1. Hard (4.25 stars, 160 notes)
2. Normal (1.64 stars, 77 notes)

azu-nyan14 wrote:

I think for tags you can put "Lia Aoi Tada karuta Misuzu Togashi" since they are part of group of Veil.

I was thinking map this someday but you already making it so, call me for a mod when you finish this map.

288,308,23228,6,0,P|224:296|148:336,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Xinely wrote:

hi kirito
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[Normal]
00:10:760 (5) - remove this note and make spin start from 00:10:760 - until 00:13:487 - Done~
00:23:228 (1) - how about this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/521889 ? here is code Done~

288,308,23228,6,0,P|224:296|148:336,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:37:254 (4,5,6) - just suggest, maybe make like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/521893 ? np

[Hard]
00:06:669 (2) - remove np
00:24:397 (2,3) - spacing Done~
00:25:371 (4) - crtl+H and then ctrl+G, and then x:416 y: 344 np
00:26:345 (1) - x:332 y:188 np
00:57:513 (1) - spacing. or maybe stack it? np
01:13:098 (1,2) - stack more better imo np
01:17:773 (6,7) - ^ np
01:20:111 (2) - spacing Done~

Fortune Arterial
Good Luck (:

• -OD -1...? 쉬운 노말인데 OD 1정도 낮춰도 될듯 싶어요.
  
  -00:10:760 (1) - 다른 스핀들처럼 소리를 점점 줄여보세요.
  
  -00:35:695 (1) - 소리 -10~15 정도?
  
  -01:02:968 (3) - NC
  
  -01:05:695 (6) - NC
  
  -01:06:864 (1) - NC 제거
  
  -01:08:422 (2) - NC
  
  -01:24:786 (3) - 휘슬 추가
  
  -01:26:734 (2) - 슬라이더를 약간 더 펴주면 어떨까요?
  
  간단한 예시

  
  그리고 슬라이더 끝부분 휘슬 제거.

• [Hard]
  
  -00:10:955 (1) - 노말에서 지적했던것처럼 점점 소리 작아지게 해주세요.
  
  -00:33:942 - 사운드 35 -> 25로 줄여주세요
  
  -00:35:695 (1) - 노말에서 처럼 소리 -10~15
  
  -01:06:864 (1) - NC 제거
  
  -01:07:643 (2) - NC
  
  -01:13:098 (1,2) - 위 처럼 NC 설정해주세요.
  
  -01:18:163 (7) - NC
  
  -01:19:332 (1) - NC 제거
  
  -01:20:500 (3,4) - 둘중 하나에 NC. 취향것(?) 해주세요.
  
  -01:27:903 (3) - 휘슬 제거

LQA20Ans wrote:

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noob mod ;_;

[Normal]

• -OD -1...? 쉬운 노말인데 OD 1정도 낮춰도 될듯 싶어요. Done~
  
  -00:10:760 (1) - 다른 스핀들처럼 소리를 점점 줄여보세요. Done~
  
  -00:35:695 (1) - 소리 -10~15 정도? 너무 작아요.
  
  -01:02:968 (3) - NC Done~
  
  -01:05:695 (6) - NC Done~
  
  -01:06:864 (1) - NC 제거 Done~
  
  -01:08:422 (2) - NC Done~
  
  -01:24:786 (3) - 휘슬 추가 Done~
  
  -01:26:734 (2) - 슬라이더를 약간 더 펴주면 어떨까요? Done~
  
  간단한 예시

  
  그리고 슬라이더 끝부분 휘슬 제거.

• [Hard]
  
  -00:10:955 (1) - 노말에서 지적했던것처럼 점점 소리 작아지게 해주세요.
  
  -00:33:942 - 사운드 35 -> 25로 줄여주세요
  
  -00:35:695 (1) - 노말에서 처럼 소리 -10~15 Normal and the same.
  
  -01:06:864 (1) - NC 제거 Done~
  
  -01:07:643 (2) - NC Done~
  
  -01:13:098 (1,2) - 위 처럼 NC 설정해주세요.
  
  -01:18:163 (7) - NC Done~
  
  -01:19:332 (1) - NC 제거 np~
  
  -01:20:500 (3,4) - 둘중 하나에 NC. 취향것(?) 해주세요. np~
  
  -01:27:903 (3) - 휘슬 제거 Done~

역시 굇맵퍼시네요 ㅍㅍ. 꼭 랭크 시키세요(?) 화이팅!

