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lenpai
>:(
niichan
00:02:717 (2717|2) - should be a 1/2 ln
00:14:717 - vs 00:20:536 - soooome inconsistency here so id go with moving 00:20:717 (20717|3) - to 3 so that it makes more sense with the drums and is quite more enjoyable to play
tbh id move 00:24:536 (24536|3) - to 1 and 00:24:717 (24717|0) - to 3 for a more even miniijack placement. Consider this: 00:23:990 (23990|1,24172|1,24717|0,24899|0,25445|0,25626|0) -
00:29:990 - did u just copypasta and ctrl h >:( apply what is done in ^ but with different column usages of course
00:40:536 - this. is some out of place semi-tricky jacking. Not the best pattern. Better go for something like: https://puu.sh/wmBYa/3283642d3e.png dont mind the triple stack this is much easier to play tbh

ill get back on this tomorrow

more niichan
00:54:899 (54899|3) - move to 3 because jacking into a white line is feels better than jacking from a white line
01:02:899 (62899|3) - to 2 with the same reason

i guess that should do.

Best of luck! :D
Unpredictable
hey this mod is long overdue and finally got to it.

1|2|3|4

Harlequin vs. V's Easy
- I don't see why it has a OD of 7 for an easy map. I would recommend changing to 6 or 6.5.
- 01:27:717 (87717|0) - I think the LN ends here 01:28:626 instead.
Overall, nice job. Looks good.

Normal
- 00:05:869 (5869|1,6111|2) - These two notes are super off and I'm not sure exactly what they're even following. Put one note here 00:05:808 and the other one here 00:06:081
- 00:15:263 Why not add a note here? You can definitely hear sound and its a good follow up to the doubles.
- 00:44:172 Add another note to make this a double? Sounds like all the other doubles you have here.
- 01:12:172 (72172|2,72536|1,72899|2) - I think we can fix this part including some notes above this. I suggest moving this 01:12:172 (72172|2) - to column 2, 01:12:536 (72536|1) - this to column 3, 01:12:899 (72899|2) - this to column 4, 01:13:263 (73263|3) - this to column 2, and 01:13:626 (73626|1) - this to column 4.
- 01:18:354 (78354|1) - would move this to column 1
- 01:28:626 same thing as before, would extend LNs to here.

Hard
- 00:11:081 (11081|0) - would move this to column 4
- 00:37:263 (37263|0) - would move this to column 3 and 00:37:626 (37626|3) - to column 1
- 01:22:172 (82172|0,82354|3,82354|0,82536|2,82717|3,82717|2) - I think this can do with some fixing. How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8570742 ?
- 01:28:626 Extend LNs

Onii-chan Daisuki!!! (this diff name lol)
honestly nothing much to say. i sorta like this LN mess and its pretty cool.

I think you can definitely try for rank. It would be cool if you did. Anyways, enjoy mod. :)
Topic Starter
[Harlequin]

Lenfried- wrote:

>:(
niichan
00:02:717 (2717|2) - should be a 1/2 ln
00:14:717 - vs 00:20:536 - soooome inconsistency here so id go with moving 00:20:717 (20717|3) - to 3 so that it makes more sense with the drums and is quite more enjoyable to play
tbh id move 00:24:536 (24536|3) - to 1 and 00:24:717 (24717|0) - to 3 for a more even miniijack placement. Consider this: 00:23:990 (23990|1,24172|1,24717|0,24899|0,25445|0,25626|0) -
00:29:990 - did u just copypasta and ctrl h >:( apply what is done in ^ but with different column usages of course
00:40:536 - this. is some out of place semi-tricky jacking. Not the best pattern. Better go for something like: https://puu.sh/wmBYa/3283642d3e.png dont mind the triple stack this is much easier to play tbh

ill get back on this tomorrow

more niichan
00:54:899 (54899|3) - move to 3 because jacking into a white line is feels better than jacking from a white line
01:02:899 (62899|3) - to 2 with the same reason

i guess that should do.

Best of luck! :D

Unpredictable wrote:

hey this mod is long overdue and finally got to it.

1|2|3|4

Harlequin vs. V's Easy
- I don't see why it has a OD of 7 for an easy map. I would recommend changing to 6 or 6.5.
- 01:27:717 (87717|0) - I think the LN ends here 01:28:626 instead.
Overall, nice job. Looks good.

Normal
- 00:05:869 (5869|1,6111|2) - These two notes are super off and I'm not sure exactly what they're even following. Put one note here 00:05:808 and the other one here 00:06:081
- 00:15:263 Why not add a note here? You can definitely hear sound and its a good follow up to the doubles.
- 00:44:172 Add another note to make this a double? Sounds like all the other doubles you have here.
- 01:12:172 (72172|2,72536|1,72899|2) - I think we can fix this part including some notes above this. I suggest moving this 01:12:172 (72172|2) - to column 2, 01:12:536 (72536|1) - this to column 3, 01:12:899 (72899|2) - this to column 4, 01:13:263 (73263|3) - this to column 2, and 01:13:626 (73626|1) - this to column 4.
- 01:18:354 (78354|1) - would move this to column 1
- 01:28:626 same thing as before, would extend LNs to here.

