1. 728's Normal (3.5 stars, 104 notes)
2. Easy (1.58 stars, 83 notes)
3. Hard (4.75 stars, 197 notes)
4. LoliFlan's Insane (5 stars, 341 notes)
5. Regou's Lunatic (5 stars, 358 notes)

congaan wrote:

Hello~ I got it from #modreq

Lunatic diff has too many unsnapped notes.
And I played DJ LoliFlan, but I felt that this needs timing check(offset was not correct for me) .

Hard
00:15:124 - end of slider(4) and (5) starts at 00:15:227?OK OK
00:27:063 (3,4) - (4) at right angles to the kick slider, this will confuse some payers. so I suggest this http://puu.sh/1g9lMOK
00:32:778 (1,3) - stack? look better.OK
01:14:969 - lack of clap?OK
01:18:809 - ^OK

1. Tag: Regou U.N. Owen was her?
2. Is the title Flan in Wonderland (PV Ver.)? I saw the youtube

1. AR+1?
2. 00:07:466 (4) - nc? because you nc at 00:09:915 (1) - lol
3. 00:16:038 (1) - clap?
4. 00:16:446 (2) - finish
5. 00:23:385 (4) - Why change spacing? D:
6. 00:39:303 (1) - ^^
7. 00:44:201 (2) - (end)clap
8. 00:49:099 (5,1) - nc at (5) and remove nc from (1)? Seems fit your NC rules lol
9. 00:52:889 - 00:54:329 - 00:56:009 - 00:57:209 - You don't need to add these green lines D:
10. 01:17:849 (3) - clap
11. 01:29:369 (2) - ^
12. 01:29:849 (3) - (end)^

1. ar+1?
2. 00:00:528 (1) - I think you can add a reserve to instead (2) due to here's a bit quiet
3. 00:52:889 - 00:54:329 - 00:56:009 - 00:57:209 - you don't need to add these green lines D:
4. 01:35:129 - spinner stop at here to keep consistency with other diff?

1. 00:11:854 (2) - Delete this note would be better to fit with song D:
2. 00:16:446 - Increase the volume about 20% here please
3. 00:27:875 (7) - nc?
4. 00:29:303 (1,2) - I'd like to remove (1)'s nc and nc at (2) because the vocal
5. 00:30:936 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:45:834 - ~ 00:48:895 - no any clap added? Dx
7. 01:07:529 (6) - why finish? Or you can try to low down the volume here and increase the volume at (1)
8. 01:08:729 (3) - remove finish please

1. 00:00:732 - 這裡空了一拍很怪 建議+個note疊在(1)上
2. 00:16:446 - 突然很安靜啊。。。能不能放大聲一點?
3. 00:40:936 (1,2,3,4,5) - 你用compose那边做個星吧 現在排的這個有點奇芭。。
4. 01:18:809 (10) - 盡可能疊好一點 就算完全overlap也沒關係 0.0

1. 00:13:181 (1) - Delete 1 reserve and add a note at 00:13:589 - ? I don't like the reserve because here's a very strong vocal D:
2. 00:42:977 (2) - 1/3 longer? I dunno why you end at 1/3 point lol ...
3. 00:45:426 (7) - 1/3 longer here too, I think end at downbeat is great
4. 00:47:058 (7) - 1/3 longer
5. 01:14:969 (6) - clap
   I dunno why you use 1/3, but I thought it could be vocal? That's not a big problem imo, because rhythm is more important D:!

Flask wrote:

M4M \o\

[General]

1. Tag: Regou U.N. Owen was her? added
2. Is the title Flan in Wonderland (PV Ver.)? I saw the youtube

ok

[Easy]

1. AR+1? ok
2. 00:07:466 (4) - nc? because you nc at 00:09:915 (1) - lol ok
   
3. 00:16:038 (1) - clap?ok
   
4. 00:16:446 (2) - finishok
   
5. 00:23:385 (4) - Why change spacing? D:ok
   
6. 00:39:303 (1) - ^^ok
   
7. 00:44:201 (2) - (end)clapok
   
8. 00:49:099 (5,1) - nc at (5) and remove nc from (1)? Seems fit your NC rules lolok
   
9. 00:52:889 - 00:54:329 - 00:56:009 - 00:57:209 - You don't need to add these green lines D:ok
   
10. 01:17:849 (3) - clapok
    
11. 01:29:369 (2) - ^ok
    
12. 01:29:849 (3) - (end)^ok

[Hard] all done

1. 00:11:854 (2) - Delete this note would be better to fit with song D:
2. 00:16:446 - Increase the volume about 20% here please
3. 00:27:875 (7) - nc?
4. 00:29:303 (1,2) - I'd like to remove (1)'s nc and nc at (2) because the vocal
5. 00:30:936 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:45:834 - ~ 00:48:895 - no any clap added? Dx
7. 01:07:529 (6) - why finish? Or you can try to low down the volume here and increase the volume at (1)
8. 01:08:729 (3) - remove finish please

Good luck!

