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ZAQ - Kimi e (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Xinchii
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年9月4日 at 下午 03:33:38

Artist: ZAQ
Title: Kimi e (TV Size)
Source: Chuunibyou demo koi ga shitai
Tags: 121561995 cococanro Jerry
BPM: 93
Filesize: 12358kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.8 stars, 68 notes)
  2. Hard (4.78 stars, 175 notes)
  3. Insane (4.92 stars, 244 notes)
  4. Jerry's Muzu (4.02 stars, 175 notes)
  5. Jerry's Oni (4.8 stars, 286 notes)
  6. Normal (4.27 stars, 130 notes)
Download: ZAQ - Kimi e (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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121561995 and My first map~~
中二病でも恋がしたい！Lite OP - 君へ
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Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard by 121561995
Insane by cococanro
Taiko mode by Jerry
ready for mod
Last edited by Xinchii , edited 189 times in total.
Krenyez
79 posts
Joined May 2012
Krenyez

leon1341414 wrote:

My first map~~
First beatmap,, read this first :

http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Insane
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

General

the better background is 1024 x 768

KIAI time started at 00:49:795 and ended at 01:25:924

leon1341414's Easy

00:43:383 (2) - wrong placing
01:08:182 to 01:09:795 - spread it or replace it with the spinner
start the spinner at 01:23:343 and ended at 01:25:294 ( you may remove the red slider and circle )

your sliders are too straight,, give it more curves
and some of the circles are at the same place,, spread it

121561995's Hard

01:25:924 - the spinner end at here

umm,, you may to see the ranked hard diff
and,, give it more style ;)


that's all
thanks :)
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Xinchii

Luster_DNFWTF wrote:

leon1341414 wrote:

My first map~~
First beatmap,, read this first :

http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Insane
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

General

the better background is 1024 x 768

KIAI time started at 00:49:795 and ended at 01:25:924

leon1341414's Easy

00:43:383 (2) - wrong placing
01:08:182 to 01:09:795 - spread it or replace it with the spinner
start the spinner at 01:23:343 and ended at 01:25:294 ( you may remove the red slider and circle )

your sliders are too straight,, give it more curves
and some of the circles are at the same place,, spread it

121561995's Hard

01:25:924 - the spinner end at here

umm,, you may to see the ranked hard diff
and,, give it more style ;)


that's all
thanks :)

Thanks for your mod! Your suggestions were so helpful.
I will try to fixed those problems!
Last edited by Xinchii , edited 1 time in total.
kelvinli
160 posts
Joined April 2011
kelvinli
I am doing this as my first mod.
Unrankable
Highly recommended
Suggestions or minor problems

General

Put Chuunibyou demo koi ga shitai lite in source , Title your map ZAQ - kimi e (TV size).Full submit after these.Read this before you do: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/24443
Your image size is 960x678 , which differs from the recommended 800x600 or 1024x768 and causes letterboxing.Find a new one.
It supposed to be a video right?Include it in your beatmap.

leon1341414's Easy

Add 1 second to music lead in.It is hard to catch the first beat.
Stress your beats with more hitsounds
00:12:375 (2,3,4) - Overlapping.Maybe you should point 00:13:666 (3) - to south and move 00:14:956 (4) -
00:25:924 (4) 00:27:214 (1) - They are overlapping.I suggest to move 00:27:214 (1) down
00:29:795 (3) - Overlap with 00:27:214 (1) -
00:32:375 (1) - ^
00:32:375 (1) to 00:35:601 (2) - Stacks may be too difficult for easy players.Change them with sliders or circle patterns
00:36:892 (1) to 00:40:763 (4) - Hard to read for easy
00:44:633 (3) - ^
00:49:150 (4,1,1) - Stacks may be too difficult for easy players.
00:49:795 (1) - It supposes to be kiai here.Use inherited timing sections to do so.
00:51:085 (2,3) - Overlapping.Curve the two sliders to solve this.
00:54:956 (5) - New Combo
00:58:827 (8) - Hidden under slider.Move it straight to the left.
01:00:117 (1) to 01:07:214 (2) - Stacks and Overlapping are too difficult for easy.Find a better pattern without stacks and overlappings
01:03:021 (1) - This spacing does not suits.
01:10:440 (1,2,3) - use smaller grids and place the sliders till the end of the sliders are in the same position
01:14:311 (1) - Hidden under slider.
01:18:182 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read for easy
The main problems of this diff are stacks and overlapping.You have to understand , not all the new players can read them.

