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LAMA - Spell

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Yahuri
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, December 12, 2017 at 4:41:56 AM

Artist: LAMA
Title: Spell
Source: NO.6
Tags: fursum ラマ shion nezumi anime atsuko asano あさの あつこ bones op opening tv size sony
BPM: 147
Filesize: 4960kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.25 stars, 175 notes)
  2. Fursum's Hard (3.07 stars, 224 notes)
  3. Hex (3.58 stars, 256 notes)
  4. Normal (1.66 stars, 116 notes)
Download: LAMA - Spell
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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We begin to chant
The secret magic spell known only to the two of us

Play with storyboard!
Hard by Fursum
Topic Starter
Yahuri
re-dl ur diff before making ur changes

Fursum's Hard
-i dont think i quite understand how youre using consecutive stacks such as this 00:45:604 (3,4) and this 00:36:217 (4,5) so if u wanna explain those that would be cool (also i can mod further for those if needed)
-^ back and forth stacking such as here 01:05:604 (5,6,1) and here 01:13:360 (3,4,5), explanation would be nice
00:00:707 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - intro overlaps should be fine as long as they dont hinder reading significantly, but if it becomes a problem with a lot of modders then pls remove them
00:07:033 (5,1) - should make a jump here imo
00:15:809 (3,5) - adjust a little bit to get closer to a blanket
00:17:441 (2,3) - blanket pls
00:20:298 (1,3) - 00:21:115 (3,1) - ^
00:27:645 (3,1) - ^
00:34:176 (3,1) - looks kinda messy cuz the slidertails are overlapping, try something more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9038837
00:53:768 (3,1) - would look better if u just did this pattern again 00:40:706 (3,1)
00:57:849 (1,2) - change the slidershape of 1 so that u can blanket the tail without having to overlap the sliderhead of 2
01:06:013 (1,3) - looks messy cuz the slidertail of 3 is barely overlapped
01:24:584 (3,4) - ctrl+g this rhythm, 01:24:788 is stronger than 01:24:992
01:12:339 (6,1) - should make a jump here imo
01:18:053 (3,4) - ctrl+this rhythm, 01:18:258 is stronger than 01:18:462
01:25:604 - since this starts the long guitar note i think this would be better as a circle

ver.1 fursum (in case something goes wrong and need backup)
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Spell (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59380
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Spell ~TV size~
TitleUnicode:Spell ~TV size~
Artist:Lama
ArtistUnicode:Lama
Creator:Yahuri
Version:Fursum's Hard
Source:No. 6
Tags:shion nezumi fursum anime bl shounen ai
BeatmapID:1393610
BeatmapSetID:406860

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"background.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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metadata
http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/artist/lama/discography/
http://www.no-6.jp/#/products/
Fursum

Yahuri wrote:

-i dont think i quite understand how youre using consecutive stacks such as this 00:45:604 (3,4) and this 00:36:217 (4,5) so if u wanna explain those that would be cool (also i can mod further for those if needed)
Hmm, they aren't very structured though I used them mostly for emphasis. 00:45:604 (3,4) - This one is the clearest of them, as I used the big spacing after the stop of motion. 00:36:217 (4,5) - same idea applies here as well, for the guitar. I wanted to emphasize the motion by contrasting the stack.
00:30:094 (1) - spaced this to make it consistent with the other one


-^ back and forth stacking such as here 01:05:604 (5,6,1) and here 01:13:360 (3,4,5), explanation would be nice
nothing much important, just to show some difference from these sounds 01:15:400 (4,5) - 01:21:931 (5,6) -

00:07:033 (5,1) - should make a jump here imo well it is already emphasized shrug
01:12:339 (6,1) - should make a jump here imo added some emphasis with overlaps
a
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59380
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Spell ~TV size~
TitleUnicode:Spell ~TV size~
Artist:Lama
ArtistUnicode:Lama
Creator:Yahuri
Version:Fursum's Hard
Source:No. 6
Tags:shion nezumi fursum anime bl shounen ai
BeatmapID:1393610
BeatmapSetID:406860

