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BoatKrab
You're still a god
god d*mn <3
Nyukai
as promised, i guess

Hard

  1. 00:53:684 (4) - u missed NC i think ><
Insane

  1. 00:35:384 (2,3,4,5,6) - it's hard to notice 2 has a different snap, maybe try to make the stream closer? i guess this could be kinda hard for just an insane
Extra

  1. why huge CS :(
  2. 00:47:384 (4) - i saw it kinda weird, what do you think if you ctrl+g this? i honestly think it's awesome
  3. 01:25:784 (4) - same here?
no need to kd JUST TEACH ME HOW TO MAP QWQ
Topic Starter
Shadren
Djulus' mod

Djulus wrote:

Extra

00:46:784 (1,4) - Сtrl+G? лучше фолловит музыку и лучше выглядит. не думаю, но 00:46:784 (1) - ctrl-Gшнул
01:15:584 (1,2,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8757891 почему бы и нет? тоже думаю, нет, так как АР позволяет прочитать такой контраст, да и по-твоему будет немного диковато для спейсинга
хорошо замапано и тут чего можно сложно найти для таких как Я но я думаю что тут нет никаких лишних ошибок и почти готов к ранку.
Удачи.

Nyukai's mod

Nyukai wrote:

as promised, i guess

Insane

  1. 00:35:384 (2,3,4,5,6) - it's hard to notice 2 has a different snap, maybe try to make the stream closer? i guess this could be kinda hard for just an insane oki, kust made 2 closer
Extra

[list][*]why huge CS :( cause i like :)

no need to kd JUST TEACH ME HOW TO MAP QWQ

Thanks for mods, deleted = fixed
NeilPerry
Yay!

General: Not sure your deep blue combocolour fits to BG and colours for red sb parts too. You always free to call me for combohexing your map buddy!

Extra:
00:29:084 (2,3) - that kind of rythm seems unconsistence and weird to me. I feel like blue ticks 00:29:234 - 00:31:634 - should be clickable as here 00:34:034 (2) -
01:29:984 (1) - I catched your idea to follow previously rythm with reverse slider but anyway it should be more jumpy same as here 01:34:784 (1,2,1,2) - lol

Insane:
01:29:984 (1) - beats on reverse deserve to be clickable as well

Hard:
00:35:384 (2) - guess you missed clap here

Normal:
00:13:184 (4) - dat kind of undermap in your normal diff doesnt fit to your overall rythmic. Something like that should work better http://puu.sh/AmB21/11e544c074.jpg
00:57:434 - sliderend should be muted as in top diffs
01:35:834 - same
00:57:584 - Rythm of this section seems to me didnt give enough effort. Plz recheck your rythm of this part.
sahuang
canw e rank thi s
Topic Starter
Shadren
NeilPerry's mod

NeilPerry wrote:

Yay!

General: Not sure your deep blue combocolour fits to BG and colours for red sb parts too. You always free to call me for combohexing your map buddy!

Extra:
00:29:084 (2,3) - that kind of rythm seems unconsistence and weird to me. I feel like blue ticks 00:29:234 - 00:31:634 - should be clickable as here 00:34:034 (2) - I don't think so, cause this rythm dhould be as simple as possible before kiai time
01:29:984 (1) - I catched your idea to follow previously rythm with reverse slider but anyway it should be more jumpy same as here 01:34:784 (1,2,1,2) - lol
yeah, I catched your idea too, but need some rest after jumps, anyway will try to think about it
Insane:
01:29:984 (1) - beats on reverse deserve to be clickable as well fixed

Hard:
00:35:384 (2) - guess you missed clap here here it is

Normal:
00:13:184 (4) - dat kind of undermap in your normal diff doesnt fit to your overall rythmic. Something like that should work better http://puu.sh/AmB21/11e544c074.jpg fixed
00:57:434 - sliderend should be muted as in top diffs fixed
01:35:834 - same fixed
00:57:584 - Rythm of this section seems to me didnt give enough effort. Plz recheck your rythm of this part. It's all okaay
Topic Starter
Shadren

sahuang wrote:

canw e rank thi s
Yeah, why not. Waiting for NeilPerry hexing and coloring Combo, then go =)
NeilPerry
ITS A TRAP
sahuang
Meta

Hard
00:56:984 (1,3) - avoid overlap
Please use 1/8 reverse slider in Hard diff, not 1/16

Insane and Extra are okay but they are extremely alike...i saw many similar placements, just copy pasta..00:19:184 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
and a lot of ctrl+HJ stuff dont feel its right
Topic Starter
Shadren

sahuang wrote:

Meta

Hard
00:56:984 (1,3) - avoid overlap fixed
Please use 1/8 reverse slider in Hard diff, not 1/16 fixed

Insane and Extra are okay but they are extremely alike...i saw many similar placements, just copy pasta..00:19:184 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
and a lot of ctrl+HJ stuff dont feel its right nah, it isnt copypasted. Just well structured map with similar design
sahuang
ok fine, meta tho? otherwise im fine with it
NeilPerry
Topic Starter
Shadren

sahuang wrote:

ok fine, meta tho? otherwise im fine with it

Oh, sorry, didn't saw osu notification. NeilPerry wrote source meta above :)
sahuang
Ya looks fine to me.
Topic Starter
Shadren
thanks, sahu~
Namki
акшуал бпм 200 сори юр мап вуд би нукед

01:05:984 - сюда хс, потому что оутстандинг звук
01:10:984 - это звучит, будто там быстрых 1/12 звука. Надо же там выделить этот 1/3, чтоб не звучало как 1/4, предлагаю на реверс и на слайдеренд поставить софт самплесет с вистлами, ибо этот хсы вместе со звуком на 1/2 перебивает вообще весь 1/3. Сейм тута 00:32:384 (1) - .

А еще такая хуйня, что 00:25:034 - начинается типа новая станза, а ты никак не выделяешь это, давай че-то по типу софтового вистла или ватевер ты там найдешь. Ну и это вот по всей мапе идет 00:20:234 - / 00:22:634 - и так далее.

Работай, потом позовешь.
Topic Starter
Shadren

Namki wrote:

акшуал бпм 200 сори юр мап вуд би нукед

01:05:984 - сюда хс, потому что оутстандинг звук добавил
01:10:984 - это звучит, будто там быстрых 1/12 звука. Надо же там выделить этот 1/3, чтоб не звучало как 1/4, предлагаю на реверс и на слайдеренд поставить софт самплесет с вистлами, ибо этот хсы вместе со звуком на 1/2 перебивает вообще весь 1/3. Сейм тута 00:32:384 (1) - . сделал

А еще такая хуйня, что 00:25:034 - начинается типа новая станза, а ты никак не выделяешь это, давай че-то по типу софтового вистла или ватевер ты там найдешь. Ну и это вот по всей мапе идет 00:20:234 - / 00:22:634 - и так далее. сделол

Работай, потом позовешь.
Namki
нукед
Topic Starter
Shadren

Namki wrote:

нукед
Ара ты чооо синий неверный с прогиба
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Shmiklak
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