1. D.N.Angel (4.65 stars, 404 notes)
2. Easy (1.96 stars, 189 notes)
3. Normal (4.01 stars, 292 notes)

DarknessAngel wrote:

這歌讓我好感動><
我想guest個Hard (想多聽歌的人會欲求不滿啊...2個簡單的難度...lol) sure 当然可以

話說00:26:552 (3,4)之間間距比較大，看起來不好喔 手动disnap的悲剧了 会改不小心瞄到的x3

1. 00:25:218 - add note?~
2. 00:28:774 (1) - 白点左右对其>_>~
   
   1. 00:44:774 (3) - ^
   2. 00:48:329 (2) - ^
3. 01:07:885 (1) - 不好看~用4个标点拉平点;_;！~
   
   1. 01:14:996 (1) - ^
   2. 01:16:774 (3) - ^
4. 01:34:107 - add note?~
5. 01:46:996 - add slider? end to 01:47:885 - ~
6. 02:12:774 (2) - ctrl+G?
7. 03:30:107 (1) - end to 03:32:774 - or 03:37:218 - ?

1. 00:25:218 -chenge to a note>?~
2. 00:36:552 - add note?!~
3. 01:27:440 (1) - 最后一个point往回收一点。。不好看。。
4. 01:45:218 (2) - 开头的3个点在。。怎么说。orz。。和前面那个slider一样吧~。。。速度快的一点?~...这个我学到了。。下次我也试试;_;~
5. 02:08:329 (7,8) - 做的好看点？~对称点？~
6. 02:11:885 (3) - the start of the sldier ......12$#%$^%为什么会习惯性打英文orz。。。开头+个finish~
7. 02:54:552 (1) - 不好看~试试用4个标点来拉？~
8. 03:08:774 (1) - 拉的均匀点~中间的point。。
9. 03:11:441 - add note！~

tutuhaha wrote:

[Normal]
自己先打开AImod看一下，normal难度居然有148处spacing这绝对不科学，不管怎么样都得改的
这完全不关排列的事，AImod说有那么多space在normal里面那就绝对有问题 lol,第一次制作的时候是135bpm检查过只有个位数的，不知道为什么减了一半超过0.8的全冒出来了
所以后面的间距问题就不说了
00:41:218 (2,3) - 两个的弧度保持一致，就2来说3太直了，就3来说2太弯了 fix
00:42:107 (3,1) - 这间距问题太明显了 fix
00:49:663 (3) - 如果真的想前面那一部分不用whistle的话这里也别用了用clap代替 fix
00:50:107 (1) - 头上试着加个soft finish fix
01:06:107 (3,4) - 对比之前间距过大 fix~ unrank做多了 忘记这是rank向了
01:07:885 (1) - 就算轻一点也好，+finish fix 50%val感觉差不多
01:07:885 (1,2,3) - 间距 fix
01:22:107 (1) - 就算轻一点也好，+finish fix
01:32:774 (5) - 尾巴+clap fix 我也忘记了newcombo
01:32:774 (5) - NC从这里开始，后面那个去掉 去掉了
01:34:552 (1) - +whistle fix
01:36:330 (1) - unsnap kiai绿线 fix
01:55:441 (1,2,3) - 间距 fix
02:27:885 (3,4) - 对新手来说这是个非常差评的地方 fix
02:29:663 (1) - 到了第二个kiai还是觉得这边改加finish，前面Kiai说过的就不说了 ^
02:56:330 (2) - clap在这里太重了，换成whistle fix
02:59:885 (1,2) - finish的声音完全大到盖过主旋律，不好 fix
03:05:219 (1,2,3,4) - finish声音过多太杂了 fix remove 2 4finish
这么说吧，我mod完才看到你是手动DS的，然后我也知道为啥前面aimod给你差评了
我不反对你在类似于00:30:552 (3,1) - ，00:58:552 (2,3) - 或者在 01:10:996 (4,1) - 这种地方用拉开一点点或者靠近一点点来增加趣味性
但是，在玩的途中我可以看到你前半部分和后半部分同样的节奏用的1/2拍的间距完全不同，
01:07:885 (1,2,3) - 1-2太靠近以至于离3太远
02:29:663 (1,2,3) - ^相同节奏，到这里距离就增大？
02:33:219 (1,2) - 然后到这里又减小？
这种低BPM的肯定会有人加HR+HD，最好想象下杂乱无章的间距会被扩大后给player的感受
为了可玩性丧失美观性得不偿失
建议是是我刚刚上面说支持的不用改，其他1/2拍全部0.8x调整[/color] fix 当初做这难度考虑过这 但没考虑过rank 于是就乱来了点