Hard
- 00:11:081 (11081|0) - would move this to column 4
- 00:37:263 (37263|0) - would move this to column 3 and 00:37:626 (37626|3) - to column 1
- 01:22:172 (82172|0,82354|3,82354|0,82536|2,82717|3,82717|2) - I think this can do with some fixing. How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8570742 ?
- 01:28:626 Extend LNs

Onii-chan Daisuki!!! (this diff name lol)
honestly nothing much to say. i sorta like this LN mess and its pretty cool.

I think you can definitely try for rank. It would be cool if you did. Anyways, enjoy mod. :)

sorry im just online again now ;w;
and all accpeted owo!!
Maxus
blablabla
21:27 Maxus: 00:09:263 (9263|3,9445|1) - diflip ja mnurut wa biar mirror ama 00:07:808 - 
21:27 Maxus: lbih konsisten jg strukturnya ama pattern 1-4 4-1 sblmny
21:27 [Harlequin]: flipped x3
21:28 [Harlequin]: beneran kalo HS nya standar sih wa paham tapi kalo di tambah ga paham gw =w=
21:28 Maxus: HS custom mksdnya kah :oo
21:28 [Harlequin]: nah itu kaya C W F masih ngerti =w=
21:29 Maxus: 00:13:445 (13445|0,13808|2) - bkin col 4 dan col 1 ja biar pling ga msih ad ngikut pitchnya
21:29 Maxus: klo snare, hat, dsbny bgg y :v
21:29 [Harlequin]: nah bingung itu gw :v
21:30 [Harlequin]: btw di ubah ke ke 4 sama 1 owo)b
21:31 Maxus: map balon byk tuh hs customny kyk anemoi wkwk
21:31 Maxus: 00:21:626 - coba dbkin kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8940287
21:31 Maxus: flow stair 1-2-3-4 nya ga ad sblmny pdhl 4-3-2-1 byk tuh :v
21:32 [Harlequin]: oke di ubah koko :v
21:32 Maxus: 00:31:808 (31808|0) - col 3 lbih ngeflow imo biar simetris ma 00:29:626 (29626|0,29990|1,30354|2) -
21:32 Maxus: aku pensiun ah entar :v
21:33 [Harlequin]: mantap :v
21:33 [Harlequin]: yah kalo lu pensiun wa juga lah :v
21:33 Maxus: kok ngikut2 gw njir :vv
21:34 Maxus: 00:39:808 (39808|0) - jadi normal note dah, soalny wa ykin org bkal pda protes ma pattern yg skrg wkwk
21:34 [Harlequin]: nanti map gw ga ada yang rank :v
21:34 Maxus: soalny pda strict bgt ma diff easy enth knp
21:35 [Harlequin]: oke ane ubah koko :v
21:37 Maxus: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8940354 kyk gni dah stlh wa pkir2 :v
21:38 [Harlequin]: ane udah ubah kaya gitu :v
21:39 Maxus: cie koko jaog ubahnya =w=
21:40 [Harlequin]: kebetulan sama aja itu ubahnya =w=
21:40 Maxus: 00:52:172 - mnurut wa rada dipotek ja LN nya, ama delete 00:53:263 - , jadi kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8940371
21:40 Maxus: bguslah -w-
21:42 Maxus: 01:04:899 - 01:05:626 - masing2 tambah 1/2 LN biar lebih syncron ama synthnya
21:42 Maxus: jgn lupa C nya jg
21:42 [Harlequin]: oke oke :v
21:42 [Harlequin]: soap koko :v
21:42 [Harlequin]: *siap
21:43 Maxus: 01:20:536 (80536|0,80536|1,81263|0,81626|1,82354|0,82717|1,83445|0,83445|1,84172|0,84536|1) - trlalu berat sbelah wa rasa :v
21:44 [Harlequin]: okai re-arrange :v
21:45 Maxus: kyk gmn tuh direarrangeny :v
21:46 [Harlequin]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8940415 :v
21:47 Maxus: boleh2 :v
21:48 *Maxus is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1302507 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [Normal]]
21:48 [Harlequin]: aseekk :v
21:48 Maxus: easy dh ready :v
