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Doormat
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on September 12, 2017 at 10:05:24 PM

Artist: fourfolium
Title: JUMPin' JUMP UP!!!!
Source: NEW GAME!!
Tags: Akitoshi Corinn Karen StarrStyx alacat Kisses フォーフォリウム ニューゲーム season 2 two ending ed tv size takada yuuki 高田憂希 suzukaze aoba 涼風青葉 yamaguchi megumi 山口愛 takimoto hifumi 滝本ひふみ toda megumi 戸田めぐみ shinoda hazime 篠田はじめ ayumi takeo 竹尾歩美 iizima yun 飯島ゆん
BPM: 168
Filesize: 17942kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akitoshi's Advanced (2.67 stars, 224 notes)
  2. alacat's Normal (2.16 stars, 168 notes)
  3. Easy (1.75 stars, 129 notes)
  4. Extra (4.99 stars, 363 notes)
  5. Hard (3.31 stars, 277 notes)
  6. Karen's Insane (4.68 stars, 324 notes)
  7. Kisses' Insane (4.19 stars, 311 notes)
  8. StarR's Insane (4.64 stars, 355 notes)
Download: fourfolium - JUMPin' JUMP UP!!!!
Download: fourfolium - JUMPin' JUMP UP!!!! (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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S1: OP (TV) | OP (Full) | ED (TV) | ED (Full)
VN: OP (Short) | OP (Full) | ED (Short) | ED (Full)
S2: OP (TV) | OP (Full) | ED1 (TV) | ED1 (Full) | ED2 (TV) | ED2 (Full)

season two :eyes:
redownload Aug 31

normal by alacat
advanced by akitoshi
insane by kisses, karen, starrstyx

bg edit by gaia
mp3 edit by meyrink
Nitroz
Good luck! :)
pavpab
How on Earth can GD slots be already full in less than 10h ! LOL Good luck on the set :D
Karen

CutEddie wrote:

How on Earth can GD slots be already full in less than 10h ! LOL Good luck on the set :D
it was already full when the song wasn't even out
Karen
http://puu.sh/wNwlz/de4f54e9b9.osu
:aobawa:

will hitsound it when the set is ready
_handholding
Wow that was fast Karen O.o I wanted to be the first
Seolv
rename 'Extra' to 'Press PAUSE'
Topic Starter
Doormat
updated background to 1920x1080.

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

rename 'Extra' to 'Press PAUSE'
lol no
-Kazuto
Press Shoot a Kudosu Star! (-1 Kudosu)

2nd Kudosu giveaway of the day
Nakano Itsuki
Topic Starter
Doormat
uploaded starr's insane and alacat's insane normal; will update with hitsounds and kisses' insane soon.

another sleepless night lol should get some rest soon..
Topic Starter
Doormat
just need to add hitsounds then set will be ready for mods :3
allein
Press RANKED
Topic Starter
Doormat
ready for mods! added hitsound files so redownload

p.s: kisses hitsounded his own diff
ARenaissance
Alright, m4m! I'll see what I can offer. I haven't modded very many upper level mapsets, so I apologize if most of the suggestions just get thrown away.

My map for your convenience: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/527546

[Easy]
  1. 00:35:404 (3) - The blanket would look better if distance was fully consistent. Tweaking around, I get nodes on (295, 79), (315,129), and (301, 173) to get this configuration:
  2. 00:38:975 (5) - This curves slider feels a bit out of place when it's surrounded by straight sliders. I replaced it with a copy of (2) flipped 180 degrees and got what I felt was a visually nicer option.
  3. 01:06:832 (1,2) - Just a suggestion, but I think this sort of pattern looks a bit nicer:
  4. 01:11:118 (4) - I feel these should have finishes because 01:05:404 (5) has them too (among others)
  5. 01:20:404 (5) - Like my earlier suggestion, the straight slider feels a bit out of place when it's surrounded by curved sliders. Any reason to have this a different shape?
[alacat's Normal]
  1. 00:05:404 (3,4) - Definitely think these would look better if they were perfectly parallel.
  2. 00:39:332 (4,1,2,3) - It's a bit of trouble to do this, but I think making these objects form a parallelogram would make things look more organized: I was able to reorganize the objects that followed by just moving the second slider back:
  3. 01:13:975 (4,5) - Blanket imperfection.
[Akitoshi's Advanced]
  1. 00:11:118 (1,2,3) - Not a big deal, but I think this pattern looks a bit nicer:
  2. 00:36:118 (3) - Kinda prefer ctrl+j here. Most of your extended-slider patterns have glide-reflective symmetry as opposed to translational, so changing this would be consistent with the rest of the map's style.
  3. 00:39:332 (4) - Same comment here. I think they show up in other parts of the map, but I'll assume you know where to find them if you want to make the changes.
  4. 00:58:261 (1) - Slider shape could be more symmetrical. I have nodes placed at (164, 186), (231, 172), (229, 210), and (302, 191) which makes it look a bit nicer.
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:118 (1,2) - Don't really see a reason for why these should be different shapes. I'd make both of them straight sliders.
  2. 00:08:261 (1) - For distance consistency, I think this ought to be a bit closer to the slider that preceded it. 00:07:189 (2,3,4,5) had more appropriate distances between objects.
  3. 00:08:618 (3,4,5) - How about making it rotationally symmetrical?
  4. 00:36:832 (1,4) - I'd make these sliders the same shape due to the repetition it represents in the song.
  5. 00:39:689 (1) - Making this slider body the same shape (plus appropriate rotation) as 00:38:975 (3,4) would add both symmetry and flow.
  6. 01:11:118 (1,2,3) - Why don't you have some pattern with 3-fold rotational symmetry here, like how you had it with the others? In the very least, I feel you should have the three finish sounds like you had with the others (which should continue throughout with the other difficulties you made--see the other comment on this on the easy difficulty that you probably already read).
[Kisses' Insane]
  1. 00:13:201 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not really getting what 2, 4, and 6 are being mapped to. This is kind of a smoother section in the song; it doesn't need this jarring rhythm to make it harder.
  2. 00:21:832 - Why isn't there a circle here? There's a pretty dominant sound in the song.
  3. 00:45:404 (1,2,3) - The song doesn't transition into straight eighths here: the music just gets simplified. Keep the swing in these sliders. Alternatively, you can use circles on white ticks instead and remove any ambiguity.
  4. 00:54:511 (1) - The sound you're mapping to definitely starts on 00:54:570.
[StaR's Insane]
  1. 00:01:832 (2,3) - This pattern is kinda cramped. I think I prefer a pattern like this: You can reroute the sliders that follow by ctrl+j ing 00:02:547 (1,2,3) and moving them around a little bit (symmetrically of course).
  2. 01:03:975 - No kiai!!
  3. 01:11:118 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't know if you're the one I should bring this up to, but the 1's in this pattern I think should have finishes on them, since they have finishes in other similar parts of the chorus as well.
  4. 01:16:832 (1,2) - Why not make these glide reflective over the horizontal axis? (Make one slider ctrl+j from the other)
[Karen's Insane]
  1. 00:07:547 (1,1) - You may as well make this pattern symmetrical to the last one over the center y-axis. It's so close already.
  2. 00:08:975 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:16:118 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I would have (1, 2, 3) and (4, 5, 6) flowing in the same direction, as that would emphasize the (3, 4) jump more.
  4. 00:41:475 (3,4) - This pattern ignores a clear sound on 00:41:832. I would suggest making 00:41:475 (3) a reverse slider and starting 00:41:713 (4) one tick later.
  5. 01:11:118 (1,2,3) - Finishes on the heads.
  6. 01:16:832 (1,2,3) - Not a huge deal, but I prefer a pattern like this because it's more symmetrical in terms of flow:
[Extra]
  1. 00:01:118 (1,2) - Same comment for Hard. Why two different slider shapes?
  2. 00:05:404 (1,2,1,2) - Why do these have a different tapping pattern than 00:06:118 (1,2)? I prefer the latter pattern because this is a swinging song, which emphasizes the first and third beats in the triplet subdivision, so I would suggest changing 00:05:404 (1,2,1,2) so that it goes slider-circle-slider-circle instead.
  3. 00:53:142 (1) - IDK I kind of have a thing for curvier sliders so I think a shape like this would look nicer Obviously, if you make this change, be sure to curve 00:53:618 (2) with it.
Whoo! Good set, good song, good luck!! :)
Shad0w1and
[EX]
00:06:773 - kinda weird because piano did not stop here, better fill
00:58:261 (1,1,1) - these three sliders are weird because their sv (0.7x 0.9x 0.5x) do not present the actual music well. If I were you, I will go with 0.9x 0.7x 0.5x
01:02:904 (4) - nc?
01:04:928 (2) - I feel you should do something like 01:06:713 (2,1) - instead of stacking, same to 01:16:357 (2) -
[Karen]
00:23:975 (1,2,3) - blanket
00:52:189 (3) - sv change use nc? etc
01:00:523 - fill with slider reverse?
01:00:761 (4) - nc prob
01:06:475 (4) - nc or its too tricky to read 01:06:475 (4,5) -
[StarR]
01:22:547 (1,2,3) - 1pixel error
01:26:475 (2,3,4,5) - same, restack
01:26:832 (5) - nc?