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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papapa213
[normal]
00:08:078 (2,3) - 00:10:527 (1,3) - blanket
01:10:936 (3,4) - change to reverse slider? you use reverse slider at 01:04:405 (3) -
01:24:405 (4,5) - I think use slider like 01:22:772 (2) - will be better

[advanced]
01:22:772 (2) - rolate it counterclockwise a bit? it touched 01:20:527 (4) -

[fursum's hard]
00:17:466 (2,3) - blanket
01:06:038 (1,3) - let 1 tail full on 3
01:12:568 (1,1) - ^

[Hex]
00:56:242 (1) - change sampleset to auto , it has slider sound now

so nice map that i can mod nothing :cry: :cry:
Topic Starter
Yahuri

papapa213 wrote:

[normal]
00:08:078 (2,3) looks fine- 00:10:527 (1,3) - blanket fixed
01:10:936 (3,4) - change to reverse slider? you use reverse slider at 01:04:405 (3) - a bit of rhythm inconsistencies in these sections so ill check over that again
01:24:405 (4,5) - I think use slider like 01:22:772 (2) - will be better ill decide after checking rhythm

[advanced]
01:22:772 (2) - rolate it counterclockwise a bit? it touched 01:20:527 (4) - these notes are rly far apart so u cant even see 4

[Hex]
00:56:242 (1) - change sampleset to auto , it has slider sound now fixed

so nice map that i can mod nothing :cry: :cry:
thanks!
Fursum

papapa213 wrote:

[fursum's hard]
00:17:466 (2,3) - blanket blanket.
01:06:038 (1,3) - let 1 tail full on 3 if you mean the overlap on body ok
01:12:568 (1,1) - ^ isnt very noticeable in the gameplay but adjusted a little
edit forgot quote format

thank

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Title:Spell
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Creator:Yahuri
Version:Fursum's Hard
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Monstrata
Hex

00:19:303 (4,5) - Odd that you put a jump here. You don't map this note to a jump anywhere else in the last 20 seconds.
01:02:772 (1,5) - Maybe make slider 5 the same as 1? for the symmetry.

Fursum's Hard

00:01:548 (3,4) - Why not do something like this and avoid the flowbreak on the intro
00:31:344 (4,1,2) - Sliders look way too close together considering your usual spacing.

Advanced

00:09:303 (2,3,4) - Blankets could be better. 00:15:834 (2,3,4) - Same

Normal

00:57:874 (1,1) - This is not enough spinner recovery for a Normal.
Also, I think your Normal needs more 1/2 rhythm. It feels too much like an easy right now, while your Advanced is quite 1/2 heavy. I think maybe just focus on the kiai since the verse section, mapping with mostly 1/1 rhythm is acceptable imo.

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Main issue is the spread between Normal and Advanced, You can call me back once that's been addressed.
Topic Starter
Yahuri

Monstrata wrote:

Hex

00:19:303 (4,5) - Odd that you put a jump here. You don't map this note to a jump anywhere else in the last 20 seconds. these notes have the melody, which i mapped as jumps 00:09:303 (3,4,5). this note is the same.
01:02:772 (1,5) - Maybe make slider 5 the same as 1? for the symmetry. doing so doesnt look that nice with 01:04:609 (2), also i used a lot of the same shaped sliders consecutively already changed slidershapes for 01:01:140 (1,4) - so ur suggestion works
switched in some more interesting sliders for more spice

Advanced

00:09:303 (2,3,4) - Blankets could be better. 00:15:834 (2,3,4) - Same fixed

Normal

00:57:874 (1,1) - This is not enough spinner recovery for a Normal. turned that into a slider
Also, I think your Normal needs more 1/2 rhythm. It feels too much like an easy right now, while your Advanced is quite 1/2 heavy. I think maybe just focus on the kiai since the verse section, mapping with mostly 1/1 rhythm is acceptable imo. done

