Hotaru Murasaki - Re:TrymenT · forum

Shiirn

Joined August 2010

Shiirn 2017-09-04T16:53:14+00:00

Garden wrote:
When 'improvements' in your eyes are made, probably the difficulty would simply go further from what the mapper wants to create in his initial mapping concept.

If the mapping concept is to badly represent the music, it has no place in ranked. Leave it as an unranked training diff. I don't think this concept is very hard.

This game is about music. You work with the music. You don't ignore it and do random "feeling" mapping that is closer to a child painting with their own poop than actual art.

There can be purpose and reason to feeling. Feelings are not random. They have logic. Thus, maps should have logic.

Syph

848 posts

Joined August 2014

Syph 2017-09-04T17:30:12+00:00

well like he kinda removed the diff so.. he is leaving it unranked? s:

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-09-04T17:38:42+00:00

Shiirn wrote:
You don't ignore it and do random "feeling"

Shiirn wrote:
Feelings are not random. They have logic. Thus, maps should have logic.

unless you clarify a bit more sone people won't understand what you truly mean

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Erisan 2017-09-05T04:57:39+00:00

Shiirn wrote:
Garden wrote:
When 'improvements' in your eyes are made, probably the difficulty would simply go further from what the mapper wants to create in his initial mapping concept.
If the mapping concept is to badly represent the music, it has no place in ranked. Leave it as an unranked training diff. I don't think this concept is very hard.

This game is about music. You work with the music. You don't ignore it and do random "feeling" mapping that is closer to a child painting with their own poop than actual art.

There can be purpose and reason to feeling. Feelings are not random. They have logic. Thus, maps should have logic.

yes, whatever you think that is your opinion. and we all have own opinions on stuff.
I'd respect your opinion but since its all about opinion there is no true answer.
you seems like think i'm wrong, but thats also means you can be wrong as well, since its just opinion.
random feeling? child painting?
your words are like you are criticizing any kind of creative stuff you don't like for shitty reason.
for example, i don't really like deathmetal songs. then i get right to criticize deathmetal songs?
well, i don't think so. but your words basically says i can criticize them because i can't understand their goodness
sounds not good for me so they are shit and must be changed.

you should really know that everyone feels different way. think why there are words like 'Preference'

And I don't want to using here to discuss this kind of stuff, if you have anything to say, PM me

Kinomi

1,221 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2017-09-06T14:51:13+00:00

I really suggest someone here being more strict to themselves and being more tolerant to others, it's wonderful to your life.
Actually deleting diffs for rank (or being tired) has nothing wrong with your strange self-esteem.
The truth is that responsibility always belongs to both sides of you, don't try to find ways to push all responsibility to the mapper.
That's why someone sucks.

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-09-16T15:40:07+00:00

Garden notified me of the reply.

[Cookiezi's Insane]
- 00:06:258 - Inaudible. I don't know what happened here but there is legitimately nothing on this.
- 00:33:732 - Still a bit questionable about skipping this.. how about: https://puu.sh/xBaDA/8bda42e9b6.png ?
- 00:36:258 (5,6) - Ctrl+G this rhythm to follow the vocals better?
- 00:46:679 - This is quite a strong beat. Perhaps you can make this clickable with ctrl+g on 00:46:521 (4,1) - ?
- 00:58:205 (1) - This could use more emphasis considering the kiai starts here. Probably more spacing would good.
- 00:58:363 (2,3) - More emphasis on 3 and less on 2 seems more appropriate. Something like https://puu.sh/xBaKq/61babd0115.png ?
- 01:03:890 (3) - Ctrl+g might play nicer to continue the circular flow. That would put more emphasis on 01:04:521 (1) - as well due to the flow change.

Much improvement it seems like. I'm okay with this going through now though this is just some extra stuff.

[Re:TraumenD]
- 01:06:258 - 01:06:890 - Inaudible. Probably due to the drum hitsound being too soft here? If I change it to soft it sounds fine so I'm not too sure what's wrong here but I can't hear it. Wait a sec.. is this supposed to have 35% volume?

There's some weird volume stuff going on lol.

