Moecho wrote:

Kisses wrote:

Moecho

1. 00:06:762 (1) - Increase volume to match Extra pls. I think the volume in that diff is more appropriate ~
   Not sure exactly what you mean, but I tried to change it to similar as Extra now.
2. 00:32:332 (7,1) - Make these objects a bit more visible, the perfect underlap makes it very tricky to read. How about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9482961
   I think it's fine. Your suggestion doesn't match with the overall style for this map.
3. 00:52:617 (3,4) - It felt really weird to me that you spaced these so closed when the other kicksliders werent. Eg 00:52:928 (1,2) - and 00:53:239 (1,2) -
   These are not meant to be same pattern. And if you listen closely to 00:52:617 (3,4) - , 00:52:928 (1,2) - and 00:53:239 (1,2) - , these 00:52:617 (3,4) - are not as isolated in the music, there are much more background instrument sounds on this. Also note the NCing.
4. 01:04:897 (2) - same as Insane
   Okay.
5. 01:13:602 (2) - I think deleting this would be really nice because it would give a lot more emphasis to the finish at 01:13:446 (1) , it would reflect the music better instead of just having 1/2 jumps everywhere . If you don't like the 1/1 gap how about turning 01:13:446 (1) - into a 1/2 slider instead?
   Considerable, but keeping for now. It's not just 1/2 jumps everywhere, this section was intended to be like a middle section of something, preparing for an end but doesn't really aim to follow anything very specifically. It might look like that if you don't feel this way. Kind of like this section after here 01:23:395 (1) - where it doesn't follow anything specifically either but I've reused the pentagons for the same melody as intro and pre-outro.
6. 01:26:037 (2) - same as above
   Removing this note would make very little sense. And it would be extremely awkward to skip the loud lead melody in the song here.
7. 01:23:395 (1) - You don't need 1,2 NC spams here. 1,2,3,4 combos fit the jumps better
   The pentagons are already 1,2,3,4 though? The rest are 1,2 because of the simple reason to improve readability and separate the pentagons from the rest...
8. 01:28:291 (2) - Move timing point to the end of the slider
   Why though?..

Kisses wrote:

General

1. https://i.imgur.com/lKwCbjV.png Is the hitsound in this folder used? >re-download again, it didn't exist in my version.
2. Sorry but the difference between your Normal and Hard is too big. You're going to need an advanced diff in between >I try to ask Chaoz, he give me some advice for that

Easy

1. 00:03:809 (5) - NC
2. 00:05:053 (1) - imho the spinner doesn't fit the song and there isn't enough recovery time for 00:10:027 (1) . Recommend to delete Spinner or end it at 00:06:296 >fixed

Normal

1. 00:05:053 (1) - Same as easy
2. 00:55:415 (1) - delete so there is more recovery time after spinner >I want to keep it, it doesn't touch rule and I think it's fine for recovery time

Hard

1. 00:04:975 (1) - end first spinner at 00:06:296 cos that's where the sound is
2. 00:06:296 (1) - Increase volume to 40% like in extra.You don't need it this low
3. Turn on stacking and try to fix spacing for some objects
   00:26:503 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9482845
   00:44:224 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9482850

Insane

1. 00:06:296 (1) - same as hard
2. 01:04:897 (2) - Increase volume of timing point to 80%
3. 01:08:161 (4) - Slider shape doesn't fit in with the rest of the map imo. How about a different shape?

Expert

1. 00:06:296 (1) - same as hard
2. 01:04:897 (2) - same as insane

Extra

1. 00:34:586 - Reducing the volume feels weird because it reduces the feedback a lot. Recommend to delete timing point
2. 01:04:897 (2) - same as insane

Kisses wrote:

Get Chaoslitz to say what he thinks about the spread between Normal and Hard

IRC from QQ

小m 下午 05:27:28
超市啊
小m 下午 05:27:36
昨天說的那張
小m 下午 05:27:56
N跟H你還是幫我看看有哪邊要改
小m 下午 05:28:17
現在我看差距又更大了
小m 下午 05:28:25

小m 下午 05:28:25

Chaoz no req 下午 05:42:03
好
小m 下午 05:43:00


Chaoz no req 下午 06:16:28
orz你hard用少點三連就好
Chaoz no req 下午 06:18:01
隨便刪了些藍線note都跌到這了
小m 下午 06:19:47
幫我挑幾個能刪的連打
小m 下午 06:20:04
我看看能保留原味多少
Chaoz no req 下午 06:20:23
刪些不明顯的就好啊
Chaoz no req 下午 06:21:05
留些明顯的音例如00:49:742 (5) -
小m 下午 06:22:16
好
小m 下午 06:25:15