Main issue is the spread between Normal and Advanced, You can call me back once that's been addressed. alright, thanks!
may take a while to do changes cuz i just moved into uni, got a lot of setup work to take care of xd
Fursum
unsucced some overlaps triangles and manual stacks cuz some editor shenanigans
applied

Monstrata wrote:

00:01:548 (3,4) - Why not do something like this and avoid the flowbreak on the intro
edit im blind
also what the hell i dont recall putting a smiley to my post
applied

Monstrata wrote:

00:31:344 (4,1,2) - Sliders look way too close together considering your usual spacing.
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timemon
M4M
[General]
Inconsistent Preview time for HEX

[Hex]
01:03:180 (2,3) - I think ctrl+G this rhythm fits better. it follows the vocal better and from the look of the map the 1/2 sliders appear where the vocal is. This applies to similar part like this 01:09:711 (2,3) - , 01:16:241 (2,3) - and so on

[Fursum's Hard]
00:36:650 (1) - move this a bit away or overlap it more. pixel overlap is meme
01:25:629 (6) - nc maybe

looks fine to me

[Advanced]
Looks fine to me

[Normal]
00:33:180 - add a circle?
00:39:507 (5) - find a way to fit 1/2 rhythm here

Good luck!
Fursum

timemon wrote:

[Fursum's Hard]
00:36:650 (1) - move this a bit away or overlap it more. pixel overlap is meme made less meme
01:25:629 (6) - nc maybe ok

looks fine to me owo
thank

xob
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Spell (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59405
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Spell
TitleUnicode:Spell
Artist:LAMA
ArtistUnicode:LAMA
Creator:Yahuri
Version:Fursum's Hard
Source:No. 6
Tags:fursum shion nezumi anime atsuko asano あさの あつこ bones op opening tv size sony
BeatmapID:1393610
BeatmapSetID:406860

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"background.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
Yahuri

timemon wrote:

M4M
[General]
Inconsistent Preview time for HEX fixed

[Hex]
01:03:180 (2,3) - I think ctrl+G this rhythm fits better. it follows the vocal better and from the look of the map the 1/2 sliders appear where the vocal is. This applies to similar part like this 01:09:711 (2,3) - , 01:16:241 (2,3) - and so on if you listen closely here 01:03:385 is where the melody starts for the instrument (and continues on throughout the part without vocals), which is why i chose to switch focus to that instead of vocals.

[Normal]
00:33:180 - add a circle? theres nothing important to emphasize here
00:39:507 (5) - find a way to fit 1/2 rhythm here i like it better as is because making it 1/2 rhythm would emphasize it just as much as the really loud claps here 00:46:038

Good luck!
ur mod coming soon, thanks!
Fursum
its yo boy 4sum from mapset

[Normal]
00:05:629 - could add a spinner ending here for consistency with other diffs

01:25:629 - could be a click for consistency with other diffs

[Advanced]
00:05:629 - spinner thing

00:31:752 (1,2,3,4) - i dont like how you totally ignore the triple at 00:32:976 - and map it exactly like the previous pattern where that doesnt exist

[Fursum's Hard]

nice

00:21:956 (1,2,3,4) - what the hell pentagon in a hexagon concept
nuke

[Hex]
how2use screen

00:33:998 (2,4) - Id prefer if those two switched places because it puts emphasis on the wrong note. Suggest having 4 more spaced cuz the higher vocal volume after it.

00:25:834 (4,5) - 00:32:365 (4,5) - 00:38:896 (4,5) - The increase of spacing on these jumps could be softer, first one and second one is a bit too contrasted

00:45:833 (6,1) - Could have 1 partial overlap like the linear pattern
Topic Starter
Yahuri

Fursum wrote:

its yo boy 4sum from mapset

[Normal]
00:05:629 - could add a spinner ending here for consistency with other diffs i didnt put a spinner in the beginning of this diff because it would be super long which tires out beginners

01:25:629 - could be a click for consistency with other diffs done

[Advanced]
00:05:629 - spinner thing same as Normal, even for an Advanced diff this length is pretty tiring