[Hard]
00:26:107 (2,3,4) - 间距问题太明显
00:35:885 (3) - 我希望是finish加在这里，不是前面那个 fix 其实new combo错了先导致加错
00:46:552 (2) - 试试再拉好点 fix try
00:50:107 (3) - NC怎么看也是从这里开始 fix
01:32:774 (1,2) - 这两个靠的实在太近，因为你这边用的还是重叠，所以打得时候看起来会更更近，然后就差评了 fix 这个尽力
03:18:329 (2,3) - ^同理 ^这个不敢改 再拉大要盖hp了 看看更多人看法
kiai感觉表现力度不够
Hard感觉太平淡，因为本身这个是舒缓类的，可能有点难操作
尽量多注意堆叠之后产生的误差，可能你edit里面看是一样打起来可能是另外一种感觉
有注意过,但是操作的比较差

whistle和finish在整张图里特别是在不是kiai的地方显得太吵了非kiai降低10%
可能需要一定的降音，而且因为你这whistle还不是照着规规矩矩的2，4或者1，3放的，玩到一半听着很容易听到的whistle突然没了的感觉其实并不好
所以音效建议减音
然后BPM和offest可能有问题，建议去找NB人士来测 等好人帮忙
然后自己注意下kiai有没有全部snap在先上和试听黄线在两个难度里面是不是从同一时间开始，这俩是unrank的
就这样

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's M4M~=w=
[General]
♪~

[Normal]
all is nazi~

1. 00:25:218 - add note?~
2. 00:28:774 (1) - 白点左右对其>_>~
   
   1. 00:44:774 (3) - ^
   2. 00:48:329 (2) - ^
3. 01:07:885 (1) - 不好看~用4个标点拉平点;_;！~
   
   1. 01:14:996 (1) - ^
   2. 01:16:774 (3) - ^
4. 01:34:107 - add note?~
5. 01:46:996 - add slider? end to 01:47:885 - ~
6. 02:12:774 (2) - ctrl+G?
7. 03:30:107 (1) - end to 03:32:774 - or 03:37:218 - ?

[Hard]

1. 00:25:218 -chenge to a note>?~
2. 00:36:552 - add note?!~
3. 01:27:440 (1) - 最后一个point往回收一点。。不好看。。
4. 01:45:218 (2) - 开头的3个点在。。怎么说。orz。。和前面那个slider一样吧~。。。速度快的一点?~...这个我学到了。。下次我也试试;_;~
5. 02:08:329 (7,8) - 做的好看点？~对称点？~
6. 02:11:885 (3) - the start of the sldier ......12$#%$^%为什么会习惯性打英文orz。。。开头+个finish~
7. 02:54:552 (1) - 不好看~试试用4个标点来拉？~
8. 03:08:774 (1) - 拉的均匀点~中间的point。。
9. 03:11:441 - add note！~

好曲子！！！~求full~！！来撞你一下;_;...
Star and Good Luck~

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested in my queue ~


[General]
- Artist and title are blank..? owo
Make sure to fill the it in correct so that you dont upload a duplicate ~
- Music lead-in should be set to 0 since you start mapping at 00:21:697
- Bookmarks can be removed ~
- Kiai time sounds a bit loud, lower it a bit.
- End the second kiai time at 02:59:919 or 03:01:586 and start another one at 03:01:697

[Normal]
- Overall Difficulty +1
00:30:586 (6) - Reverse.
00:37:697 (3) - ^
00:50:141 (1) - End slider on the white tick.
00:51:030 (2) - ^
01:07:030 (4) - Spacing.
01:45:253 (2) - Reverse.
01:52:364 (3) - ^
01:59:475 (3) - ^
02:59:919 (1) - Unsnapped slider.
03:00:808 (2) - ^


[Hard]
- I think.. its better to use distance spacing 1
- Overall Difficulty +1
00:54:586 (8) - Reverse?
00:58:141 (5) - ^
01:23:919 (1) - Spacing.
02:03:030 (4) - Place at x:396 y:280
02:03:919 (5) - Place at x:248 y:320
02:14:363 - Add a circle.
02:15:919 (8) - Reverse.
02:17:030 - Add a circle.
02:17:252 - ^


Well mapped ~
Good luck and star! >w<

DarknessAngel wrote:

done ~
http://puu.sh/1e3NB

裡面附的音效也一起上傳上去
不過有一點很抱歉...
因為你似乎只有用到hitclap2而已
能不能麻煩你把你的難度所有的S:C1線調成S...
因為你沒用到S:C1的音效我想說你就不會用S:C1的線結果...居然使用中 lol !
如此這般就需要你改一下了...抱歉orz


啊啊還有幾點，
剛載下來的時候offset差很多，現在改好了沒有我出場的機會真遺憾lol (?