The diffs in question are fine to me now, so take these suggestions as suggestions only. I'm lifting the veto, so feel free to get a rebubble from Garden. I wish you luck in further processing and thank you for your cooperation!

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Erisan 2017-09-16T16:15:50+00:00

Mir wrote:
Garden notified me of the reply.

[Cookiezi's Insane]
- 00:06:258 - Inaudible. I don't know what happened here but there is legitimately nothing on this.
- 00:33:732 - Still a bit questionable about skipping this.. how about: https://puu.sh/xBaDA/8bda42e9b6.png ?
- 00:36:258 (5,6) - Ctrl+G this rhythm to follow the vocals better?
- 00:46:679 - This is quite a strong beat. Perhaps you can make this clickable with ctrl+g on 00:46:521 (4,1) - ?
- 00:58:205 (1) - This could use more emphasis considering the kiai starts here. Probably more spacing would good.
- 00:58:363 (2,3) - More emphasis on 3 and less on 2 seems more appropriate. Something like https://puu.sh/xBaKq/61babd0115.png ?
- 01:03:890 (3) - Ctrl+g might play nicer to continue the circular flow. That would put more emphasis on 01:04:521 (1) - as well due to the flow change.

Much improvement it seems like. I'm okay with this going through now though this is just some extra stuff.

all fixed

[Re:TraumenD]
- 01:06:258 - 01:06:890 - Inaudible. Probably due to the drum hitsound being too soft here? If I change it to soft it sounds fine so I'm not too sure what's wrong here but I can't hear it. Wait a sec.. is this supposed to have 35% volume?

volume 35% → 20%　fixed　

There's some weird volume stuff going on lol.

The diffs in question are fine to me now, so take these suggestions as suggestions only. I'm lifting the veto, so feel free to get a rebubble from Garden. I wish you luck in further processing and thank you for your cooperation!

ty mir

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-09-16T16:28:49+00:00

eLy wrote:
volume 35% → 20%　fixed　

My point was more it should be audible so raise the volume instead of lowering it cuz:

Ranking Criteria wrote:
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense.

So increase 01:06:258 - to 70% like the others?

Also for Cookiezi's diff: 00:06:258 - was fine as a slider it was more for the hitsound volume like the topdiff.

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Erisan 2017-09-16T16:58:35+00:00

Mir wrote:
eLy wrote:
volume 35% → 20%　fixed　
My point was more it should be audible so raise the volume instead of lowering it cuz:

Ranking Criteria wrote:
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense.
So increase 01:06:258 - to 70% like the others?

Also for Cookiezi's diff: 00:06:258 - was fine as a slider it was more for the hitsound volume like the topdiff.

70% changed ~

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-09-26T10:05:55+00:00

I am not sure does vellya/alyce/5hiki remapped his diff into alyce's extra

But right now the package is kinda bugged as it appears the difficulty is not the latest version

i clicked on it and deletes the whole diff

maybe updating it again will help

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Erisan 2017-10-02T02:32:49+00:00

Firis Mistlud wrote:
I am not sure does vellya/alyce/5hiki remapped his diff into alyce's extra

But right now the package is kinda bugged as it appears the difficulty is not the latest version

i clicked on it and deletes the whole diff

maybe updating it again will help

~~updateしても改善されない・・・~~

修正済

Last edited by Erisan 2017-11-10T07:57:03+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-10-02T02:51:22+00:00

それは大変ですね。。。バグしたかもしれない

Jun Maeda

211 posts

Joined July 2016

Jun Maeda 2017-10-05T22:41:57+00:00

eLy good luck with ur amazing beatmap i hope ur beatmap will be ranked soon ♥♥♥

audinor

audinor 2017-10-29T19:13:01+00:00

holy

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-11-10T05:16:05+00:00

many of the new keysounding samples have a delay over 5ms: https://puu.sh/yiIoK/3ba5617907.png

modding assistant reports

Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
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drum-hitwhistle29.wav
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also 5hiki should be added to tags since the alyce/vellya diff mapper changed the name it seems

