: ending sekai-nyan
BPM: 140
Filesize: 14763kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,53 stars, 89 notes)
  2. Insane (4,96 stars, 221 notes)
  3. Sekai's Hard (4,75 stars, 207 notes)
  4. Sekai's Normal (4,34 stars, 147 notes)
Download: Horie Yui - Vanilla Salt (TV Size)
Download: Horie Yui - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (no video)
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Toradora <3

I didn't want to map something that is already mapped but couldn't resist at this song, is just great.

and by Sekai-nyan
Lion8980
1st?
Suimya
:3
Suimya
ok =w= my hard is done~

http://puu.sh/1CLNV
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Nice diff, I'll add it soon.

Edit: Moved to pending ^^
yanlu
Hi~ Mod Request via my Mod Queue~

[overall]

fine :)
(Sekai is too moe~~)
[Insane]

00:19:244 (1)- this spin so short maybe...
00:51:922 (2)- this sooo hide with Hidden mod!
00:55:565 (1,2,3,4,5)- make them more like a star :D (ctrl+shift+D)
00:57:279 (2)- very hide with 00:56:208 (4)-
00:58:779 (3)- maybe change to x256 y68?
make 01:01:994 (1)- stack with 01:00:065 (2)- head and 01:02:422 (2)- stack with 01:00:494 (3)- head
I prefer 01:02:851 (3)- not stack 01:03:494 (4)- 's head
01:13:565 (6,7)- this too
01:14:637 (2)- cuz there are same color...
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5)- make star too ;3
[Sekai's Hard]
00:15:493- here has vocal
00:20:851 (1)- this slider isn't Consistent with 00:22:136 (3,5)- maybe curve more
00:29:422 (7,1)- make them Parallel ><?
00:42:815 (4)- dele this note,excess
00:50:208 (1,1,1,1,1,1)- don't have to all nc here i think lol
00:53:636- add a note fix with 00:52:779 (1,2,3,4)- :3
00:59:851 (1,2,3,4)- empty...mabe1/2 here D;
00:59:851 (1,2,3,4)- empty...mabe1/4 here D; *
01:04:565 (5,1,2)- same as 00:29:422 (7,1)- xD
01:32:851 (4)- and 01:31:994 (2)- o.o..
[Sekai's Normal]
CS-1?
AR-1?

00:16:993 (1)- dele nc and nc 00:17:422 (2)-
00:22:136 (1,2)- ^
00:24:922 (1,2)- change nc~
00:27:279 (1,2)- ^
00:31:136 (4,1)- ^
00:32:851 (4,1)- ^
00:35:851 (1,2)- ^
00:40:994 (1,2)- ^
00:43:565 (1,4)- ^
00:45:494 (1)- dele nc ...etc
[Easy]
00:39:708 (3,4)- make(4) parallel (3)
01:01:351 (1)- dele nc
01:00:279 (4)- nc here?
01:39:494 (1)- chage to a slider from 01:39:279- to 01:39:494-
that's all~ good map!!

good luck =w=/
Topic Starter
Darksonic

yanlu wrote:

[Insane]

00:19:244 (1)- this spin so short maybe... It's an Insane diff, so it's not a problem at all.
00:51:922 (2)- this sooo hide with Hidden mod! And what o.o
00:55:565 (1,2,3,4,5)- make them more like a star :D (ctrl+shift+D) Actually seems pretty good for me.
00:57:279 (2)- very hide with 00:56:208 (4)- It's fine.
00:58:779 (3)- maybe change to x256 y68? Moved around there.
make 01:01:994 (1)- stack with 01:00:065 (2)- head and 01:02:422 (2)- stack with 01:00:494 (3)- head That would ruin the pattern in some way.
I prefer 01:02:851 (3)- not stack 01:03:494 (4)- 's head Why not? It's following spacing consistency, so it's ok.
01:13:565 (6,7)- this too Why o.o
01:14:637 (2)- cuz there are same color... o.o?
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5)- make star too ;3 It is a star already xD.
[Easy]
00:39:708 (3,4)- make(4) parallel (3) Fixed.
01:01:351 (1)- dele nc Music stopped here, so I think NC fits nice.
01:00:279 (4)- nc here? Nah.
01:39:494 (1)- chage to a slider from 01:39:279- to 01:39:494- Ok.
Thanks for modding :3
meiikyuu

hi thanks for posting in my queue. this song sounds like a good map (: !
feel free to follow whatever you want ~


Easy
  1. 00:13:993 (1) - consider adding a finish at the beginning
  2. 00:41:851 (1) - (a little nazi) don't make it touch the edge of 00:40:994 (4) - ?
  3. 00:46:136 (2) - move middle point to x:180 y:68
  4. 01:02:851 (2) - add whistle at the beginning (to match 01:06:279 (2) - )
  5. 01:09:708 (2) - if you followed above suggestion, add whistle to the beginning here too
Sekai's Normal
  1. 00:16:993 (1) - move to x:180 y:184 so that the previous note curves around it more neatly
  2. 00:41:851 (3) - make more symmetrical so that it will curve perfectly over 4:
    SPOILER

    308,76,41851,2,0,P|256:56|188:80,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  3. 01:11:208 (3) - instead of one slider, try single note..followed by a 1/1 slider
  4. 01:16:351 (4) - same with here. (I also like the pattern here 01:19:994 (2,3) - and if you don't like what I suggested, you could follow this part instead)
  5. 01:28:136 (2) - move to x:404 y:208
  6. 01:37:994 (1) - why not make a vertical flip from 01:36:279 (3) - instead?