121561995's Hard

Stress your beats with more hitsounds
00:14:956 (2) - Reverse arrow hidden by 00:14:150 (3) - which is unrankable
00:19:795 (1) - Remove new combo,its unnecessary
00:49:795 (1) - kiai
00:51:085 (5,6) - Liked the way you used claps
01:22:053 (1) - Remove new combo,its unnecessary
There are fewer problems with this diff , but you lack some creativity.Make some symmetrical shape, have a better flow on some beats and it will be better.

Good luck with your first beatmap :)
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Xinchii

kelvinli wrote:

I am doing this as my first mod.
Unrankable
Highly recommended
Suggestions or minor problems

General

Put Chuunibyou demo koi ga shitai lite in source , Title your map ZAQ - kimi e (TV size).Full submit after these.Read this before you do: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/24443
Your image size is 960x678 , which differs from the recommended 800x600 or 1024x768 and causes letterboxing.Find a new one.
It supposed to be a video right?Include it in your beatmap.

leon1341414's Easy

Add 1 second to music lead in.It is hard to catch the first beat.
Stress your beats with more hitsounds
00:12:375 (2,3,4) - Overlapping.Maybe you should point 00:13:666 (3) - to south and move 00:14:956 (4) -
00:25:924 (4) 00:27:214 (1) - They are overlapping.I suggest to move 00:27:214 (1) down
00:29:795 (3) - Overlap with 00:27:214 (1) -
00:32:375 (1) - ^
00:32:375 (1) to 00:35:601 (2) - Stacks may be too difficult for easy players.Change them with sliders or circle patterns
00:36:892 (1) to 00:40:763 (4) - Hard to read for easy
00:44:633 (3) - ^
00:49:150 (4,1,1) - Stacks may be too difficult for easy players.
00:49:795 (1) - It supposes to be kiai here.Use inherited timing sections to do so.
00:51:085 (2,3) - Overlapping.Curve the two sliders to solve this.
00:54:956 (5) - New Combo
00:58:827 (8) - Hidden under slider.Move it straight to the left.
01:00:117 (1) to 01:07:214 (2) - Stacks and Overlapping are too difficult for easy.Find a better pattern without stacks and overlappings
01:03:021 (1) - This spacing does not suits.
01:10:440 (1,2,3) - use smaller grids and place the sliders till the end of the sliders are in the same position
01:14:311 (1) - Hidden under slider.
01:18:182 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read for easy
The main problems of this diff are stacks and overlapping.You have to understand , not all the new players can read them.

121561995's Hard

Stress your beats with more hitsounds
00:14:956 (2) - Reverse arrow hidden by 00:14:150 (3) - which is unrankable
00:19:795 (1) - Remove new combo,its unnecessary
00:49:795 (1) - kiai
00:51:085 (5,6) - Liked the way you used claps
01:22:053 (1) - Remove new combo,its unnecessary
There are fewer problems with this diff , but you lack some creativity.Make some symmetrical shape, have a better flow on some beats and it will be better.

Good luck with your first beatmap :)
Thank you for your modding.
The Problems that you suggested is very helpful.
It's also a good lesson to me to learn more on editing maps.

I have fix most Problems of them.

The image for background will be Update when I found a adaptable one.

But when I change source into "Chuunibyou demo koi ga shitai lite" , Title the map "ZAQ - kimi e (TV size)" it will turn into a new map and need submit again?


