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Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2017-06-13T05:57:31+00:00

- Sunflower - wrote:
吃我一击猛龙……话说4版伊苏8真好玩啊(233

神作啊。这里一周目I难度（噩梦在v版上体验过了），前两天才通关。现在离白金还差3奖杯，准备攻略最难最变态迷宫旧地下圣堂

- Sunflower -

Topic Starter

- Sunflower - 2017-06-13T06:03:43+00:00

Adol Christin wrote:
- Sunflower - wrote:
吃我一击猛龙……话说4版伊苏8真好玩啊(233
神作啊。这里一周目I难度（噩梦在v版上体验过了），前两天才通关。现在离白金还差3奖杯，准备攻略最难最变态迷宫旧地下圣堂

萌新肝不动白金……只能打个end1自我安慰一下了……qwq

Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2017-06-13T06:17:25+00:00

- Sunflower - wrote:
萌新肝不动白金……只能打个end1自我安慰一下了……qwq

真结局很容易就出了啊，200声望只要任务做了礼物送了怎么都够了。。伊苏8v版是我第一个白金的游戏，因为白金实在太容易了一周目就可以。。之前玩过的其他作品白金多少都比较难搞最后就没动力了。。

_MiaoFUuU_

314 posts

Joined April 2014

_MiaoFUuU_ 2017-06-13T11:34:53+00:00

Adol Christin wrote:
咕了半天，点进来一看，满地都是大佬= = 而且能拉那个红白回来osu，厉害了
看到kibb对你家音效不太满，我尽量多在这方面下点功夫吧（虽然音效方面我算比较菜的）

MiaoFUuU
00:11:945 (1) - 建议移动到类似于(308,233)这样的位置。这样移动的间距，感觉跟前奏部分vocal强度相近的地方比较一致。 √
00:34:759 (3) - 这个地方我觉得应该用whistle，而不是clap √
00:37:813 - 00:44:999 - 我觉得这段插满默认whistle不是什么好主意。原曲这段只有逐渐深入变密的低沉鼓点，尖锐的默认whistle音特别毁那种感觉。最好换成SC1的whistle。 √
01:05:298 (5) - 漏whistle √
00:50:208 (1) - 这里多了一个whistle √
01:07:454 (1,2) - 这两个的头本无鼓点的音的，感觉也没必要通过音效强调打击感。就个人乐感，前面的1和后面的长滑条头的whistle已经足够有感觉了。 √
滑条艺术家，神神神
2333，谢谢

就这样吧。祝你好运！

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[Kamiya]

637 posts

Joined November 2012

[Kamiya] 2017-06-15T08:43:31+00:00

Adol Christin wrote:
咕了半天，点进来一看，满地都是大佬= = 而且能拉那个红白回来osu，厉害了
看到kibb对你家音效不太满，我尽量多在这方面下点功夫吧（虽然音效方面我算比较菜的）
Kamiya
最好把滑条拉动的声音消音了
00:37:813 - 00:44:999 - 同Ex难度。clear
00:48:053 (2,3) - 试试先ctrl+G这个，再ctrl+g滑条？感觉这样节奏上跟你的音效更搭clear
00:51:825 (5) - 建议移除掉头尾的whistle。感觉不用whistle对打击感没什么影响，用了反而略吵clear
00:53:981 (1) - 试试这样的滑条clear
00:56:316 (4) - 推荐换成这个1/2。这个感觉比折返合曲多了clear
00:57:933 (1) - 感觉离上一个远了点。。。跟图整体的间距不太搭调。。建议滑条头往下一个1的滑条头靠拢感觉还好吧，间距问题不是那么严重。
00:59:550 (2) - 建议去掉滑条尾whistleclear
01:00:448 (4,5) - 建议移除两个圈的whistle，01:06:196 (1,2) - 同理。clear
01:07:993 (5,6) - 5的whistle去了，6的加上clear

就这样吧。祝你好运！

谢摸~

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-06-27T07:41:45+00:00

from pigeon queue

Normal :
- 00:15:178 (2) - move the tail a bit left for symmetrical linear with 00:16:256 (3,4) -
- 00:47:873 (3,4,1) - i think you can try to make neater design here example http://puu.sh/wvmHN/9917f8a349.jpg
- 01:07:993 (3) - 176,156 for blanket with prev slider