Easy:
01:33:732 (1) - seems you remove the old clap hitsound from the folder and the current default one sounds really weird here, use default whistle or sth else instead

rest looks ok

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Erisan 2017-11-10T07:37:20+00:00

Garden wrote:

many of the new keysounding samples have a delay over 5ms: https://puu.sh/yiIoK/3ba5617907.png

modding assistant reports

Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
drum-hitfinish52.wav
drum-hitwhistle29.wav
drum-hitwhistle32.wav
drum-hitwhistle37.wav
drum-hitwhistle50.wav
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fix

also 5hiki should be added to tags since the alyce/vellya diff mapper changed the name it seems

fix

Easy:
01:33:732 (1) - seems you remove the old clap hitsound from the folder and the current default one sounds really weird here, use default whistle or sth else instead

fix

rest looks ok

thank you for recheck Garden

!

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-11-10T10:43:18+00:00

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-11-10T11:02:37+00:00

mapset filesize is 31.7mb, I'm pretty sure it wouldn't be to hard to compress one or two backgrounds to keep it under the 30mb threshold?

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Erisan 2017-11-10T11:42:15+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
mapset filesize is 31.7mb, I'm pretty sure it wouldn't be to hard to compress one or two backgrounds to keep it under the 30mb threshold?

This is fine, but is it no good

?

I'm sorry if it was a rude sentence because I am using translation

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-11-10T13:21:03+00:00

Lets hope we don't get popped again (@@;)

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2017-11-11T11:39:53+00:00

pop soon

Friedii

Friedii 2017-11-25T12:38:17+00:00

This is a Good map <3

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-12-08T01:22:35+00:00

Top

00:07:363 (4,1) - decrease spacing like other 1/4 beats. like 00:09:890 (1,2)
01:32:942 - If you make this beat clickable it would play better
01:33:574 (5) - NC this to give more hp for spinner

Alyce

00:45:258 (3,1) - Hard to read this 1/4 slider because the spacing is so high
01:32:311 (2) - wave slider? It would look prettier imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713598

Rizia

hp 6

Momoka

01:36:100 (1) - delete finish and add whistle

Vellya

00:56:942 (1) - delete finish

Light Insane

00:56:784 (1) - extend slider to 00:57:574 . Then delete 00:57:574 (1) -
01:07:679 (4) - 2 circles would fit the rhythm better here

Wring

00:16:758 (2) - add normal sampleset
01:05:784 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make this easier
01:33:574 (5) - NC this to give more hp for spinner

Normal

01:12:574 - A circle here would play nicely
01:33:574 (3) - NC

Easy

00:05:153 (1) - Add reverse
00:55:679 (1,2) - delete these. Add spinner from 00:55:679 to 00:56:784 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713736
01:07:679 (2) - don't have the tail so close to 01:05:784 (1) . Hard to read for beginners
01:15:890 (1,2) - use this rhythm, much better for an easy https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713750
01:23:469 (1) - Extend to 01:24:100
01:31:048 (1) - I recommend using this rhythm https://i.imgur.com/Efyz2a6.png

Do all that and I rank

martyur

173 posts

Joined January 2017

martyur 2017-12-08T04:53:38+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Top
00:07:363 (4,1) - decrease spacing like other 1/4 beats. like 00:09:890 (1,2)
01:32:942 - If you make this beat clickable it would play better
01:33:574 (5) - NC this to give more hp for spinner
Alyce
00:45:258 (3,1) - Hard to read this 1/4 slider because the spacing is so high
01:32:311 (2) - wave slider? It would look prettier imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713598
Rizia
hp 6
Momoka
01:36:100 (1) - delete finish and add whistle
Vellya
00:56:942 (1) - delete finish
Light Insane
00:56:784 (1) - extend slider to 00:57:574 . Then delete 00:57:574 (1) -
01:07:679 (4) - 2 circles would fit the rhythm better here
Wring
00:16:758 (2) - add normal sampleset
01:05:784 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make this easier
01:33:574 (5) - NC this to give more hp for spinner
Normal
01:12:574 - A circle here would play nicely
01:33:574 (3) - NC
Easy
00:05:153 (1) - Add reverse
00:55:679 (1,2) - delete these. Add spinner from 00:55:679 to 00:56:784 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713736
01:07:679 (2) - don't have the tail so close to 01:05:784 (1) . Hard to read for beginners
01:15:890 (1,2) - use this rhythm, much better for an easy https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713750
01:23:469 (1) - Extend to 01:24:100
01:31:048 (1) - I recommend using this rhythm https://i.imgur.com/Efyz2a6.png
Do all that and I rank