[Kisses]
you said you are from Hong Kong island and not good at english so I am modding with Chinese :/ spoiler
00:03:975 (1,2) - 间距和 00:04:689 (4,5) - 保持一致 they should have the same spacing
00:05:404 (1,2,3) - 间距一致 make them equal spacing
00:06:475 (4) - NC
00:13:082 - 00:13:797 - 00:14:511 - 没音啊?为什么要强行放过鼓点00:12:904 - 00:13:618 - 00:14:332 - ? why you force to snap to nothing but omit those drums? consider:
00:18:618 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 252BPM连打Insane?Its a overkill stream for Insane, even without strong beat support
00:21:832 - 填?fill?
00:33:618 (2) - NC
00:34:570 - 填?fill?
00:41:475 - HS Drum
01:26:475 (2) - NC
[Hard]
00:46:118 (2,3,4) - prefer a reverse long slider
00:48:261 (1,2,3,4) - prefer two sliders
[Akitoshi]
00:53:499 (4) - missing HS
[alacat]
00:32:547 (5,6) - DS lock broken, maybe try
ok
gary00737
m4tickets ><


turn off widescreen support .

alacat's Normal
01:12:189 (6,2) - use copy?
00:32:547 (5,6) - spacing 1.21x
01:07:904 (4) - here i will use this i think it can prominent 01:08:261 (5,6,7) -
01:20:404 (6) - ^

Akitoshi's Advanced
01:15:404 (1) - i think will be better


Hard
01:02:070 - i think it can clickable
01:18:856 (3,4) - stack
00:02:428 (3,1) -
00:37:428 (3,4) - ^
00:41:713 (3,4) - ^
00:03:975 (1,2) - ^

i think 1/1 and 1/3 stack can different

Kisses' Insane
i think beginning SV too fast, 00:01:118 (1) - to 00:04:689 (4) -


00:35:642 (4,5) - stack


Karen's Insane
00:24:332 (2,3) - blanket



sorry i can't find even more problem.
this mapset is clean for me :D
shoot a star . _.
SnowNiNo_
free mod (yea i promise ill do another free mod

  • [Extra]
  1. 00:15:404 - slowly increasing the spacing would give a great emphasis to the music
  2. 00:17:547 (1,2,3) - decreased spacing a bit here, cuz the pitch of the vocal is lower here
  3. 00:39:689 - 00:40:404 - well any reason for the inconsistent spacing, the vocal and the drum sound the same too me so it quite doesnt make sense here
  4. 00:42:428 (2) - i noticed the snap of this notes was a bit off, it should be snap at 00:42:398 - (1/12) to express the snare sound, better do some check here, same applied to all other diffs except easy lol
  5. 00:43:975 (1) - how about spin the angle a bit down, so the flow to 2 would be smoother
  6. 01:10:761 (1) - i think the nc here is a bit unnecessary, since the sound isnt dat special and strong too emphasis, unlike this 01:12:189 (1) -
  • [Karen's Insane]
  1. 00:41:713 - i think the structure like this can express better to the music since u skipped a vocal sound at 00:41:832 -
  2. 01:05:047 (3,4) - spacing here is a bit overdone compare with ur whole kiai, reduced spacing a but for consistency
  • [StarR's Insane]
  1. 00:17:547 - spacing should be smaller here since the pitch of vocal was getting lower, swapping the spacing 00:16:832 (1,2,3) - 00:17:547 (1,2,3) - would fit better
  2. 00:19:928 - 00:28:499 - NC spam here is a bit unnecessary imo, since there isnt specific sound to emphasis, NC on long white tick would be fine
  3. 01:26:832 (5) - missing NC
  4. 01:09:332 (1) - 01:20:761 (3) - inconsistent nc usage
  • [Kisses' Insane]
  1. 00:21:832 - wat happen here xd, should be a note here i believe, cuz skipping the sound here isnt rly a good choice
  2. G
Underforest
m4m, my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/642407
aaah i love new game so much ><