Hard :
- 00:14:639 (3) - i would say seperate this to 2 circles. finish on downbeat mapped with slider tail has no emphasis at all
- 00:19:669 (2) - this jump is weird since the jump made when the music is weak and strong vocal at 00:19:849 - is mapped with stack
- 00:24:520 (4) - any reason unless for design about this jump?
- 00:31:885 (2) - 408,200? so you have a jump to emphasis 00:32:065 - 's cymbal
- 00:34:579 (5) - 396,260? reason same as above
- 00:35:657 (2) - why strong sound at redtick is mapped with tail when whitetick has no sound is mapped with slider's head?
- 00:56:136 (4) - a bit minor but flow can improved here https://puu.sh/wvn1J/7dd1e98e35.jpg
- 01:00:807 (1) - the jump is too far for hard diff
- 01:07:094 (2,3) - same as 00:19:669 (2) -
- 01:08:711 (1) - overmap at 01:09:160 - . try https://puu.sh/wvn4M/c6ecf22aa8.jpg instead

Insane :
- 00:32:065 (1) - the flow is too sharp after (5)'s jump. try make smoother on slider's flow instead with https://puu.sh/wvn9V/f66e65074b.jpg
- 00:34:939 - 00:32:065 - 00:33:322 - 00:36:196 - finish. apply for all diffs
- 00:36:196 (4,1) - sharp flow. try smoother it pls
- 00:44:639 (2) - the snap is wrong.. its 1/6
- 00:46:076 (1) - i would say use lower sv than 1,0x since its only a weak vocal. higher sv after spinner feels so sudden for me
- 00:55:508 (2) - overmap
- 00:57:573 (1) - no need nc here, u can remove it
- 01:09:431 (1) - finish
- interesting insane

Kamiya :
- 00:09:070 (1) - whistle for piano
- 00:11:945 - 00:14:819 - 00:16:256 - 00:20:568 - ^
- 00:12:663 (3,4,5,6) - make them as square pattern instead of weird pattern

- 00:15:897 (5,6) - i would like ctrl+g for consistent flow
- literally the diff is lack of neat design as kibbleru's words. it can be improved a lot better

Extra :
- 00:09:070 (1) - whistle pls
- 00:11:945 (1) - 00:14:819 (1) - 00:20:568 (3) - 00:23:442 (1) - 00:26:316 (1) - ^
- 00:19:849 (2) - maybe ctrl+g so u can make a jump for (3) circle to emphasis the downbeat
- 00:27:753 (2) - the flow suddenly is changed from 00:26:855 (2,3) - which makes it feels weird.. i would say move the circle to 96,352 for consistency flow
- 00:40:687 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - every jumps on redtick are nonsense when the sounds are very weak
- 01:09:160 (6) - as i said in hard. overmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap

yep so there are some stuff should be improved before bubble. i will keep an eye to this map ~

_MiaoFUuU_

314 posts

Joined April 2014

_MiaoFUuU_ 2017-06-27T14:32:59+00:00

Xinely wrote:
from pigeon queue

Extra :
- 00:09:070 (1) - whistle pls √
- 00:11:945 (1) - 00:14:819 (1) - 00:20:568 (3) - 00:23:442 (1) - 00:26:316 (1) - ^ √
- 00:19:849 (2) - maybe ctrl+g so u can make a jump for (3) circle to emphasis the downbeat but not pretty ,i want to ctrl+g this00:20:568 (3,1) -
- 00:27:753 (2) - the flow suddenly is changed from 00:26:855 (2,3) - which makes it feels weird.. i would say move the circle to 96,352 for consistency flow i make it stack at slider
- 00:40:687 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - every jumps on redtick are nonsense when the sounds are very weak √
- 01:09:160 (6) - as i said in hard. overmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap √

yep so there are some stuff should be improved before bubble. i will keep an eye to this map ~

THX~

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- Sunflower -

Topic Starter

- Sunflower - 2017-06-28T03:49:26+00:00

Xinely wrote:
from pigeon queue

Normal :
- 00:15:178 (2) - move the tail a bit left for symmetrical linear with 00:16:256 (3,4) -
- 00:47:873 (3,4,1) - i think you can try to make neater design here example http://puu.sh/wvmHN/9917f8a349.jpg
- 01:07:993 (3) - 176,156 for blanket with prev slider