00:31:752 (1,2,3,4) - i dont like how you totally ignore the triple at 00:32:976 - and map it exactly like the previous pattern where that doesnt exist its not part of the main instruments im following, and its pretty hard to hear if youre just playing the map. also mapping this wouldnt fit well into the Hex patterns. mapping this in a lower diff but not a higher diff is kinda weird so ya
in case ur wondering i didnt point this out in ur diff cuz ur technically not wrong ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

[Fursum's Hard]

nice

00:21:956 (1,2,3,4) - what the hell pentagon in a hexagon concept
nuke
nuke

[Hex]
how2use screen

00:33:998 (2,4) - Id prefer if those two switched places because it puts emphasis on the wrong note. Suggest having 4 more spaced cuz the higher vocal volume after it. doing so gets rid of emphasis here 00:34:202 (3). no matter where 4 is the distance to 00:35:017 (1) is the same. 2 also has a whistle on it, 4 does not

00:25:834 (4,5) - 00:32:365 (4,5) - 00:38:896 (4,5) - The increase of spacing on these jumps could be softer, first one and second one is a bit too contrasted fixed

00:45:833 (6,1) - Could have 1 partial overlap like the linear pattern nah xd i moved 2 farther tho
thank
Seolv
hello there! m4m

Normal

  1. 00:08:078 (2,3,4) - This flow is kinda weird, try curving (4) a little bit towards the right
  2. 00:10:527 (1) - This should be the same rhythm as 00:07:262 (1,2) - for consistency
  3. 00:25:221 (2,3,4,5) - Make this into 1/1 sliders instead because the song isn't that intense in that part so reducing the rhythm density would be a good idea.

Advanced

  1. All good, Nice diff

Fursum's Hard

  1. 00:00:732 (1,2) - Pretty confusing since you can't really see the sliderends, right?
  2. 00:01:548 (3) - Why did you make the spacing here bigger? Please make your spacing consistent
  3. 00:03:997 (1) - Same, and it goes on, check AiMod by pressing Ctrl+Shift+A and fix your mistakes by turning on Distance Snap
  4. 00:06:446 (3,4,5) - Remove the 4 and 5 since there is no sound on these beats
  5. 00:07:262 (1) - Some players might confuse this for a 1/2 gap, make the spacing bigger (again, turn on DS)
  6. 00:36:650 (1,2) - Space this out more so that it isn't as close, it makes it look a bit ugly
  7. 00:37:874 (4) - Why the change of flow here?

    Overall needs a little bit of work with the DS and flow, everything else is fine

Hex

  1. 00:10:119 (5) - Why didn't you space this out more than 00:09:303 (3,4) - ? There's a kick on there so you should space it more
  2. 00:21:956 (1) - Why big spacing? It's the same as previous sliders
  3. 00:59:507 (1,2,3,4) - This flow seems pretty uncomfortable tbh
Topic Starter
Yahuri

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

hello there! m4m

Normal

  1. 00:08:078 (2,3,4) - This flow is kinda weird, try curving (4) a little bit towards the right did something else but it should be better now
  2. 00:10:527 (1) - This should be the same rhythm as 00:07:262 (1,2) - for consistency following the melody there, so emphasizing it with the long slider
  3. 00:25:221 (2,3,4,5) - Make this into 1/1 sliders instead because the song isn't that intense in that part so reducing the rhythm density would be a good idea. sure

Advanced

  1. All good, Nice diff
thanks!

Hex

  1. 00:10:119 (5) - Why didn't you space this out more than 00:09:303 (3,4) - ? There's a kick on there so you should space it more this diff is generally consistent in what has a jump and what doesnt have a jump (not during the beginning vocals though, which introduce more jumps gradually) but doesn't have as consistent jump distances. i think it helps with variety so i'm not tied down to 1 or 2 spaces to put objects.
  2. 00:21:956 (1) - Why big spacing? It's the same as previous sliders all NCs have a jump on them
  3. 00:59:507 (1,2,3,4) - This flow seems pretty uncomfortable tbh seems fine to me
thanks, return mod finished
Fursum