Child says will rank finna sonic blast for that rank aMIRITE

Homura-

271 posts

Joined September 2010

Homura- 2017-12-08T08:53:07+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Normal
01:12:574 - A circle here would play nicely
follow vocals
01:33:574 (3) - NC
fix
Do all that and I rank

thanks Kisses
http://puu.sh/yBTS2.osu

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2017-12-08T09:03:26+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Wring
00:16:758 (2) - add normal sampleset
01:05:784 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make this easier
01:33:574 (5) - NC this to give more hp for spinner

k,thanks mod

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217,185,76363,2,0,L|226:108,1,70,2|0,0:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
298,213,76679,2,0,P|278:249|249:267,1,70,2|0,0:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
225,115,76995,6,0,P|286:89|359:104,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
394,193,77469,1,2,0:0:0:0:
486,161,77627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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386,348,78416,6,0,P|320:366|249:352,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
183,301,78890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,307,79205,2,0,L|172:380,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,266,79679,6,0,P|279:214|266:133,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,72,80153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,72,80311,2,0,B|170:78|170:78|129:63|129:63|83:69,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
30,135,80784,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,149,80942,6,0,L|94:304,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,351,81416,2,0,P|103:319|167:332,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,304,81890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
225,222,82048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,178,82205,6,0,P|332:121|321:50,2,140,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,332,83153,1,2,0:0:0:0:
127,158,83469,6,0,P|195:147|258:177,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,153,83942,2,0,B|345:204|345:204|322:233|322:233|330:283,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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163,243,84732,6,0,P|188:180|254:162,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,153,85205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,85363,2,0,P|329:94|258:62,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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331,199,87258,6,0,P|392:169|474:177,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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DeRandom Otaku

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DeRandom Otaku 2017-12-08T11:13:47+00:00

I am late ig

Erisan

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Erisan 2017-12-08T11:20:56+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
I am late ig

ooh sorry DeRandom Otaku T^T

ikaNyai

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ikaNyai 2017-12-08T11:40:47+00:00

：ｐR　aｙ：

Last edited by ikaNyai 2017-12-08T11:41:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

Erisan 2017-12-08T11:40:57+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Top
00:07:363 (4,1) - decrease spacing like other 1/4 beats. like 00:09:890 (1,2)
fix
01:32:942 - If you make this beat clickable it would play better
this slider is 「e」, not change
01:33:574 (5) - NC this to give more hp for spinner
fix
Alyce
00:45:258 (3,1) - Hard to read this 1/4 slider because the spacing is so high
It does not change, because it matches the strength of the song
01:32:311 (2) - wave slider? It would look prettier imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713598
i don't think so
Rizia
hp 6
fix
Momoka
01:36:100 (1) - delete finish and add whistle
fix
Vellya
00:56:942 (1) - delete finish
deleted finish → add clap (piano sound)
Light Insane
00:56:784 (1) - extend slider to 00:57:574 . Then delete 00:57:574 (1) -
fix
01:07:679 (4) - 2 circles would fit the rhythm better here
fix
Easy
00:05:153 (1) - Add reverse
fix
00:55:679 (1,2) - delete these. Add spinner from 00:55:679 to 00:56:784 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713736
00:55:679 - to 00:57:574 - changed
01:07:679 (2) - don't have the tail so close to 01:05:784 (1) . Hard to read for beginners
01:05:784 (1,2,3,4) - change rhythm
01:15:890 (1,2) - use this rhythm, much better for an easy https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713750
fix
01:23:469 (1) - Extend to 01:24:100
fix
01:31:048 (1) - I recommend using this rhythm https://i.imgur.com/Efyz2a6.png
fix
Do all that and I rank

updated, thank you Kisses !!