Hard :
- 00:14:639 (3) - i would say seperate this to 2 circles. finish on downbeat mapped with slider tail has no emphasis at all
- 00:19:669 (2) - this jump is weird since the jump made when the music is weak and strong vocal at 00:19:849 - is mapped with stack
- 00:24:520 (4) - any reason unless for design about this jump?
- 00:31:885 (2) - 408,200? so you have a jump to emphasis 00:32:065 - 's cymbal
- 00:34:579 (5) - 396,260? reason same as above
- 00:35:657 (2) - why strong sound at redtick is mapped with tail when whitetick has no sound is mapped with slider's head?
- 00:56:136 (4) - a bit minor but flow can improved here https://puu.sh/wvn1J/7dd1e98e35.jpg
- 01:00:807 (1) - the jump is too far for hard diff
- 01:07:094 (2,3) - same as 00:19:669 (2) -
- 01:08:711 (1) - overmap at 01:09:160 - . try https://puu.sh/wvn4M/c6ecf22aa8.jpg instead

Insane :
- 00:32:065 (1) - the flow is too sharp after (5)'s jump. try make smoother on slider's flow instead with https://puu.sh/wvn9V/f66e65074b.jpg
- 00:34:939 - 00:32:065 - 00:33:322 - 00:36:196 - finish. apply for all diffs
- 00:36:196 (4,1) - sharp flow. try smoother it pls
- 00:44:639 (2) - the snap is wrong.. its 1/6
- 00:46:076 (1) - i would say use lower sv than 1,0x since its only a weak vocal. higher sv after spinner feels so sudden for me
- 00:55:508 (2) - overmap
- 00:57:573 (1) - no need nc here, u can remove it
- 01:09:431 (1) - finish

yep so there are some stuff should be improved before bubble. i will keep an eye to this map ~

sorry my computer browser crash qwq, so i only use telephone reply.
all change
thanks for u mod😂

[Kamiya]

637 posts

Joined November 2012

[Kamiya] 2017-06-29T07:50:41+00:00

Xinely wrote:
from pigeon queue
Kamiya :
- 00:09:070 (1) - whistle for piano clear
- 00:11:945 - 00:14:819 - 00:16:256 - 00:20:568 - ^clear
- 00:12:663 (3,4,5,6) - make them as square pattern instead of weird pattern deliberately
- 00:15:897 (5,6) - i would like ctrl+g for consistent flowclear
- literally the diff is lack of neat design as kibbleru's words. it can be improved a lot betterI like your modding because that is simple to understand......If just wrote some complex's reason about a simply mistake....I can think more complex.......
yep so there are some stuff should be improved before bubble. i will keep an eye to this map ~

thank you for your modding~!!!

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-07-01T14:13:21+00:00

Kamiya :
- 00:21:286 (2,3,4,5) - weird flow, try a pattern to make better flow and design example http://puu.sh/wyW5P/4270042807.jpg
- 00:22:903 (4,5,6) - same here, the (5) jump feels random too
- 00:25:777 (4) - its has strong vocal, imo its weird to you use small distance and suddenly a big jump for 00:26:136 (6) - , try move 00:25:777 (4) - to x:292 y: 136
- 00:27:394 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow
- 00:36:017 (1) - seperate to 2 circles instead for emphasis cymbal at 00:36:196 - . also this slider jump is random due it has weaker sound than redtick sound but mapped with big jump
- 00:43:921 (3) - sharp flow here, try 296,104 for smoother flow
- 00:44:280 (1) - i would say to reduce the jump.. it feels too far for an insane diff. 00:44:280 (1) - x:384,176 would be good
- 00:50:568 (4) - 232,96 instead to emphasis the cymbal
- 00:54:879 (5) - 276,212 instead. this circle has no strong sound if you hear the music clearly. the jump feels random so u better reduce the spacing here and increase spacing for next object to emphasis the vocal
- 00:57:214 (1) - the rhythm is wrong. it should be 2 circles because both 00:57:214 - 00:57:394 - have strong drum
- 01:06:376 (2,1) - the jump is for extra diff, not for insane. move 01:06:376 (2) - to 204,168 instead
- i have said if the flow and design arent good enough that means you have to tweak some but you didnt so i write everything i think about them here :CCCCCCCCCCC

