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Akitoshi's Hard (どこにでも居る)

Hazu's Insane

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Yasaija 714 wrote:
Akitoshi's Hard (どこにでも居る) もうデフォルトって事で

thanks! :D

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Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48134
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Heikousen
TitleUnicode:平行線
Artist:Sayuri
ArtistUnicode:さユり
Creator:Agatsu
Version:Akitoshi's Hard
Source:クズの本懐
Tags:kuzu no honkai ending scum's wish tv size scums akitoshi corinn hazu-
BeatmapID:1255205
BeatmapSetID:587728

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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151,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
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86773,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 60,40,108
Combo2 : 34,35,72
Combo3 : 199,37,37
Combo4 : 226,14,78

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Rhythm Incarnate
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Yasaija 714 wrote:
Normal
  • 00:12:718 - The sound at the end of the slider is not in the song that's when the sound ends, that's also why it's on sliderend
  • 00:22:853 (1) - Remove NC i don't think so
    I thought it better to match NC to lyrics than to downbeat
  • 00:37:296 - Why not pick up this sound? feels a bit too dense, 00:33:998 (1,2) - is to emphasize the new section and the vocal
    00:33:998 (1,2) - I think the same as this pattern is good


fixed others that were unmentioned!
thanks :D
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Earned 1 kudosu.
hi, nm from my queue i think
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Easy
01:06:354 (3,2) - bad blanket
01:06:668 (1,2) - you use a 3/2 repeating slider here, but not for here 01:04:155 (1,2) and imo it would be better if you used it both places

Normal
00:04:205 (2) - sharp angled slider seems unnecessary here + 00:03:394 (1) isn't perfectly spaced between the slider head and tail
00:10:691 (2) - same thing about the sharp angle (and a lot of the other times you use sharply angled sliders i don't think are appropriate. i don't feel like pointing them all out/)

Insane
00:08:259 (2,3) - bad blanket
00:11:299 (3,1) - why is spacing so big here this part of the song is pretty calm
00:18:799 (4,1) - uncomfortable to play imo
00:34:626 (4,1) - imperfect blanket as well
00:39:024 (1,1,1) - why are these slider shapes so different when they represent basically the same thing
00:54:417 (2,1) - blanket

good luck!
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Remapped my diff based on your suggestions xd
Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48134
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Heikousen
TitleUnicode:平行線
Artist:Sayuri
ArtistUnicode:さユり
Creator:Agatsu
Version:Hazu's Insane
Source:クズの本懐
Tags:kuzu no honkai ending scum's wish tv size scums akitoshi corinn hazu-
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Hazu's Insane

  • 00:49:704 (3,4) - yo creo que la distancia es demasiada para lo poco intenso que es el beat. aunque hiciste esto en hartas partes asi que no se si lo quieras cambiar xd


Akitoshi's Hard

  • 00:06:232 (4) - u better leave this beat unmapped like in the other diffs since theres literally nothing to map here also less density expresses better how calm the song is
  • 00:06:637 (1) - this rhythm 00:00:151 (1,2,3) - works better here so u make all vocals clickable and delete 00:08:664 (2) - cuz vocals are more and u already shown that u priorize vocals on 00:02:178 -
  • 00:30:385 (2,3) - right now youre giving importance to the white tick on (3)'s head while it doenst really stand out as much as the red one on its tail. ctrlging them fixes that
  • 00:57:558 (4,5) - 01:02:113 (2,3) - you usually dont use such a large spacing for 1/2 consecutive clickable objects even if some shows more importance. the rest ones are spaced equally so u better stick to ds on those patterns too


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- titan wrote:
Easy
01:06:354 (3,2) - bad blanket fixed
01:06:668 (1,2) - you use a 3/2 repeating slider here, but not for here 01:04:155 (1,2) and imo it would be better if you used it both places might be too dense for easy so i variate it

Normal
00:04:205 (2) - sharp angled slider seems unnecessary here + 00:03:394 (1) isn't perfectly spaced between the slider head and tail idk,
kinda feels unnecessary

00:10:691 (2) - same thing about the sharp angle (and a lot of the other times you use sharply angled sliders i don't think are appropriate. i don't feel like pointing them all out/)

Insane
00:08:259 (2,3) - bad blanket i really can't blanket lo l
00:11:299 (3,1) - why is spacing so big here this part of the song is pretty calm it's for the triangle
00:18:799 (4,1) - uncomfortable to play imo it's ok
00:34:626 (4,1) - imperfect blanket as well
00:39:024 (1,1,1) - why are these slider shapes so different when they represent basically the same thing they actually get stronger
00:54:417 (2,1) - blanket
good luck!


