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U - Kansha Kangeki

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alacat
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alacat
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年12月17日 at 12:36:43

Artist: U
Title: Kansha Kangeki
Tags: c81 B2IN Nichiyouki nich95 ULTRA U GALAXY Kansha Festival !
BPM: 185
Filesize: 3500kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. B2IN's Hard (4.97 stars, 264 notes)
  2. Easy (2.31 stars, 118 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 453 notes)
  4. Nich's Normal (3.44 stars, 136 notes)
Download: U - Kansha Kangeki
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#11

・Hard - by B2IN
・Normal - by Nichiyouki

・イラスト : 天夢森流彩様 pixiv

Thank you :3
Last edited by alacat , edited 36 times in total.
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
from pm yay :3
Hi alacat-san >u<)/// <3

[General]
  1. suggestion tough, how about change the preview time in 00:09:602- ?
[B2IN's Hard]
  1. 00:27:277 (4,5)- : 1 grid to left?
  2. 00:47:548 (6,7)- : ^
  3. 00:55:980 (1)- : ugh, change this slider? :/
  4. 00:59:548 (3)- : try this?
    312,8,59548,2,0,B|352:72|312:156,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  5. 01:09:277 (4)- : how about nc here?
  6. 01:32:629 (three spinners)- : add finish?
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:304 (1,2,3,4)- : how about nc them? it'll looks colorful :3
  2. 00:11:548 (4,5,6)- : how about add them whistle? and remove clap on 6th slider head owo
  3. 00:14:142 (3,4)- : ^ and remove clap on 4th slider head
  4. 00:16:737 (1,2,3)- : add whistle?
  5. 00:51:115 (1)- : how about move the 2nd point to x208 y48 and 4th point to x200 y192 ?
  6. 01:26:791 (1,2,3,4,5)- : how about move them with distance 0,5? ><
  7. 01:39:764 (5,6,7,8)- : add whistle? same reason as 00:14:142- :3
  8. 01:42:358 (3,4)- : ^
  9. 01:44:953 (4,5,1 (slider head only))- : ^
thats all I can find, good luck >w<~

uwa(^o^) chu(^3^)　uwa (^o^) chuwa chu(^3^)

uwa(^o^) chuwa(^o^) chu(^3^)　uwa(^o^)

EDIT:

  1. Add nich-san's username on the tags >u<
[Nich's Normal]
  1. HP Drain Rate -1?
  2. 00:12:845- : *optional* add note here? feels so empty owo
  3. 00:24:845 (4)- : add clap on the slider head? o_o
  4. 00:38:466 (1)- : 3rd slider point move it to x116 y192 to make them like this
    slider one and approach circle for circle 2
  5. 00:54:683 (2)- : add clap? since you use clap+whistle at 00:58:250
  6. 01:18:358 (3)- : add whistle at the head and the reverse arrow? owo
  7. 01:39:764 (2)- : how about move this D: it touched the previous slider ><
  8. 01:41:061 - : *optional* add note?
/'w')/ ~ *
Last edited by 10nya , edited 1 time in total.
B2IN
B2IN
Thank you tennya ' v '


http://puu.sh/1lwO0
alacat
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alacat
Thanks tennya >w<

modding and star :oops:
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Thank you tennya for your mod :) Fixed some in my diff.

http://puu.sh/1lScP

Then alacat, add "nich95" in tags all diff, too. Because is my previous name >w<
Rare
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Rare
☆

僕がModするまえにRankさせるのは勘弁してください
alacat
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alacat
@Nich

ok added ~ :3

@Rare

sry my bad QAQ ty star 8-)
Rare
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Rare
req via in-game.
almost suggestion~
if you don't like, you can ignore it.

[Easy]
00:16:088 (3) - more curve slider
00:23:872 (2) - let's narrow btw second grid and third grid.
00:35:548 (1,2,3) - why these pattern is different to another pattern?
00:57:602 (3) - move down second grid? http://puu.sh/1mHjp
01:20:304 (3,4,5,6) - Uncomfortable these notes.
01:22:250 (1) - since this note getting out of screen, you must move up slider a bit.
01:26:791 (3) - add clap to head slider instead of remove clap to end slider.
01:28:412 (2) - remove clap to head slider. this clap feel uncomfortable.

[Nich's Normal]
00:15:115 (2) - I prefer to more curve slider
00:21:277 (4) - add whistle to end slider? if you added it, you should add whistle to head slider 00:24:845 (4) - and 00:26:953 (3) - here too.
01:11:710 - add note?
01:14:304 - ^
01:16:088 (3) - you can make more pretty slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/484493


[B2IN's Hard]
01:24:358 (1,2,3,4) - very confusing spacing.
01:32:629 (1,1,1) - I dislike many spinners in short interval, but you don't have to change pattern.
01:47:872 (1) - is this rankable?