Normal :
- 00:15:178 (2) - a bit more linear with drag tail 1 grid left
- 01:07:993 (3) - oh sorry it isnt blanket yet. i mean 176,160 aka 1 grid down

Hard :
- 00:19:669 (2) - 这个circle班到496，244所以可以blanket
- 00:32:783 (2) - 头上解除finish
- 00:35:657 (2) - 跟头上一样，顺便00:35:657 (2) - 我觉得slider不合适因为00:35:837 - 有强的声音，需要用circle可以emphasis更好
- 01:00:807 (1) - t跳得太难了，班这个slider到371，128
-01:09:250 (3) - 这里的声音很小，不要用很大的jump，试试班这个circle到296，272？

Insane：
- 00:46:076 (1) - 我觉得0，9还太快了，试试用0，75 还是0，8？
- 00:55:508 (2) - overmap, remove pls

Extra :
- 00:11:945 (1) - whistle

- Sunflower -

Topic Starter

- Sunflower - 2017-07-01T15:16:28+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Normal :
- 00:15:178 (2) - a bit more linear with drag tail 1 grid left √
- 01:07:993 (3) - oh sorry it isnt blanket yet. i mean 176,160 aka 1 grid down√

Hard :
- 00:19:669 (2) - 这个circle班到496，244所以可以blanket√
- 00:32:783 (2) - 头上解除finish√
- 00:35:657 (2) - 跟头上一样，顺便00:35:657 (2) - 我觉得slider不合适因为00:35:837 - 有强的声音，需要用circle可以emphasis更好改成了一个五角星跳
- 01:00:807 (1) - t跳得太难了，班这个slider到371，128√
-01:09:250 (3) - 这里的声音很小，不要用很大的jump，试试班这个circle到296，272？改了不过我比较喜欢那种三角形Xd(276:252)

Insane：
- 00:46:076 (1) - 我觉得0，9还太快了，试试用0，75 还是0，8？√0.75x
- 00:55:508 (2) - overmap, remove pls改成了sb跳

Extra :
- 00:11:945 (1) - whistle
√

谢谢dada

[Kamiya]

637 posts

Joined November 2012

[Kamiya] 2017-07-03T02:43:03+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Kamiya :
- 00:21:286 (2,3,4,5) - weird flow, try a pattern to make better flow and design example http://puu.sh/wyW5P/4270042807.jpgclear
- 00:22:903 (4,5,6) - same here, the (5) jump feels random tooclear
- 00:25:777 (4) - its has strong vocal, imo its weird to you use small distance and suddenly a big jump for 00:26:136 (6) - , try move 00:25:777 (4) - to x:292 y: 136clear
- 00:27:394 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flowclear
- 00:36:017 (1) - seperate to 2 circles instead for emphasis cymbal at 00:36:196 - . also this slider jump is random due it has weaker sound than redtick sound but mapped with big jumpclear
- 00:43:921 (3) - sharp flow here, try 296,104 for smoother flowclear
- 00:44:280 (1) - i would say to reduce the jump.. it feels too far for an insane diff. 00:44:280 (1) - x:384,176 would be goodclear
- 00:50:568 (4) - 232,96 instead to emphasis the cymbalclear
- 00:54:879 (5) - 276,212 instead. this circle has no strong sound if you hear the music clearly. the jump feels random so u better reduce the spacing here and increase spacing for next object to emphasis the vocalclear
- 00:57:214 (1) - the rhythm is wrong. it should be 2 circles because both 00:57:214 - 00:57:394 - have strong drumclear
- 01:06:376 (2,1) - the jump is for extra diff, not for insane. move 01:06:376 (2) - to 204,168 insteadclear
- i have said if the flow and design arent good enough that means you have to tweak some but you didnt so i write everything i think about them here :CCCCCCCCCCCxinely大佬为什么就我没中文摸了QAQ

thank you for try detailed modding!!

