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- 00:03:133 (5,6) - kinda sounds a bit overmapped here for the soft intro, would consinsider deleting these so you follow the piano for the intro to have a little less dense rhythm
- 00:11:375 (1) - could use some more emphasis like you do for the other cymbals in this section, currently really low spacing and in the flow of (5,6,7) still
- 00:24:232 (5) - would be nice if this was a bit differnt then the rest of this section so that unique cymbal crash stands out a bit
- 00:30:166 (2) - bit weird extended slider here when theres a really strong vocal on the red tick, those extended sliders would fit better at 00:28:847 (2,3,4) - imo when theres nothing really on the red tick, could maybe swap the rhythms here
- 00:50:276 (5,6,7) - feel you could make these drums stand out a bit more pattern wise since its kinda identical to the rest, maybe stack (6) under00:49:946 (3) - for instance to show a difference and a more break feeling same like similar stuff at 02:10:716 (5,6,7) -
- 00:56:210 (1,1,1) - would be cool if those storyboard circles were matched with the circle placement same for similar
- 01:03:133 (1,2,3) - kinda hard to read with the same ds yet differeny rhythm gaps and no NC, would maybe stack the 1/1 gap like you did with the others or atleast NC (2)
- 01:56:540 (5,6) - would reduce the ds here thats a similar jump like the next notes yet the music has no intensity here at all
- 03:15:826 (6) - would be a really good spot for a bit of slider art, kinda feels a bit empty now with the waiting for the break
- 04:13:187 (1,2,3) - NC on (3) instead of (1) would be nice here for consistency and having a follow point for that huge jump
- 04:35:770 (1,2,3,4) - similar spacing increase like 00:00:826 (1,2,3,4) - would make for a nice callback
- 04:40:880 (7) - could put this on the head of that slider you're stacking with to emphasize it a bit more
- 00:01:815 (3,2) - Stack a bit off
- 00:06:760 (3) - control + h on the spot would make this flow smoother and reduces that jump a bit which is a bit high in compared to the rest of the section, could control + h 00:07:089 (4) - afterwards too if you want
- 00:13:188 (2,3) - would (semi-) stack 3 under 2 here bc you got a bit of awkward angle at 00:13:518 (3,4) - and also removes that overlap with 00:14:012 (1) - that looks a bit bad
- 00:27:529 (2) - piano and vocals have 3 strong beats here compared to 00:28:353 (1,2) - so wouldn't make it the same rhythm wise, 2 sliders for 00:27:529 (2,3) - would fit nicely I think
- 01:09:067 (4,1) - could use a bit of a jump since you do it for the rest of the downbeats in the kiai where these vocals gain intensity
- 01:29:672 (2) - also really strong here so increase the spacing a bit more 1.1 seems really low here
- 02:16:320 (4,2) - sliderborders touching doesn't look that great, increase ds a bit
- 01:01:485 (1,2,3) - 02:21:925 (1,2,3) - bit inconsistent trip stacking ds wise
- 02:35:112 (1) - 02:29:837 (1) - and similar second kiai, you kinda emphasiszed these in the first kiai but then went full basic consistent ds for the next 2 kiais a lot of times, the music and vocals really shine here so I'd consider doing something more spacing wise to for these 2 kiais
- 04:37:583 (2,3) - increase spacing a bit to compensate for the stacking ds shift so its the same as 04:39:726 (1,2) - like the borders not touching