_niz wrote:

mod

00:13:943 (59) - change to k, fits better musically imo I'm following the vocal pitch

00:14:949 (63) - move up to ticks aka - 00:15:116 -

00:17:295 - ^

00:19:977 - ^

01:16:458 - ^

01:41:429 - ^

01:41:765 - ^

01:42:603 - ^ These breaks are consistent with the vocal and instrumental

02:44:953 - katsuu Where?

03:12:770 - could add a spinner here? oWo Sorry, but I wanna follow the vocal there

Rhytoly wrote:

hihi M4M

[Nardo's Oni]
00:29:698 - delete here for spread of notes and also 7+ notes in part like this is look weird (because the part is same as 00:17:128 ~ 00:21:150 ) delete please Deleted 00:29:362 (131) - instead.
00:32:547 - how about k ddkkd? kkd kdd is look weird to me idk I think they represent the drum sequence pretty well.
00:46:625 ~ 01:18:804 -seem good :3 also even all kiais! I am glad to hear that :3
01:22:072 - add k here? to follow+emphasize vocals and I guess it would be better because it will be oppisite here! 01:19:390 - fixed
01:46:290 (543,544,545,546,547,548) - same as before if you would ot change to ddkkd same as 00:32:547 -
01:54:083 (580,581,582,583,584,585) - they're weird to me because you follow vocals.even 00:38:580 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - you should delete 01:54:083 (580,581,582) - (instead break by there) and put kkd 01:54:083 (580,581,582) - and add note 01:54:837 - to be more smoother and flow Remain unchanged for a bit more variation as vocals are still well accompanied this way.

pretty cool

well,I can relax my eyes now
your map took my time 2 hours (4min deam) I hope it's helpful
good luck both

Rhytoly wrote:

hihi M4M

[Inner Oni]
00:03:636 (15,16) - I guess kdk or change to be dkd is can be more follow piano and emphasize Seems good, changed
00:21:653 (102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - change them to ddkkddkkkkd? from the 00:22:156 - I can hear drum sound if you use kkkkd it's can be more emphasize Yeah, you're right
00:45:284 - if you are trying to make it to be smooth SVs you need to add SV 0.78x here for the new bar I moved the 0,75 there
00:45:619 - is it your willfulness? here is can be mapped 1/8 kk Can be kat, for now I'll add it
01:37:407 - change to ddkkd? I saw you started using 5-plets on the 01:40:089 and to be more spread I guess you should change to 5-plets You're right, added 5-plet
01:59:027 - same,please add SV to make it smoother I applied the same thing
02:24:670 ~ 02:29:865 - actually they will be fine but 02:29:865 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) is not flow and SVs not fit the part.I understand 02:24:670 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - higher SVs with higher-pitched but 02:29:865 (75,76,77,78,79,80) - stroung sound is same and I wanna fix for you(make it more smoother).I suggest you delete SVs 02:30:368 and 02:30:871 or do whatever can make it smoother.also there 02:31:541 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - is problem for now bacause at 1/3 is hard to read. so 02:31:541 - change SV to 1.1x and last 02:31:876 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - you just change SVs start from 1.07x ( 02:31:876 ) to 1.01x ( 02:32:547 ) I don't think it's very hard to read, but I'll see how change somethings

03:02:044 ~ 03:12:100 -I know you want to keep break but for me overall of the map is following vocals.so here is possiblely to mapping vocals (it's just my opinion you don't need to follow,up to u) Currently I do not wanna add notes there
03:37:742 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - same,sound is no different in my thought (here 03:37:742 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - ) and please make SVs be more smoother,it's hard to read or you just try to make like 02:29:865 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) what I said before Same, I'll see what I can do
03:55:759 - add note here? I think make it's longer than other point in last part should be good .else it's feel weird to gap here 03:56:094 - if you dislike to see note close with bignote you just add SVs from 03:55:424 ~ 03:56:178 - use 1.01x~1.1x The current pattern fits good imo, I'll keep these

the diffi is pretty cool but SVs you should consider and changes them again please