21:49 [Harlequin]: okai :v
21:49 [Harlequin]: ini diff easy 85% buatan gw lol
21:49 Maxus: 00:28:354 (28354|1,28536|0) - flip ja biar ga shield
21:49 Maxus: sklian ja blg itu diff lu :v
21:49 [Harlequin]: wkaowkoaw :v
21:49 [Harlequin]: oke itu flip btw :v
21:50 [Harlequin]: diff normal best BG anjay
21:51 Maxus: kget wa diff normal lu bgus /run :p
21:51 [Harlequin]: bagus darimana D:
21:52 Maxus: 01:22:717 (82717|3) - pindah col 3 biar ga gitu stack
21:52 Maxus: solid normalnya =w=
21:52 Maxus: wa mrasa kyk klo wa yg buat /run
21:52 [Harlequin]: wkaowka moved :v
21:52 Maxus: ok itu ja :v
21:52 [Harlequin]: awakwoaw diff nya terlalu jelek ya :v
21:53 Maxus: bgus lah =w=
21:54 Maxus: 00:13:445 (13445|0,13808|2) - kykny cma ini LN yg ga dijack
21:55 Maxus: 00:16:354 (16354|3,16717|3) - 00:19:263 (19263|2,19626|2) - smua dijack wkwk
21:55 [Harlequin]: iya anjit wkaowk ccd adik gw :v
21:56 Maxus: tp tetep solid overall =w=)b
21:56 Maxus: 00:24:899 (24899|1,25081|0,25263|1,25445|0) - jgn bgini klo bisa
21:57 [Harlequin]: kok kaya gitu sih patternya awkoak , re-arrange =w=b
21:59 Maxus: 00:49:990 (49990|1) - klo bs rearrange biar nih LN muat di col 3, soalny jd ga simetris ma 00:50:717 (50717|3,51445|0,52172|1) - wkkw
22:01 Maxus: itu ja kykny
22:03 *Maxus is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1299481 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [Onii-chan Daisuki!!!]]
22:04 [Harlequin]: bentar koko masih re-araange yang hard :'v
22:04 Maxus: waduh =w="
22:04 [Harlequin]: oke done :v
22:06 Maxus: 00:12:899 (12899|3) - pindah col 2 biar lbi seimbang wkwk
22:06 [Harlequin]: oke nice shoot :v
22:07 Maxus: 00:30:536 (30536|3,30717|1,30717|0,30717|3,31263|3,31445|3,31445|1,31445|0) - coba bedain 2 pattern ini dah
22:07 Maxus: 00:24:717 - ama ini jg, biar bervariasi
22:09 [Harlequin]: okee okee :v
22:10 Maxus: 00:52:354 (52354|3) - ke col 1 lbih balance
22:11 [Harlequin]: sip mantap =w=b
22:11 Maxus: 01:22:899 (82899|2,83081|3) - switch column biar jackny ga gitu rentetan ama 01:21:626 (81626|2,82172|2,82354|2,82717|2) -
22:11 Maxus: itu ja :v
22:12 [Harlequin]: oke dah di switch =w=b
22:13 Maxus: update lah wkkw
22:13 [Harlequin]: OHH IYAAA WAOKWAOWK :V
22:13 [Harlequin]: gw cuman save doang =w=
22:14 Maxus: 01:28:263 (88263|0,88354|1,88445|2,88536|3) - stelah gw pikir2 lg dr kmrin, noteny kykny snapnya rada gaje ya
22:14 Maxus: apa delete ja biar play safe?
22:15 [Harlequin]: iya sih 1/4 kaya ga masuk juga kalo di denger 25% =w=
22:15 Maxus: tktnya ga boleh wkwk
22:16 [Harlequin]: berarti aga di panjing lagi ya LN nya =w=?
22:16 Maxus: delete ja 4 note trkhirny
22:17 Maxus: wwkwk
22:17 [Harlequin]: udh di delete :v
22:18 [Harlequin]: gpp kah ending nya ga sama kaya diff hard? owo
22:19 Maxus: gpp kok wkwk
22:19 Maxus: itu fleksibel
22:19 Maxus: kcuali klo BN lg nyoba ngenazi
22:19 Maxus: *lain lg
22:19 [Harlequin]: ekaoeka oke deh itu udah di delete Lv
22:19 [Harlequin]: :v
22:20 Maxus: btw oni-chan daisukii!!! itu ada di animeny lgsg kah?
22:20 [Harlequin]: si sagirinya kan suka sama kakanya :v
22:21 [Harlequin]: jadi wa kasih nama diff itu wakwok
22:23 Maxus: msih ad yg mw lu ubah?

gl koko
Topic Starter
[Harlequin]