[General]
  1. StaR's diff has no kiai, it can have one
  2. Kisses' diff has different combo colours
[Easy]
  1. 01:21:118 (1) - Probably switch into 2 circles, it does inconsistency with 01:09:689 (1,2) -
[alacat's Normal]
  1. Good!
[Akitoshi's Advanced]
  1. 00:09:332 (4) - You can give emphasis to the trumpets by doing CTRL+J
  2. 00:22:547 (1,2) - These can be switched to 1/1 instead
  3. 00:46:832 (1,2) - This rhythm is confusing, why not switch it just to this?
  4. 01:01:713 (3,4) - This can also be switched to a whole 1/1 slider or 2 circles, no beats in 1/3
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:832 (1) - CTRL+J would fit a good blanket with 00:26:475 (5) -
  2. 00:32:904 (2) - Switch to a 1/3 slider to follow Hajime's voice probably
  3. 01:01:713 (3) - This jump is too high for a Hard diff, consider reducing it a bit
[Kisses' Insane]
  1. 00:13:201 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Non 1/3 notes feels too fast for this diff
  2. 00:18:618 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just convert this into a 1/6 slider for consistency with other diffs
  3. 00:21:832 - Add something here to follow the vocals
  4. 00:46:832 (1,2) - Rhythm is incorrect, you can adjust it like this
  5. 01:03:975 (2) - NC?
[StaR's Insane]
  1. Cool!
[Karen's Insane]
  1. Cool too!
[Extra]
  1. 00:15:404 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Increase them slowly so it will give emphasis to the music
  2. 00:54:570 (4) - New combo for consistency with 00:51:713 (1) -
gl~
Pata-Mon
m4ticket

[Timing]
Offset seem a bit early in some part of this song... you can listen 01:04:332 - 01:04:689 - 01:05:404 - ……01:27:547 -

[Easy]
  1. 00:33:618 (4,3) - stack
  2. 01:01:118 (1,2,3) - triangle?
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:475 - is it really need to be clickable? I think 00:11:118 (3,4) - just using a 1/1 reserve slider is good
  2. 00:18:975 (2,3) - 1/1 00:33:142 (6,7) - 1/3 00:46:832 (2,3) - 2/3... so many different rhythm with stack is too hard to read in normal imo (00:33:142 (6,7) - in fact this is the only 1/3 gap with clickable object in this diff, maybe change a rhythm)
[Advanced]
  1. 00:13:856 (3) - 00:14:570 (2) - 00:15:999 (2) - 00:16:713 (4) - if you want to follow them then 00:13:142 - should be followed too.
[Hard]
  1. 00:45:047 (5,1) - visual ds is too low, maybe you can make 00:45:404 (1) - not too curved
[Kiss]
  1. 00:18:618 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - = 7 × 1/4 stream in 252bpm lol. It's really toooooo hard for a insane diff, especially this the easiest Insane
  2. 00:21:832 - there should be a note
[星R]
  1. 00:03:856 (1) - 00:04:332 (1) - 00:04:570 (1) - 做成带跳的note的话就加个音效吧,打空气好难受的
  2. 00:06:118 (3,4) - 感觉跟前面一样拉开更合适吧,粘起来怪怪的,毕竟也是有鼓的
  3. 00:41:713 (4,1) - 这里不是滑条尾接note还这样ds,感觉稍微有点难打了
  4. 01:26:475 (2) - 没叠好
[卡人]
  1. 00:11:118 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 既然都是单点就音效塞爆,打击感会比较好
  2. 00:16:118 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
  3. 01:10:761 (1,2,3) - 如果你要这么摆也是加个音效舒服,不过我觉得这里摆个间距小点的串(就01:15:047 (1,2,3) - 这大小的)更合适,毕竟没鼓
[Extra]
  1. 01:02:547 (1,2) - no obvious sound, especially comparing with 01:02:785 (3,4,5,6) - , but you use same ds. may be delete and change 01:02:428 (3) - into a 2/3 slider?
GL
Smokeman
m4m from your q

00:28:261 - you could lower the volume on these sections aswell. Atm they just stand there from copying the higher diff (can be applied to all diffs)
00:18:261 (1) - maybe add a clap aswell. It's kinda weak in comparrison since the sound in the music is so strong :s (can be applied to all diffs)


easy

00:13:975 (3) - put a clap on the tail. Would repeat the hitsounding pattern from 00:12:547 (1) - , follow both vocals with a clap and also create an auditory build-up to that "crescendo" at the end of the intro
01:07:547 - you could put a finish on these aswell. Would make the parts a bit intenser and I kinda like it : )


alacat normal

00:18:975 (2,3) - 00:33:142 (6,7) - 00:46:832 (2,3) - these were actually missleading to read. On the third one i wasn't even sure what rythm was going to be played :S If you can find a way around it so atleast 00:46:832 (2,3) - 00:49:689 (2,3) - look distinct would be great!
00:06:475 (5) - whistle this? Feels kinda empty
00:43:975 (4) - This one felt a bit too weak compared the who intense the vocals are in this part. a 2/3 slider would make this part justice imo https://puu.sh/xhvVK/370ebb7797.png


Akitoshi advanced

i am a bit pedantic about this but i think AR6.5{} would be better for one reason: The approach-circles of these 1/3 pattern you use 00:02:428 (3,1) - look kinda odd since the notes are so fast. Woudl give a bit of space between the circles https://puu.sh/xhw73/538ae2cafd.png
01:15:047 (3) - having this as 2 circles would make the whole 01:14:689 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - less slide rintense and also create a rythmical contrast to 01:15:404 (1,2,3,4,1) -
01:18:975 (4,5,1,2,3) - 5 sliders in a row felt like a bit too much. If you think you can change it up a bit like in the first half of the chorus. you could ctrl+g the rythm of 01:18:618 (2,3,4,5) - (delete the new note 5 on 01:19:570 - aswell if you want)


Hard

00:32:904 (2) - would be cool to express the vocals through the rythm in some way since they stand out so much
-


Kisses Insane

00:02:904 - 00:03:261 - these should be finishes aswell cause the song finishes there aswell. (the other diff have them)
00:18:618 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this burst is kinda overkill and imo out of place in sucha low lvl diff. I think a repeat/buzz-slider and single note as a finished after the repeatslider would emphasise this better
00:18:618 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - did you forget a note here ? It's really odd to leave a gap like that.
00:32:904 (1) - you could emphasise these wierd fast vocals with like 2 kicks or a slider and note or smth. I think they stand out quite a bit
00:39:689 (1,1,1,1) - kind wierd to use the red and grey when its not as intense of a slow down and boost like 00:09:689 (1,1,1,1) - . it actually confused me a bit when playing :S
fun chorus : )


StarR Insane

00:01:832 (2,3) - You could lower the velume on the ends of these as a contrast to 00:02:547 (1,2,3) -
00:30:642 (1,2) - i would try to keep the follow point hidden by moving the circle a bit closer to the slider.
00:58:499 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - have a slider build up in spacing between the 1/3 rythms like 00:19:928 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - since the vocals build up. I would argue that 00:19:928 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - doesnt really need that gimmick since the song doesn't indicate something of that nature but ye it makes it more interesting to play
01:08:261 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i found the movement in this part unnecessarily hard to perform :S