    I have a lot more to say about the combos, so here's a separate section of combo modding. It's all up to you really, but this is what I feel is most appropriate & consistent with the tune:
    SPOILER
    00:16:993 (1) - remove NC
    00:17:422 (2) - NC
    00:19:136 (1) - remove NC
    00:19:994 (1) - NC
    00:20:851 (3) - NC
    00:22:136 (1) - remove NC
    00:24:279 (5) - NC
    00:24:922 (2) - remove NC
    00:29:422 (1) - remove NC
    00:31:136 (4) - NC
    00:31:779 (1) - remove NC
    00:34:994 (3) - NC
    00:35:851 (1) - remove NC
    00:40:994 (1) - remove NC
    00:41:422 (6) - NC
    00:43:565 (1) - remove NC
    00:44:851 (7) - NC
    00:45:494 (1) - remove NC
    00:47:851 (1) - remove NC
    00:48:708 (2) - NC
    01:01:994 (2) - NC?
    01:08:208 (1) - remove NC
    01:09:279 (1) - NC
    01:10:136 (1) - remove NC
    01:12:279 (6) - NC
    01:12:708 (1) - remove NC
    01:13:994 (4) - NC
    01:14:422 (1) - remove NC
    01:15:708 (6) - NC
    01:17:422 (1) - remove NC
    01:22:136 (1) - remove NC
    01:22:565 (2) - NC
    01:24:279 (1) - remove NC
    01:25:136 (1) - NC
    01:26:851 (1) - remove NC
    01:31:565 (1) - remove NC
    01:32:851 (3) - NC
    01:34:565 (1) - remove NC
    01:36:279 (1) - NC
    01:37:994 (1) - remove NC
    01:39:279 (5) - NC

    i'm really sorry if you had a certain combo pattern going alreadydon't kill me (/o\)
Sekai's Hard
  1. 00:32:208 (5,6) - one grid down for perfect blanket
  2. 00:50:208 (1,1,1) - make these a better, equal triangle shape
  3. 01:06:922 (1,2) - move both one grid to the left, it will correct spacing
Insane
  1. 00:13:993 (1) - finish at beginning?
  2. 00:15:493 (1) - you should just add a whistle here too
  3. 00:26:851 (1) - add a whistle at the end..i hear a little something in the background but i can't explain lol
  4. 00:55:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - make neater star . and somehow, consider getting 00:56:208 (4) - to stack on 00:57:279 (2) - . it will look rly nice (:
    If you're too lazy to try it out , you can use the random star I made:
    SPOILER

    200,324,55565,5,8,0:0:0
    142,196,55779,1,0,0:0:0
    112,336,55993,1,0,0:0:0
    220,244,56208,1,8,3:0:0
    76,256,56422,1,8,3:0:0
  5. 01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could probably make a more equal star here too, like that above star. but i guess it doesn't matter haha
hope this helped a bit, it's a nice map. keep it up sekai ^^ \ ~ and darksonic xD
best of luck in ranking
Topic Starter
Darksonic

meiikyuu wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:13:993 (1) - consider adding a finish at the beginning Sure.
  2. 00:41:851 (1) - (a little nazi) don't make it touch the edge of 00:40:994 (4) - ? Moved it a bit.
  3. 00:46:136 (2) - move middle point to x:180 y:68 Ok.
  4. 01:02:851 (2) - add whistle at the beginning (to match 01:06:279 (2) - ) No because that whistle on 1:06 it's following the piano sound, and there is no piano sound here.
  5. 01:09:708 (2) - if you followed above suggestion, add whistle to the beginning here too ^
Insane
  1. 00:13:993 (1) - finish at beginning? Sure.
  2. 00:15:493 (1) - you should just add a whistle here too Same here, I'm following piano sound with whistles.
  3. 00:26:851 (1) - add a whistle at the end..i hear a little something in the background but i can't explain lol Yeah I can hear it xD, added.
  4. 00:55:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - make neater star . and somehow, consider getting 00:56:208 (4) - to stack on 00:57:279 (2) - . it will look rly nice (: Seems great indeed, I will use yours, thanks ^^
    If you're too lazy to try it out , you can use the random star I made:
    SPOILER