[Insane]
00:04:412 (1) - 画面中央には置かないの？
00:08:304 (1,1,1,1) - 終点全部softにしたほうが好き
00:12:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 個人的にはこういう音取りが好きだなあ http://puu.sh/1mHCX
00:14:142 (3,4) - スライダー変速してるなら3にコンボ追加かなあ
00:26:466 (1) - 2つめのグリッド伸ばしたら綺麗になる? http://puu.sh/1mHDV
00:28:412 (5,6) - 00:14:142 (3,4) - ここと同じ
00:29:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 少しずつ離れていく配置とかいいんじゃないかな するなら奇数組を離すとか。
00:34:737 (4,5) - 性格の悪さがここで出てる lol
00:36:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - どうにかしてあげたいんだけどどうもしてあげられないなあ…
00:42:115 (2) - なくてもいい　あってもいい
00:51:115 (1) - 中央にグリッド追加したりとか。しなくてもいい。 http://puu.sh/1mHIy
00:53:385 (8,9) - 歌詞に合わせてるなら8にコンボ追加
00:55:980 (7,8) - ^7に追加。
01:01:980 (4) - 01:03:278 (4) - ここの2つにホイッスル追加してみるとかどうでしょう
01:06:845 (1) - こっちのほうがしっくりくる?　http://puu.sh/1mHL4
01:18:034 (9) - 1/2スライダーにしたいところ　ただ配置変えなきゃいけないけど。
01:21:439 (4) - 　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/484532
01:24:034 (4) - これくらいグリッドずらさないとStack Leniencyが高いからプレイ側は違和感を感じる（かも） http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/484528
01:31:818 - ノート追加
01:34:088 (1,2,3) - ここだけ連打は違和感ある。全部連打か単発かどっちかに統一したほうがいいと思う
01:34:899 (7,8) - スペーシングも統一したいところ。
01:42:359 (3,4) - 00:14:142 (3,4) - ここと同じ
01:46:737 - 僕ならここにノート追加します

感謝感激!!! ありがと<3
alacat
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alacat
Thank you Rare =3=

ありがと☆
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Thank you Rare for your mod :) Fixed mostly on my diff.

http://puu.sh/1mKaW
B2IN
B2IN
ty for modding. ' v ' but no fixed .
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu
OMG you just made my day D:.

I love this song \:D/, so here's my star for support :3
alacat
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alacat
Thanks >ω<　Byakugan　 :P
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Support! :D
alacat
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alacat
BeatofIke~ Thank you ^^/
cirno-_old
cirno-_old
Easy seems good.

Normal
00:12:845 - Add circle?

Hard
Seems fine to me. It feels a little too easy for a hard though. Maybe make it AR8?

Insane
00:31:007 (3) - Feels too close to previous note. It gives the illusion that (4) will be farther away. I'm bad so that might be why :P
01:15:602 (1,2,3) - That combo I think is too short.
alacat
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alacat

cirno- wrote:

Insane
00:31:007 (3) - Feels too close to previous note. It gives the illusion that (4) will be farther away. I'm bad so that might be why :P fixed
01:15:602 (1,2,3) - That combo I think is too short. put my pattern here
ty modding :)
B2IN
B2IN
update :3

SPOILER
osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: c81.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 97331
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Kansha Kangeki
TitleUnicode:Kansha Kangeki
Artist:U
ArtistUnicode:U
Creator:alacat
Version:B2IN's Hard
Source:ULTRA U GALAXY Kansha Festival !
Tags:c81 B2IN Nichiyouki nich95
BeatmapID:185898
BeatmapSetID:62736

