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Kencho wrote:
鴿來了 :arrow: 咕咕,咕咕咕,咕咕咕咕咕~

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  • 設置個combo colors?
  • 11:12:523 - 紅綠線音量不同



LAST MOMENT OF DARK


没有回复的点全都改了。谢谢锋哥来看~
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11:24:756 (1) - 這個地方的滑條我覺得還是要插紅線的,雖然只是歪了一個音,就像11:27:021 (1) - 一樣
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@Kencho
11:24:756 (1) - 加了一根216bpm的红线,并加入0.9sv的绿线让滑条不至于飙太快。后面11:25:210 - 11:25:967 - 补上两根红线是保证后面bpm不变的情况下大白线位置也不变。

另外,11:30:218 - 12:06:462 - 两个位置也加入了红线
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恭喜泡图啊
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00:49:527 (4) - unsnapped


00:51:905 (1,3,4) - should be more careful with autostacking since it really breaks this https://i.imgur.com/FhZN9Qm.jpg
00:56:295 - finish?
00:55:746 (4,5,6,7,1) - wide angle thing seems a bit out of place here for the transition, could probably flip the triple or something to get a change in movement onto the next measute
01:03:978 (2,3) - would be nicer with ctrlg on this rhythm since you followed melody before too (also 01:15:685 (2,3) - is much better)
01:20:442 (3,4) - should be toned down, you didn't use any similar huge spacing passive 1/4 jumps so this feels a bit random and will really throw people off. maybe something like https://i.imgur.com/mUf3OHP.jpg ?

01:31:690 (1) - what's with this nc lol
02:05:754 (3) - what is this following and why does it suddenly completely skip melody for that?
actually I can't really agree with rhythm in this whole part, it seems to abuse overmapped triples and filler jumps way too much considering the overall intensity
+ sliders like the one mentioned above
02:02:657 (5) - 1/6 sounds much better here

yea after this part I don't feel like looking at the other 10 minutes lol

pop is only for the unsnapped object, so feel free to get it rebubbled after fixing the slider
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00:49:527 (4) - unsnapped :arrow: fixed


00:51:905 (1,3,4) - should be more careful with autostacking since it really breaks this https://i.imgur.com/FhZN9Qm.jpg
00:56:295 - finish?
00:55:746 (4,5,6,7,1) - wide angle thing seems a bit out of place here for the transition, could probably flip the triple or something to get a change in movement onto the next measute
:arrow: move this triple to another place. flipping the triple would make the flow between 3-4-567 juggling imo.
01:03:978 (2,3) - would be nicer with ctrlg on this rhythm since you followed melody before too (also 01:15:685 (2,3) - is much better)
01:20:442 (3,4) - should be toned down, you didn't use any similar huge spacing passive 1/4 jumps so this feels a bit random and will really throw people off. maybe something like https://i.imgur.com/mUf3OHP.jpg ?
:arrow: changed to a similar pattern like ur screenshot.

01:31:690 (1) - what's with this nc lol
02:05:754 (3) - what is this following and why does it suddenly completely skip melody for that? :arrow: it's for bass sound
actually I can't really agree with rhythm in this whole part, it seems to abuse overmapped triples and filler jumps way too much considering the overall intensity
:arrow: as i told in pm. none of the triplet is overmapped. they all have reference in the song (cymbol). i'll consider shorten the distance if possible.
+ sliders like the one mentioned above
02:02:657 (5) - 1/6 sounds much better here :arrow: i tried 1/6 and feel it's unfriendly for gameplay. so i simplified that.

yea after this part I don't feel like looking at the other 10 minutes lol

pop is only for the unsnapped object, so feel free to get it rebubbled after fixing the slider


anyway thank you for coming to check my map.

edit: no reply = all fixed

@Kencho 这次上传后我应该还会大改一改,改完了之后我来找你再来点一次吧。
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Ye i will stop here. Similar kind of issues repeat multiple times.
Best of luck
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Hi. Last week i focused on the CET-6 exam. sorry for the very late reply.