[Muzukashii]
01:05:396 (241,242,243,244) - why not kkk? I think it's can be more highlight vocals
02:19:139 (223,224,225) - same Changed
02:23:999 - overall of the map you never ignore drum sound so please add kkk and delete 02:23:747 (246) - for spread Applied
03:12:435 (3) - change to k? to follow vocal+top diffi Changed
03:13:441 ~ 03:40:256 - actually it's should have break 3/2 or 1/1 after passed 1/16~1/20 but because it's 179bpm lower than generally bpm .so I guess it can be rankeble but for sure you should delete 03:13:943 or 03:14:278 - and 03:24:670 or 03:25:005 - I tried make it more consistent with Oni since that part is very intense. I'll see it later after get some mods

yeah,the diffi is seem fine but please cute break at last kiai

[Futsuu]
00:46:625 - you need to add some triplets because before start kiai is have triplets(without kiai should easier than kiai) to make it's balance you need to add some triplets and also second is same! you need to add more triplets(buff them) make kiais balance and only last kiai is harder I think I balanced it 🤔

I don't have another thing to say,you need to make more triplets in kiais to make more spread and balance,breaks is already relaxly to play

[Kantan]
00:04:725 - the note is improper for kantan or any 3/1 in beginning you should delete it to be proper Deleted
00:17:798 - change to dkd ? to emphasize drum:\?(idk) and to make it consistent here 00:28:524 (34,35,36) I wanna keep that finishers for consistency with all mapset
00:53:664 - you should add d for spread of notes(again) and here is same 01:04:390 - Added
01:12:770 (92) - you should delete here because if new player pressed 01:10:591 (89,90,91) may they will be confused (I guess that will happen like I playing std) Removed
02:07:407 - same as first kiai
02:18:133 - and same Added
02:37:239 (1) - the spinner is very too close the note you should delete that.can be more easy for new player too I think it isn't really hard to play for a new player
03:56:178 (3) - you should delete the note by the two reasons
1.it too close the spinner...
2.03:46:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - you're not following vocals._. I moved the spinner there

the diffi is same as futsuu,just too unbalance because without kiai is harder and second kiai is should be buffed I sucks making full mapset

well,I can relax my eyes now
your map took my time 2 hours (4min deam) I hope it's helpful
good luck both

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Thanks for your mod and comment~

Update: https://puu.sh/A5buw.rar

Tomoka Rin wrote:

[Oni]

00:12:267 (50,51) - 這邊 ctrl +g 改成 k d 看看? 00:12:267 (50) - 的音高比 00:12:603 (51) - 高的關係，這一小段除了這裡都有跟著vocal 50的音高事實上比51低，不過我把50也改k了。

00:37:575 (164,165,166,167) - 換成 00:37:575 (164,165) - k d 然後 00:38:077 (166,167) - d k 這樣會不會比較好，讓這段都保持一樣的組合，或是把最後這段改成 kdddk 去符合背景鼓聲。 這裡我還是想用k強調00:37:742 (165) - 的vocal.

01:02:211 (304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322) - 在副歌中只有這段的連打不是從紅線上當起點像 00:52:323 (242,243,244,245) - 跟 00:52:994 (247,248,249,250,251,252) - ，打起來跟整段副歌會有點違和感。 感覺這個變化還好，太重覆會有點沉悶。

02:15:954 (714) - 到 02:18:468 (732) - 跟 03:29:865 (115) - 到 03:31:541 (128) - 這邊也是，不過應該是想要跟前面一次分開來做區別 ? 同上。

打起來大概就這幾個不太順而已

Tomoka Rin wrote:

[Muzukashii]

00:25:005 (77) - why not move this note to 00:24:670 - , it can follow the vocal also the rhythm. Moved