另外就是做譜結束點很奇怪，一般來說到跟我的難度一樣的時間點會正常一些
還有最後突然斷掉也顯得很不自然，淡出要做的
求原檔我來給你弄個


EDIT : ok
http://puu.sh/1e4Mu

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84,192,162141,6,0,B|88:144|112:108,1,81.5999975097657,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,44,162586,2,0,B|256:128,1,81.5999975097657,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
428,192,163030,2,0,B|424:144|400:108,1,81.5999975097657
256,44,163475,1,0,0:0:0

kajiyatta wrote:

hi from Modding queue and probably M4M?
(this time, 2 guys ignore my rule but probably my English also baaad. so I'll decide to mod all maps.)
General
almost suggestions
Normal
Placement
00:35:919(1) try to put in reverse? because of overlapped at end.

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01:20:364(3,4) maybe this?

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01:25:697(1) why jumpping? I don't recomend to ignore Distant Snap in Normal...
02:06:586(3)^
02:10:141(3)^
02:33:252(1)^ and more...
Rythem
01:35:919 add a note? I hear back vocal and probably it'S not difficult for newbie ;3
01:46:141~ this blank doesn't seem good I suppose. try to add a note or something?
01:53:252~^
02:58:141 this spinner might be short. so, remove this and add a slider?

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Hit Sonud
01:34:586(3) add clap at end?

Hard
try AR6? it's up to you but this slow song doesn't fit AR7 imo.
Placement
00:41:252(4) maybe this?

SPOILER

00:54:586(1) remove NC?
02:13:697(3,4,5,6,7) make curved?

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Hit Sonud
00:42:141(5) remove clap and add whistle at end? I feel so much.
00:48:364(2) delete finish at head? maybe if you add asomethig, probably clap better.
00:50:141(1) add finish or whistle at head?
01:36:586(1) add finish?
02:51:919(3) add clap at head and remove clap at end?

D.N.Angel
quite nice diff :3
Placement
00:44:364(4,5) Ctrl+G?
02:45:030(3)^
02:22:364(8) x492 y332?
02:42:141(1,2,3,4) maybe this?

84,192,162141,6,0,B|88:144|112:108,1,81.5999975097657,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,44,162586,2,0,B|256:128,1,81.5999975097657,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
428,192,163030,2,0,B|424:144|400:108,1,81.5999975097657
256,44,163475,1,0,0:0:0

ok that's all. good luck with Rank and star~

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Normal]

1. 00:25:030 -re break time
2. 00:31:697 - ^
3. 00:38:808 - ^
4. 02:58:141 (5) - NC

[Hard]

1. 00:51:919 (3) - on x:244 y:196 ?~
2. 01:11:475 (1,2,3,4) - 咱對於它們的型狀感覺奇怪
3. 01:16:363 (4,1) - (4) x:288 y:332 and (1) x:184 y:308?

[D.N.Angel]

1. 00:47:919 (3) - 第3個點x:472 y:296
2. 00:48:808 (4) - 第3個點x:404 y:168
3. 00:57:252 (1) - 最後1個點x:316 y:288
4. 01:55:030 (3,4,5,6,7) - 感覺有點歪
5. 03:31:030 (3) - 咱喜歡這個, 咱看到了自己

Beren wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
01:12:808 (5) - 加N的finish
01:16:808 (1) - ^
01:19:919 (4) - ^
01:27:475 (1) - ^
01:43:475 (1) - 开始这一段可以适当加一些S的whistle和clap //映襯手法，我想營造由前端的安靜到副歌的震撼的差距
02:27:697 (3) - 结尾换成N的finish
02:28:141 (1) - 删掉
02:34:141 (3) - 结尾N的finish
02:37:697 (3) - ^
02:41:252 (3) - ^
后面的同上 懒得写了
03:26:364 (4) - 加note

good luck

kajiyatta wrote:

D.N.Angel
quite nice diff :3
Placement
00:44:364(4,5) Ctrl+G?
02:45:030(3)^ //I think mine is better ;w;
02:22:364(8) x492 y332? //quite srange to me ... orz
02:42:141(1,2,3,4) maybe this? //lol ! I wanted do this when I was mapping,but it was overmapped orz

84,192,162141,6,0,B|88:144|112:108,1,81.5999975097657,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,44,162586,2,0,B|256:128,1,81.5999975097657,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
428,192,163030,2,0,B|424:144|400:108,1,81.5999975097657
256,44,163475,1,0,0:0:0

ok that's all. good luck with Rank and star~