改^

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-07-03T17:18:36+00:00

Kwan说meta是Ok. 给你泡。加油

- Sunflower -

Topic Starter

- Sunflower - 2017-08-01T15:01:02+00:00

_(:з」∠)_找不到bn

[Kamiya]

637 posts

Joined November 2012

[Kamiya] 2017-08-06T09:34:30+00:00

- Sunflower - wrote:
_(:з」∠)_找不到bn

一个个敲门呀~~

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2017-08-11T04:26:50+00:00

Unused hitsounds

soft-hitclap10.wav
soft-hitclap5.wav
soft-hitfinish10.wav
soft-hitnormal9.mp3
soft-hitwhistle2.wav
soft-sliderslide1.mp3

Also, please use .wav and not .mp3 since theres a 5ms loading time before mp3's will play so by default they are all breaking the rule about not having 5ms delays.

soft-hitnormal9.mp3
soft-sliderslide1.mp3
soft-sliderslide7.mp3

Also no combo colors?

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Anyways I will repair Xinely's bubble after you fix, so don't worry. Since she isn't BN anymore its possible the bubble won't count soon with the new BN changes anyways. Poke me when you fix.

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-08-11T09:03:11+00:00

General如上↑
还有为啥低难度音效这么简朴 ......

kanor:
00:48:591 (4,1) - 01:00:807 (1) - 平行难道不是更好看...
00:56:496 (3,4,5) - 我觉得 https://puu.sh/x7hWN/927cb28941.png 这样的节奏才有突出remix的特色阿，00:50:568 (3,4) - 01:02:065 (3,4) - 还可以接受因为在跟vocal
01:07:993 (3) - ^ 这个也是

Hard:
ar有点高 5忽然到8.. hp也可以低点你看后面diff都用了6
00:32:783 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 以及kiai 跟vocal也不是不可以，但总感觉没有突出mix的特色，完全像普通曲子一样了..
01:05:118 (1) - 可以间距摆大胆点，像 01:03:322 (4,1) - 一样有甩出去的感觉->大概这样，bpm不高的Hard不用担心这种间距对实际难度造成的影响
间距整体把握得还是挺好的，不过以kiai为例，00:49:310 (1) - 等等的重音处理方式（间距，flow方面）最好保持某种一贯的思路，这是目前主流的hard难度的处理方向，以后可以注意。（还有你有没有发现你kiai都是一种节奏阿...

Insane:
00:36:376 (1) - 个人感觉忽然去跟到vocal感觉有点违和，00:33:322 (1) - 这里就没跟
00:40:867 (2,3) - 00:42:304 (2,3) - 考虑加个whistle? 多少让overmap听上去合理点
00:45:897 - umm 塞个5%绿线？毕竟没音
00:51:646 (3) - whistle
00:54:070 (2) - 这个note是算跟的什么啊，听不出来
01:01:346 (2) - ctrl-g? flow更流畅

Kamiya:
没combo colour, 顺便既然是东方可以考虑这个难度改叫Lunatic
01:05:837 (2) - kiai也没用过其他神奇的形状所以这个也改用普通的形状吧
打起来还可以但整洁度还是比较一般，你看kiai里就不少奇奇怪怪有意无意的overlap比如 00:47:514 (3,1,2,4,6) - 就不太好看。。不过这也是个人观点

Miaofu:
00:34:759 - 怀疑你这儿该有的音效加错到 00:34:669 - 了
00:41:047 (2) - 漏whistle
00:44:280 (1,2,3,4) - 给串加音效a

叫我或楼上rebubble都可，如果你也有空摸下我图的话十分感谢 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/651755

- Sunflower -

Topic Starter

- Sunflower - 2017-08-17T07:51:59+00:00

Garden wrote:
General如上↑
还有为啥低难度音效这么简朴 ......

kanor:
00:48:591 (4,1) - 01:00:807 (1) - 平行难道不是更好看...√
00:56:496 (3,4,5) - 我觉得 https://puu.sh/x7hWN/927cb28941.png 这样的节奏才有突出remix的特色阿，00:50:568 (3,4) - 01:02:065 (3,4) - 还可以接受因为在跟vocal
01:07:993 (3) - ^ 这个也是√

Hard:
ar有点高 5忽然到8.. hp也可以低点你看后面diff都用了6 √
00:32:783 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 以及kiai 跟vocal也不是不可以，但总感觉没有突出mix的特色，完全像普通曲子一样了..
01:05:118 (1) - 可以间距摆大胆点，像 01:03:322 (4,1) - 一样有甩出去的感觉->大概这样，bpm不高的Hard不用担心这种间距对实际难度造成的影响
间距整体把握得还是挺好的，不过以kiai为例，00:49:310 (1) - 等等的重音处理方式（间距，flow方面）最好保持某种一贯的思路，这是目前主流的hard难度的处理方向，以后可以注意。（还有你有没有发现你kiai都是一种节奏阿...