Your suggestion realy help me a lot.
kelvinli
160 posts
Joined April 2011
kelvinli
Thats why I told you to read http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/24443
I had this problem, too.It was just 1 month ago...
I failed to do that because I exited the editor, where the post told me what I not do to do so.
I believe you can fix it.
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Xinchii

kelvinli wrote:

Thats why I told you to read http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/24443
I had this problem, too.It was just 1 month ago...
I failed to do that because I exited the editor, where the post told me what I not do to do so.
I believe you can fix it.
Thanks. :)
I fix it Successful.
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
這樣寫 然後上傳 (方法跟前面的一樣)




然後你需要一個難度名叫"Normal", 因為一張圖必須要有良好的diff spread, 就像Easy - Normal - Hard這樣


加油! no kds plz
cococanro
76 posts
Joined June 2010
cococanro
好聽~
我可以加一個難度insane嗎XD
話說音質有點差 :(
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Xinchii

Flask wrote:

這樣寫 然後上傳 (方法跟前面的一樣)




然後你需要一個難度名叫"Normal", 因為一張圖必須要有良好的diff spread, 就像Easy - Normal - Hard這樣


加油! no kds plz
喔喔,這樣我剛剛改錯了
已改正~~

感謝建議~~~
難度會試著再增加 :)
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Xinchii

cococanro wrote:

好聽~
我可以加一個難度insane嗎XD
話說音質有點差 :(
當然~~如果你願意的話非常歡迎XD
我們也正討論要做一個呢~~
能加一個就幫大忙了QQ

音質的話我也不大清楚QQ
(其實我聽是沒有什麼感覺.........)
cococanro
76 posts
Joined June 2010
cococanro
聽聽看以下兩個的跟你的有什麼差 :D

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/62868

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/59806
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Xinchii

cococanro wrote:

聽聽看以下兩個的跟你的有什麼差 :D

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/62868

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/59806
我懂了.......

我的聽起來比較不清晰 :cry:
cococanro
76 posts
Joined June 2010
cococanro
看你要不要把歌曲換掉~
and難度的部分最好是取Easy.Hard
然後在此串打
Easy by leon1341414
Hard by 121561995
這樣子

別kd :)
kelvinli
160 posts
Joined April 2011
kelvinli
no kudos please
ZAQ - kimi e (TV size) but not ZAQ - kimi e (Tv side) :?
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Xinchii

kelvinli wrote:

no kudos please
ZAQ - kimi e (TV size) but not ZAQ - kimi e (Tv side) :?
haha~
It's my mistake
I will fix it. Thanks~ :)
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Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
現在的BG尺寸要1024x768或800x600 你的不符合 所以幫你弄了一下 拿去用吧~ (別kd

http://imm.io/JRSw


另外preview Time每個難度都要有 設一下

~
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Xinchii

Flask wrote:

現在的BG尺寸要1024x768或800x600 你的不符合 所以幫你弄了一下 拿去用吧~ (別kd

http://imm.io/JRSw


另外preview Time每個難度都要有 設一下

~
喔喔~感謝~~

已修改XD
[Yue]
1,643 posts
Joined January 2011
[Yue]
Random mod for #modreqs ~

General:
The kiai time must be the same in all your diff.
The "Set as Current Position Preview Point" also has to be the same in all your diff.
The insane difficulty has different offset than the other diff.

Easy:
00:23:974 (3) - you could make this slider as 00:21:394 (1) - to make it look better
00:27:200 (1) - I would recommend you to do these sliders because an easy cornering with long straight slider is
bored of playing
00:29:781 (3) - ^

159's Hard
01:20:749 (1) - if you should change how or if.
01:22:039 (2) - ^
The notes are very close together, use a slightly higher spacing.

Insane:
-2 AR
00:40:581 (1) - you should replace this by a slider Spiner
01:23:323 (1,1) - no need for 2 Spiner. You have only one.

Good luck with your map :3!
cococanro
76 posts
Joined June 2010
cococanro

[Yue] wrote:

General:
The insane difficulty has different offset than the other diff.

Insane:
-2 AR
00:40:581 (1) - you should replace this by a slider Spiner
01:23:323 (1,1) - no need for 2 Spiner. You have only one.
fix all ~ thank you Yue!

http://puu.sh/1o0ZQ
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