Just some general concerns about the buildup to the chorus.
03:33:902 - I don't really think that this beat is worth ignoring.The sound is literally the same as 03:34:569 (2) -, listen to them at a 50% playback rate.
03:38:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe a little curve to emphasize the change in rhythm? Throughout the entirety of this stream, you've chosen to change the flow a little bit whenever a new sound comes in, except for this one. Why? How is that sound 03:38:291 (4,5) - less important than the rest? You've made it look like there was no change in music whatsoever, just like in 03:39:180 (4,5) -, where the sound you're emphasizing in the entire section isn't present. On the other hand, 03:39:625 (4,5) - this change in flow is too sudden and unexpected compared to the rest of your patterns in that section.
03:33:902 - I don't really think that this beat is worth ignoring.The sound is literally the same as 03:34:569 (2) -, listen to them at a 50% playback rate.
03:38:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe a little curve to emphasize the change in rhythm? Throughout the entirety of this stream, you've chosen to change the flow a little bit whenever a new sound comes in, except for this one. Why? How is that sound 03:38:291 (4,5) - less important than the rest? You've made it look like there was no change in music whatsoever, just like in 03:39:180 (4,5) -, where the sound you're emphasizing in the entire section isn't present. On the other hand, 03:39:625 (4,5) - this change in flow is too sudden and unexpected compared to the rest of your patterns in that section.