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Daryl Hall & John Oates - Adult Education

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Mafumafu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月1日 at 21:15:39

Artist: Daryl Hall & John Oates
Title: Adult Education
Tags: Rock 'N Soul Part 1 gta grand theft auto ost original soundtrack non stop pop fm
BPM: 91.4
Filesize: 2893kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.18 stars, 104 notes)
  2. Normal (1.73 stars, 118 notes)
Download: Daryl Hall & John Oates - Adult Education
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XLYqTZKEpvs
http://www.hallandoates.com/discography.html?dd_id=31
F D Flourite
吸吸
你这样很危险的/huaji
Topic Starter
Mafumafu

F D Flourite wrote:

吸吸
你这样很危险的/huaji
不危险,很稳
Plus4j
M4M

Easy
00:33:954 (2,4) - 這兩個靠太近了,分開點比較好看
00:46:098 (4,5) - 要不要換個樣子我覺得這樣不太好看(

Normal
這CS是不是有點小..
00:28:702 (2) - 某個QAT有跟我講Normal不要有太彎的滑條,要不要改個

超級水摸..
做的不差內容又少能摸啥毛..
Lobelia
[ Easy ]
00:04:578 - 是这样的,这里有一个很强的音,还是你开头对的那种BASE音效,不对上我觉得有点奇怪,但我自己试了几次感觉节奏都做不到比这个打着舒服的。。所以我觉得你可以给这个滑条拉点形状强调下重音?00:09:337 (3) - 类似↑,不过这个不太好改QWQ
00:06:711 (1,2) - 这两个一看就不是对称的,调整一下
00:46:098 (4,5) - 有点吃藕...弧度太大了,看着就不太好看做小点就还行,类似01:07:105 (4,5) - 就看着还可以

[ Normal ]
00:08:024 (3,4,5) - 这块FLOW差了点
[Kurose Riku]
(ง •̀ω•́)ง✧

[Easy]
那个widescreen support勾到了
00:21:810 (6) - 这个看着好像有点放歪了
00:40:847 (4,5,6) - 这组往左上移一点 6就够位子放好拉@w@
00:46:098 (4,5) - 有点挤 可以试试看把4往右上移一点 , 这样5和6的空间就比较多了
00:53:319 (6) - 感觉可以像后面00:55:945 (3) - 那样放
00:58:571 (6) - 这里也是放歪了 (如果是故意歪的请无视我(゚A゚;)..

[Normal]
00:19:184 (3,4) - 这里违和感挺重的.. 或许可以像前面那样放成三角形
01:03:495 (4,5) - 不跟前面一样叠着吗=w=?
01:08:746 (5,6) - ^


翻看了好几次 只摸到这些了;;
[ IWeenox ]
Hello m4m reply

[Easy]

00:21:810 (6) - could be better aligned
00:46:098 (4,5) - I think they 4 is going a little bit to much on top of 5 which doesn't look nice + could be misleading for newplayer imo
01:07:105 (4,5) - same
Overall a good diff :)

[Normal]

just a thought but as those sounds on these sliders are close 00:06:711 (1,1) - i feel like the pattern could be better organized i would recommend to do a better curve on 00:06:711 (1) - then rotate it to 180° (here is a screen for the exemple as it is quit difficult to explain https://puu.sh/ygcBv/976bf58d77.jpg)
01:20:726 (2) - i think you should lower a bit this slider to get it aligned to 01:20:234 (1) - as you make the player go to the top to instantly go to the bottom
01:31:230 (2) - same with this imo


That's all i could find hope it helps ! *Good music tho*
Prophecy
瓜子小哥哥,可不可以不摸ww
Topic Starter
Mafumafu

Prophecy wrote:

瓜子小哥哥,可不可以不摸ww
you don't have to
Dailycare
[Normal]
00:14:589 (5) - I strongly recommend making it 3/4. Because the strong drum sound is at 00:15:081 - , and there is plenty of time to recognize the distance with 00:16:230 (6) - .
00:25:092 (4) - Also I think this should be a 3/4, not repeat. But well, it fits anyway.
00:30:344 (4) - Just a minor suggestion, what about changing the circle to a 1/4 for following the drum?
01:44:031 (1) - Can you adjust the volume? The end is a bit noisy imo.

[Easy]
00:19:840 (4,5,6) - This has more complex pattern than Normal.
01:32:707 (3,4,5,6) - ^, Making some breaks would be better.
00:32:969 - ~ 01:11:700 - Um It's really monotonous that the pattern you used in this part. Change some sliders to a repeat 3/2 slider or remove a circle and make the previous slider to a 3/2
01:44:031 (1) - Same as Normal.