Maxus wrote:

blablabla
21:27 Maxus: 00:09:263 (9263|3,9445|1) - diflip ja mnurut wa biar mirror ama 00:07:808 - 
21:27 Maxus: lbih konsisten jg strukturnya ama pattern 1-4 4-1 sblmny
21:27 [Harlequin]: flipped x3
21:28 [Harlequin]: beneran kalo HS nya standar sih wa paham tapi kalo di tambah ga paham gw =w=
21:28 Maxus: HS custom mksdnya kah :oo
21:28 [Harlequin]: nah itu kaya C W F masih ngerti =w=
21:29 Maxus: 00:13:445 (13445|0,13808|2) - bkin col 4 dan col 1 ja biar pling ga msih ad ngikut pitchnya
21:29 Maxus: klo snare, hat, dsbny bgg y :v
21:29 [Harlequin]: nah bingung itu gw :v
21:30 [Harlequin]: btw di ubah ke ke 4 sama 1 owo)b
21:31 Maxus: map balon byk tuh hs customny kyk anemoi wkwk
21:31 Maxus: 00:21:626 - coba dbkin kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8940287
21:31 Maxus: flow stair 1-2-3-4 nya ga ad sblmny pdhl 4-3-2-1 byk tuh :v
21:32 [Harlequin]: oke di ubah koko :v
21:32 Maxus: 00:31:808 (31808|0) - col 3 lbih ngeflow imo biar simetris ma 00:29:626 (29626|0,29990|1,30354|2) -
21:32 Maxus: aku pensiun ah entar :v
21:33 [Harlequin]: mantap :v
21:33 [Harlequin]: yah kalo lu pensiun wa juga lah :v
21:33 Maxus: kok ngikut2 gw njir :vv
21:34 Maxus: 00:39:808 (39808|0) - jadi normal note dah, soalny wa ykin org bkal pda protes ma pattern yg skrg wkwk
21:34 [Harlequin]: nanti map gw ga ada yang rank :v
21:34 Maxus: soalny pda strict bgt ma diff easy enth knp
21:35 [Harlequin]: oke ane ubah koko :v
21:37 Maxus: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8940354 kyk gni dah stlh wa pkir2 :v
21:38 [Harlequin]: ane udah ubah kaya gitu :v
21:39 Maxus: cie koko jaog ubahnya =w=
21:40 [Harlequin]: kebetulan sama aja itu ubahnya =w=
21:40 Maxus: 00:52:172 - mnurut wa rada dipotek ja LN nya, ama delete 00:53:263 - , jadi kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8940371
21:40 Maxus: bguslah -w-
21:42 Maxus: 01:04:899 - 01:05:626 - masing2 tambah 1/2 LN biar lebih syncron ama synthnya
21:42 Maxus: jgn lupa C nya jg
21:42 [Harlequin]: oke oke :v
21:42 [Harlequin]: soap koko :v
21:42 [Harlequin]: *siap
21:43 Maxus: 01:20:536 (80536|0,80536|1,81263|0,81626|1,82354|0,82717|1,83445|0,83445|1,84172|0,84536|1) - trlalu berat sbelah wa rasa :v
21:44 [Harlequin]: okai re-arrange :v
21:45 Maxus: kyk gmn tuh direarrangeny :v
21:46 [Harlequin]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8940415 :v
21:47 Maxus: boleh2 :v
21:48 *Maxus is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1302507 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [Normal]]
21:48 [Harlequin]: aseekk :v
21:48 Maxus: easy dh ready :v
21:49 [Harlequin]: okai :v
21:49 [Harlequin]: ini diff easy 85% buatan gw lol
21:49 Maxus: 00:28:354 (28354|1,28536|0) - flip ja biar ga shield
21:49 Maxus: sklian ja blg itu diff lu :v
21:49 [Harlequin]: wkaowkoaw :v
21:49 [Harlequin]: oke itu flip btw :v
21:50 [Harlequin]: diff normal best BG anjay
21:51 Maxus: kget wa diff normal lu bgus /run :p
21:51 [Harlequin]: bagus darimana D:
21:52 Maxus: 01:22:717 (82717|3) - pindah col 3 biar ga gitu stack
21:52 Maxus: solid normalnya =w=
21:52 Maxus: wa mrasa kyk klo wa yg buat /run
21:52 [Harlequin]: wkaowka moved :v
21:52 Maxus: ok itu ja :v
21:52 [Harlequin]: awakwoaw diff nya terlalu jelek ya :v
21:53 Maxus: bgus lah =w=
21:54 Maxus: 00:13:445 (13445|0,13808|2) - kykny cma ini LN yg ga dijack
21:55 Maxus: 00:16:354 (16354|3,16717|3) - 00:19:263 (19263|2,19626|2) - smua dijack wkwk
21:55 [Harlequin]: iya anjit wkaowk ccd adik gw :v
21:56 Maxus: tp tetep solid overall =w=)b
21:56 Maxus: 00:24:899 (24899|1,25081|0,25263|1,25445|0) - jgn bgini klo bisa
21:57 [Harlequin]: kok kaya gitu sih patternya awkoak , re-arrange =w=b
21:59 Maxus: 00:49:990 (49990|1) - klo bs rearrange biar nih LN muat di col 3, soalny jd ga simetris ma 00:50:717 (50717|3,51445|0,52172|1) - wkkw
22:01 Maxus: itu ja kykny
22:03 *Maxus is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1299481 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [Onii-chan Daisuki!!!]]
22:04 [Harlequin]: bentar koko masih re-araange yang hard :'v
22:04 Maxus: waduh =w="
22:04 [Harlequin]: oke done :v
22:06 Maxus: 00:12:899 (12899|3) - pindah col 2 biar lbi seimbang wkwk
22:06 [Harlequin]: oke nice shoot :v
22:07 Maxus: 00:30:536 (30536|3,30717|1,30717|0,30717|3,31263|3,31445|3,31445|1,31445|0) - coba bedain 2 pattern ini dah
22:07 Maxus: 00:24:717 - ama ini jg, biar bervariasi
22:09 [Harlequin]: okee okee :v
22:10 Maxus: 00:52:354 (52354|3) - ke col 1 lbih balance
22:11 [Harlequin]: sip mantap =w=b
22:11 Maxus: 01:22:899 (82899|2,83081|3) - switch column biar jackny ga gitu rentetan ama 01:21:626 (81626|2,82172|2,82354|2,82717|2) -
22:11 Maxus: itu ja :v
22:12 [Harlequin]: oke dah di switch =w=b
22:13 Maxus: update lah wkkw
22:13 [Harlequin]: OHH IYAAA WAOKWAOWK :V
22:13 [Harlequin]: gw cuman save doang =w=
22:14 Maxus: 01:28:263 (88263|0,88354|1,88445|2,88536|3) - stelah gw pikir2 lg dr kmrin, noteny kykny snapnya rada gaje ya
22:14 Maxus: apa delete ja biar play safe?
22:15 [Harlequin]: iya sih 1/4 kaya ga masuk juga kalo di denger 25% =w=
22:15 Maxus: tktnya ga boleh wkwk
22:16 [Harlequin]: berarti aga di panjing lagi ya LN nya =w=?
22:16 Maxus: delete ja 4 note trkhirny
22:17 Maxus: wwkwk
22:17 [Harlequin]: udh di delete :v
22:18 [Harlequin]: gpp kah ending nya ga sama kaya diff hard? owo
22:19 Maxus: gpp kok wkwk
22:19 Maxus: itu fleksibel
22:19 Maxus: kcuali klo BN lg nyoba ngenazi
22:19 Maxus: *lain lg
22:19 [Harlequin]: ekaoeka oke deh itu udah di delete Lv
22:19 [Harlequin]: :v
22:20 Maxus: btw oni-chan daisukii!!! itu ada di animeny lgsg kah?
22:20 [Harlequin]: si sagirinya kan suka sama kakanya :v
22:21 [Harlequin]: jadi wa kasih nama diff itu wakwok
22:23 Maxus: msih ad yg mw lu ubah?