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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264,360,58250,1,0,0:0:0
152,288,58575,5,0,0:0:0
32,156,58899,6,0,B|128:156,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,80,59223,2,0,B|252:80,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,40,59548,2,0,B|352:76|352:140|308:176,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,288,60196,6,0,B|180:328|212:384,1,75
276,312,60520,2,0,B|276:353|324:397,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,360,60845,2,0,B|380:285|384:200,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
480,72,61493,6,0,B|448:44|400:48,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,96,61818,2,0,B|304:123|266:119,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,28,62142,2,0,B|184:28,3,75,2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,136,62791,6,0,B|148:176|191:198,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,184,63116,2,0,B|307:206|314:244,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,296,63439,2,0,B|156:336,3,75,2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
52,336,64088,5,4,0:0:0
52,304,64737,1,4,0:0:0
52,276,65385,1,4,0:0:0
52,244,66034,1,4,0:0:0
56,216,66683,6,0,B|96:192|164:236|208:216,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,48,67331,2,0,B|256:140,2,75
352,200,67980,2,0,B|336:328|180:328|156:200,1,300
168,112,68791,5,2,0:0:0
168,112,68953,1,2,0:0:0
168,112,69115,1,2,0:0:0
168,112,69277,2,0,B|200:88|252:96,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,108,69602,2,0,B|362:128|400:117,1,75
432,36,69926,2,0,B|480:48|508:120|476:164,1,150
416,224,70412,1,0,0:0:0
344,280,70575,6,0,B|248:280,1,75
208,348,70899,2,0,B|128:348,1,75
148,168,71385,5,2,0:0:0
148,168,71548,1,2,0:0:0
148,168,71710,1,2,0:0:0
148,168,71872,2,0,B|160:124|200:96,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,105,72196,2,0,B|352:124|364:168,1,75
316,244,72520,2,0,B|256:196|256:196|196:244,1,150
156,332,73007,1,0,0:0:0
157,332,73169,6,0,B|212:384,1,75
300,380,73493,2,0,B|356:328,1,75
256,176,73980,5,2,0:0:0
256,176,74142,1,2,0:0:0
256,176,74304,1,2,0:0:0
256,176,74466,2,0,B|292:192|332:176,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
412,144,74791,2,0,B|397:107|358:90,1,75
288,36,75115,2,0,B|216:64|140:36,1,150
52,52,75602,1,0,0:0:0
100,128,75764,6,0,B|132:196|116:284,1,150
52,336,76250,1,0,0:0:0
228,296,76575,6,0,B|272:292|312:332,1,75
376,360,76899,1,0,0:0:0
376,360,77061,2,0,P|447:342|457:271,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,148,77710,2,0,B|246:102|286:40|347:55,1,150
444,204,78358,5,4,0:0:0
304,320,78683,1,4,0:0:0
156,220,79007,1,4,0:0:0
160,308,79169,6,0,B|252:256,2,75,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
84,260,79656,2,0,B|71:221|83:175,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,116,79980,2,0,B|176:115|216:90,1,75
296,92,80304,2,0,B|472:104,1,150
445,102,80791,1,0,0:0:0
392,28,80953,6,0,B|348:52|340:128|380:164,1,150
448,208,81439,1,0,0:0:0
352,340,81764,6,0,B|312:360|264:340,2,75,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
308,260,82250,2,0,B|320:224|308:180,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
202,185,82575,2,0,B|192:224|204:260,1,75
208,348,82899,2,0,B|132:376|52:316,1,150
28,244,83385,1,0,0:0:0
40,156,83548,6,0,B|48:120|44:68,2,75
28,244,84034,1,0,0:0:0
192,64,84358,5,2,0:0:0
216,64,84520,1,2,0:0:0
240,64,84683,1,2,0:0:0
264,64,84845,2,0,B|352:64,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,148,85169,2,0,B|280:148,1,75
204,156,85493,2,0,B|176:224|176:224|204:300,1,150
256,368,85980,1,0,0:0:0
309,295,86142,6,0,B|336:224|336:224|308:156,1,150
256,80,86629,1,0,0:0:0
404,184,86953,6,0,B|416:224|416:224|404:268,1,75
384,344,87277,1,0,0:0:0
309,295,87439,2,0,B|245:139,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,140,88088,2,0,B|136:296,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,140,88737,6,0,B|296:120|256:136|256:136|216:120|184:140,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,328,89385,2,0,B|207:282|221:202,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,328,90034,6,0,B|304:282|290:202,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,49,90683,2,0,B|128:76|124:164,1,150
307,49,91331,6,0,B|384:76|388:164,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,140,91980,2,0,B|256:216,1,75
256,304,92304,1,0,0:0:0
256,304,92466,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,92629,12,0,93764,0:0:0
256,192,94088,12,0,95061,0:0:0
256,192,95385,12,0,96358,0:0:0
256,192,97169,5,0,0:0:0
203,352,97818,6,0,B|223:316|223:316|255:332|291:316|291:316|307:352,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,104,98466,2,0,B|256:272,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,254,98953,1,0,0:0:0
336,296,99115,6,0,B|388:332|444:304|444:236,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
404,168,99602,1,0,0:0:0
316,168,99764,2,0,B|160:168,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,320,100412,6,0,B|36:248|63:174,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
157,23,101061,2,0,B|193:95|165:168,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
124,248,101548,1,0,0:0:0
176,320,101710,6,0,B|272:320,1,75
355,236,102034,2,0,B|280:236,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
244,152,102358,2,0,B|254:74|319:27,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,168,103007,6,0,B|432:220|432:220|432:252|424:292|384:304,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,304,103656,2,0,B|174:294|166:254|166:222|166:222|166:170,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,80,104142,1,0,0:0:0
248,128,104304,6,0,B|328:192,1,75
248,244,104629,2,0,B|328:308,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,332,104953,2,0,B|400:248|478:209,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,104,105602,6,0,B|376:104|392:140|392:140|348:168|336:208,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,104,106250,2,0,B|136:104|120:140|120:140|164:168|176:208,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,348,106899,5,0,0:0:0
256,320,107223,1,0,0:0:0
256,288,107548,1,0,0:0:0
256,176,107872,6,0,B|296:196|256:232|208:196|244:164|268:140|256:104,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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[General]
  1. "bg.jpg"のファイルサイズが1MB以上あり、それが無駄に大きく悪く思えました
    500KB目安に画質を落とす等をして調節をするべきです
[Easy]
  1. 00:01:493 (1) - remove finish
    このnoteはfinishで強調すると音量がかなり大きくなり、曲に対して浮きます
    finishを外すかfinishの箇所の音量を下げる等の対応をする必要があります
  2. 00:34:250 (3) - 00:31:656 (2)が左下寄りの配置であることを考えるとここが窮屈な流れとなっているように思えました
    画像のように左上側にリバースの位置を持ってくる配置とさせ、左下に偏りがない配置にするのがベターです
  3. 00:36:196 (2,3) - このリズムに違和感がありました
    00:31:656 (2) や 00:33:602 (2,3) と異なり00:37:493 (3)がワンテンポ遅れて置かれています
    ここに一貫性がなく中途半端な音取りで初心者を混乱させる要素を持っているように思えました
    当然Easyで赤線を踏む配置は推奨されないので、使用するならばスライダーのリバースを使用した配置になります

