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Tamiyasu Tomoe, Aoba Ringo - Crayon Tulip

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Topic Starter
h3k1ru
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, July 11, 2013 at 10:30:35 PM

Artist: Tamiyasu Tomoe, Aoba Ringo
Title: Crayon Tulip
Source: Crayon Tulip ~Chidori to Koruri no Yuuwaku Jugyou~
Tags: hentai ecchi alacat cryo[iceeicee] lolicon eroge visual novel game opening
BPM: 111
Filesize: 3713kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. alacat's Normal (3.96 stars, 149 notes)
  2. cRyo's Easy (2.01 stars, 95 notes)
  3. Hard (4.77 stars, 265 notes)
Download: Tamiyasu Tomoe, Aoba Ringo - Crayon Tulip
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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onii-chan~
senaya
I feel guilty knowing that others may have learned abut my interests..
cRyo[iceeicee]
h3k1 knows how to make senaya happy =3=
alacat
White face :)
senaya
to those who are aware: you surely know tha tbecause of what happened today even this won't make me happy for obvious reasons so i ask to remove my name from the description. thank you in advance.
Topic Starter
h3k1ru
okay
senaya
ty.
cirno-_old
This is just real good already. Great video too ^_^ Sorry I couldn't find much. I'm not going to nazi it any further. I gave it my best ;_;

Easy
00:41:088 (1,2) - Give it a little bigger gap

Normal
00:54:061 (1) - Finish on start

Hard
01:32:169 (5) - Instead of snapping it to the previous slider end, consider making it straight down from (1)
01:35:412 (1,2) - Claps maybe?
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

cirno- wrote:

Hard
01:32:169 (5) - Instead of snapping it to the previous slider end, consider making it straight down from (1) yup, remapped a bit, made it looks more simmetry
01:35:412 (1,2) - Claps maybe? sure, sounds good
thx for mod cirno-
Pipse Cola
Mod Request

GENERAL:
Think about resizing your BG, recommended size is 1024x768

Easy
Well done Diff :) Only a few suggestions:

00:39:466 (4,5) - I'd suggest a Slider from 00:39:466 - to 00:40:007 - and make it reversal.
01:03:790 (2) - Doesn't really fit imo, better would be a Slider from 01:03:790 - to 01:04:331 - and make it reversal plus: Add a note here: 01:05:412 - or a Slider from 01:05:142 - to 01:05:412 -
01:21:088 (2) - A Slider from 01:21:088 - to 01:21:628 - and make it reversal plus: Add a Slider from 01:22:439 - to 01:22:709 - or a Button at 01:22:709 -

Normal
Got some problems with the positioning.

00:19:466 (1,2) - Try to put this more inside the room.
00:29:736 (4) - ^
00:34:061 (4) - ^
00:41:628 (1) - I'd make a Slider from 00:41:628 - to 00:41:898 - and a Slider from 00:42:169 - to 00:42:709 - seems more playable to me.
00:45:412 (1,2) - Maybe make a Slider out of these Notes, or a Slider from 00:45:412 - to 00:45:682 - and make it reversal
00:54:871 (2) - Try to put this more inside the room.
00:58:925 (2) - ^
01:06:493 (4) - ^
01:31:898 (2,3) - Replace them with a Slider from 01:31:898 - to 01:32:169 - and make it reversal (twice?), fits better imo.

Hard

00:43:250 (1,2) - Maybe bring a Distance in?
00:57:979 - Insert a note here, would fit perfectly to 00:55:142 (3,4) -
01:36:763 (4) - I suggest a Slider from 01:36:763 - to 01:36:898 - with finish sound of course and a Green Line at 01:36:898 - with audio change to 10%-15%

You did very nice work on this map and it seems lika a typical ranked to me :) Have fun mapping!
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

GENERAL:
Think about resizing your BG, recommended size is 1024x768 but 800x600 works too, thats why i keep original size

Hard

00:43:250 (1,2) - Maybe bring a Distance in? i think this pattern suits for vocal purpose
00:57:979 - Insert a note here, would fit perfectly to 00:55:142 (3,4) - not really, there vocal starts and triples ends
01:36:763 (4) - I suggest a Slider from 01:36:763 - to 01:36:898 - with finish sound of course and a Green Line at 01:36:898 - with audio change to 10%-15% good idea, somehow i missed a sound in music there, remapped a bit
thx for the mod InC0nceNtrateD
HelloSCV
From my queue

General

  1. how about using normal-slideslide? seems better imo

cRyo's Easy

nothing orz

alacat's Normal

00:41:088 (5) - NC , 00:41:628 (1) - delete NC?
00:48:655 (3) - clap on slider repeat?
00:46:493 (4) - delete clap and add whistle on end?

Hard

00:26:493 (2,3,4) - add NC on these sliders?
00:27:574 (4) - clap on start
01:15:682 (5) - add NC:1 finish like 01:07:034 (6) - here?
01:16:763 (5,6) - 2 1/2 sldier isn't better?
01:17:844 (1) - delete NC and 01:18:115 (2) - add NC ( like you did in other parts )

i like this video hehe

can't focus on mod because of video haha, good luck!
DingGGu
Hello, I'm DingGGu From Modding Queue!

LOL, Kawaii Song! <3

[cRyo's Easy]
not specific!
Good Map!

[alacat's Normal]
not specific!
Good Map!

