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Mania 4k Collab
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Mania 4k Collab
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  • 04:11:207 (251207|1,251207|3,251207|2) - I think remove |2| here as 3-note seems too over the top. It would still be emphasised by the jack, plays nicer leading in into the next section, so it is stronger with 3 notes
  • 04:45:370 (285370|3,285448|2,285527|1,285605|3,285605|0) - I think you should continue this through 04:45:605 - here there really isn't anything there though, the 1/4 ends at the current location
  • 05:16:705 - This section should really be the same as 05:06:652 - , they sound identical. I don't think intensity should decrease it is true the collab of the other diff differs, but the progression of slowing down differs between them, this one is leaning more towards the increasing slowdown shown in the ctb and std as well

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Thanks for looking though, Unmei Muma will reply to the rest soon!
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Answering points on Sayaka-'s parts as per his request

Toehoe wrote:
Mania 4k Collab
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  • 02:04:453 - 02:09:480 - I think you should have 1/2 notes on both, instead of 1/1 then 1/2 while the idea is good in essence, i'd like to keep the current pattern to show a buildup instead of having the same density throughout.
  • 02:50:946 - I suggest adding 3-note chords on 1/1 for emphasis on heavy sound for this part done
  • 03:06:652 - make it more like 03:09:480 ? changed the pattern of the beginning a bit to fit more what was done a bit later
  • 03:16:705 - Same here. I think the LN section should match the music more, right now I don't think it fits at all changed to 1/2 LNs
  • 03:37:438 - 03:39:951 - I think 3-note chords would be good here i would rather keep the current structure as it is building up - the reason why it's not a handstream later is because well lol handstreams
  • 04:06:024 - I'm not sure about this part. It sounds like 04:06:338 - should be heavier. Maybe make LN end earlier and have a big chord? And add more jack? I think it definitely fits, but not sure how to add it likely to be caused by the change, but i shortened the LN@3 to give way to a double, even triple chord

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ty mate
https://www.dropbox.com/s/jqku68rxv4qlu ... D.osu?dl=0 it's easier to work with that to avoid conflicts so here's the diff with the parts where at least one thing changed
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It's about time this set got ranked.
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um why are there still replays and user rating from when it was loved
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Congratulations, neonat <3
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I thought about fixing mod and re do some patterns on my part ;q;
but congratulations btw, what a time to believe
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FOR THE LOVE OF GOD YOU DID IT
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Sinnoh wrote:
um why are there still replays and user rating from when it was loved

lol.

they will be wiped out anyways after rank
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You did it neonat!
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oh wow you did it lol
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aye congrats on rank, good song good map
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Thanks for all the support, especially those that did so from the beginning!
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