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oh, by the way I should add that the artist is actually "fhána", not fhana.

no kudosu since this is simple :P


I TRIED SUBMITTING THIS SO MANY TIMES WITH THAT ARTIST NAME AND IT DOESN'T WORK help someone
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you tried that right?
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-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:
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you tried that right?


k I did that like three times before and it didn't work wtf

Worked now, thx :D
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Hi, late but better late than never... just kill me

d=don
k=kat
D=Big Don
K=Big Kat
r=remove
(?)=Suggestion


Chromoyams' Inner Oni
  • Chromoxx
  • 00:27:939 - You're missing a note here, which is a really clear sound. Consider adding a k here. Might as well consider changing this pattern like this starting from 00:26:229 - : Image
  • 00:33:224 - Try adding a note here and changing 00:33:380 - into k. Also add a d here 00:33:691 - , these little breaks flow really bad imo.
  • 01:04:312 - 01:04:468 - Swap these to notes (would end being d K). Suggesting this because I think it sounds better this way.
  • 01:05:090 - Change this triplet into kkd, will fit vocals much better since the tone is descending.
  • 01:06:799 - 01:06:955 - Same suggestion as before. d K.
  • 02:15:349 - Change to d, k sounds really bad here.
  • 02:16:281 - Come on Chromoxx, make it more interesting, change this one to d.
  • 02:42:551 - Same suggestion as before, k fits better the vocal.
  • 03:57:473 - Mind if i suggest to make this part less dense? It's really calm and only vocals are here. Also you map all the vocals but not this 04:06:644 - ? I'm disappointed friend. Those drums need to be mapped.

  • newyams99
  • 00:58:095 - Would suggest you to change this to k. Fits vocal better.
  • 01:51:255 - Change to k, if you listen carefully you'll know why.
  • 01:54:675 - This pattern sounds better as dkddkkd imo, try it.
  • 02:43:639 - 02:43:794 - k and d respectively, they play and follow better the vocal.

That's all from me, a really nice map. Good luck!
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Hi, late but better late than never... just kill me

d=don
k=kat
D=Big Don
K=Big Kat
r=remove
(?)=Suggestion


Chromoyams' Inner Oni
  • Chromoxx
  • 00:27:939 - You're missing a note here, which is a really clear sound. Consider adding a k here. Might as well consider changing this pattern like this starting from 00:26:229 - : Image there isn't really a distinct sound here and the break is good
  • 00:33:224 - Try adding a note here and changing 00:33:380 - into k. Also add a d here 00:33:691 - , these little breaks flow really bad imo. the breaks add for a nice flow variation and go pretty well imo
  • 01:04:312 - 01:04:468 - Swap these to notes (would end being d K). Suggesting this because I think it sounds better this way. i like the k D tbh
  • 01:05:090 - Change this triplet into kkd, will fit vocals much better since the tone is descending. the tone isn't really descending. If anything, it goes down from 347 to 348, that's why the triplet starts with a d
  • 01:06:799 - 01:06:955 - Same suggestion as before. d K. same answer
  • 02:15:349 - Change to d, k sounds really bad here. i think it's fine here tbh
  • 02:16:281 - Come on Chromoxx, make it more interesting, change this one to d. it's ok as it is, since it's all higher pitched notes. also some mono doesn't always hurt
  • 02:42:551 - Same suggestion as before, k fits better the vocal. i'll leave this up to newyams, depending on what he is doing he can change this one too
  • 03:57:473 - Mind if i suggest to make this part less dense? It's really calm and only vocals are here. Also you map all the vocals but not this 04:06:644 - ? I'm disappointed friend. Those drums need to be mapped. also staying as it is, i think it's not that dense tbh... also gonna leave out those drums, since i'm only starting the more densely mapped part which incorporates the drums at 04:07:421 (155) -

That's all from me, a really nice map. Good luck!

thx for modding :D
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Lost The Lights wrote:
Hi, late but better late than never... just kill me

d=don
k=kat
D=Big Don
K=Big Kat
r=remove
(?)=Suggestion


Chromoyams' Inner Oni


  • newyams99
  • 00:58:095 - Would suggest you to change this to k. Fits vocal better. Changed in Chromoxx's part too.
  • 01:51:255 - Change to k, if you listen carefully you'll know why. Sure.
  • 01:54:675 - This pattern sounds better as dkddkkd imo, try it. Was thinking about that when I was listening to it, changed.
  • 02:43:639 - 02:43:794 - k and d respectively, they play and follow better the vocal. I'd prefer not to miss the drum sound.