HellDawn wrote:

Normal

00:29:461- Unnecesarry new combo here so RNC Done~
00:07:254- Delete this note because didnt follow the music Done~
01:05:695- New combo Done~
01:19:332- Finish gonna fit

Hard

00:05:695- CTRL + H Because I couldnt see 3. combo or change pattern to combos Done~
00:41:150- Why normal clap ? slip
01:17:773- finish Done~

HelloSCV wrote:

From request

SPOILER

Normal
00:10:760 (1) - 슬라이더 길이 00:13:877 - 여기 까지 늘리는게 어떨까요? 스피너 아닌가요 ㅋㅋ?Done
01:23:617 (2) - 슬라앞에 휘슬 Done
01:25:565 (1) - ^ Done

Hard
HP,OD -1? HP 만 다운
휘슬 힛사 넣으실때 1박을 4개로 쪼개면 1,3번에는 휘슬넣고 2,4번에는 클랩넣으셧는데
이패턴을 쭉지켜주시면 듣기 좋을거 같아요

00:58:293 (3) - 볼륨좀 낮춰서 피니시 일단 수정
00:59:072 (7) - 그냥 피니시 ^
01:10:760 (5) - 휘슬삭제 클랩추가 Done

노래가 잔잔하고 좋네요 랭크 기대할꼐요!

CDFA wrote:

Just getting back into the modding game, sorry if some of my suggestions are faulty or this mod isn't of the highest quality.

ANYWAYS.

Overall:
The mp3 needs to fade out. You can go into Audacity or another sound editing software and add a little fade. Right now the mp3 ends abruptly, which is not good.
Combo Color 4 and 5 are really similar, making things really confusing. Try changing them (or at least change the order of them) so they're not so confusing.
Sometimes the blue combocolor gets hidden when the video gets really dark (especially in the end of the map.)
okay, mp3 file was changed.

Hard:
00:09:981 (3) - Add whistle or soft finish (soft as in lowering the volume of the note). whistle add
00:10:955 (1) - End this on the previous white tick. It just sounds awkward where its ends atm white lines on the alignment
00:15:046 (1,2,3) - Personally, I'd just remove these and have the section as a little break. np
00:17:772 (2) - Add whistle Done
00:19:137 (6) - Add whistle on beginning of slider Done
00:25:371 (4) - ^ ^
00:26:345 (1) - Add whistle on end of slider Done
00:27:903 (1,2,3) - Remove NC and just make this a slider? At this slow tempo, a lot of people will end up fumbling on this. changed with a slider.
00:31:409 - For this section up to 00:35:695 (1), I don't like the little piano notes that are in there, mostly because it's not based on any given rhythm. However, a break feels weird here too. Maybe put a spinner? I'm not sure, but the piano things are just weird atm. np
00:54:397 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Done
01:06:864 (4) - This looks confusing. Maybe make the pattern into a square shape? (Or alternatively, something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/529453 ) Done
01:13:098 (1) - ^ ^
01:18:163 (7) - This just feels awkward because it's so close and there's no NC or anything Done

Normal:
00:06:864 (2) - Add whistle Done
00:32:578 (1,1) - Same suggestion as hard np

Pretty ok map. Yay.

• 
  00:07:643 (3) The endpoint is kind of off the grid at the top. Not sure if it'll make too much of a difference, but you can make it going downwards instead.
  00:40:371 (1,2) It might be better if 1 was a slider and the endpoint of 2 was a circle. It just feels odd that 1 is a circle and to me it would make more sense as a slider.
  00:44:656 I'm not sure it why there isn't a circle here. It would improve the flow of the rhythm and there already is a lot of objects that are spaced a 1/2 beat from each other so it shouldn't make it harder.
  00:47:773 ^
  01:22:448 (1,2,3) Hmm... Nothing wrong with it, but you may just want to replicate that long 2 beat slider a while back here to have symmetrical rhythms.
  01:28:682 If the music didn't fade out so quickly I would have suggested a spinner here. Was the mp3 already like that?

• 
  Why is the AR rate 6? A Hard difficulty should have an approach rate of 7 or 8 but never 6.
  I think your 1/4 streams have a very close distance snap that looks kind of odd. To make things worse, it isn't even consistent in places like 00:21:669 (2,3)
  00:32:578 (1,1) I'm not quite sure why these are both new combos...
  00:57:124 (4,1) This isn't perfectly stacked together.
  00:59:455 (1,2,3,1) This is arranged in a weird way. You should make it look like a distinctive shape, such as a + sign. Also, the last 1 shouldn't be a new combo. The two following this should.
  01:20:111 (2) This doesn't look good when overlapping 3. You should probably move it to the right and up.

Akashi_S wrote:

Came back after running away for mod..

