00:17:007 - add a LN here. there' s a very clear sound here, why not map it the same way you did the ones before?
I didn't map this one the same due to the different dominant sound. While I realize this might through some off and I would like a suggestion on how to fix that while not undermining the dominant sound00:29:273 (29273|1) - move this to the blue tick. you can hear the beat land there if you slow it down to 25%
ok00:28:363 (28363|2,28416|0,28791|0,28845|2) - rhythm emphasis in this section lies on the white and red ticks. i like the idea of the doubles, but there's no sound that calls for it.
I was going for grace notes to symbolize the sound, but your previous suggestion kinda broke that since there are some sounds too close to allow it. Ok00:30:934 (30934|2) - this LN should only reach until the blue tick.
ok00:30:934 (30934|2,31148|0,31255|3,31309|1,31416|2,31523|1,31577|2) - this pattern works just barely. it's really confusing to play and only makes sense if you open it in the editor. I'd simplify it and stick to 1/4 beats.
remapped00:31:791 (31791|1) - add a note in column 1 with this LN.
remapped00:32:916 (32916|3,32969|0,33023|2,33130|1,33130|3) - again, really confusing to play.
remapped00:33:505 (33505|3) - add a note in column 1 with this LN.
remapped00:34:308 (34308|3,34362|0,34469|1,34576|0,34576|2,34683|3,34737|0,34844|1,34897|3,34951|0) - same confusing pattern here. I won't mention it anymore since this is what you were going for, but i'd consider a change.
remapped00:35:005 (35005|2) - remove this note. You didn't add one in the previous patterns. why here?
ok00:35:219 (35219|3) - add note in col 1.
ok00:36:719 (36719|0,36879|1,36933|0) - this seems out of place considering it's a LN in every other instance.
ok00:37:147 - add a note in col 2
remapped00:38:968 - add a note in col 3
remapped00:39:450 (39450|3,39557|0,39557|2) - this is a pretty good example. the two strongest sounds in this section fall on the blue and white tick.
remapped00:40:575 - suggestion:
https://puu.sh/x1sLP/50ac0e38a0.pngok00:46:146 - add a note in col 2
no00:48:074 (48074|2,48074|3) - i don't see any value in these LNs. There's not even a special sound here.
00:50:216 - remap the section before so you can add a note here. map this the same way you mapped 00:46:788 (46788|2,46788|0,46788|1,47003|2,47217|0,47217|1,47217|3)
00:50:431 (50431|1) - that includes removing this note.
00:57:287 (57287|2,57447|1) - i suggest making this a long note until the white tick. It's acceptable in the other instances where you used a similar pattern, but the music here only warrants a slider imo.
01:03:929 (63929|1,64036|0,64143|1,64304|2) - same thing here, add two LNs (or three if you want to mimick the same pattern as before.
01:10:785 (70785|0,70785|3,70892|1,70999|2,70999|0,71160|3) - ^
01:13:784 (73784|0,73784|3,73998|3,73998|0) - suggestion:
https://puu.sh/x50Ef/0f48960c6c.png these double sounds here are by far the most intense and most inuitive to play.
01:15:659 (75659|2,75820|2,76034|2,76302|2) - too much emphasis in col 3. there's almost no note in col 1, change that
01:17:855 - really strong sound on the red tick here. a triple note here would work nicely.
01:21:337 (81337|2) - what sound is this LN snapped to?
Remapped most of these parts01:27:496 (87496|1,87603|3,87657|1,87764|3,87871|1,87978|2,88032|0,88086|3,88139|1) - suggestion:
https://puu.sh/x51p9/7a7279c606.png again really strong sound on those white and red ticks. on top of that i prefer the rhythm of the singles here. not sure how playable it is though.
remapped01:41:637 (101637|1) - i like the SV here a lot. fits the music nicely, but the tempo change is a bit too sudden imo, especially since this is the only time the SV changes at all in this map. If you want to keep this gimmick you have to introduce some leaner SV changes beforehand.
Yes I am aware of this and need to look into that01:55:242 (115242|3,115296|2,115349|1,115403|0,115456|2,115510|3,115563|0,115617|1,115670|3,115724|0) - what sounds are these singles representing?
The wooshing01:55:778 (115778|2,115992|3,116206|0,116420|3) - all the sliders in this muisic section should have the same length
Different length for different pitches + added reading difficulty02:12:703 (132703|2,132703|0) - remove these 2 notes and replace them with a LN in col 4
single note instead02:16:132 (136132|3) - move to col 3 and make it a LN instead like i mentioned above
But the jack before that?02:19:560 (139560|0) - ^
nope02:19:774 (139774|2) - reduce LN length to red tick
ok02:20:202 (140202|2) - and make this LN the same length as the other one since it's the same sound
ok02:19:774 (139774|0) - make this LN longer instead. it should meet up with the next LN
ok02:25:773 (145773|1,145987|1,146094|3,146201|0,146308|3,146416|2) - suggestion:
https://puu.sh/x550U/3d491364b6.png I'd map all relevant sections like this for the music here. fits better imo with the LNs
ok02:37:128 - there should be a note here
ok02:39:378 - place a note or LN here to lead into the next part
ok03:06:861 - there's a sound here which could be mapped to reflect the music better, but it's not a dealbreaker
all I can say is: interesting timestamp03:07:338 (187338|1,187338|2,187552|0,187552|3) - i feel like these should be LNs instead
or a roll03:21:050 - this would be a nice spot to add some SV changes like you did before. It's even kind of the same sound effect
ok