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00:19:610 (1) - hp
00:32:113 (2) - ^
00:52:218 (2,1) - intentional unstack?
01:17:348 (2,3) - blanket pls lol
01:21:118 (3,3) - you can avoid this overlap
01:24:259 (1,2,3) - i think there rhythm dont much music, because melody doesnt change until 01:26:773 (1) - and there are in kiai, so i think you should make the rhythm more difficult a little more. (but imo xd) maybe https://i.gyazo.com/43027c2cbd698e76137 ... 9aa5bc.png

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00:32:741 (3) - hp!!!
00:38:396 (5,1) - you can blanket

Akitoshi
Yasaija 714 wrote:
(どこにでも居る) i agree

00:29:914 (4) - もうちょい上に上げて、前後の間隔を同じにしてもいいかも Aメロだしその方が流れていいと思う こーんな感じ 
https://i.gyazo.com/c72ec59d7cd19e89f78 ... edbb9e.png

Hazu
widescreen is uncheck only this diff.
01:13:265 (2,3) - there are too close, so i think not good flow here. maybe move 01:13:579 (3,4,1) - to 261:361 ?? (good to me xd)

Insane
00:19:610 (1) - move tail of the slider to 00:20:826 - ?
because you did follow vocal before here in 00:16:367 (1,2,3,4) - (slider's head, tail, reverse have big vocal),so 00:20:826 - which have big vocal is better than 00:20:421 - . (remove whistle).
00:47:663 (1,1) - nazi, blanket is off xd
01:00:071 (5,1) - compared to other pattern(01:20:019 (4,5,1) - etc...), they are too close, so you cannot emphasize (1) imo. move to 193:40 better to me.

fun map (^^♪
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Hazu's Insane

  • 00:49:704 (3,4) - yo creo que la distancia es demasiada para lo poco intenso que es el beat. aunque hiciste esto en hartas partes asi que no se si lo quieras cambiar xd Si, se que tiene mucho spacing, pero esa era la idea xd quizá los reduzca luego.

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Hazu
widescreen is uncheck only this diff. Agatsu you can fix this for me? thx :d
01:13:265 (2,3) - there are too close, so i think not good flow here. maybe move 01:13:579 (3,4,1) - to 261:361 ?? (good to me xd) Mmm... I'll ask for testplay, but I think is a good flow imo.

fun map (^^♪
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Akitoshi's Hard

  • 00:06:232 (4) - u better leave this beat unmapped like in the other diffs since theres literally nothing to map here also less density expresses better how calm the song is
  • 00:06:637 (1) - this rhythm 00:00:151 (1,2,3) - works better here so u make all vocals clickable and delete 00:08:664 (2) - cuz vocals are more and u already shown that u priorize vocals on 00:02:178 -
  • 00:30:385 (2,3) - right now youre giving importance to the white tick on (3)'s head while it doenst really stand out as much as the red one on its tail. ctrlging them fixes that
  • 00:57:558 (4,5) - 01:02:113 (2,3) - you usually dont use such a large spacing for 1/2 consecutive clickable objects even if some shows more importance. the rest ones are spaced equally so u better stick to ds on those patterns too increased the number of jumps instead


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Akitoshi
Yasaija 714 wrote:
(どこにでも居る) i agree

00:29:914 (4) - もうちょい上に上げて、前後の間隔を同じにしてもいいかも Aメロだしその方が流れていいと思う こーんな感じ fixed
https://i.gyazo.com/c72ec59d7cd19e89f78 ... edbb9e.png


basically fixed all, thanks uwu

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