[Hard]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green)
  2. 00:55:175 - snap to 00:55:142
  3. 00:55:378 - snap to 00:55:412
  4. 00:55:716 - snap to 00:55:682
  5. 00:55:919 - snap to 00:55:952
  6. 01:36:797 - snap to 01:36:763

  7. 00:18:385 (3) - Use like this:
  8. 00:47:574 (1) - hmm. i think, this is ugly sliders. you not have to use "S" or, change like this: 01:06:493 (5) - [suggestion]
    00:52:439 (4) - ^

My Modding Skill is not good sorry :o
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

HelloSCV wrote:

General

  1. how about using normal-slideslide? seems better imo yeah, i will use it

Hard

00:26:493 (2,3,4) - add NC on these sliders? since it have sv changes i think its good idea
00:27:574 (4) - clap on start okay, reduced volume by 5% tho, somehow i wanted this slider sound more clean
01:15:682 (5) - add NC:1 finish like 01:07:034 (6) - here? yup
01:16:763 (5,6) - 2 1/2 sldier isn't better? yeah
01:17:844 (1) - delete NC and 01:18:115 (2) - add NC ( like you did in other parts ) fixed

i like this video hehe

can't focus on mod because of video haha, good luck! thats the point, and thx~
im impressed, really pro mod, thx a lot HelloSCV

DingGGu wrote:

Hello, I'm DingGGu From Modding Queue! hi

[Hard]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green) this sections actually snapped to 1/16, but since i use silent normal-sliderslide from previous mod, i will delete it because they become useless
  2. 00:55:175 - snap to 00:55:142 ^
  3. 00:55:378 - snap to 00:55:412 ^
  4. 00:55:716 - snap to 00:55:682 ^
  5. 00:55:919 - snap to 00:55:952 ^
  6. 01:36:797 - snap to 01:36:763 ^

  7. 00:18:385 (3) - Use like this:
  8. 00:47:574 (1) - hmm. i think, this is ugly sliders. you not have to use "S" or, change like this: 01:06:493 (5) - [suggestion]
    00:52:439 (4) - ^

    no changes at sliders curve tho

My Modding Skill is not good sorry :o
thx for mod DingGGu
alacat
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

alacat wrote:

:3 http://puu.sh/3eR7F
thx, updated~
Momochikun
Sorry i can't find much.. it's just simply good :?

[cRyo's Easy]
00:55:142 (2) - Swap whistle and Clap
00:19:466 - Like this ? 00:21:628 (3) - Remove whistles feel better for me

[Alacat's Normal]
Delete this 00:07:844 (5) and add a clapped note here 00:08:115 ?
00:15:412 Move the green line here 00:15:682
00:45:412 (1) - Finish ?
01:04:331 (4) Use Copy paste from the previous slide '-'

[Hard]
00:32:979 (2) - Ctrl < ?
00:38:655 (6) - Stack this with 00:38:115 (4) ?

Good Luck for ranked :D
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

Momochikun wrote:

[Hard]
00:32:979 (2) - Ctrl < ? remapped this part
00:38:655 (6) - Stack this with 00:38:115 (4) ? eh.. i dont think i want to see it stacked
thx for mod Momochikun
Aurele
Hello there h3k1ru !
Aleks719 requested a mod from my modding queue for this map, you must thanks him :3

After hearing the song: OMGOMGOMGOMG, OVERDOSE OF CUTENESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! >/////< *nosebleeds.*

Easy
  1. 00:43:790 (2) - I am a bit worried about the spacing of the previous and the next object. Compared to your previous objects, they are all spaced consistently by around 0,89x to 0,91x but, for those, the previous circle has a spacing of 0,87x and the next one has a spacing of 0,91x. Indeed, that's not something big but, it should be fixed anyways!
  2. 00:45:412 (1) - Just one of my own opinions: I like those sliders when the red dot is stacked with one of the slider ticks, it's more significant than placing it before or after the slider tick. You could try to make it, but it's your choice! (You could also do it for this slider 00:47:574 (1) - and this one too 01:15:682 (1) - )
You have done a really nice job here, cRyo!

Normal
  1. 01:13:520 (1) - The spacing, it's a bit obvious that it isn't consistent. You should consider making it consistent to don't break the consistency with your previous objects!
Was not able to find anything wrong here.. Nice job alacat!

Hard
Consider adding at least one spinner to make some variety on the higher scores. That's not cool having a leaderscore with all the same score. At least, a spinner will add some more bonus.
  1. 00:33:520 - I am not sure if the clap belongs here.. All I know is, it sounds terribly wrong because the previous slider's beginning has a clap too and having two claps in a row, it's obviously wrong. Something to point out too, you are mostly adding claps to upbeats only, not downbeats. The circle (3) is located on a downbeat, which is not consistent with your previous hitsounds consistency! Another thing, 00:34:061 (5) - this circle, which has no hitsounds, is also an upbeat. It sounds very empty without any hitsounds. I sincerely think you have misplaced the clap from those circles. So first, delete the clap on the circle (3) and add it to the circle (5).
That cute map totally deserve a kawaii bubble.
Topic Starter
h3k1ru

Gabe wrote:

Hello there h3k1ru ! hi :>

Hard
Consider adding at least one spinner to make some variety on the higher scores. That's not cool having a leaderscore with all the same score. At least, a spinner will add some more bonus. i really have no idea where to put spinner at this map, i dont want to force it just because of "score"
  1. 00:33:520 - I am not sure if the clap belongs here.. All I know is, it sounds terribly wrong because the previous slider's beginning has a clap too and having two claps in a row, it's obviously wrong. Something to point out too, you are mostly adding claps to upbeats only, not downbeats. The circle (3) is located on a downbeat, which is not consistent with your previous hitsounds consistency! Another thing, 00:34:061 (5) - this circle, which has no hitsounds, is also an upbeat. It sounds very empty without any hitsounds. I sincerely think you have misplaced the clap from those circles. So first, delete the clap on the circle (3) and add it to the circle (5). haha ur right, probably just missclick or something, fixed
That cute map totally deserve a kawaii bubble. i hope so!
thanks for mod Gabe
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