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

Fursum's Hard

  1. 00:00:732 (1,2) - Pretty confusing since you can't really see the sliderends, right?
why would that be confusing, the map has lots of overlaps and this sets up the concept pretty early00:01:548 (3) - Why did you make the spacing here bigger? Please make your spacing consistent well, visually the pattern is already cramped, also the mouse movement isn't that snappy, adjusted the pattern tho00:03:997 (1) - Same, and it goes on, check AiMod by pressing Ctrl+Shift+A and fix your mistakes by turning on Distance Snap essentially the same thing as before tho visually its a bit seperate because it starts a different verse,also theres a buildup00:06:446 (3,4,5) - Remove the 4 and 5 since there is no sound on these beats there is a sound albeit its not very audible, but its the climax of the buildup so it makes sense to have more density00:07:262 (1) - Some players might confuse this for a 1/2 gap, make the spacing bigger (again, turn on DS) isnt that a 1/2 gap already?00:36:650 (1,2) - Space this out more so that it isn't as close, it makes it look a bit ugly yeah i had that fixed already :p00:37:874 (4) - Why the change of flow here? switching from vocals to the instruments

Overall needs a little bit of work with the DS and flow, everything else is fine i get the ds beacuse i used follow points instead, also i tried to emphasize certain things like higher volume vocals and such with overall greater ds, i occasionally try to check it
not sure about the flow subjective
dont map open inside
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Weedy
hi im from ur q
my ears this song
Normal

  1. 00:09:303 (4) - maybe something like this for visual flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9237203
    seemsgood

advanced

  1. 00:13:793 (1) - change to normal curve slider bc represents guitar and not drums and you use curves for your 1/2 sliders(personal)
  2. 00:10:527 (1) - ye same here
  3. 00:17:058 (1) - ye same here, etc

Fursum's duwang

ur stacks can be hard to read, ie. 00:19:507 (1,2,1,2,1) - i suggest manual stacking it more for reading
  1. 00:01:140 (2,4) - please die they overlap
  2. 00:32:976 (5,6,7) - there's no triplet here lol
  3. 00:42:364 (3) - make it something like this so it doesnt look like shitty blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9237236
  4. 00:59:099 - make clickable pls is vocal w

hex

fucking hexgrid doth thou beshittingst me
  1. 00:00:732 (1) - spinner isnt in any of the other diffs remove pls (or add spinner to all of the other diffs
  2. 00:13:793 (1) - copy pasta zzz
  3. nothing to say other than to kil urshelf ppstrata dongrider
Topic Starter
Yahuri

[[Pika]] wrote:

hi im from ur q
Normal

  1. 00:09:303 (4) - maybe something like this for visual flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9237203 sure
    seemsgood

advanced

  1. 00:13:793 (1) - change to normal curve slider bc represents guitar and not drums and you use curves for your 1/2 sliders(personal) all of the sliders in the intro (before lyrics) are red anchor for more visual emphasis, curve sliders are primarily in the lyrics w/o kiai, kiai sliders are pretty much anything. 1/2 curve sliders here are to emphasize the guitar thing in contrast to 1/2 straight sliders. and im not changing those to 1/2 red anchor cuz using the same type of slider for everything is boring
  2. 00:10:527 (1) - ye same here same
  3. 00:17:058 (1) - ye same here, etc same

hex

  1. 00:00:732 (1) - spinner isnt in any of the other diffs remove pls (or add spinner to all of the other diffs this isnt in normal or advanced cuz putting such a long spinner would be really tiring for newbies.
  2. 00:13:793 (1) - copy pasta zzz when the music is basically the same there isnt any real reason for me to change this drastically
Fursum

[[Pika]] wrote:

Fursum's duwang

ur stacks can be hard to read, ie. 00:19:507 (1,2,1,2,1) - i suggest manual stacking it more for reading
yea thats teh conzept i did, where i used them for emphasis instead of spacing in 2-3 places, ill probably use a more readable overlap as you said in a later update
  1. 00:01:140 (2,4) - please die they overlap overlaps r cut
  2. 00:32:976 (5,6,7) - there's no triplet here lol i can hear them through my shitty earbuds :d
  3. 00:42:364 (3) - make it something like this so it doesnt look like shitty blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9237236 i havent used any sharp angles so it would create an unnecessary highlight so id go with bad aesthetics
  4. 00:59:099 - make clickable pls is vocal w err, i like the way it is right now, could change if it gets pointed out later
thenk
Topic Starter
Yahuri
noot

Fursum's Hard
smol blankets n stacks
00:03:589 (4,1,2) -
00:06:242 (2,3) -
00:09:303 (1,1) - stack
00:19:099 (1,2) -
00:25:017 (4,1,2,3) -
00:30:119 (1,2) -
00:40:731 (3,1) - stack
00:48:895 (3,4) -
00:55:425 (3,1) - stack
01:08:487 (3,4) -
01:23:180 (3,1) -
00:19:915 (3) - could convert into 2 circles + jump for the loud claps
00:34:201 (3,1) - blanket?
00:38:078 (4,1,3) - ^?
00:59:507 (1,2,3) - ^?
01:20:731 (1,2,3) - ^?
01:14:201 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the NC pattern here is inconsistent with the rest of the chorus, i recommend just using normal NC pattern here (remove NC here 01:15:017 (1) and here 01:15:425 (1))
00:57:670 (4,1) - jump?
01:12:364 (2,1) - ^

clean up this stuff then we gud 2 go, ill apply hitsounds n get mods when ur done
Fursum
cleaned up that stuff rejected some blankets cuz tricky with ds mostly the patterns not blankety

also for the suggested jumps i only used higher ds on the loudest claps so they should be fine without as they arent that strong

new stuff
osu file format v14

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Title:Spell
TitleUnicode:Spell
Artist:LAMA
ArtistUnicode:LAMA
Creator:Yahuri
Version:Fursum Hard
Source:No. 6
Tags:fursum shion nezumi anime atsuko asano あさの あつこ bones op opening tv size sony
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Saltssaumure
Hi from my modqueue. There's not much I can say bc this map is already very polished, so here's an overlap check with default skin on 4:3 screen res.

[Fursum's Hard]
00:35:834 (3) -
00:47:058 (2) -
01:10:527 (3) -
01:24:201 (2) -

[Normal]
00:09:303 (4) -
00:26:854 (1) -
00:37:058 (1) -
00:57:874 (1) -
01:10:936 (3) -

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Yahuri

Saltssaumure wrote:

Hi from my modqueue. There's not much I can say bc this map is already very polished, so here's an overlap check with default skin on 4:3 screen res.

[Normal]
00:09:303 (4) -
00:26:854 (1) -
00:37:058 (1) -
00:57:874 (1) -
01:10:936 (3) -

Good luck!
im not sure what you mean by overlap check, these arent overlapped and they arent offscreen in play either
HLN
Fursum's Hard
00:06:854 (1) - remove nc
00:16:650 (3,1) - get rid of that overlap

Yes, very short, but i didn't spot any more issues
bejewelled
From m4m queue:

General Feedback
HP values across the board are too high. Suggestions:
Normal: 5 > 3
Advanced 5 > 4 or 4.5
Hard 6 > 5
Hex 7 > 6 (I guess 7 is fine here but if you have any slow sections in the song this will kill players who haven't mastered the star range).


Hex
00:00:732 (1) - Have you considered mapping notes to this? There's some good rhythm and beats here.
00:12:364 (2,3) - This is emphasized 0.3x less than the last three (2,3)'s. NVM it's fine
00:25:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't see the point of this other than to add variety; I would increase the DS since the song doesn't really slow down or anything.
00:31:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:45:629 (5,6,1,2) - The (6) to (1) can be really jarring to players who think the rhythm just continues like that. Maybe make (5,6) into a slider?
01:10:527 (5) - Any reason why this is a slider and not circles? Same with 01:03:997 (5) -
Other than that it looks pretty good! Rhythm is spot-on.