That's all from me, a really nice map. Good luck!


Thanks for the mod, and sorry for the late response :/
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Hi naxyimyam and google chrome, just idk here

02:15:659 (206,207,208,209,210,211,212) - dkddkkk. , `L fit ples son dem ( the current is over emphasize on 02:15:659 (206,207,208,209) - these :U ), 02:18:147 (218,219,220,221,222,223,224) - brah the mirror variation guud :U

03:18:846 (649,650) - swap, 03:19:312 - kat. ez

03:21:022 (675,676) - ^ sweg, but 03:21:955 (687,688) - these you can keep bcus this sound interesting with current color

okey just it? consider that bcus them is really similar repeating. I sure differ just 03:21:955 (687,688) -these bcus guitar more increasing

,. cy ,

edit: fuq yeee lats kiai with fast SV. rip HR
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newyams
00:19:701 (100) - it wouldn't fit to the pattern to make 00:19:545 (99) - as big note, obviously. Instead, I find that (100) works somewhat like an "end" and may be emphasized as big note.
01:28:250 - 02:00:426 - It's a pity you apparently don't want to use SV decreases (?) I can't really tell but I guess since it's an atmospheric addition to the calm nature of this part.
04:18:613 - the SV usage here is really uncomfortable. While I agree with the use of them to emphasize the impact the last refrain has, I disagree that 1.20x is a good choice. For a 193 BPM track it doesn't work so natural like for lower BPMs. instead of 0.05x jumps, do 0.04 jumps. Means 04:18:613 - as 1.04x, 04:18:924 - as 1.08x and so on.


Chromoxx
01:14:105 (419,420,421,422,423) - Aus persönlicher Hinsicht fände ich d kkddk besser; die einzelne d note ist eher die Vorbereitung als Teil der Stimme. Während kkddk perfekt mit der Stimme anfängt und folgt.
03:17:680 - 03:22:343 - Uh.. Ich sehe da ehrlich gesagt nicht, wonach du da gehst. 03:22:654 - 03:24:830 - funktioniert wunderbar, wohlmöglich weil der Rhythmus konsistent ist und funktioniert einigermaßen gut mit der Musik hier. Du könntest bei den beiden vorherigen Streams ebenfalls etwas "Konsistenteres" nehmen. Wie wäre es für den ersten Stream kkddkdk..., hab mir das mal angehört und fühlt sich richtig gut an. :D

Except of the last points I am pretty satisfied with the map, collab itself works well. :ok_hand:
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Stefan wrote:
´_>´)


newyams
00:19:701 (100) - it wouldn't fit to the pattern to make 00:19:545 (99) - as big note, obviously. Instead, I find that (100) works somewhat like an "end" and may be emphasized as big note. I added a hit at 00:19:856 - if that makes it any better.
01:28:250 - 02:00:426 - It's a pity you apparently don't want to use SV decreases (?) I can't really tell but I guess since it's an atmospheric addition to the calm nature of this part. Made some SV changes :D
04:18:613 - the SV usage here is really uncomfortable. While I agree with the use of them to emphasize the impact the last refrain has, I disagree that 1.20x is a good choice. For a 193 BPM track it doesn't work so natural like for lower BPMs. instead of 0.05x jumps, do 0.04 jumps. Means 04:18:613 - as 1.04x, 04:18:924 - as 1.08x and so on. Sure thing.

Except of the last points I am pretty satisfied with the map, collab itself works well. :ok_hand:


Thanks for the mod :D 8-)
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https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7579053
FC !!! xD

tfw when I still can't FC lol
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u want me to take this diff to my set ?
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/668202
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@surono fixed the first one, but didn't change the streams since they play better as they are atm imo

@stefan fixed the first one, but not changing the streams. the last one has a lot stronger consistent guitar which is why i made the stream repetitive in a way to make it stand out more

applying these changes to sotarks' set, since the diff is now moved
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