[Normal]

01:00:241 - Unnecessary inherited point All Fix

[Hard]

스냅되지 않은 노트가 꽤 있네요~
00:01:412
00:01:801
00:02:191
00:02:580
00:03:360
00:04:139
00:04:528
00:04:918
00:15:095
00:15:289
00:15:484
00:59:455
00:59:845
01:00:234
All Fix

00:25:371 (4) - 이 슬라이더를 00:25:955 까지 연장해보는건 어떨까용? 파란색 틱->흰색 틱의 전환이 좀 힘들기도 하고 보컬이 애매하네용..

원래는 하드 난이도에서는 안티점프를 쓰는게 좀 안 맞는 것 같지만 난이도가 2개이니 상관없다고 생각합니다. 하지만 간격을 되도록이면 모두 일정하게 해주시면 덜 혼동이 올 것 같네요.
00:50:890 (4,5,6) - 이곳은 0.32x인데 비해 00:43:877 (4,5,6) - 이곳은 0.41x이고 여러군데도 다 불규칙적입니다.

00:57:124 (4,1) - 일부러 스택하시지 않으신 거라면 상관없지만..

일단 간단한 모딩완료 'ㄴ' 나중에 더 모딩 필요하시면 PM 주세요 ㅋㅅㅋ

1. The BG is 746 KB... I think you can reduce the size a lot without dramatically decreasing the quality. I've made it five times smaller, and I'm sure enough I didn't see any noticeable decrease of quality.
2. I personally think using Normal sampleset on the kiai time is a good idea, but it's up to you.

1. 00:01:410 (1) - Why don't you add a whistle at the beginning of this slider? I personally think it fits with the song... (When I suggest stuff about hitsounds, assume that this is also the reason.)
2. 00:07:643 (3) - Add whistle at the beginning and the repeat?
3. 00:27:903 (1) - Whistle on the repeat to emphasize the vocal?
4. 00:52:448 (2) - ^
5. 00:59:851 (1) - Whistle?
6. 01:02:189 - ^
7. 01:05:306 - ^
8. 01:22:448 (1) - ^ (Repeat.)
9. 01:28:682 - Instead of a circle, make a spinner that goes to 01:30:241?

1. 00:02:189 (3,4) - Move (4)'s whistle to (3)?
2. 00:05:695 (1) - Add whistle at the beginning?
3. 00:07:448 - Considering this song is REALLY slow, I think making a 1/4 stream by adding a circle here is fine, although then you'll have to tweak 00:07:643 (1,2,3) to keep the spacing... But rotating them clockwise by 60 degrees should do.
4. 00:22:254 (3) - Whistle at the beginning to emphasize the vocal?
5. 00:27:903 (2) - Whistle on the repeat?
6. 00:32:870 - ^
7. 00:41:929 (1) - ^ (Beginning.)
8. 00:37:254 (5) - ^
9. 00:41:929 (1) - ^ (Beginning.)
10. 00:46:994 (2) - ^
11. 00:49:332 (2) - ^ (Beginning.)
12. 00:51:280 (6) - ^ (Beginning.) Also NC this?
13. 00:54:397 (1) - ^ (Beginning.)
14. 00:55:565 (2) - ^ (Beginning.)
15. 00:57:124 (4,1) - I think making an anti-jump here is... weird. Place (1) at 00:57:903 (2)'s place and (2) to (180,204)?
16. 00:58:293 (3) - Use whistle from Normal sampleset instead?
17. 00:59:072 (7) - ^
18. 01:01:799 (4,5) - Make this a 1/4 slider, remove (5), and make a slider from 01:02:188 to 01:02:578? This goes along with the song (vocal) really well, in my opinion. The current one feels weird, anyway... Oh, and add whistle on the beginning and the end of the new slider.
19. 01:06:085 (2) - Remove clap?
20. 01:06:474 (3) - Whistle?
21. 01:07:254 (5) - Add clap? (Yes, whistle and clap at once.)
22. 01:07:643 (1) - Replace clap with whistle?
23. 01:08:422 (5) - Add whistle AND clap at the beginning AND the end?
24. 01:09:202 (1) - Add whistle at the beginning?
25. 01:09:981 (1) - Add clap?
26. 01:10:176 (2) - Remove whistle?
27. 01:10:760 (5,6) - Same as 01:01:799 (4,5), except without the whistles on the new slider, just on the end.
28. 01:11:929 (1) - Remove whistle?
29. 01:14:461 (6) - Add whistle?
30. 01:14:656 (7) - Remove whistle at the beginning?
31. 01:16:215 (1) - Add whistle?
32. 01:16:604 (2,3,4) - Use Drum sampleset and add finishes here?
33. 01:17:578 (5) - Use Normal sampleset?
34. 01:17:773 (6) - Same as 01:16:215 (1,2,3,4).
35. 01:25:380 - Same as 00:07:448.
36. 01:28:682 (4) - Same as Normal.