Insane:
00:36:376 (1) - 个人感觉忽然去跟到vocal感觉有点违和，00:33:322 (1) - 这里就没跟
00:40:867 (2,3) - 00:42:304 (2,3) - 考虑加个whistle? 多少让overmap听上去合理点√
00:45:897 - umm 塞个5%绿线？毕竟没音 √
00:51:646 (3) - whistle √
00:54:070 (2) - 这个note是算跟的什么啊，听不出来 √
01:01:346 (2) - ctrl-g? flow更流畅 √

Kamiya:
没combo colour, 顺便既然是东方可以考虑这个难度改叫Lunatic √
01:05:837 (2) - kiai也没用过其他神奇的形状所以这个也改用普通的形状吧√
打起来还可以但整洁度还是比较一般，你看kiai里就不少奇奇怪怪有意无意的overlap比如 00:47:514 (3,1,2,4,6) - 就不太好看。。不过这也是个人观点

Miaofu:
00:34:759 - 怀疑你这儿该有的音效加错到 00:34:669 - 了 √
00:41:047 (2) - 漏whistle √
00:44:280 (1,2,3,4) - 给串加音效a √

叫我或楼上rebubble都可，如果你也有空摸下我图的话十分感谢 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/651755

有一些写在email里了

Garden

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Garden 2017-08-18T03:02:56+00:00

我重下了两遍那些音效啥的还是没改阿
Unused hitsounds:
soft-hitclap10.wav
soft-hitclap5.wav
soft-hitfinish10.wav
soft-hitnormal9.wav
soft-hitwhistle2.wav
soft-sliderslide1.wav
不用的就是要删掉的意思
然后soft sliderslide7用sliderslide(44字节)的那个文件代替，官方有规定空白音效要用那个44字节的

别的就这样吧

Garden

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Garden 2017-08-21T11:18:48+00:00

ok

sodarose

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sodarose 2017-09-19T06:20:38+00:00

你倒是快飞啊
天空咕正式版都出了

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2017-10-01T20:24:48+00:00

http://feltmusic.net/FELT020/

Just confirming metadata.

This set looks good, qualified!

- Sunflower -

Topic Starter

- Sunflower - 2017-10-02T01:52:55+00:00

Thank you all guys.

[Kamiya]

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[Kamiya] 2017-10-02T03:21:20+00:00

- Sunflower - wrote:
Thank you all guys.

rank了，不错不错

Lama Poluna

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Lama Poluna 2017-10-03T13:26:07+00:00

Better change source on 東方緋想天　～ Scarlet Weather Rhapsody.

- Sunflower -

Topic Starter

- Sunflower - 2017-10-05T06:00:31+00:00

Lama Poluna wrote:
Better change source on 東方緋想天　～ Scarlet Weather Rhapsody.

sorry my english bad

-
東方緋想天～东方绯想天～ Scarlet Weather Rhapsody.～

第一个是繁体字（通用的）
東方緋想天 is traditional character
it universal
第二个是简体字（汉字比较适合国人搜索）
东方绯想天 is simplified character
it More suitable for Chinese people search

所以我觉得这么打也没什么错（反正不太正规啦hha）
So I don't think there's anything wrong with it (maybe

)

Battle

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Battle 2017-10-05T06:56:45+00:00

tldr you can have 東方Project as the source or have it be the actual game and both work fine lol

sodarose

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sodarose 2017-10-07T03:27:27+00:00

你终于动了

_MiaoFUuU_

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_MiaoFUuU_ 2017-10-11T15:24:45+00:00

这是一个送分图

FELT - Life [Eris's "a Fate Encounter" mix]

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