1. Maelstrom (5,92 stars, 1606 notes)

Worminators wrote:

1. 01:00:870 (5) - unsnapped d'apres AiMod fixed
   
2. 01:48:270 (1) - tu peux le deplacer à 19;169 pour que ce soit mieux aligné dans la courbe du stream fixed
3. 01:55:641 (1,2,3) - baisse le spacing à 0.5x comme sur les precedents streams pour faire la difference avec le changement de mesure là fixed
4. 03:08:755 - 03:20:413 - ce serait mieux avec un cercle ici et extend le slider precedent comme sur les patterns precedents ex: 03:09:870 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - pour rester consistant j'ai alterné une fois sur deux pour avoir de la variety
5. 03:50:327 (1) - shape améliorable (notamment la boucle) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8851746 fixed
6. 04:33:355 (1,1) - je pense pas que ces NC soient vraiment necessaire, en general c'est bien pour signaler un rythme different genre 1/3 C'est pour le style, et ça ne prête pas à confusion vu que le spacing du 1/3 et largement différent
7. 04:49:984 - enleve les NC sur les sliders de gauche pour ameliorer la readabilité (followpoints etc)c'est plus stylé comme ça
8. 05:00:955 (1) - déplace le un peu a droite pour qu'il soit mieux aligné avec la courbe du stream je l'ai un peu bougé mais je veux pas que ça follow trop le stream pour lui donner plus d'emphasize
9. 03:23:584 (1,2) - 04:05:184 (1,2) - 04:27:698 (2,1) - 05:01:298 (1,4) - 05:17:413 (1,1) - blankets améliorables done

En tout cas la map est super cool et clean cimer
Le SB 10/10 et tout gg
gl

Worminators wrote:

1. Display Epilepsy Warning à cause du SB
2. 02:41:070 - sur toute la moitié du kiai ici ça me trigger le fait que vous skippez des doubles genre 02:41:755 (1,1) - 02:47:240 (1,1) - 02:48:612 (1,1) - etc
   on s'attend a avoir des notes cliquables à ces endroits
3. 02:57:870 - sur ces patterns aussi y'a des doubles qui seraient bien si ils etaients cliquables
4. 03:24:441 (1) - faut laisser un gap de 1/4 d'apres le RC et ça permet d'eviter les sliderbreaks bêtement
5. 05:12:098 (2,3) - je trouve ça très bizarre a jouer ce serait mieux d'inverser leur place dans la timeline

[ Sharuresu ] wrote:

pono:

Worminators wrote:

1. 02:41:070 - sur toute la moitié du kiai ici ça me trigger le fait que vous skippez des doubles genre 02:41:755 (1,1) - 02:47:240 (1,1) - 02:48:612 (1,1) - etc
   on s'attend a avoir des notes cliquables à ces endroits Je n'aime pas forcément map les doublets, surtout quand c'est en grande quantité, c'était totalement volontaire.. je changerais si ça dérange vraiment
2. 02:57:870 - sur ces patterns aussi y'a des doubles qui seraient bien si ils etaients cliquables ça reste très subjectif, je préfère jouer ce rythme plutôt qu'un double surtout que le son du redtick n'est vraiment pas très intense

Arphimigon wrote:

Lab Aesthetics Mod!