Normal
00:09:303 (4) - This slider is partially off the grid. I'm not sure if that can outright DQ your map from getting ranked but I know that's one of the ranking criteria.
00:39:099 (4,1) - Note in-between, perhaps? To add some variety to the map.
Otherwise, amazing.

Rankability: 9 / 10 Even glancing through the other difficulties I see virtually zero errors and only minor stylistic things that could be improved but aren't necessary. Great job, good luck!
Saltssaumure

Yahuri wrote:

Saltssaumure wrote:

Hi from my modqueue. There's not much I can say bc this map is already very polished, so here's an overlap check with default skin on 4:3 screen res.

[Normal]
00:09:303 (4) -
00:26:854 (1) -
00:37:058 (1) -
00:57:874 (1) -
01:10:936 (3) -

Good luck!
im not sure what you mean by overlap check, these arent overlapped and they arent offscreen in play either
The objects overlap with the hp bar, score, etc. with the default skin.
makisokk
Hello from your que
M4M my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/677273

[Nromal]
  • 00:09:303 (4,4) - hmm, Why in two identical cases of music, you decided to make two different sliders?
    00:10:527 (1,1) - thiss too, i think 2 slider better expresses music
    00:48:895 (4,5) - fix little blanket, or In my opinion this arrangement will be better
    00:54:609 (3,4) - These two sliders look very strange, music like the one and the same and the vocals do not change much, but their arrangement does not look so good. Can try something like that?
    01:00:323 (3,4) - little fix blanket
    01:13:385 (3,4) - maybe copypast?
[Advanced]
  • Lul, more copypast looks good
[Fursum's Hard]
  • 00:01:956 (4) - I think better 2 note 00:02:160 - have strong sound
    00:05:221 (4) - ^
    01:05:425 (2,1) - i think you can increase space, 01:05:629 (1) - have strong sound
    01:05:221 (1,2,1,2) - or do it by increasing the spacing
    01:11:752 (1,2,1,2) - ^
    01:12:160 (1,3) - i think bad overlap
[Hex]
  • 00:00:732 (1) - hmm this spiner only in hex diff
    lol A lot of symmetry, but it looks cool
well it's okay
Good luck with mappset
Topic Starter
Yahuri

Saltssaumure wrote:

Hi from my modqueue. There's not much I can say bc this map is already very polished, so here's an overlap check with default skin on 4:3 screen res.

[Normal]
00:09:303 (4) -
00:26:854 (1) -
00:37:058 (1) -
00:57:874 (1) - not fixed
01:10:936 (3) - ^

Good luck!
fixed everything except red, these arent actual problems and the last 2 only overlap if you leave the key overlay on. i did try to fix them, but doing so would require remapping a lot since the kiai structure is much more tight than the intro.

makisokk wrote:

Hello from your que
M4M my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/677273

[Normal]
  • 00:09:303 (4,4) - hmm, Why in two identical cases of music, you decided to make two different sliders? the second highlight isnt a slider
    00:10:527 (1,1) - thiss too, i think 2 slider better expresses music even though its same instrument i used 2/1 sliders to better show off the guitar melody like here 00:10:527 (1). i didnt do that on a couple of guitar places like here 00:13:793 (1) because then this section would have lower density than the next section 00:20:323 which is kinda silly
    00:48:895 (4,5) - fix little blanket, or In my opinion this arrangement will be better fixed blanket
    00:54:609 (3,4) - These two sliders look very strange, music like the one and the same and the vocals do not change much, but their arrangement does not look so good. Can try something like that? i prefer my pattern, its also flipped from 00:52:976 (1,2)
    01:00:323 (3,4) - little fix blanket done
    01:13:385 (3,4) - maybe copypast? no, 3 matches 01:12:568 (1) and 4 matches 01:15:017 (6)
[Advanced]
  • Lul, more copypast looks good cool
[Hex]
  • 00:00:732 (1) - hmm this spiner only in hex diff no spinners in the lower diffs because a long spinner can get very tiring. fursum's diff is mapped like that cuz he wanted to, but i prefer spinner cuz of the whoosh sound
    lol A lot of symmetry, but it looks cool
well it's okay
Good luck with mappset