gl koko

makasih koko 0w0)b
Julie
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Virtue-
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Surono
untumu ta sobek sobex
Topic Starter
[Harlequin]
thank you guys for your support! xD
Julie
Can't stop singing this with your brother :joy:

For all diff:
add sel_l hitsound here 00:37:990 - ? Sample for the easiest diff. Same drum as those 1/1 loud sel_l

[Harlequin vs. V's Easy]

00:22:536 (22536|2) - Nothing bad here, just maybe move it to the 2nd column for the left hand, since you're having quite a lots of right hand here :
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8953938

00:59:445 (59445|1) - I think you forgot your whistle here, to keep it consistent with other difficulty and 00:55:808 (55808|2,56536|1) - , 00:58:717 (58717|3) - .

[Hard]

00:26:717 (26717|3) - I suppose you made the LN longer in easy and normal so that is easier to unhold it on a white stick for player. I think in Hard it should be fine to end it 00:27:990 - like in Insane.

00:49:990 - to 00:52:899 - I honestly hate the gap between normal and hard to hard and insane. This part is nearly the same as insane skillwise and there is also some kind of trill here 00:50:717 (50717|2,50717|1,50899|2,51081|1,51263|2,51445|1) - . Try to nerf it a bit.

01:15:445 (75445|2,75990|2) - Try not to jack these 2 LN, doesn't fit the pitch.

01:17:172 (77172|3) - There isn't any new sound here 01:17:172 - , only the "tss" of the voice, but that isn't what you are trying to match. Delete that note so it follow more the song drum.

01:25:990 (85990|0,85990|1) - I honestly prefer if you change the hitsound here, since there no these drum sound 01:25:748 (85748|1,85869|3,86111|2,86232|0) - . I would recommend "clap" to "bell".