Results given in [x, y] formats

[Amphibious Melody]
Object at 01:11:070 - should be placed at: [348, 172] currently at: [347, 173] to move in line with slider at time 01:10:898 -
Object at 01:21:355 - should be placed at: [376, 126] currently at: [377, 127] to move in line with slider at time 01:21:870 -
Object at 01:30:612 - should be placed at: [200, 181] currently at: [202, 177] to blanket slider body at time 01:30:784 -
Object at 01:34:813 - should be placed at: [266, 225] currently at: [267, 226] to move in line with slider at time 01:34:555 -
Object at 01:46:127 - should be placed at: [276, 96] currently at: [275, 97] to move in line with slider at time 01:46:213 -
Object at 02:01:213 - should be placed at: [193, 306] currently at: [194, 305] to move in line with slider at time 02:00:956 -
Object at 02:01:298 - should be placed at: [183, 305] currently at: [184, 304] to move in line with slider at time 02:00:956 -
Object at 02:14:413 - should be placed at: [399, 353] currently at: [398, 354] to move in line with slider at time 02:14:155 -
Object at 02:20:927 - should be placed at: [137, 288] currently at: [138, 285] to blanket slider body at time 02:20:413 -
Object at 02:22:727 - should be placed at: [252, 267] currently at: [257, 262] to blanket slider body at time 02:22:385 -
Object at 02:22:813 - should be placed at: [252, 267] currently at: [257, 262] to blanket slider body at time 02:22:385 -
Object at 02:22:898 - should be placed at: [252, 267] currently at: [257, 262] to blanket slider body at time 02:22:385 -
Object at 02:44:498 - should be placed at: [304, 253] currently at: [296, 252] to blanket slider body at time 02:45:013 -
Object at 02:58:384 - should be placed at: [156, 252] currently at: [157, 251] to move in line with slider at time 02:58:041 -
Object at 04:27:355 - should be placed at: [349, 339] currently at: [350, 340] to move in line with slider at time 04:27:184 -
Object at 04:45:870 - should be placed at: [106, 185] currently at: [108, 177] to blanket slider body at time 04:46:127 -
Object at 04:57:355 - should be placed at: [99, 277] currently at: [91, 274] to blanket slider body at time 04:56:841 -
Object at 05:01:298 - should be placed at: [459, 235] currently at: [460, 236] to move in line with slider at time 05:00:955 -
Object at 05:04:813 - should be placed at: [371, 355] currently at: [372, 356] to move in line with slider at time 05:04:984 -
Object at 05:07:813 - should be placed at: [403, 174] currently at: [404, 177] to blanket slider body at time 05:08:070 -
Object at 05:13:213 - should be placed at: [111, 327] currently at: [112, 332] to blanket slider body at time 05:13:298 -
Object at 05:19:212 - should be placed at: [325, 175] currently at: [324, 176] to move in line with slider at time 05:18:698 -
Object at 05:25:469 - should be placed at: [362, 201] currently at: [369, 200] to blanket slider body at time 05:25:898 -
Object at 05:26:584 - should be placed at: [180, 165] currently at: [178, 165] to move in line with slider at time 05:26:670 -

Results for STACKED OBJECTS may be wrong, ya can ignore those
I hope I didn't malfunction!

kinda long but it is a marathon so ye

[ClickMyCircle] wrote:

There's not much to mod, map is very good
01:45:527 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make a kickslider instead of stream
Hmmm, I don't really know why, the song isn't changing that much to do that imo, feels good to me !
02:28:727 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - try to make slider-based pattern here I choose use 1/3 circles patterns cause its looks better with the song, sliders gonna just seems to be underdone I think
Amazing map tho and impressive storyboard
Thank youu~

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  SB\PARTICLES\Particle.png

1. 00:16:213 - missing break here?
   
2. 00:39:013 (1,1) - Delete the slider and extend it to where the slider tail would be, as is now the spinner is kind of pointless
   
3. 01:29:584 (4) - You could increase the spacing here to emphasize the sounds on 01:29:584 - and 01:29:670 -
   
4. 01:31:127 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - The NC's feel way off here, https://puu.sh/xfkjd/4afb5389af.png try this instead
   
5. 01:45:184 (1,2,3,4) - I'd say move this over to x:159 y:162. Because if you're gonna do jumpstreams you should go all the way with it
   
6. 03:54:441 (2,3) - You should silence the sliderends here, they stand out way too much

PoNo wrote:

Fixed every issues, thanks for the mod !

Sharu

1. 01:29:584 (4) - You could increase the spacing here to emphasize the sounds on 01:29:584 - and 01:29:670 - ok fixed
   
2. 01:31:127 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - The NC's feel way off here, https://puu.sh/xfkjd/4afb5389af.png try this instead mmh i think my current nc is better like the rythm does a 1-2 1-2-3 (tan-tan-tun-tun-tun)