    200,324,55565,5,8,0:0:0
    142,196,55779,1,0,0:0:0
    112,336,55993,1,0,0:0:0
    220,244,56208,1,8,3:0:0
    76,256,56422,1,8,3:0:0
  5. 01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could probably make a more equal star here too, like that above star. but i guess it doesn't matter haha Improved it.
Thank you for your useful mod :3
Weez
ahhhh toradora!!!! most mod! :3
Suimya
ok Fixed my diffs :3

Normal: http://puu.sh/1IABe

Hard: http://puu.sh/1IAL1

Thank you guys for your mods ~
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Updated.
MoodyRPG
Limpiando request ~

General
  1. Solo tus dificultades tienen video, deberias añadirle tambien el video a las dificultades de Sekai
Easy
  • -- Muy bien hecho
Sekai's Normal
  • - 00:22:136 (1) - Why the new combo here? Remove it to keep your combo pattern
    - 00:24:922 (1) - Same ^
Sekai's Hard
  • - 00:18:494 (1) - Why you don't start this spinner here 00:19:136 and finish here 00:20:422 if you follow the instrument
    - 01:07:994 (4) - I really prefer to see this slider like this, also I like these type of patterns
    - 01:10:351 (4,5) - Spacing here? The note (5) looks a little far from (4)
    - 01:36:279 (3) - A new combo here feels really good
Insane
  • - 01:30:279 (3) - nazi* Podrias mover un poco este slider para que no haga un overlap con el slider (1)
Y eso seria todo Bruno, has mejorado bastante en esto del mapeo y espero que sigas haciendo buenos maps

Buena suerte :)
Topic Starter
Darksonic

MoodyRPG wrote:

General
  1. Solo tus dificultades tienen video, deberias añadirle tambien el video a las dificultades de Sekai Uy, ni idea como se me paso esto, hecho.
Easy
  • -- Muy bien hecho
Insane
  • - 01:30:279 (3) - nazi* Podrias mover un poco este slider para que no haga un overlap con el slider (1) Si te fijas bien no llegan a tocarse, lo que se toca es el circulo que se va cerrando y después queda ahí antes que el slider desaparezca :p
Gracias Moody ql :3
Sonnyc
Vanilla Salt!!!!!!~~~~ a song what I heard in osu :3

Easy:

00:52:779 (2) - Try this for more blanket?
SPOILER
296,252,52779,2,0,P|256:277|216:252,1,100,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:09:708 (2) - Add Whistle at the start?
01:16:565 (2) - ^?
01:25:136 (4) - Delete Whistle like 01:23:422 (2) feels better here

Sekai's Normal:

00:29:422 (4) - Whistle instead Finish sounds better
00:55:565 (2) - NC should start here, instead 00:55:136 (1)
01:16:565 (3) - Whistle at the start?

Sekai's Hard:

00:48:601 (2) - Deleting feels better to play imo
01:01:351 (5) - NC for difficulty consistency
01:09:922 (4) - 1 Grid up to make slider's distance similar
01:13:136 (4) - Blanketing the end of (3) will be better here(copy paste (3) :p) http://puu.sh/1KK6s
01:38:851 (3) - 1 Grid left for slider distance

Insane:

00:25:994 (6) - Can't you make more flatter?
00:37:350 (3,5) - Delete Whistle, since all is too loud
00:40:565 (3,4) - Do something similar with above
00:47:636 (1) - I don't think this note is the one to be emphasized with Finish
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be better if you made a perfect pentagon

~
Topic Starter
Darksonic

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy:

00:52:779 (2) - Try this for more blanket? Sure.
SPOILER
296,252,52779,2,0,P|256:277|216:252,1,100,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:09:708 (2) - Add Whistle at the start? No, I'm following Piano sound with Whistles.
01:16:565 (2) - ^? ^
01:25:136 (4) - Delete Whistle like 01:23:422 (2) feels better here ^

Insane:

00:25:994 (6) - Can't you make more flatter? Why? o.o, it's ok like this.
00:37:350 (3,5) - Delete Whistle, since all is too loud I like how it sounds since I'm following voice here.
00:40:565 (3,4) - Do something similar with above ^
00:47:636 (1) - I don't think this note is the one to be emphasized with Finish Music sounds like a cymbal here, so it fits.
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be better if you made a perfect pentagon I have no idea how to do it even better, but I think this is not a problem after all xD.
Thanks ^^
Suimya
:3

Normal: http://puu.sh/1L1UW

Hard: http://puu.sh/1L1VL

Thanks For modding ></
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Updated.
[Yue]
ToraDoraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!! *--------------*
Exelente mapa Bruno! te dejo una estrella >w<
Topic Starter
Darksonic

[Yue] wrote:

ToraDoraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!! *--------------*
Exelente mapa Bruno! te dejo una estrella >w<
Gracias :3
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