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

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  • 00:49:893 (1) - Increasing SV only doesn't really make up for it, The sound is really intense ,increasing DS for it will help to emphasize it too :arrow: i think increasing sv would be better. keep
  • 00:51:905 (1,3,4) - As Lasse mentioned, The stack is really messed up and doesn't look like you fixed it :arrow: redo the slider and moved the following circle
  • 00:58:856 (4,5) - Try to give these higher spacing like 00:57:393 (4,5) - because the DS is pretty low compared to the intensity of the sounds
  • 01:00:320 (5) - Finish on head for that cymbal?
  • 01:07:637 (7,8,1) - The flow through these is awkward, the movement is almost linear which plays really badly also 01:08:003 (1) - doesn't get enough emphasis at all the way you made the pattern :arrow: juggling flow and shortened distance is the way i emphasis the sound here.
  • 01:38:851 (3) - Can be changed to two circles because of the snare on slider end :arrow: don't think so. these 2 circles are for the drum.
    adding more would ruin the feeling.
  • 01:49:690 (4) - Same, can do two circles instead to give melody sounds more impact here than 01:49:303 (3) - because 4 has two melody sounds while 3 has only one :arrow: changed 01:50:077 (1,2,3) - instead
  • 02:02:657 (5,6) - This is supposed to be 1/6 :arrow: following cymbol rather than melody
  • 02:03:238 (2,3) - Following drums so distinctly doesn't work here because melody is pretty intense in this part too and completely ignoring 02:03:625 - feels really empty
    Same for 02:05:948 - and for others like this one :arrow: changed 02:03:238 (2,3) only. since the density of the melody is low, i don't think frequently changing what to follow could be a good idea.
  • 02:20:173 (4,1) - Is this manual stack intentional :arrow: nope
  • 02:20:077 - Also the music is 1/6 here :arrow: actually 1/8. i ignored the first one to simplify the pattern.
  • 03:05:705 (3,4) - Sounds here are similar to 03:07:215 (3,4,5,6) - These and rest like these but on this particular spot you used simple sliders while rest of the patterns have circles :arrow: just don't want to make them totally the same
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  • 03:47:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - You rhythm in sections like this is really questionable , the song is emphasizing These sounds while you are emphasizing These sounds
  • 03:53:734 (1) - The curve near the end is so bad lol you can try doing something like http://puu.sh/yC3eb/8a2358bed5.jpg
  • 03:57:992 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why do you have 1 spaced differently than the rest of the three sliders
  • 04:01:476 (1,2,3,4) - Try to manually stack this as well because auto stacking ruins it
  • 04:04:959 (1) - You don't need this NC
  • 04:05:734 (1) - Same
  • 04:07:669 (1) - This being 1/4 sounds totally off, not 100% if its supposed to be 1/6 or 1/8 but you can figure it out
  • 04:12:314 - Make this clickable and start the spinner 1/2 beat later
  • 04:13:863 - remove kiai here since the chorus ends here
    :arrow: this section is made by blueloniess. i'll ask him soon.
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  • 04:24:255 (5) - Give it some more impact than sliders like 04:23:505 (1) - 04:23:880 (3) - etc because it supports much different sounds
  • 04:29:692 - The 1/4 drums start from here, why did you not map any 1/4 here. You randomly the stream from 04:30:255 - because thats where the slider ends. Doesn't work this way :arrow: because the melody become more intense from 04:30:255 - . different density would emphasis the song better imo. (i just imitated Kite's version of this song. )
  • 04:31:380 (2,4) - Can definitely NC these because of the big SV change, will make it easier to read
  • 04:33:255 (1,2) - The cymbal sounds here are much stronger than 04:34:005 (1,2,3,4) - so having more SV for 04:33:255 (1,2) - is gonna be better and its gonna be even better if those two sliders are turned into circles only jumps :arrow: i don't think 04:33:255 (1,2) - could be as intense as you describe. would rather keep it.
  • 04:50:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The repeat slider is misplaced, should be a bit more to the left
  • 04:54:255 (9) - same
Ye i will stop here. Similar kind of issues repeat multiple times.
Best of luck :arrow: thx


no reply=fixed as u told. thank you for your mod.
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LAST MOMENT OF DARK

个人感觉节奏问题不小,有的地方排版也比较随机不是很干净,按现在的质量我是没法点的,建议再找几个摸看看。
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@Garden 不好意思今天才看到邮件,我也是真的懒了好久了
以下是我邮箱近日的惨状:puu.sh/zlqgJ/10e1f17860.png
这图我打算暂时放弃一段时间了。不过摸肯定会认真回的。今天不太空,改个时间就过来
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