02:39:083 (7,8) - try ctrl+g here, to follow the high pitch. Yeah, changed

02:39:753 (9,10,11) - how about kdk here, there are two of high pitch at 02:39:753 (9) - and 02:40:089 (11) - or use the dkk like Oni. I'll use dkk for consistency

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

@gaston: I think OD2 for Kantan seems a bit low as Futsuu has 4, so maybe use 3 instead for Kantan?
Updated version of my Oni could be found here: https://puu.sh/A92oW.rar

1. 00:15:116 (17,18) - ctrl+g?
2. not sure if you really need 00:45:619 (55) - ...
3. you could move 00:53:664 (66) - to 00:52:323 - maybe?
4. also 01:04:390 (81) - to 01:03:049 - ?
5. how about deleting 01:24:167 (103,104) - ?
6. 01:56:681 (142) - is too much.
7. you may delete 01:59:362 (144) -
8. 02:07:407 (156) - to 02:06:066 -
9. 02:18:133 (172) - to 02:16:792 -
10. you should really use 02:39:083 (3) - on 02:39:251 - and 02:39:753 (4) - on 02:39:921 -
11. 03:15:116 (6) - delete this.
12. 03:20:480 (16) - to 03:19:139 -
13. delete 03:25:843 (24) -
14. 03:31:206 (33) - to 03:29:865 -
15. 03:37:910 (43,44) - look kinda random in a kantan, you should delete them.
16. move 03:39:251 (45) - to 03:39:586 -

1. 00:52:323 - you could put something at these parts too.
2. 01:05:396 (42) - as kat?
3. maybe delete 02:02:714 (2) -
4. 02:39:083 (5,7) - ctrl+g?

1. add a little break by deleting 00:28:189 (89) -
2. 00:35:563 (116) - kat to get some varienty?
3. 03:38:413 (130,131) - ctrl+g? or 03:39:083 (134,135) -

1. good as it is!

1. 00:45:661 (257) - not worth enough for 1/8 tho...
2. 01:05:312 (4) - should be don or do ctrl+g with 01:05:228 (3,4) -
3. 01:59:404 (318) -

Lyawi wrote:

[Kantan]

1. 00:15:116 (17,18) - ctrl+g? Applied
2. not sure if you really need 00:45:619 (55) - ... There are drum sound, I think it's fine. But I'll see what can I doing
3. you could move 00:53:664 (66) - to 00:52:323 - maybe? it's weird to play, I'll keep it
4. also 01:04:390 (81) - to 01:03:049 - ? Same, I wanna emphasize the vocal
5. how about deleting 01:24:167 (103,104) - ? I'll consider it
6. 01:56:681 (142) - is too much. Removed
7. you may delete 01:59:362 (144) - Nope for now
8. 02:07:407 (156) - to 02:06:066 -
9. 02:18:133 (172) - to 02:16:792 - Eeh, the same thing than before
10. you should really use 02:39:083 (3) - on 02:39:251 - and 02:39:753 (4) - on 02:39:921 - Moved
11. 03:15:116 (6) - delete this. eeh, I wanna keep the spread with Futsuu, but I agree it's a bit hard. I'll check the spread again
12. 03:20:480 (16) - to 03:19:139 - Same
13. delete 03:25:843 (24) - Same as above
14. 03:31:206 (33) - to 03:29:865 - Same
15. 03:37:910 (43,44) - look kinda random in a kantan, you should delete them. Drums sounds lol, but it's a bit hard that I'll see what can I change
16. move 03:39:251 (45) - to 03:39:586 - Moved

[Futsuu]

1. 00:52:323 - you could put something at these parts too. I wanna emphasize the vocal
2. 01:05:396 (42) - as kat? So weird, I wanna keep the consistency
3. maybe delete 02:02:714 (2) - I'll consider it
4. 02:39:083 (5,7) - ctrl+g? I changed to kat (5)

[Muzukashii]

1. add a little break by deleting 00:28:189 (89) - There are a snare drum, I can't ignore that
2. 00:35:563 (116) - kat to get some varienty? the pitch is low as to change to kat, I'll keep it
3. 03:38:413 (130,131) - ctrl+g? or 03:39:083 (134,135) - I'm following the drum there

[Nardo's Oni]

1. good as it is!

