Hey, from my NM queue- sorry this took so long! Got caught up with school and Fallout 4 lol
Winter
Haha, again sorry it’s so late. Hope this helps
Winter
- 00:43:471 (4,1) – I think you should reverse the order of these (place the circle at 00:43:471 and slider at 00:43:624; the beat at 00:43:624 is stronger than the beat at 00:43:777, so I think it should be clickableSPOILERbasically do this instead
- 00:45:920 (4,1) – ^; reverse order of these as well
- 00:54:032 (4) – I don’t think this beat is very strong, and thus making it a circle isn’t the best choice in my opinion; maybe make 00:53:879 (3) a 1/4 slider?
- 00:55:562 (4) – I don’t think the 1/8 slider makes sense here; I’m fairly certain the whistles start at 00:55:715 (5). At the very least, don’t make the (4) a 1/8 slider
- 00:58:930 (4) – Similar suggestion to 00:54:032 (4)
- 01:01:379 (4) – ^
- 01:05:511 (4,1) – Similar suggestion to 00:43:471 (4,1)
- 01:14:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) – I know this is a stream, but the combo count here is really long and inconsistent with how your combo placement is done throughout the song. Maybe place a new combo at the (9)?
- 01:16:226 (1) – This new combo is fine, but in my opinion, I think having no new combo here would fit the song better? I don’t think there’s a need to emphasize this point, but it’s your call
- 01:20:358 (1,2) – Similar suggestion to 00:43:471 (4,1); if you take this suggestion, fix the new combo so that it starts at 01:20:511
- 01:27:552 (4,1) – I think combining these into a 1/2 slider would fit the rhythm more nicely, but what you have is also fine, so you don’t really need to take this suggestion
- 01:30:920 (4,5) – I think combining these into a 1/4 slider would be a better idea, since the beat at 01:31:073 (5) isn’t strong enough that it should be clickable, in my opinion
- 01:39:950 (1,2) – Similar suggestion to 01:20:358 (1,2)
- 01:47:144 (4,1) – Similar suggestion to 01:27:552 (4,1)
- 01:50:511 (4,5) – Similar suggestion to 01:30:920 (4,5)
- 02:10:715 (1,4) – Are the slider ends here intentionally not stacked? ._.
- 02:18:522 (2,3) – Maybe reverse the order of these (slider first, then circle). You were following the piano before, now you follow the guitar; it’s a little jarring in my opinion
- 02:20:971 (2,3) – ^
- 02:23:420 (2,3) – ^
- 02:36:124 (4,1) – ^; similar reasoning to why I suggested it at 00:43:471 (4,1)
- 02:38:573 (4,1) – ^
- 02:48:215 (4) – Similar suggestion to 00:55:562 (4)
- 03:08:879 (1) – Again, I think NC is unnecessary, but it works, so it’s your call
- 03:13:011 (1,2) – Yeah same thing as 01:20:358 (1,2)
- 03:20:205 (4,1) – Same thing as 01:27:552 (4,1)
- 03:23:573 (4,5) – Same thing as 01:30:920 (4,5)
- 03:32:756 (1) – I think making this a 1/2 slider rather than a repeat 1/4 slider is a better idea, mainly because it’s consistent with the slowed down parts like 03:29:083 (1), but it’s up to you
- 03:38:879 (1,2,3,4) – I think this part is being overmapped; I’m not hearing any beats at 03:39:644. Maybe try something like this?SPOILERfor reference the (1) in the image is at 03:38:879
- 03:41:328 (1,2,3,4) – ^
- 03:43:777 (1,2,3,4) – ^
- 03:46:838 (3,4) – I think combining these into a 1/4 slider would help it flow into the stream a lot nicer; it’s feeling a little segmented right now
- 03:51:124 (1,2) – Reverse order (circle first, then 1/4 slider) yadayadayada
- 03:52:042 (5,1) – ^
- 04:32:144 (1) – See this NC makes sense because it’s highlighting and emphasizing the clap you have on it
- 04:36:277 (1,2) – Oh hey same thing as 01:20:358 (1,2)
- 04:43:471 (4,1) – Basically the same thing I suggested at 01:27:552 (4,1)
- 04:51:736 (9) – NC here to fix that ridiculously long stream combo
- 05:06:430 (5,6) – Very close to each other to the point where they’re almost touching; I’d move them a little farther apart but it’s up to you
- 05:11:634 (6,7) – Make these into a 1/4 slider to help the player ease into the slowed down part? I think the current transition from fast to slow is a little bit much
- 05:19:279 (1) – Maybe you can have this spinner quietly fade out, e.g. 40% -> 30% -> 20% -> 10% or something like that
Haha, again sorry it’s so late. Hope this helps