Fursum wrote:

LowLevelPro wrote:

00:06:854 (1) - remove nc i think it is fine as i didnt use much 1/4 gaps and this is the first one
00:16:650 (3,1) - get rid of that overlap why it is cutey
since the mod didnt help, i cant give you kds sorry (youll still get a mod tho)

Swegmec wrote:

From m4m queue:

General Feedback
HP values across the board are too high. Suggestions:
Normal: 5 > 3
Advanced 5 > 4 or 4.5
Hard 6 > 5
Hex 7 > 6 (I guess 7 is fine here but if you have any slow sections in the song this will kill players who haven't mastered the star range). this was already 6 lol
changed spread to 3-4-5-6


Hex
00:00:732 (1) - Have you considered mapping notes to this? There's some good rhythm and beats here. i prefer spinner because of the whoosh sound, theres a stronger impact here 00:07:262 if i keep it as is imo
00:25:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't see the point of this other than to add variety; I would increase the DS since the song doesn't really slow down or anything. i mapped the DS so low because i was trying to follow the guitar with circles. making the DS normal with 8 consecutive circles would just make it harder than the vocal part, which doesnt make sense because this section isnt stronger than the vocal part.
00:31:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
00:45:629 (5,6,1,2) - The (6) to (1) can be really jarring to players who think the rhythm just continues like that. Maybe make (5,6) into a slider? im not sure what you mean by "the rhythm continues like that", it DOES continue the same way? i've already marked the 6-1 jump with a NC which shouldnt be that hard to figure out imo
01:10:527 (5) - Any reason why this is a slider and not circles? Same with 01:03:997 (5) - for emphasizing guitar melody
Other than that it looks pretty good! Rhythm is spot-on.

Normal
00:09:303 (4) - This slider is partially off the grid. I'm not sure if that can outright DQ your map from getting ranked but I know that's one of the ranking criteria. off-grid doesnt mean anything, only offscreen
00:39:099 (4,1) - Note in-between, perhaps? To add some variety to the map. adding a circle here would be kinda jarring because its only a vocal, not a strong instrument (like a loud clap). i only put 1/2 for strong notes before the kiai.
Otherwise, amazing. cool

Rankability: 9 / 10 Even glancing through the other difficulties I see virtually zero errors and only minor stylistic things that could be improved but aren't necessary. Great job, good luck!
thanks guys, will get return mods done over the weekend
Fursum

Saltssaumure wrote:

[Fursum's Hard]
00:35:834 (3) -
00:47:058 (2) -
01:10:527 (3) -
01:24:201 (2) -
could only fix the circle one, also the slider body overlaps shouldnt be an issue i think

LowLevelPro wrote:

00:06:854 (1) - remove nc i think it is fine as i didnt use much 1/4 gaps and this is the first one
00:16:650 (3,1) - get rid of that overlap why it is cutey

makisokk wrote:

[Fursum's Hard]
  • 00:01:956 (4) - I think better 2 note 00:02:160 - have strong sound im not following them tho, because it is only the intro i think having a straightforward rythm is better
    00:05:221 (4) - ^
    01:05:425 (2,1) - i think you can increase space, 01:05:629 (1) - have strong sound my map is very limited in terms of spacing emphasis so i cant really do that
    01:05:221 (1,2,1,2) - or do it by increasing the spacing
    01:11:752 (1,2,1,2) - ^
    01:12:160 (1,3) - i think bad overlap noted but dont really wanna touch that area or i break more stuff cause of ds, isnt that obvious in gameplay tho
not that new stuff
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