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:45:661 (257) - not worth enough for 1/8 tho... Removed
2. 01:05:312 (4) - should be don or do ctrl+g with 01:05:228 (3,4) - I think the current pattern fita good with the vocal pitch
3. 01:59:404 (318) - Removed

I like the set, but I assume your kantan is a bit too hard to play for newbies. It's because I wanna do a good spread. I think you're right, I'll see the spread again

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/users/102335
ask him to change modding version

[oni]
00:26:010 (116,117) - kd Remain unchanged to accompany the pitch increase at 00:26:346 -
02:57:267 (118) - -> 02:57:100 (117) - and k Retained for better flow.
03:39:809 (186) - k snare I think dddkkkd could differentiate the background vocals well.
03:45:200 (219,220,221) - kdd This would be rather hard for this level imo.

1. 00:38:580 -~00:43:943 -since the density difference between futsuu and muzu is quite large, you may reduce the density on this part.
2. 01:24:167 (94,95) -since the drum stopped on 01:23:664 -,you may remove them.
3. 03:17:463 (8,9,10,11,12,13) -you may increase the density here because futsuu has 1/2 patterns and muzu has 1/4 one.
4. 03:28:189 (21,22,23,24,25,26) -^

1. 00:51:988 -~00:55:843 -considering muzu already has some 1/4 triples but futsuu only contains one 1/2 triple, you may add k on 00:55:005 -and 00:55:508 -in order to make a little more short 1/2 patterns.
2. 01:05:396 (38,39,40) -^
3. 02:08:413 (16,17,18) -^
4. 03:21:485 (17,18,19) -^
5. 03:32:211 (44,45,46) -^
6. 02:48:636 -~ 02:59:195 -could make this part a little more denser, since kantan has some 1/1 patterns and muzu contains harder 1/2+1/4 patterns.(compare with kiai)

1. 03:37:742 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) -how about changing to 1/1+1/2 dk kdk kdkdk to follow instrument and vocal more precisely?

1. 01:35:396 -~ 01:36:234 -how about using this sv step up (https://i.imgur.com/p1B5OCb.png) to make smooth sv change?

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/users/102335
ask him to change modding version

[inner oni]
00:02:379 (10) - d There are a synth sound
00:10:927 (50) - add d Added
00:45:675 (254) - add k
00:45:787 (254) - add d I wanna emphasizes the vocal there
01:06:904 (15) - no finish Consistenct with 00:56:178 (15) -
01:31:876 (150) - d Changed
01:32:211 (152) - d
01:32:714 (155) - d I'm following the guitar pitch
01:59:418 (318) - add k
01:59:530 (318) - add d Same as 00:45:787 (254) -
02:20:647 (15) - no finish Same as 01:06:904 (15) -
03:33:720 (17) - ^ Same

[muzukashii]
00:20:647 (61) - 00:20:815 (61) - dk I'm following the vocal break and i wanna do better the spread
00:31:373 (103) - add d
00:31:709 (103) - add k Same, I'll keep it for now
01:22:994 (1) - ~01:23:161 (2) - kkk Changed
01:45:116 (81) - add d
01:45:452 (81) - add k
02:47:128 (34) - d
02:47:463 (35) - k For now I don't add these notes

[futsuu]
01:16:625 (60) - K
01:56:010 (76) - delete
02:30:368 (64) - D
All changed

qoot8123 wrote:

hi o/ Hello~
taiko mod as request

[ Kantan]

