Jayel wrote:

Hi, thanks for modding my map!! your welcome :3//

M4M here!! \:D/

[General]
Try to add hitsound from the beginning till 00:20:194 i tried it

[Easy]
The SV (Slider Velocity) of this difficulty is TOO high.
SV 0.8 ~ 1.0 is recommended for Easy diff. but in this map, SV in Easy 1.30
Use Beat Snap Divisor as 1/2. okay

00:20:674 (1) - Remove NC (New Combo). okay
00:36:514 (6) - NC. ^
00:46:114 (1) - This spinner looks so embarrassing for me. '^';; w-whyyy? ;A;
01:06:754 (1,2,3) - This pattern might be hard for Easy. so, i changed it
01:26:434 - Why don't you add some notes from here? no, i just follow the vocal. sorry :'D
01:45:154 (3) - You are not actually supposed to put slider like this. Use Beat Snap Divisor as 1/2. fix
01:59:074 (1) - Lengthen or remove this "SUDDEN" spinner. (or is it just me who feels this spinner so sudden?) no, this sake for Kiai time ;w;
02:12:994 (2,3) - This pattern sounds a little odd. Try this one: http://puu.sh/1rqbM tried xD
02:22:594 (1) - Too short spinner. Removed
02:27:394 (1,2,3) - A little hard pattern for easy. i think so, changed
02:30:754 (1) - Remove 02:29:794 (4) and make the spinner start from here and end at 02:31:714.
02:54:994 (5) - This slider pattern is not recommended for easy. Changed
02:59:074 (5) - NC and... fix
03:00:034 (1,1) - Remove those NC's. ^
03:02:914 (1) - Too short spinner. Removed
03:25:474 (1) - Make this spinner end at 03:27:394. fix

Overall, this diff has a little overdose of spinners. Try to reduce the number of those spinners.

[Hard]
00:40:834 (1) - Clap. Forgot, orz. thanks o//
01:26:434 - Why don't you add some notes from here? same reason here.
02:29:794 (5) - This slider sounds weird; try to substitute this with other pattern. okay
02:30:514 (1) - Shorten this spinner so that this ends at 02:31:714. ^
03:25:234 (1) - Shorten this spinner so that this ends at 03:27:394. ^

Generally, you have mapped this song pretty well.
Just put some more efforts here and it'll be a great map.

Good luck!! thanks \:'D/

Banana wrote:

Hi Banana here from my mod queue thanks for coming to mod this maps :3//

General
you need to add the guest diff.'s creater's name to each diff., that is, you need to add Tsusuko into tag in Hard and Normal wait, i had done it D: and Tsusuko just make the normal one.

Hard
CS+1? normal use CS4 and it's strange to make hard a larger circle okay.
00:28:354 (7) - make this slider last to 00:28:834? a longer slider make it easier recognized here, should you changed it, NC the following note example changed
00:32:674 (1) - slider repeats twice plays bad to me .-., maybe repeat once and add a circle stacked instead? should you changed it, move the slider to keep the ds sorry no.
01:02:434 (9) - note pattern is not very nice here, how about make (9) left and the follwing (1) below? i mean this, try to avoid touching notes in a short time section this very helpful, thanks~
01:08:914 - start the spinner here? okay
01:42:754 (2) - curve to the other side, i mean left or below ^
02:29:794 (5) - keep the distance ^
02:30:274 - remove the repeat on the (5) and start the spinner here? ^
02:56:434 - add a circle here? ^
03:27:154 - spinner end at here sorry, no.

soku's Normal it'll fix soon by Tsusuko
00:39:634 - add a circle?
03:06:274 (3) - use a 1/1 slider at 03:06:034 instead to go with the vocal?
03:20:914 (3) - this circle seems not needed here, and 03:24:274 is a better place for it

Easy
00:22:594 (2) - curve to the other side okay, i tried it
00:56:194 (2) - use a 1/1 slider instead? these notes are hard in an easy ^
01:08:914 - start the spinner here ^
03:01:954 (4) - make it like this? ^
03:25:474 (1) - move this spinner 1/2 earlier ^

good luck thanks o///

inverness wrote:

From our queue \( ^_^)/

Red mods means must be fixed. Mods with question marks are only suggestion.

[General]

1. Try using muted normal-sliderslide, it'll fit the music .w. but, how to do it? :O tutor please?

[Easy]

1. 00:20:674 (5) - Move a little bit to the up for better flow done
2. 00:22:594 (2) - No, sliders with more than 1 reverses is not recommended especially on Easy and Normal. Change this into 2 sliders or whatever you want, but please no 2 reverses. okay
3. 00:28:834 - Add note here please ^
4. 00:29:314 (1) - Add clap ^
5. 00:30:754 (3) - ^ on end ^
6. 00:35:074 (4) - ^ ^
7. 00:36:994 (2) - ^ ^
8. 00:40:834 (1) - ^ on start ^
9. 00:46:114 (1) - Using spinner in the middle of the patterns is a totally no-no and looks uncreative. Remove this spinner and add some circles/sliders here instead yeah, i'm very poor at pattern ;w;
10. 00:48:034 (1) - No. fix
11. 00:51:394 (1) - Same here. ^
12. 00:55:714 (1,2,3) - >< this is Easy. Change these into a slider with one reverse. ^
13. 00:57:154 (4) - oh why D:
14. 01:03:394 (1) - whyyy ^
15. 01:06:754 (1) - Add clap on start? added
16. 01:07:714 (2) - Add clap? ^
17. 01:34:114 - Add note plz ^
18. 01:53:314 (1) - Change this into just one slider without any reverses okay :"
19. 01:56:434 (5) - NC o>
20. 02:08:674 (1) - why? fix
21. 02:18:514 (4) - . ^
22. 02:21:634 (3) - Why don't you just copy paste 02:19:714 (1) - and apply some flip or rotation on it? fix
23. 02:25:954 (3,4) - Combine into one slider with one reverse okay
24. 02:52:834 (2,3,4,5) - ......stream. Simplify please, this is Easy, remember okaaay ;w;
25. 03:02:914 (5) - Add clap on start added
26. 03:17:314 (8) - . ;__;
    
27. 03:19:714 (1,2) - .. ^
28. 03:23:074 (1,2,3) - oh another stream. whyy dunno, but i've fixed that.

Instead of that, your map is nice, actually. :3 nuoo, my maps not good enough. still needed mods thanks~

[Hard]

1. 00:13:474 - add note here please, feels awkward without it okay 'w'd
2. 00:26:914 (4,5,6,7) - Unstack please, confusing to read ^
3. 01:07:714 (3,4) - Unstack. ^

Well, this diff is nicer tho, good job thanks o//

Good luck blackabyss! thanks for your mods!

Banana wrote:

suko's Normal fix'd for you
00:39:634 - add a circle? Ok
03:06:274 (3) - use a 1/1 slider at 03:06:034 instead to go with the vocal? Nah.
03:20:914 (3) - this circle seems not needed here, and 03:24:274 is a better place for it Removed