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consistency is a social construct tbh
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- Bookmarks and preview point are unsnapped, looks ugly :/
- I think the offset should change one more around here. You can find the notes are showed after the sound are did, like 01:25:662 (85662|2) - . maybe another bpm changing exists. You should fix it, it's important. Not only for this, but all diff. 00:32:662 (32662|3,32880|2) - Must not be snapped like this.
- 00:41:880 - storyboard hitsound is wrongly placed. it should be 00:41:912 -
- 00:48:912 - you should add C#6S_Db6S_s.wav at storyboard.
- 00:56:849 - storyboard hitsound is wrongly placed. it should be 00:56:912 -
- 00:57:099 - storyboard hitsound is wrongly placed. it should be 00:57:162 -
- 00:57:880 - storyboard hitsound is wrongly placed. it should be 00:57:912 -
- 01:13:162 - 01:21:162 - simple double structure, but little bit hard for easy. For example, 01:14:662 (74662|6,74662|4,75162|3,75162|5) - that makes player use their right hand heavily, it's not suitable for this diff. It's even harder than Normal, where the notes are placed col 3,6 to col 2,5.
01:15:662 - and 01:16:662 - are different pitch, but they are placed at same col, it looks awkward tho.
You should rearrange this part as easy diff should do. - 02:29:162 - 02:33:162 - yeah 1/1 spider-like double stair, one blank col is placed between two notes at same timing, I don't recommend you to make it at easy diff, even kiai. It's not harder than previous part, two or three blank col are placed between two notes like 02:09:162 - 02:29:162 - . Please make this as previous thing, with pitch releavance.
- You hitsounded at storyboard for balance with other diff when there isn't any notes unlike upper diff was, but
- 00:17:162 - 00:33:162 - literally same structure with last diff, there are background melody notes at same col as 00:17:162 (17162|0,17662|0) - , main melody notes as 00:17:412 (17412|2,17662|4,17912|6) - , but you put the notes for background melody only at Easy diff. For gap between Easy and Sky Rabbit, you should nerf this part.
- 00:32:880 - it should be single, just a piano tho? Last diff has single for it.
- 00:41:162 - 01:13:162 - What? I can't understand what you did, there are many inconsistency issue here.
00:41:162 - one note for background melody, but 00:45:162 - it's double.
00:41:912 - background + main melody here so double, but 00:44:912 - 00:48:912 - it's single.
00:46:912 (46912|2,47162|2) - 00:50:162 (50162|1,50412|1) - pretty randomly placed at same col.
00:56:912 (56912|1,56912|5,57162|5,57162|1) - suddenly appeared double jump.
You should recheck this part more.. - 01:21:162 - 01:53:162 - LNs are placed pretty similar with last diff. 01:40:162 (100162|2,100412|3,100912|1,101162|2) - are same structure with last diff and placed too closely unlike the pitch progress. There are more space rather than sky rabbit, so you can focus on PR more tho
Please rearrange this part more pitch-like :p - 02:07:912 (127912|0) - rearrange this more pitch-like, how about col 5?
- 02:08:162 - where is the melody LN?
- 02:45:162 - 02:52:740 - For outro, I recommend to focus main melody only, yeah just single. there are fade-out effect, so other notes should be deleted tho.
- 02:46:251 (166251|2) - idk what is this, literally ghost tho
- 01:21:162 - 01:53:162 - there are some inconsistency issue.
01:28:662 (88662|6) - I can't find some reason for this, why it should be placed here unlike 01:21:662 - 01:22:662 - and more? I'm sure, it's just same.
main melody - 01:28:162 (88162|2,88412|5,88662|4,88912|3) -
background melody - 01:28:162 (88162|0,88162|6,88662|2,88912|2) -
I agree 01:28:168 - has heavy sound so it should be double, but I don't have same mind at 01:28:662 - . It should be just single note with single LN.
Many same issue are here, you should check more. - 01:52:912 - rather than just storyboard hitsound, please delete it and add one LN at this. my example is here
- 01:53:162 - 02:09:162 - inconsistency!
01:53:662 - I can't understand it should be double, it has not any additional sound except main melody. 01:53:412 - and 01:53:912 - has background melody but it's not!
01:53:162 - triple but 01:54:162 - double
01:56:162 (116162|6) - should be placed until 01:57:162 - , like others.
01:59:412 - double but 01:55:412 - single
aaaaa too many! you should check about consistency, tbh. - 02:09:162 - 02:33:162 - hmm..
the concept is 02:09:162 - 02:09:662 - one heavy chord, 02:09:662 - 02:10:162 - chord with 1/2 LNs. and it is heavier at 02:17:162 - , and lighter at 02:25:162 -
But,
02:19:162 (139162|6) - then it should be long size, not 1/2.
02:23:683 - one more LN should be long size. - 02:33:162 - 02:41:162 - and 02:41:162 - 02:45:162 - should be different concept, you can change the LN length longer at first part to emphasis the background melody
- 02:45:162 - 02:52:740 - same opinion with Hard, just single :p
consistency is a social construct tbh