Actually it's not much to say. Short and simple mapset with a pretty cool song. hope this to be ranked.
Topic Starter
Mafumafu
@Hey lululu: 00:28:702 (2) - 某個QAT有跟我講Normal不要有太彎的滑條,要不要改個 Reply: 我觉得还可以 因为这个是直角的 而且也没有太多重叠

@Kurose Riku:
00:19:184 (3,4) - 这里违和感挺重的.. 或许可以像前面那样放成三角形 Reply: 稍改动了一下
01:03:495 (4,5) - 不跟前面一样叠着吗=w=? Reply: 不叠了 弄点花样 下同
01:08:746 (5,6) - ^

@[ IWeenox ]:
just a thought but as those sounds on these sliders are close 00:06:711 (1,1) - i feel like the pattern could be better organized i would recommend to do a better curve on 00:06:711 (1) - then rotate it to 180° (here is a screen for the exemple as it is quit difficult to explain https://puu.sh/ygcBv/976bf58d77.jpg)

Reply: I think i did it on purpose, because I need that flow-break to inform the players that, here comes a new part of the song.

Thank you! Others all fixed!
Mekki
OMFG! Thanks for mapping 80's songs!

I'd add ''v''; ''5'' and ''non stop pop fm'' to tags since this is where the song is pretty known for too.
F D Flourite
怎么这么怀旧啊

[General]
  1. combo color is tooooooooo simple =_=
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:589 (4) - 00:25:092 (4) - 这两个应该consistent
  2. 00:36:580 (5) - slider head is too soft to be clickable: http://puu.sh/yuiRk/d7201cb13b.jpg
  3. 00:46:098 (4,5,6) - ^ 滑条头正好在两个vocal中间,声音又轻,难听
  4. 01:43:538 (3) - 可以拆开
[Normal]
  1. 00:28:702 (2) - 00:12:947 (2) - 00:18:199 (2) - 00:23:451 (2) - add drum-finish on slidertail?
Topic Starter
Mafumafu

MkGuh wrote:

OMFG! Thanks for mapping 80's songs!

I'd add ''v''; ''5'' and ''non stop pop fm'' to tags since this is where the song is pretty known for too.

added non stop pop fm. v and 5 sounds useless because they are just single letters.

Also, All fixed except 01:43:538 (3) - 可以拆开 : I think it would be too hard to place two consecutive circles for this level of diff.

<3
F D Flourite
Oh look what you made me... wait wrong song
sahuang
irc mod

2017-12-01 20:54 sahuang: irc
2017-12-01 20:54 Regraz: okay!
2017-12-01 20:55 sahuang: np
2017-12-01 20:55 Regraz: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1438277 Daryl Hall & John Oates - Adult Education]
2017-12-01 20:59 sahuang: dl too slow
2017-12-01 20:59 sahuang: wtf
2017-12-01 20:59 Regraz: China featured network
2017-12-01 21:02 sahuang: true
2017-12-01 21:02 sahuang: zzzzzzzzzzzz
2017-12-01 21:03 Regraz: zzzz
2017-12-01 21:03 sahuang: cant even get supporter
2017-12-01 21:03 Regraz: cant either
2017-12-01 21:03 sahuang: ok opened
2017-12-01 21:03 Regraz: use inso.link
2017-12-01 21:04 Regraz: why not
2017-12-01 21:04 sahuang: cant open the get supporter page
2017-12-01 21:04 Regraz: same
2017-12-01 21:06 sahuang: 01:13:670 (5,6) -
2017-12-01 21:07 sahuang: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442163 Daryl Hall & John Oates - Adult Education [Easy]]
2017-12-01 21:07 sahuang: 01:14:326 (6) - seems more intense than 01:13:670 (5) - maybe 2 slider is not very proper
2017-12-01 21:08 Regraz: Hmm then what pattern would work better?
2017-12-01 21:08 sahuang: http://puu.sh/yxeg9/7ee739c917.jpg
2017-12-01 21:09 Regraz: loading puush zzz
2017-12-01 21:10 sahuang: zzzzzzzzz
2017-12-01 21:10 sahuang: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1438277 Daryl Hall & John Oates - Adult Education [Normal]]
2017-12-01 21:10 sahuang: 00:19:840 (5,6) - maybe parallel
2017-12-01 21:10 Regraz: Okay!
2017-12-01 21:11 sahuang: should be all
2017-12-01 21:11 sahuang: xd
2017-12-01 21:11 Regraz: oh rly?
2017-12-01 21:12 sahuang: yeah its so simple mapset
2017-12-01 21:12 sahuang: as long as ds and general aesthetics is okay
2017-12-01 21:12 Regraz: still loading puush lol
2017-12-01 21:12 sahuang: LOL
2017-12-01 21:14 Regraz: the only thing I wonder is the number of objects within these two diffs are approximately the same. May be an attack point when qualified
2017-12-01 21:16 Regraz: all fixed
2017-12-01 21:16 sahuang: should be ok
2017-12-01 21:17 Regraz: gonna post meta stuff on the creators words
2017-12-01 21:17 sahuang: yea
2017-12-01 21:17 Regraz: for references
Topic Starter
Mafumafu
Thank you! Updated
sahuang
Qualified
GoldenRose
i want hard and insane
loved <3
Kyouren

GoldenRose wrote:

i want hard and insane
loved <3
Congratulations! :3
Prophecy
Congraz.
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