Chaoz no req 下午 06:25:51

小m 下午 06:29:12
再幫我挑一個出來
小m 下午 06:29:31
讓我知道超市的強大
小m 下午 06:29:48
根本無法同台競技.jpg
Chaoz no req 下午 06:32:12

Chaoz no req 下午 06:32:38
01:18:032 (2) - ?
小m 下午 06:32:58

小m 下午 06:32:58

小m 下午 06:33:00

小m 下午 06:33:06
牛逼
Chaoz no req 下午 06:33:08

Moecho wrote:

Kisses wrote:

1. 01:23:395 (1) - You don't need 1,2 NC spams here. 1,2,3,4 combos fit the jumps better
   The pentagons are already 1,2,3,4 though? The rest are 1,2 because of the simple reason to improve readability and separate the pentagons from the rest..
   Is the separation necessary? Also 1,2,3,4 combos seem perfectly readable to me
   
   
2. 01:28:291 (2) - Move timing point to the end of the slider
   Why though?..
   Because it's unrankable to silence both the sliderslide and slidertick at the same time (5% is the same as silence)

Kisses wrote:

red = must change

General
Expert is hp 6 and Extra and Moecho is 5.5? Change hp of Expert to 5.5 or Extra and Moecho to 6 >fixed (Extra 5.7, Moecho 5.9)

Normal
00:05:053 (1) - Add break after spinner like the other diffs >I forget it
00:33:654 (1) - I think turning this into 2 circles would fit the song better
00:55:415 (1) - Sorry but I don't want to rank without deleting this. There just isn't enough recovery time after the spinner imho >fine. but I still don't know how different it is.

Hard
00:34:275 (3) - do this? https://i.imgur.com/BozJHY7.png Would make it a bit easier. Up to you
00:47:954 (3,4) - make a 1/1 gap like 00:45:467 (2,3) - ? https://i.imgur.com/dfZ7bvZ.png

Moecho
00:06:762 (1) - start spinner on blue tick so it's same as Extra?
Delete these timing points 00:53:084 , 00:53:161 , 00:53:239 . There is no need to gradually decrease the volume here in your diff

[]w ~

Kisses wrote:

red = must change

General
Expert is hp 6 and Extra and Moecho is 5.5? Change hp of Expert to 5.5 or Extra and Moecho to 6

Moecho
00:06:762 (1) - start spinner on blue tick so it's same as Extra?
The rhythm is not same for Extra and Negai, so starting it on a blue tick would not be a better choice. My spinner is starting on where the vocal starts, we follow different elements in the song.
Delete these timing points 00:53:084 , 00:53:161 , 00:53:239 . There is no need to gradually decrease the volume here in your diff
I removed the second one since it was on a blue tick. But this volume change is necessary to express the different instruments here.

[]w ~

Moecho wrote:

Kisses wrote:

1. 01:23:395 (1) - You don't need 1,2 NC spams here. 1,2,3,4 combos fit the jumps better
   The pentagons are already 1,2,3,4 though? The rest are 1,2 because of the simple reason to improve readability and separate the pentagons from the rest..
   Is the separation necessary? Also 1,2,3,4 combos seem perfectly readable to me
   Yes, for me it is necessary. I do not prefer not separating them. Would be a pain to my eyes and it's not what I want it to be.
   
   
2. 01:28:291 (2) - Move timing point to the end of the slider
   Why though?..
   Because it's unrankable to silence both the sliderslide and slidertick at the same time (5% is the same as silence)
   Fixed by shortening the slider time so the tick doesn't even appear anymore. It was painful to hear that tick tbh...

Kisses wrote:

Fix tags in Moecho's diff ~



Also, is the link in your map description the source?

Kisses wrote:

you will have to delete the silent spinnerspin.wav from the folder because it's unrankable

do that and I can bubble ~

Chaoslitz wrote:

裝逼少女

[General]

1. 00:09:716 - 01:18:110 - 這裡可以加clap >OK
2. 話說這bg畫質有點悲劇 >其他的版本也是一樣...

[Easy]

1. 00:47:332 (1,2) - 可以再放右點, 現在00:48:420 (2) - 的尾和00:47:332 (1) - 很近 >OK

[Normal]

1. 00:34:897 (1,2) - 1/1的最好不要疊上, 新手會跟1/2的stack搞亂

牛逼

Chaoslitz wrote:

裝逼少女

[Moecho]

1. 00:49:353 (2,3) - 先1/4滑條再note? 現在打起來有點卡手 >我覺得海星