[Onii-chan Daisuki!!!]
00:00:536 - to 00:09:445 - This point is not necessarily for consistence, but it could be consistent and a cooler feeling on the drum side.
Example 00:00:536 - and 00:00:717 - same drum, so same note column which is cool :D. You did the same for 00:06:354 (6354|1,6354|0,6536|1,6536|0,6536|3) - , 00:07:808 (7808|0,7808|3,7808|2,7990|3,7990|0,7990|2) - .
So why not doing it here too 00:01:990 (1990|1,1990|3,1990|2,2172|1,2172|0,2172|3) - , 00:03:445 (3445|1,3445|0,3445|2,3626|3,3626|0,3626|2) - and 00:09:263 (9263|1,9263|0,9263|3,9445|2,9445|3,9445|0) - .
I personally find it more feeling for the drum, and give a nice drum hit note feeling as well xD.

00:13:445 (13445|3,13808|1) - I think you did the hard diff too, make these the same column like in hard, same pitch, way cooler then a random LN trill 00:13:263 (13263|1,13445|3,13808|1) - XD.
And then you can move this 00:14:172 (14172|2) - to left side if you want.

00:16:354 (16354|3,16717|1) -, 00:19:263 (19263|3,19626|2) - ^ Same reason.

00:32:536 (32536|1) - Wonder if you want to end it here like you did on other diff 00:33:990 - , since it does continue a bit longer unlike this one 00:26:717 (26717|2) - .

01:00:172 - No finish hitsound like here 00:57:263 - ? It have a cymbal to finish the stanza. (Apply for all diff)

01:16:899 (76899|1,76899|3,76990|2,77081|0,77172|1,77263|2,77263|3,77354|0,77445|1,77536|2) - Sound cool with the hitsound, but you're completely changing the drum of the song, and sadly this can be DQable. There isn't any new sound here 01:17:172 - , only the "tss" of the voice, but that isn't what you are trying to match. Delete that note so it follow more the song drum.

01:25:990 (85990|0,85990|1) - I honestly prefer if you change the hitsound here, since there no these drum sound 01:25:748 (85748|0,85748|3,85869|2,85869|3,86111|1,86111|2,86232|3,86232|0) - . I would recommend "clap" to "bell".

01:26:354 (86354|0,86354|3,86899|1,87081|2) - The idea is cool, but I feel this sound 01:27:445 - is kinda confusing to play, is so clear, how about end the LN here 01:27:445 - like other diff? Since that's where all the instrument matching the LN stop, while the voice "hito-riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii" end here 01:28:172 - xD.

01:27:717 (87717|1,87717|0,87717|3,87717|2) - Hey, I like the way you end it, really cool, but um, I don't know if is 100% fitting, I mean in seeing, is probably the best and player can kinda know what you were trying to do. My biggest issue with this is that the declining sound start here : 01:28:081 - , like you notice on your Hard diff. So it will be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8953816. My other suggestion is I was wondering, how about make this 01:27:717 (87717|3) - long to 01:28:536 - just like the other diff, for consistency and also for ending at the end of the sound :D. I find it fitting 3 stairs then a longer one, your choice owo.

Just a comment on the diff, this is your first map to rank, so I'll kinda let it pass, since it will basically mean maybe remapping what I'm about to point out, and so far is not really a big issue, but is something you might want to put attention on your future map.
You've been having a lots of LN end + 3 notes, which make it nearly a 4 notes hold on part with clap. and most drum you vary it this way : clap-whistle-clap-whistle-etc. My biggest concern is that not necessarily how it work, yes on most map and song it work this way, but not all. For example : 00:16:536 - and 00:16:899 - , same sound and same drum, but since you put clap, you turn it into a different drum, which is not what happening in the song. Is nearly like 80% of the diff, so I won't tell you to change it, since it still sound nice, but something to be careful in the future.

I like how the BG size flow~ xD
https://puu.sh/xldm1/3d5cbd2f22.png
Topic Starter
[Harlequin]

Julie wrote:

Can't stop singing this with your brother :joy:

For all diff:
add sel_l hitsound here 00:37:990 - ? Sample for the easiest diff. Same drum as those 1/1 loud sel_l

[Harlequin vs. V's Easy]

00:22:536 (22536|2) - Nothing bad here, just maybe move it to the 2nd column for the left hand, since you're having quite a lots of right hand here :
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8953938 // sure owo

00:59:445 (59445|1) - I think you forgot your whistle here, to keep it consistent with other difficulty and 00:55:808 (55808|2,56536|1) - , 00:58:717 (58717|3) - // my bad =w=.