1. 00:38:580 -~00:43:943 -since the density difference between futsuu and muzu is quite large, you may reduce the density on this part. I removed some notes
2. 01:24:167 (94,95) -since the drum stopped on 01:23:664 -,you may remove them. Removed
3. 03:17:463 (8,9,10,11,12,13) -you may increase the density here because futsuu has 1/2 patterns and muzu has 1/4 one.
4. 03:28:189 (21,22,23,24,25,26) -^ I inceased it a bit

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:51:988 -~00:55:843 -considering muzu already has some 1/4 triples but futsuu only contains one 1/2 triple, you may add k on 00:55:005 -and 00:55:508 -in order to make a little more short 1/2 patterns.
2. 01:05:396 (38,39,40) -^
3. 02:08:413 (16,17,18) -^
4. 03:21:485 (17,18,19) -^
5. 03:32:211 (44,45,46) -^
6. 02:48:636 -~ 02:59:195 -could make this part a little more denser, since kantan has some 1/1 patterns and muzu contains harder 1/2+1/4 patterns.(compare with kiai)
   
   All applied

[ Muzukashii]

1. 03:37:742 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) -how about changing to 1/1+1/2 dk kdk kdkdk to follow instrument and vocal more precisely? Yeah, it's better, applied

[ Inner Oni]

1. 01:35:396 -~ 01:36:234 -how about using this sv step up (https://i.imgur.com/p1B5OCb.png) to make smooth sv change? That's better, applied

good map in overall, but the difficulty gap could decrease a bit between futsuu and muzu . you may add a little more short 1/2 pattern when muzu has 1/4+1/2 patterns and Kantan has 4/1+2/1 patterns. you can call me back for recheck after find 2~3 mod I'll try my best, thanks!
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~

ARGENTINE DREAM wrote:

Modv1! \(♥.♥)/

Spread mod as requested!

[Kantan]

00:45:619 - add k, important beat

*******CHORUSˇ
00:47:630 - add k for a nicer curve

00:50:982 - add k for density balance (you have 1/2 in futsuu here) (may as well add k here 00:50:312 - )

00:55:005 - add k for curve

00:56:681 - add k for lower density gap

00:58:357 - add k for curve

01:01:038 - add k -density- then 01:02:044 - change to d consistency

01:05:731 - add k -curve-
*******CHORUS^

01:46:625 - add k -curve-

*chorus

02:48:301 - add k -density-

*chorus

03:55:340 - add k -density-

Snap last spinner ending to 04:04:390 like every other diff.

[Futsuu]

00:10:759 - add k for spread consistency with muzukashii, also, this is a very important beat not to have it marked.

00:22:323 - add k for better spread curve, then go to kantan and add k here 00:22:156 -

00:32:714 - Add k for a better spread curve, then go to Kantan and add k here 00:32:882 -

00:33:720 - add d for rhythm consistency with the same sound in next bars

00:40:927 - add d in both Futsuu and Kantan

*********CHORUSˇ

00:52:994 - add k for a lower density gap with muzu, then add k in kantan in 00:52:658 -

01:07:910 - add k for lower density with muzu, then add k here in kantan 01:07:742 -

01:18:636 - add k for lower density gap, then add k in kantan in 01:18:468 -

*********CHORUS^

01:36:066 - add k for lower density gap, then add k in kantan in 01:35:899 -

*chorus
*chorus

The parts where I put *chorus is that you have to do the same balancing I pointed out in the first chorus :p

Great map btw! Good luck with rank! ♥

ARGENTINE DREAM wrote:

I'm back

Spread fine-tuning:


Kantan:


01:18:133 - add k here or 1/1 [kk]

02:54:670 - move to 02:55:005 -

Sections lacking enough rest moments.


Delete following notes:


Muzukashii:

00:52:323 -
01:03:049 -

02:06:066 -
02:16:792 -

02:50:144 -
02:51:820 - dele this d and change 02:51:988 - to d

03:19:139 -
03:29:865 -

salu2

ARGENTINE DREAM wrote:

Let 2012 rest in peace...