Flask wrote:

M4M \o\

[General]

1. Tag: Regou U.N. Owen was her?
2. Is the title Flan in Wonderland (PV Ver.)? I saw the youtube

[Regou's Lunatic]

1. 00:00:732 - 這裡空了一拍很怪 建議+個note疊在(1)上 故意的
2. 00:16:446 - 突然很安靜啊。。。能不能放大聲一點? 很奇怪啦
3. 00:40:936 (1,2,3,4,5) - 你用compose那边做個星吧 現在排的這個有點奇芭。。 隨便啦,,,改了下
4. 01:18:809 (10) - 盡可能疊好一點 就算完全overlap也沒關係 0.0 嗯

Good luck!

congaan wrote:

DJ LoliFlan
Pretty nice map. this diff is allowed to raise OD8(at least 7). OD8 please =w=/ OD7 should be fine
00:19:716 (7) - NC done
00:20:533 (1) - /remove NC done
00:21:349 (4) - /NC follow song (and your formation. done
01:20:129 (6) - 2~4 grids right? easier to read. moved 2

Flask wrote:

[DJ LoliFlan]

1. 00:13:181 (1) - Delete 1 reserve and add a note at 00:13:589 - ? I don't like the reserve because here's a very strong vocal D: I like it that way D:
2. 00:42:977 (2) - 1/3 longer? I dunno why you end at 1/3 point lol ... timing bug on submit, fixed
3. 00:45:426 (7) - 1/3 longer here too, I think end at downbeat is great fixed
4. 00:47:058 (7) - 1/3 longer fixed
5. 01:14:969 (6) - clap added
   I dunno why you use 1/3, but I thought it could be vocal? That's not a big problem imo, because rhythm is more important D:!
   nope it was a bug, fixed everything

Flask wrote:

[728's Normal]

1. ar+1? I see.
2. 00:00:528 (1) - I think you can add a reserve to instead (2) due to here's a bit quiet hmm..I see...I want to see the other modder's opinion.
3. 00:52:889 - 00:54:329 - 00:56:009 - 00:57:209 - you don't need to add these green lines D: when I saw this map, nothing had been there
4. 01:35:129 - spinner stop at here to keep consistency with other diff? hm..I think it's clear that the last note ends at downbeat.

1. Song Folder - Flan in Wonderland.flv - still have sound. It needs to turn off the sound ==
2. Song Folder - PV Flan in Wonderland.mp3 - This is a little low quality. noise is included in it. I recommend changes to the high-quality mp3.
   
   ↑above two　( when you use this mp3, a readjustment of offset is necessary )
   http://puu.sh/1jeTs
   
3. Song Folder - soft-hitnormal2.wav - This silence sound. This is probably unrankable i think normalhitsound must have a sound something.
4. Song Setup - Tags - 「regou」 「Regou」 - this two tags are not necessary for this to search it. plz delete one

1. 01:15:929 (x) - 01:15:449~ rhythm changes from here, I do suggestion to increase rhythm here. for ex: http://puu.sh/1jfot

1. 01:05:849 (1) - remove NC. 不要と思います
2. 01:10:649 (2,1,2) - 間隔が狭いと感じるのと,流れが01:10:649 (2,1) - が同じ方向ではなく01:11:609 (1,2) - の方が良いと思ったのでこんな感じにしてはどうでしょうか？ http://puu.sh/1jgPx
3. 01:30:809 (1) - spinner の使い方が同じなのでendを Easy,Hard,Insane diffに合わせた方が良いです。 endを01:35:129に。

1. HD & OD -1 ( diff balance between normal and lunatic, and lower than Lunatic diff )
2. 00:00:528~00:06:446 - Why do you not use clap like easy o.o? clap matches than a whistle well here
3. 00:12:773 (1) - remove NC and 00:13:181 (2) - add NC is better.
4. 00:13:181 (2) - add whistle to end of the slider. ( 00:14:099 (3) - Since you are using the whistle on this, putting whistle here, a united feeling is improved )
5. 00:29:303 (6) - The people may be confused in it with consecutive note. so i suggest put it like 00:27:058 (5,6) slightly in the distance. for ex: http://puu.sh/1jhuj
6. 00:55:289~01:00:089 - These hitsound is too low & 01:00:89~ the difference in sound from here is too big ( 5%⇒45% )
   I recommend that you match volume with 01:00:89~. used by 25% as it insane for example
7. 01:15:449~01:23:129 - when you put double craps , my pattern is like that ↓
   01:16:649 (4) - add clap
   01:17:609 (2) - remove clap to start of the slider. and 01:18:089 (3) - add clap
   01:20:489 (4) - add clap
   01:21:449 (2) - remove clap to start of the slider. and 01:21:929 (3) - add clap

1. 00:13:589 (1) - Timing overlap with the 00:13:181 (1). 00:13:181 (1) - Probably end of this is 00:13:487. but 00:13:181 (1,1) - DS is too far to do so it ==;
2. 00:16:038 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:630 (3,4) - I suggest that do not completely stack it and move it a little and put it. like this : http://puu.sh/1ji63
4. 00:52:889~01:00:089 - reason same as easy. Because all people do not set speaker volume highly, you must do it for a sound to hear~
5. 00:52:889~01:07:529 - Is the rhythm between this time intentional? This 1/8 rhythm is usable only when it is completely correct. >_< I cannot say the reliable thing; only as for the advice. when I do not fix, I think that DS should perform a review because DS do not have consistency ( 00:53:369 (2,3,4) - ,00:54:329 (1,2,3) - etc )
6. 01:24:809 (11) - Suggestion of the flow: http://puu.sh/1jiFL It can follow the flow of the next note imo
7. 01:29:729 (3) - unsnapped slider end. maybe end to 01:29:849 o.o?

1. 00:51:344 (1) - remove NC. Looks a little strange ><
2. 01:19:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it's a little confusing arrangement. because have various flows there, and It is crowded