[Hard]

00:26:717 (26717|3) - I suppose you made the LN longer in easy and normal so that is easier to unhold it on a white stick for player. I think in Hard it should be fine to end it 00:27:990 - like in Insane. // fixed and same with another next part

00:49:990 - to 00:52:899 - I honestly hate the gap between normal and hard to hard and insane. This part is nearly the same as insane skillwise and there is also some kind of trill here 00:50:717 (50717|2,50717|1,50899|2,51081|1,51263|2,51445|1) - . Try to nerf it a bit. // im nerf it for note inside the LN becoming one for C and W

01:15:445 (75445|2,75990|2) - Try not to jack these 2 LN, doesn't fit the pitch.// sure, re-arrange it

01:17:172 (77172|3) - There isn't any new sound here 01:17:172 - , only the "tss" of the voice, but that isn't what you are trying to match. Delete that note so it follow more the song drum. // oh yeah you are right xD

01:25:990 (85990|0,85990|1) - I honestly prefer if you change the hitsound here, since there no these drum sound 01:25:748 // should i cahnge to another HS or just delete it? owo (85748|1,85869|3,86111|2,86232|0) - . I would recommend "clap" to "bell"// sure.


[Onii-chan Daisuki!!!]
00:00:536 - to 00:09:445 - This point is not necessarily for consistence, but it could be consistent and a cooler feeling on the drum side.
Example 00:00:536 - and 00:00:717 - same drum, so same note column which is cool :D. You did the same for 00:06:354 (6354|1,6354|0,6536|1,6536|0,6536|3) - , 00:07:808 (7808|0,7808|3,7808|2,7990|3,7990|0,7990|2) - .
So why not doing it here too 00:01:990 (1990|1,1990|3,1990|2,2172|1,2172|0,2172|3) - , 00:03:445 (3445|1,3445|0,3445|2,3626|3,3626|0,3626|2) - and 00:09:263 (9263|1,9263|0,9263|3,9445|2,9445|3,9445|0) - .
I personally find it more feeling for the drum, and give a nice drum hit note feeling as well xD. // hehe nice idea cool xD

00:13:445 (13445|3,13808|1) - I think you did the hard diff too, make these the same column like in hard, same pitch, way cooler then a random LN trill 00:13:263 (13263|1,13445|3,13808|1) - XD.
And then you can move this 00:14:172 (14172|2) - to left side if you want. // pretty nice, i change to the same with hard diff

00:16:354 (16354|3,16717|1) -, 00:19:263 (19263|3,19626|2) - ^ Same reason. // same

00:32:536 (32536|1) - Wonder if you want to end it here like you did on other diff 00:33:990 - , since it does continue a bit longer unlike this one 00:26:717 (26717|2) - . // i just wan to keep this like what you said at Hard diff, the LN should be stop at the red thick x3

01:00:172 - No finish hitsound like here 00:57:263 - ? It have a cymbal to finish the stanza. (Apply for all diff) // my bad =w=

01:16:899 (76899|1,76899|3,76990|2,77081|0,77172|1,77263|2,77263|3,77354|0,77445|1,77536|2) - Sound cool with the hitsound, but you're completely changing the drum of the song, and sadly this can be DQable. There isn't any new sound here 01:17:172 - , only the "tss" of the voice, but that isn't what you are trying to match. Delete that note so it follow more the song drum.

01:25:990 (85990|0,85990|1) - I honestly prefer if you change the hitsound here, since there no these drum sound 01:25:748 (85748|0,85748|3,85869|2,85869|3,86111|1,86111|2,86232|3,86232|0) - . I would recommend "clap" to "bell".

01:26:354 (86354|0,86354|3,86899|1,87081|2) - The idea is cool, but I feel this sound 01:27:445 - is kinda confusing to play, is so clear, how about end the LN here 01:27:445 - like other diff? Since that's where all the instrument matching the LN stop, while the voice "hito-riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii" end here 01:28:172 - xD. // im re-arrange a bit, let me update first and we can discuss it if not suit :D

01:27:717 (87717|1,87717|0,87717|3,87717|2) - Hey, I like the way you end it, really cool, but um, I don't know if is 100% fitting, I mean in seeing, is probably the best and player can kinda know what you were trying to do. My biggest issue with this is that the declining sound start here : 01:28:081 - , like you notice on your Hard diff. So it will be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8953816. My other suggestion is I was wondering, how about make this 01:27:717 (87717|3) - long to 01:28:536 - just like the other diff, for consistency and also for ending at the end of the sound :D. I find it fitting 3 stairs then a longer one, your choice owo.

