I played this song and it felt very fun, with the SV adding some sort of challenge. Here's my mod on Another cus it's the only thing I played :3
- credit to Donotmess for some of these finds
<3@ You're missing singles 00:03:892 - and 00:04:128 - I'd understand if there were SV, but there isn't.
^ Missing 00:06:405 - and 00:06:562 - <(more apparent)
^ Missing 00:08:918 - and 00:09:075 - <(definitely more apparent)
^ Missing 00:11:353 - and 00:11:431 - and 00:11:588 - (pure 1/4)
^ Missing 00:13:944 - and 00:14:101 -
^ Missing 00:16:615 -
^ Missing 00:18:971 - and 00:19:128 - 00:19:206 - <(you mapped 00:19:756 (19756|1,19834|0) -)
earlier version, i did map it but later on i feel that it's hard to read rather than jumpstream itself, i made player like me testplay it they always fail at that first part. concerning this is the first part of the map that should not be hardest whole song so i delete them all. I missed the singles, but yeah they are intended@ 00:04:206 (4206|0,4206|2,4206|1,4363|2,4363|0,4363|1) - and 00:06:719 (6719|0,6719|2,6719|1,6876|2,6876|1,6876|3) - are the same sounds, yet one is different than the other, line 00:06:876 (6876|3,6876|2,6876|1) - up with 00:06:719 (6719|0,6719|2,6719|1) -
@ 00:05:463 (5463|3) - Perhaps add SV stutter here at 1/8 to add more emphasis on that unique sound.
i dont like to add more SV@ 00:05:777 - feels very weak to me, perhaps making this a double would serve more purpose to be an entrance note, try
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11266639smh 4*map shouldn't have this pattern imo@ 00:09:625 (9625|1) - isn't at all very noticeable once you slow it down to even 25%
@ How come you mapped 00:09:704 (9704|2,9782|3) - but not 00:10:096 -
@ Ghost note 00:10:725 (10725|0) - Ghost note 00:13:238 (13238|1) -
@ 00:12:845 (12845|0,12845|1) - should be a different double and not the same as 00:12:688 (12688|0,12688|1) - since different sounds
@ This SV at 00:22:740 - serves no purpose, and it doesn't even show on play
@ Missing light drum which you've mapped some of it, but need all of it 00:24:075 - 00:24:861 - 00:25:332 - 00:25:489 - 00:26:117 - 00:26:274 - 00:26:588 - 00:27:374 - 00:27:845 - 00:28:002 - 00:28:316 - 00:28:473 - 00:28:630 - 00:29:101 - 00:29:887 - 00:30:358 - 00:30:515 - 00:31:143 - 00:31:300 - 00:32:243 - and so on in 00:34:049 - to 00:43:002 -
I intended to skip for 1 first light drum on my pattern, not big problem. this makes an easier pattern@ wrong length 00:27:766 (27766|3) - make 1/2
no it isn't wrong @ You can use some sicker Burst SV here at 00:31:536 - to 00:31:850 - to really emphasis that transition.
i dont have to make it hard@Missing 00:41:039 - and make 00:41:117 (41117|3) - a double and missing 00:41:117 (41117|3) - and missing 00:41:117 (41117|3) - missing alot of light drum, follow light drum suggestion.
@ Missing some cool chance to add 00:44:101 - 00:54:154 - some sick LN play from the vocals, I recommend doing so because this section is literally just 10 seconds of "boring" Another reason, is your Another and Hyper are literally the same patterning with just 1 long stroke of LN, so I SUPER recommend you to map the vocals in this section in Another.
@ Useless SV at 01:03:107 -, remove it and make 01:02:950 - .50x, then 01:03:735 - to 01:04:206 - use 1/8 to clean the SV transition between your .75x 1.00x 1.25x
@ Make 01:21:327 (81327|1,81327|2) - single LN and change 01:21:641 (81641|0) - to LN
@ Better distinguish 01:04:206 - to 01:04:520 - the SV here feels like it the 1.25x stretches more than it should, attempt changing it, so you don't have to use the same SV for 01:09:232 - to 01:09:546 - which is a completely different transition.
@Add some powerful SV burst to this SV at 01:13:630 - to 01:14:259 - feels weird to not exaggerate the burst here 01:13:630 (73630|3,73630|1) -
@ 01:31:536 - to 01:45:986 - perhaps just make this section without these 01:28:237 (88237|1) - because you only really map like, 1/4th of the piano in this section, you should either map all the piano with that LN, or not map the piano with no LN,
@ Make 01:39:389 (99389|0,99389|3,99860|3,99860|0) - a different double than 01:40:331 (100331|3,100331|0) - to give distinction
@ 01:47:085 - to 01:47:557 - can have more 1/8 SV to better transition the slow at a more clean pace.
@ 01:47:557 - to 01:47:871 - you should attempt a slow to very fast entrance SV to really give emphasis on that transition to the kiai section.
@ 01:59:180 - to 02:00:279 - you should make this even more powerful, I barely notice any burst, exaggerate them even more. "also may I say, 01:59:965 - this sound is weird in the song lmao."
@ 02:07:975 - 02:28:080 - rip cool mapping ending, instead of "not" mapping it probably due to it being "boring" cus it's just all vocal, abuse it. Try some sick, tricky LN structure to trip up some players, it would be the same as 00:44:101 - to 00:54:154 - where these both can be the LN part of this chart where it'll really test the players finger independence.
Hyper@ 01:51:483 (111483|0) - should be just like 01:50:384 (110384|1,110384|2,110541|1) - or 01:49:284 (109284|0,109284|2,109441|2) - because you start your 2 note jack whenever the 3 repeating notes begin
^Same here 01:54:311 (114311|2,114311|0,114468|1) -
^Same here 02:01:379 (121379|1,121379|0,121536|3) -
^Same here 02:03:892 (123892|2,123892|3,124049|0) -
^This 2 note jack 02:04:520 (124520|2,124677|2) - needs to be moved down one for consistency
@ 02:05:148 (125148|0,125305|0) - This needs to not be a 2 note jack, and this does need to be a 2 two jack 02:05:462 (125462|2,125462|3,125619|1) -
^ Make 2 note jack 02:06:405 (126405|2,126405|3,126562|0) -