Keren Insane

00:01:118 (1) - the is a personal preference but i think it woul make the slider look a lot better if you avoided the red anchor. It creates these small bumps in the middle :c
00:16:356 (3,1) - I dont get why you would have a pause here. The melody is constantly increasing in pitch creating that build-up feel while the drums just follow along. Having the player rest all od a sudden is just too off-putting. Compare it to 00:11:118 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:18:975 (1,1) - These arent similar to eachother and yet you mapped them the same. Infact 00:18:975 (1) - is some wierd 'Ceramic Tea Cup Stirring with Spoon Foley' https://www.soundsnap.com/ceramic_tea_c ... ley_01_wav lol and 00:19:332 (1) - is the sound of a bass guitar chord being plucked and let ring. So please try to adjust these to objects to fit the music in some way. (atleast mute the slider ends since they are very notcibly loud cause of the lack of any instrumentation in that part)
01:06:475 (4,5,1) - The sudden break you force the player to perform here to accord for the lack of spacing is kinda killing this part for me. 01:04:689 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Everything up to that jump is super cool arguably using filler rythms 01:04:928 (2,4) - to get this effect :c Either doa complete stop on 01:06:475 (4) - having 01:06:713 (5) - stacked under it and leaving 01:06:832 (1) - where it is now to spark this dynamic movement once more.
01:12:904 (1) - make this a 1/3 slider and add a note here 01:13:142 - for the reoccuring vocal pattern of 01:12:189 (4,5) - (keep the momentum alive!!!)
01:15:047 - you only really need to have a slowdown here since the rest of the chorus is consistently energetic (uwu anime songs)
things repeat afterwards in the kiai so fix them here aswell
01:22:189 (3) - 01:22:189 (3) - i dont get why this had to be shaped like this. Something like https://puu.sh/xhBG3/6a598f61e1.png would've made this pattern play a lot cuter for me
01:26:832 (1) - w h y ? try to make the loop smoother atleast :I I would argue that it doesnt complement the aesthetics of your map at all but if you like it then keep it. my suggestion: https://puu.sh/xhBWw/956977bba7.png


Extra

00:15:404 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This pattern is pretty ordered but i think slowly changing it up (like increasing spacing or more dynamic angle changes) would make this cooler.
00:19:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - imo this part is way to spaced for its palce in the song. It's pretty close to 00:03:618 (4,5,1) - but only repeated liek 7 times. and going with sliders here 00:21:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - on the 00:21:118 (1,3) - would also emphasise the vocals aswell as the low pitch guitar notes since you did map this 00:21:832 (5) - one to the vocal thingy there.
00:28:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would concider this a lot more tasteful since it has more of an intense instrumentation in the background and also gives the player a pause after the third repitition. What i am trying to get at is that compared to everything else in this Verse these patter stand out in an odd fashion due to their spike in difficulty.
00:51:356 (2,3) - Since these differ from 00:52:070 (2,3) - 00:52:785 (2,3) - musicaly you could have some small gimmick. Say custom stack them in the other direction or have them slightly spaced.
00:54:213 (2,3) - same again here
01:15:404 - you could add that audience applause SB-hitsound from talent shredder. For a second i thought it was really present.


cute set c:
Bluekrait
Friendly Friend mod for Kisses
Message me in game or through forum PM for any questions regarding my mod!


[Kisses' Insane]
  1. 00:15:404 (1,2,3,4) - Just an fyi, these are many times easier to play than 00:11:118 (1,2,3,1,2,3)
  2. 00:21:832 (6) - Missing circle?
  3. 00:35:404 (3) - NC?
  4. 00:35:642 (4,5) - Stack these, it's the only 'stack' like this in the map.
  5. 00:39:689 (1,1,1,1) - Maybe use circles mostly like what you did starting at 00:28:261 (1) ? Or use sliders instead of circles at the earlier spot for consistency.
  6. 00:50:999 (6) - Missing circle here?
  7. 00:52:428 (1,1,2) - Fix blanket please :c
  8. 01:02:785 (1,2,1,2,1) - dude nice
  9. 01:05:404 (1,2,3) - (minor) I think the 2 would look better below the 3 (ctrl J, ctrl H, and ctrl G) due to how 1 is curved:

    Green lines show new flow pattern, I think this flows better, but I understand if you want to go the purple route.
    Purple lines show old flow pattern
    Yellow boxes on clickable areas
  10. 01:15:047 (4) - NC or remove NC from 01:00:761 (1)
  11. 01:17:189 (2) - (minor) Curve 2's slider end up so it flows better into 01:17:547 (3) :
Hope I got everything :o
timemon
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[Extra]
01:13:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - from the intensity of your hitsounds, wouldn't switched the spacing around make more sense? the 01:13:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sounds less intense but have bigger spacing than the other combo that has a stronger hs but smaller spacing
01:27:606 - this sound is weird because at the downbeat it's not even playing yet. but I feel like adding a circle here is a little bit better

[Karen's Insane]
00:05:404 (1,2,3) - why not use the pattern like you did during the kiai? they appear a few times during the kiai and using it here with small spacing and low SV can help player understand what to expect into the map

[StarR's Insane]
00:15:761 (1) - could stack here
01:17:904 (1) - same

[Kisses' Insane]
00:09:689 (1,1,1,1) - why so many NC
00:18:618 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this is a bit too fast for most ppl, especially for a 4.3* map

[Hard]
00:16:832 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this might be a bit too complex for hard players, maybe try sliders?

[Akitoshi's Advanced]
01:19:332 (5) - I think this should be 2 circles. with 2nd circle being on top of 01:19:689 (1) - too many sliders in a row can make the map bland imo

[alacat's Normal]
Nothing I could think of that would improve the map

[Easy]
01:23:975 (1,2) - gap here is quite huge I think it's better to keep the gap constant at 1/1 for newbies to easily play. I suggest using sliders.

good luck!
I'm not familiar with irregular maps and this set is really good to begin with, so I'm not even sure if my suggestions are even useful lol
Kalibe
ok hitsound mod

00:05:523 (2,2) - they're missing drum hitsound on both head / end. would be nice to use on these http://puu.sh/xjSaE/3cdc9c1355.wav though
00:06:475 (1) - clap on first head, maybe finish too
00:07:189 (2,2) - i really prefer to add second clap on these ends, both are kicks actually, same to 00:10:047 (2) - 00:15:047 (3) - and etc
00:11:356 (3,1) - these should have clap added
00:11:832 (1) - clap
00:14:332 (3) - clap on head sounds really out of place, please remove it uwu
00:14:689 (1) - missing clap on head
00:18:618 (2) - add drum additonal with whistle on last end? sounds funny w
00:24:332 (2) - 00:25:047 (4) - 00:27:189 (3) - same clap on end cuz kick is audiable and etc
00:28:975 (5) - 00:30:404 (5) - clap
00:35:761 (2) - 00:37:904 (5) - clap on end
00:38:856 (3) - drum clap sounds cool, also there's nothing to emphasis on 00:38:975 (1) - so adding drum clap additon is ??
00:41:713 (4) - pretty pretty strong kick without clap :joy: :gun:
01:05:761 (2,3) - 01:17:189 (2,3) - these sliders have also kicks, use claps w
01:09:570 (2) - 01:20:999 (2) - clap, 01:13:618 (2) - clap on end
01:22:904 (2) - clap on head
01:25:285 (3) - um clap or drum clap both are fine here
01:27:428 (2) - on white tick, please remove drum additional and add finish, sounds better to me

uh, there's many other ways to improvement these hitsounds aaa
Akitoshi
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ARenaissance wrote:

[Akitoshi's Advanced]
  1. 00:11:118 (1,2,3) - Not a big deal, but I think this pattern looks a bit nicer: intentional 120degree pattern, sorry w
  2. 00:36:118 (3) - Kinda prefer ctrl+j here. Most of your extended-slider patterns have glide-reflective symmetry as opposed to translational, so changing this would be consistent with the rest of the map's style. aight
  3. 00:39:332 (4) - Same comment here. I think they show up in other parts of the map, but I'll assume you know where to find them if you want to make the changes. ok, but not all for variation tho
  4. 00:58:261 (1) - Slider shape could be more symmetrical. I have nodes placed at (164, 186), (231, 172), (229, 210), and (302, 191) which makes it look a bit nicer. not that exactly but tried

Shad0w1and wrote:

[Akitoshi]
00:53:499 (4) - missing HS o

gary00737 wrote:

[Akitoshi's Advanced]01:15:404 (1) - i think will be better keeping consistency on 01:03:975 (1,2,3,4) - >w<

Underforest wrote:

[Akitoshi's Advanced]
  1. 00:09:332 (4) - You can give emphasis to the trumpets by doing CTRL+J ok
  2. 00:22:547 (1,2) - These can be switched to 1/1 instead ye
  3. 00:46:832 (1,2) - This rhythm is confusing, why not switch it just to this? its from drums and i think current one plays easier as mid-diff
  4. 01:01:713 (3,4) - This can also be switched to a whole 1/1 slider or 2 circles, no beats in 1/3 fading guitar sound maybe help me from overmap with slidertail lolz, highest diff had same placement so whynot w

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Advanced]
  1. 00:13:856 (3) - 00:14:570 (2) - 00:15:999 (2) - 00:16:713 (4) - if you want to follow them then 00:13:142 - should be followed too. ye

Smokeman wrote:

Akitoshi advanced

i am a bit pedantic about this but i think AR6.5{} would be better for one reason: The approach-circles of these 1/3 pattern you use 6.3 00:02:428 (3,1) - look kinda odd since the notes are so fast. Woudl give a bit of space between the circles https://puu.sh/xhw73/538ae2cafd.png i dont get it
01:15:047 (3) - having this as 2 circles would make the whole 01:14:689 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - less slide rintense and also create a rythmical contrast to 01:15:404 (1,2,3,4,1) - did 1 circle instead
01:18:975 (4,5,1,2,3) - 5 sliders in a row felt like a bit too much. If you think you can change it up a bit like in the first half of the chorus. you could ctrl+g the rythm of 01:18:618 (2,3,4,5) - (delete the new note 5 on 01:19:570 - aswell if you want) did sth for adding circle

timemon wrote:

[Akitoshi's Advanced]
01:19:332 (5) - I think this should be 2 circles. with 2nd circle being on top of 01:19:689 (1) - too many sliders in a row can make the map bland imo not anymore since i fixd from prev mod

thanks all! :D

upd
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Karen

ARenaissance wrote:

[Karen's Insane]
  1. 00:07:547 (1,1) - You may as well make this pattern symmetrical to the last one over the center y-axis. It's so close already. does it change anything if i do this? i don't get it
  2. 00:08:975 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:16:118 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I would have (1, 2, 3) and (4, 5, 6) flowing in the same direction, as that would emphasize the (3, 4) jump more. what is (3, 4) jump, it doesn't need to be emphasized, only 00:16:475 (1) - this one needs and the direction change works here
  4. 00:41:475 (3,4) - This pattern ignores a clear sound on 00:41:832. I would suggest making 00:41:475 (3) a reverse slider and starting 00:41:713 (4) one tick later. that's vocal, i don't follow vocals here
  5. 01:11:118 (1,2,3) - Finishes on the heads.
  6. 01:16:832 (1,2,3) - Not a huge deal, but I prefer a pattern like this because it's more symmetrical in terms of flow: 1 and 3 looks very ugly

Shad0w1and wrote:

[Karen]
00:23:975 (1,2,3) - blanket
00:52:189 (3) - sv change use nc? etc 只nc加速不然nc太多反而失去了nc的意义
01:00:523 - fill with slider reverse? 不是很必要
01:00:761 (4) - nc prob
01:06:475 (4) - nc or its too tricky to read 01:06:475 (4,5) -

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

  • [Karen's Insane]
  1. 00:41:713 - i think the structure like this can express better to the music since u skipped a vocal sound at 00:41:832 - don't want to follow vocals here because these vocals are too messy
  2. 01:05:047 (3,4) - spacing here is a bit overdone compare with ur whole kiai, reduced spacing a but for consistency it's ok because 01:05:285 (4,1) - this is not overdone

Pata-Mon wrote:

dougaile

Smokeman wrote:

Keren Insane

00:01:118 (1) - the is a personal preference but i think it woul make the slider look a lot better if you avoided the red anchor. It creates these small bumps in the middle :c it doesn't tho
00:16:356 (3,1) - I dont get why you would have a pause here. The melody is constantly increasing in pitch creating that build-up feel while the drums just follow along. Having the player rest all od a sudden is just too off-putting. Compare it to 00:11:118 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the pause and direction change emphasize the (1)
00:18:975 (1,1) - These arent similar to eachother and yet you mapped them the same. Infact 00:18:975 (1) - is some wierd 'Ceramic Tea Cup Stirring with Spoon Foley' https://www.soundsnap.com/ceramic_tea_c ... ley_01_wav lol and 00:19:332 (1) - is the sound of a bass guitar chord being plucked and let ring. So please try to adjust these to objects to fit the music in some way. (atleast mute the slider ends since they are very notcibly loud cause of the lack of any instrumentation in that part) no matter what they sound like they are 2 short sound, muted slider end
01:06:475 (4,5,1) - The sudden break you force the player to perform here to accord for the lack of spacing is kinda killing this part for me. 01:04:689
the spacing isn't small at all i didn't make any 1/3 circle jumps like this in the whole kiai
(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Everything up to that jump is super cool arguably using filler rythms 01:04:928 (2,4) - to get this effect :c Either doa complete stop on 01:06:475 (4) - having 01:06:713 (5) - stacked under it and leaving 01:06:832 (1) - where it is now to spark this dynamic movement once more.
01:12:904 (1) - make this a 1/3 slider and add a note here 01:13:142 - for the reoccuring vocal pattern of 01:12:189 (4,5) - (keep the momentum alive!!!) drums have higher priority, the sv change works
01:15:047 - you only really need to have a slowdown here since the rest of the chorus is consistently energetic (uwu anime songs)
things repeat afterwards in the kiai so fix them here aswell i don't get it it's already a slowdown?
01:22:189 (3) - 01:22:189 (3) - i dont get why this had to be shaped like this. Something like https://puu.sh/xhBG3/6a598f61e1.png would've made this pattern play a lot cuter for me ugly with (2)
01:26:832 (1) - w h y ? try to make the loop smoother atleast :I I would argue that it doesnt complement the aesthetics of your map at all but if you like it then keep it. my suggestion: https://puu.sh/xhBWw/956977bba7.png it's aoba's candy (rip the previous bg)

timemon wrote:

[Karen's Insane]
00:05:404 (1,2,3) - why not use the pattern like you did during the kiai? they appear a few times during the kiai and using it here with small spacing and low SV can help player understand what to expect into the map it's a slow part i don't want to do hard patterns

thanks for mods!
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Mekki
m4m

[alacat normal]
01:16:832 (4,5,6) - seems really unconfortable for a beginner to play, maybe u could lift (5) a bit.

[akitoshi advanced]
od 6 or 5.5 maybe?
00:58:261 (1) - u could make that slider a bit more cutier (nazi lol map is so good sry)
01:11:118 (1) - u forgot a finish here

[hard]
hp 5.5? it is the same as advanced right now.
00:10:404 (4) - i dont see a reason for having a reverse slider here, maybe u could make it just like all other ones.
00:45:404 (1,2) - maybe unstacking this note would make the reading better
01:03:261 (3,4) - it would be better if u made (4) like (3) or in a paralell way, seems unpolished like that.

[kisses insane]
00:21:832 (6) - missing note here
00:34:570 (2) - how about adding a note here? I feel it gets better, u are getting nothing by making those 1/1. It is an insane XD
00:50:404 (4) - *nazi* omg make those parallel XD
00:54:511 (1) - I dont think it is a good idea following the song like that, and even stacking like that, u are losing a really imporant beat right at the next beat to follow that weak vocal.
01:03:975 (2) - nc here to start of kiai, vocals
01:09:689 (1) - missing finish at the head

[extra]
00:05:047 (4) - i really dislike the shape it makes the map looks unpolished to me and I also think that the song doesn't requires this shape at all
00:58:261 (1,2,1) - i didnt get the point of having an increase on SV here, song feels pretty much the same for me
00:59:689 (1) - and then u also made here really slow SV didn't get that ;w;


perfect map, really xD ready to be nominated lol so many mods already /o3o/
Topic Starter
Doormat
mod replies

ARenaissance wrote:

Alright, m4m! I'll see what I can offer. I haven't modded very many upper level mapsets, so I apologize if most of the suggestions just get thrown away.

My map for your convenience: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/527546

[Easy]
  1. 00:35:404 (3) - The blanket would look better if distance was fully consistent. Tweaking around, I get nodes on (295, 79), (315,129), and (301, 173) to get this configuration: tried
  2. 00:38:975 (5) - This curves slider feels a bit out of place when it's surrounded by straight sliders. I replaced it with a copy of (2) flipped 180 degrees and got what I felt was a visually nicer option. it's intentionally curved to give emphasis to the difference in drum sounds
  3. 01:06:832 (1,2) - Just a suggestion, but I think this sort of pattern looks a bit nicer: largely down to personal preference; i prefer my current pattern
  4. 01:11:118 (4) - I feel these should have finishes because 01:05:404 (5) has them too (among others) all hitsounding responded to in kalibe's mod
  5. 01:20:404 (5) - Like my earlier suggestion, the straight slider feels a bit out of place when it's surrounded by curved sliders. Any reason to have this a different shape? i don't think it looks out of place; it was largely down to visual preerence and i didn't want every slider here to be curved lol
[alacat's Normal]
  1. 00:05:404 (3,4) - Definitely think these would look better if they were perfectly parallel. fixed
  2. 00:39:332 (4,1,2,3) - It's a bit of trouble to do this, but I think making these objects form a parallelogram would make things look more organized: i believe alacat's patterning here is that 00:39:689 (1,2,3) - is the start of a new pattern and is independent from 00:39:332 (4) -
  3. 01:13:975 (4,5) - Blanket imperfection. fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:118 (1,2) - Don't really see a reason for why these should be different shapes. I'd make both of them straight sliders. difference is to emphasize the different words (skip vs. step)
  2. 00:08:261 (1) - For distance consistency, I think this ought to be a bit closer to the slider that preceded it. 00:07:189 (2,3,4,5) had more appropriate distances between objects. every start of a new combo is spaced higher to emphasize it
  3. 00:08:618 (3,4,5) - How about making it rotationally symmetrical? difference in shape is to emphasize the "zenshin!" in the lyrics at 00:08:975 (4,5) -
  4. 00:36:832 (1,4) - I'd make these sliders the same shape due to the repetition it represents in the song. i think the music is different enough to allow for slight variation
  5. 00:39:689 (1) - Making this slider body the same shape (plus appropriate rotation) as 00:38:975 (3,4) would add both symmetry and flow. actually, this would play the same regardless. the only difference is the visuals; the (1) is different because again, it's the start of a new phrase
  6. 01:11:118 (1,2,3) - Why don't you have some pattern with 3-fold rotational symmetry here, like how you had it with the others? In the very least, I feel you should have the three finish sounds like you had with the others (which should continue throughout with the other difficulties you made--see the other comment on this on the easy difficulty that you probably already read). good point, fixed
[Extra]
  1. 00:01:118 (1,2) - Same comment for Hard. Why two different slider shapes? same answer for Hard
  2. 00:05:404 (1,2,1,2) - Why do these have a different tapping pattern than 00:06:118 (1,2)? I prefer the latter pattern because this is a swinging song, which emphasizes the first and third beats in the triplet subdivision, so I would suggest changing 00:05:404 (1,2,1,2) so that it goes slider-circle-slider-circle instead. actually if you listen closely, the music for 00:05:404 (1,2,1,2) - places emphasis on where the clickable points are, whereas the music emphasis is different for 00:06:118 (1,2) -
  3. 00:53:142 (1) - IDK I kind of have a thing for curvier sliders so I think a shape like this would look nicer i prefer the current shape
Whoo! Good set, good song, good luck!! :)

Shad0w1and wrote:

[EX]
00:06:773 - kinda weird because piano did not stop here, better fill i feel that the 1/3 gap is more appropriate than a 1/6 gap given the nature of the map
00:58:261 (1,1,1) - these three sliders are weird because their sv (0.7x 0.9x 0.5x) do not present the actual music well. If I were you, I will go with 0.9x 0.7x 0.5x agree
01:02:904 (4) - nc? don't think it's necessary
01:04:928 (2) - I feel you should do something like 01:06:713 (2,1) - instead of stacking, same to 01:16:357 (2) - i actually wanted the patterning to reflect the lyrics. it's stacked to represent the "step"
[Hard]
00:46:118 (2,3,4) - prefer a reverse long slider i think circles better reflect music; music is calmer so i want to use the gaps to emphasize that
00:48:261 (1,2,3,4) - prefer two sliders same as the above
[alacat]
00:32:547 (5,6) - DS lock broken, maybe try ok
ok

gary00737 wrote:

m4tickets ><


turn off widescreen support . ok

[alacat's Normal]01:12:189 (6,2) - use copy? made them parallel
00:32:547 (5,6) - spacing 1.21x
01:07:904 (4) - here i will use this i think it can prominent 01:08:261 (5,6,7) - i believe it is a slider to give emphasis to vocals
01:20:404 (6) - ^ this is definitely a slider because of vocals

[Hard]01:02:070 - i think it can clickable i prefer having it on slider end as i think the gap gives more emphasis to 01:02:428 (1) -
01:18:856 (3,4) - stack
00:02:428 (3,1) -
00:37:428 (3,4) - ^
00:41:713 (3,4) - ^
00:03:975 (1,2) - ^ fixed all stacks

i think 1/1 and 1/3 stack can different disagree; players of this skill level should be able to easily distinguish between 1/1 and 1/3 stacks as long as they aren't right next to each other, which they really aren't in this map

sorry i can't find even more problem.
this mapset is clean for me :D
shoot a star . _.

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

free mod (yea i promise ill do another free mod

  • [Extra]
  1. 00:15:404 - slowly increasing the spacing would give a great emphasis to the music i prefer same spacing, since the musical emphasis on all the notes is the same imo
  2. 00:17:547 (1,2,3) - decreased spacing a bit here, cuz the pitch of the vocal is lower here agreed
  3. 00:39:689 - 00:40:404 - well any reason for the inconsistent spacing, the vocal and the drum sound the same too me so it quite doesnt make sense here mainly to keep the map more varied, but i can change it if others take issue with it
  4. 00:42:428 (2) - i noticed the snap of this notes was a bit off, it should be snap at 00:42:398 - (1/12) to express the snare sound, better do some check here, same applied to all other diffs except easy lol that would play extremely badly though, to have a random 1/12 in the entirety of the map that is 1/3 based. i can try playing around with offset because i believe it is a bit off, or i could try and edit the mp3 to correct it
  5. 00:43:975 (1) - how about spin the angle a bit down, so the flow to 2 would be smoother ok
  6. 01:10:761 (1) - i think the nc here is a bit unnecessary, since the sound isnt dat special and strong too emphasis, unlike this 01:12:189 (1) - nc is to emphasize trumpets, since they are significantly different from the previous patterns

Underforest wrote:

m4m, my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/642407
aaah i love new game so much ><

[General]
  1. StaR's diff has no kiai, it can have one i believe he said he wants to remap the chorus a bit, so i believe he's going to add it in
  2. Kisses' diff has different combo colours this isn't an issue tbh
[Easy]
  1. 01:21:118 (1) - Probably switch into 2 circles, it does inconsistency with 01:09:689 (1,2) - i think there's enough difference between the two parts to allow for variation in patterning; the rhythm is mostly the same
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:832 (1) - CTRL+J would fit a good blanket with 00:26:475 (5) - no thanks, this wasn't intended to be a blanket
  2. 00:32:904 (2) - Switch to a 1/3 slider to follow Hajime's voice probably 00:32:547 (1,2,3) - is mapped to the rhythm of the guitar
  3. 01:01:713 (3) - This jump is too high for a Hard diff, consider reducing it a bit nerfed
[Extra]
  1. 00:15:404 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Increase them slowly so it will give emphasis to the music explained in nino's mod
  2. 00:54:570 (4) - New combo for consistency with 00:51:713 (1) - oops
gl~

Pata-Mon wrote:

m4ticket

[Timing]
Offset seem a bit early in some part of this song... you can listen 01:04:332 - 01:04:689 - 01:05:404 - ……01:27:547 - added +5 to offset

[Easy]
  1. 00:33:618 (4,3) - stack
  2. 01:01:118 (1,2,3) - triangle? doesn't make that big of a difference imo
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:475 - is it really need to be clickable? I think 00:11:118 (3,4) - just using a 1/1 reserve slider is good i believe it's to emphasize the trumpets
  2. 00:18:975 (2,3) - 1/1 00:33:142 (6,7) - 1/3 00:46:832 (2,3) - 2/3... so many different rhythm with stack is too hard to read in normal imo (00:33:142 (6,7) - in fact this is the only 1/3 gap with clickable object in this diff, maybe change a rhythm) i think it should be okay as long as they not very close to each other, but we'll see what others have to say
[Hard]
  1. 00:45:047 (5,1) - visual ds is too low, maybe you can make 00:45:404 (1) - not too curved i just moved it
[Extra]
  1. 01:02:547 (1,2) - no obvious sound, especially comparing with 01:02:785 (3,4,5,6) - , but you use same ds. may be delete and change 01:02:428 (3) - into a 2/3 slider? if you listen very carefully you can actually hear the beginnings of a xylophone being played, and i think it fits the song. willing to change this if more people bring it up though
GL

Smokeman wrote:

m4m from your q

00:28:261 - you could lower the volume on these sections aswell. Atm they just stand there from copying the higher diff (can be applied to all diffs) mistake on my part; fixed
00:18:261 (1) - maybe add a clap aswell. It's kinda weak in comparrison since the sound in the music is so strong :s (can be applied to all diffs) most of the hitsound mods will be replied to in kalibe's mod

easy

00:13:975 (3) - put a clap on the tail. Would repeat the hitsounding pattern from 00:12:547 (1) - , follow both vocals with a clap and also create an auditory build-up to that "crescendo" at the end of the intro there's no snare here though
01:07:547 - you could put a finish on these aswell. Would make the parts a bit intenser and I kinda like it : ) this part isn't as intense musically as the other parts with the finishes

alacat normal

00:18:975 (2,3) - 00:33:142 (6,7) - 00:46:832 (2,3) - these were actually missleading to read. On the third one i wasn't even sure what rythm was going to be played :S If you can find a way around it so atleast 00:46:832 (2,3) - 00:49:689 (2,3) - look distinct would be great! since this was mentioned earlier i changed it for alacat
00:06:475 (5) - whistle this? Feels kinda empty
00:43:975 (4) - This one felt a bit too weak compared the who intense the vocals are in this part. a 2/3 slider would make this part justice imo https://puu.sh/xhvVK/370ebb7797.png i believe the intent was to balance out the note density; i think it's fine