Just a comment on the diff, this is your first map to rank, so I'll kinda let it pass, since it will basically mean maybe remapping what I'm about to point out, and so far is not really a big issue, but is something you might want to put attention on your future map.
You've been having a lots of LN end + 3 notes, which make it nearly a 4 notes hold on part with clap. and most drum you vary it this way : clap-whistle-clap-whistle-etc. My biggest concern is that not necessarily how it work, yes on most map and song it work this way, but not all. For example : 00:16:536 - and 00:16:899 - , same sound and same drum, but since you put clap, you turn it into a different drum, which is not what happening in the song. Is nearly like 80% of the diff, so I won't tell you to change it, since it still sound nice, but something to be careful in the future.// yeah i will learn about more mapping since my brother just tell me about the basic mapping due he is very busy 3 month ago, and thank you for your suggestion i will learn more how about mapping.
xD

I like how the BG size flow~ xD // aye SIRRR!!! xD
https://puu.sh/xldm1/3d5cbd2f22.png
Thank you Julie for checking ! xD
Julie
Last recheck

[Hard and onii-chan daisuki desu]
I think I mess up my explanation here
01:25:748 (85748|3,85748|0,85869|2,85869|3,85990|0,85990|1,86111|1,86111|2,86232|0,86232|3) -
I mean bell on this part 01:25:990 - , other one 01:25:748 - , 01:26:111 - and 01:26:232 - are clap.
Also I just notice something but I don't really hear a drum here 01:25:869 - , I hear 2 sound here that are 1/4.
A drum here 1/6 01:25:748 - , then a 2 sound 1/4 here 01:25:808 - and 01:25:899 -

[onii-chan daisuki desu]
01:28:263 (88263|0,88354|1,88445|2,88536|3) - Hmm it seem like you redid the ending, make these note at least 5-15% hitsound. Yeah your current hitsound is low and ok but not everyone will be using your hitsound, some will just have a loud sound one every note and the end will be too loud at 50% XD.
Topic Starter
[Harlequin]

Julie wrote:

Last recheck

[Hard and onii-chan daisuki desu]
I think I mess up my explanation here
01:25:748 (85748|3,85748|0,85869|2,85869|3,85990|0,85990|1,86111|1,86111|2,86232|0,86232|3) -
I mean bell on this part 01:25:990 - , other one 01:25:748 - , 01:26:111 - and 01:26:232 - are clap.
Also I just notice something but I don't really hear a drum here 01:25:869 - , I hear 2 sound here that are 1/4.
A drum here 1/6 01:25:748 - , then a 2 sound 1/4 here 01:25:808 - and 01:25:899 - // yeah you are right it's kinda clear to hear owo anyway changed

[onii-chan daisuki desu]
01:28:263 (88263|0,88354|1,88445|2,88536|3) - Hmm it seem like you redid the ending, make these note at least 5-15% hitsound. Yeah your current hitsound is low and ok but not everyone will be using your hitsound, some will just have a loud sound one every note and the end will be too loud at 50% XD.// and for this part im thinking again, it's nice to follow your suggestion before you check it :D , im change it into that XD
Thanks Julie-nee for recheck xD
Julie
YAY CONGRATZ 1ST QUALIFY MAP!!!
Looking foward for your future work owo!!
Topic Starter
[Harlequin]

Julie wrote:

YAY CONGRATZ 1ST QUALIFY MAP!!!
Looking foward for your future work owo!!
Thank you very much! xD
i will do my best! xD
Adiopulse
DQ plz

Hard diff: 00:50:717 overlapped note in col 3





kds plz
Blocko
Please fix that overlapping note on 00:50:717 - on Hard before pushing this set forward again.
Julie
ET adio, please take my title.

Sorry maxus that's pretty much my bad as the last checker xD. That's what I get to mod with a flu *cough cough* =w=!
Topic Starter
[Harlequin]
omg my bad ;w;
will update it, should i re-bubble this?

edit : update btw, sorry to you guys it's my fault.
Maxus
hope we don't miss anything this time, checked it multiple times and supposed to be alright now :3
reminder of 24h
Topic Starter
[Harlequin]

Maxus wrote:

hope we don't miss anything this time, checked it multiple times and supposed to be alright now :3
reminder of 24h
thank you very much koko ;w;
Kamikaze
pls change the last diffname for the love of god
Julie
Qualified! >w<



I think someone having some net problem baka =w=

-Kamikaze- wrote:

pls change the last diffname for the love of god
Tooo bad broooo owo!!!!!
Crumpey

-Kamikaze- wrote:

pls change the last diffname for the love of god
i agree tbh, doesnt make much sense to me
Shima Rin
Congratz for your first rank anyway~ ;)
Raveille

-Kamikaze- wrote:

pls change the last diffname for the love of god
too late LULZ
Litharrale
Top difficulty name is a bit.... eh but it doesn't really go against any of the rules and I guess it is somewhat related to the source
Topic Starter
[Harlequin]
Big thanks to both of you Maxus and Julie for helping me to ranked this map.
Sorry fot not online for so long because im being busy now

well actually people seems not like for the diff name
idk what the reason is
yeah you guys can tell anything about the last diff name but i dont care really
except you guys give me suggestion for better gameplay on this map

if you dont like it just dont download the map simple
Kamikaze
Well, the chart is fun. Sorry if I sounded offensive or anything, I don't like this difficulty name a lot but it's obviously not a rankability problem, just my taste /shrug
Surono
jaban cartoon, diffnaming rip not anemi tv

gratz cieg
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