    00:36:196 (2) - サークル
    00:36:845 (3) - 3/2リバーススライダー
    一貫性と混乱を避けるためには前の部分と同様の音取りをするべきです
  4. 00:40:737 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - ^
    ですが、この箇所に関して言えば違和感と呼べる程の物はなく、別の一貫性を持っていますし、大きな改良を加える必要が出てくるので修正はしなくても構いません
    本当に完璧に近づけたいならば修正をする程度です
  5. 01:16:088 (3,4) - この2noteがボーカルをあまりフォローできていません
    1/1スライダー、サークルの順番に入れ替えることでそれを改善することができます
  6. 01:18:683 - なぜここの間を開けているのでしょうか？
    ここはボーカルによる音取りが可能であり、曲調変化がここでなく音を取ることが十分に可能であるように思えます
  7. 01:20:304 (3,4) - この重なりが視認性の面で悪く思えました
    画像のように角度を追加し、その視認性を改善するのがベターです
  8. 01:21:602 (5,6) - この2つのnoteがサークルを使用することで妙な強調をし、ボーカルをフォローできておらず悪く思えました
    この箇所は1/1スライダーとさせるか、01:20:953 (4) のスライダーの長さを変えたりすることでサークルが2連続で置かれないようにさせて強調をしないようにするべきです
[Nich's Normal]
  1. 00:12:845 - Why is not there a note here? this rhythm do not follow song.
    I suggest to add note or to Extend　00:12:196 (2).
  2. 01:38:142 (1,2) - I do not like this flow.
    try this
  3. 01:38:142 (1) - same as 00:12:845
[B2IN's Hard]
  1. 00:16:737 (3) - not symmetric. and It looks dirty.....
  2. 01:01:818 (2) - add whistle on start. It is available to emphasize.
  3. 01:03:116 (2) - ^
  4. 01:04:088 (1,2,3,4) - distance. these note do not have pattern. since should add a pattern to it.
  5. 01:13:169 (1,2) - not symmetric.
[Insane]
  1. 00:48:520 (5) - add NC
    このnoteがNCのパターンに反しているように思えます
  2. 00:59:548 (4,5,6) - このnoteはスタックの影響で位置がズレてしまいプレイする時に汚くなります
    00:59:791 (5,6)をそれぞれ1grid down & right, 2grid down & right (Tiny)させてその影響を含めた配置とするのがベターです
  3. 01:00:683 (4,5) - このジャンプの流れが悪く思えました
    曲調に対しても飛び過ぎな感じがしますし、(4)を01:00:196 (1,2,3)の中央に置くか、画像のように(1,2)と同じ配置のバランスを持つ(4,5)にするのがベターです
    (4)を前者はx103 y242付近、後者はx:137 y:268に移動させることで調節できます

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