Hard

00:32:904 (2) - would be cool to express the vocals through the rythm in some way since they stand out so much i tried it but a repeat slider plays and feels really awkwardly there. i'd rather just stick to the guitars
-

Extra

00:15:404 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This pattern is pretty ordered but i think slowly changing it up (like increasing spacing or more dynamic angle changes) would make this cooler. the ordered pattern is intentional
00:19:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - imo this part is way to spaced for its palce in the song. It's pretty close to 00:03:618 (4,5,1) - but only repeated liek 7 times. and going with sliders here 00:21:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - on the 00:21:118 (1,3) - would also emphasise the vocals aswell as the low pitch guitar notes since you did map this 00:21:832 (5) - one to the vocal thingy there. i disagree; the spacing is spread apart in order to give more attention to the guitar riffs. the jumps occur when the guitar changes pitch and i think it represents the music well.
00:28:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would concider this a lot more tasteful since it has more of an intense instrumentation in the background and also gives the player a pause after the third repitition. What i am trying to get at is that compared to everything else in this Verse these patter stand out in an odd fashion due to their spike in difficulty.
00:51:356 (2,3) - Since these differ from 00:52:070 (2,3) - 00:52:785 (2,3) - musicaly you could have some small gimmick. Say custom stack them in the other direction or have them slightly spaced. i'll try it
00:54:213 (2,3) - same again here
01:15:404 - you could add that audience applause SB-hitsound from talent shredder. For a second i thought it was really present. maybe

cute set c:

timemon wrote:

a
[Extra]
01:13:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - from the intensity of your hitsounds, wouldn't switched the spacing around make more sense? the 01:13:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sounds less intense but have bigger spacing than the other combo that has a stronger hs but smaller spacing the music itself is decreasing in intensity though, the hitsound change was done to reflect that
01:27:606 - this sound is weird because at the downbeat it's not even playing yet. but I feel like adding a circle here is a little bit better there's no sound here though, and extending the repeat slider makes it sound really out of place. it's likely that what you're hearing is just an echo/reverb effect

[Hard]
00:16:832 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this might be a bit too complex for hard players, maybe try sliders? i think hard players should at the very least be able to read 2/3 jump patterns.

[Easy]
01:23:975 (1,2) - gap here is quite huge I think it's better to keep the gap constant at 1/1 for newbies to easily play. I suggest using sliders. i don't think a 2/1 gap is particularly large. beginners should be able to read this just fine because of time-distance equality

good luck!
I'm not familiar with irregular maps and this set is really good to begin with, so I'm not even sure if my suggestions are even useful lol

Kalibe wrote:

ok hitsound mod

00:05:523 (2,2) - they're missing drum hitsound on both head / end. would be nice to use on these http://puu.sh/xjSaE/3cdc9c1355.wav though link is broken s:
00:06:475 (1) - clap on first head, maybe finish too
00:07:189 (2,2) - i really prefer to add second clap on these ends, both are kicks actually, same to 00:10:047 (2) - 00:15:047 (3) - and etc
00:11:356 (3,1) - these should have clap added
00:11:832 (1) - clap
00:14:332 (3) - clap on head sounds really out of place, please remove it uwu
00:14:689 (1) - missing clap on head
00:18:618 (2) - add drum additonal with whistle on last end? sounds funny w
00:24:332 (2) - 00:25:047 (4) - 00:27:189 (3) - same clap on end cuz kick is audiable and etc
00:28:975 (5) - 00:30:404 (5) - clap
00:35:761 (2) - 00:37:904 (5) - clap on end
00:38:856 (3) - drum clap sounds cool, also there's nothing to emphasis on 00:38:975 (1) - so adding drum clap additon is ??
00:41:713 (4) - pretty pretty strong kick without clap :joy: :gun:
01:05:761 (2,3) - 01:17:189 (2,3) - these sliders have also kicks, use claps w
01:09:570 (2) - 01:20:999 (2) - clap, 01:13:618 (2) - clap on end
01:22:904 (2) - clap on head
01:25:285 (3) - um clap or drum clap both are fine here regular clap then
01:27:428 (2) - on white tick, please remove drum additional and add finish, sounds better to me

uh, there's many other ways to improvement these hitsounds aaa 1/3 hitsounding is hard aaaa. all applied, thanks!

MkGuh wrote:

m4m

[alacat normal]
01:16:832 (4,5,6) - seems really unconfortable for a beginner to play, maybe u could lift (5) a bit. this is a straight line, i don't see how this would be difficult/uncomfortable to play or read

[hard]
hp 5.5? it is the same as advanced right now. ok
00:10:404 (4) - i dont see a reason for having a reverse slider here, maybe u could make it just like all other ones. sure
00:45:404 (1,2) - maybe unstacking this note would make the reading better agreed
01:03:261 (3,4) - it would be better if u made (4) like (3) or in a paralell way, seems unpolished like that. (4) is a 150 degree rotation of the (3); i think it looks fine

[extra]
00:05:047 (4) - i really dislike the shape it makes the map looks unpolished to me and I also think that the song doesn't requires this shape at all personally i think it fits, considering the pattern that it leads to
00:58:261 (1,2,1) - i didnt get the point of having an increase on SV here, song feels pretty much the same for me took shad0w1and's suggestion
00:59:689 (1) - and then u also made here really slow SV didn't get that ;w; slow sv was to emphasize the held sound in the music and vocals; applied shad0w1and's suggestion so it feels less awkward now


perfect map, really xD ready to be nominated lol so many mods already /o3o/

alacat gave me permission to apply mods for the normal; will update the response box as i go through the mods. thanks again everyone! i'll try and get to the m4ms this week

updated akitoshi and karen's diffs.

edit: replied to all mods, updated offset for all diffs; updated hitsounds for all diffs excluding kisses. also changed whistle.wav so redownload is necessary

edit 2: updated offset again by another +10
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@shadow 00:03:975 (1,2) - 间距和 00:04:689 (4,5) - 保持一致 I like the way the play with the current spacing

@forest 00:46:832 (1,2) - wanted to follow something else
01:03:975 (2) left unNC'd for the colour hax

@MKguh 01:03:975 (2) left unNC'd for the colour hax
Topic Starter
Doormat
updated with new mp3, thanks to meyrink

edit: updated kisses' insane
Mekki
01:21:490 (2) - nc on karen diff
Nakano Itsuki
WOKEman
00:30:642 (1,2) - doesnt rly matter imo..
Nino
00:19:928 - 00:28:499 - I think the NCs are ok actually, keeping them for now

others are changed one way or another
thx

改摸簡直是折磨
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Title:JUMPin' JUMP UP!!!!
TitleUnicode:JUMPin' JUMP UP!!!!
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Creator:Doormat
Version:StarR's Insane
Source:NEW GAME!!
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