00:22:647 - add a note on column 3 //Reference: 00:44:972 (44972|0,44972|1,44972|2) -
00:37:647 (37647|3) - move to column 2 (or 1) //to make a jack like 00:34:681 (34681|0,34856|0) - and 00:36:077 (36077|2,36251|2) - etc
00:39:565 (39565|1) - move to column 4 //to avoid jack like 00:35:379 (35379|1,35554|2,35554|3) - 00:36:774 (36774|1,36949|2,36949|0) - 00:40:961 (40961|2,41135|0,41135|3) - etc (or, if you don't like the pattern, don't touch)
00:44:100 (44100|2,44187|1,44274|3) - Ctrl + H //for pitch -> Reference: 00:38:519 (38519|2,38606|0,38693|3) -
00:44:449 (44449|0) - move to column 4 ^
00:44:449 - add a note on column 2 ^ -> Reference: 00:38:868 (38868|1,38868|2) -
00:44:623 (44623|3) - move to column 3 if you applied the previous suggestions //for hand balance and it has low pitch (Also, it is more comfortable to me somehow) Now, if you applied all of my suggestions, that part looks like this:
https://puu.sh/xVYrN/85bba647b8.png00:48:984 (48984|0) - move to column 2 //to make a jack like 00:46:019 (46019|2,46193|2) -
00:51:774 (51774|1) - move to column 4 ^
00:57:356 (57356|1) - move to column 1 ^
01:00:147 (60147|1) - move to column 1 ^ (or if you wanna make variation considering next suggestion, change 00:59:623 ~ 01:00:321 try this:
https://puu.sh/xVZbg/f356623aea.png)
I think you would get what I meant. What I want to say is consistency. If you are applying my suggestion, place or remove jacks consistently depending on the sound. (You can just place jacks on other sounds, or remove all jacks. Just make sure that it is consistent) Good Luck!01:08:170 (68170|1) - end this LN on 01:08:344 //the sound is quite long differently from 01:09:391 (69391|0,69914|0) - these sound
01:08:344 (68344|2) - make it a LN which ends on 01:08:868 if you are following the elec sound.
01:08:868 (68868|2) - move to column 1 if you followed the previous suggestion //LN hides this note
01:10:263 (70263|2) - make it a LN which ends on 01:10:350 //You are following 01:09:914 (69914|0) - this sound.
01:10:961 (70961|1,70961|2,71135|2,71135|3,71309|0,71484|3,71527|1) - change this part like this:
https://puu.sh/xW0mq/db0235fc43.png //you would know why if you applied the previous suggestions
01:12:705 (72705|1,72705|0) - flip these two notes //to make that part similar as 01:09:914 (69914|0,70088|0) -
01:13:054 (73054|2) - make it a LN which ends on 01:13:141 //same suggestion~
01:13:228 (73228|0,73228|3,73358|2,73402|0,73490|1,73577|3,73577|2) - try this:
https://puu.sh/xW0DV/4e9f1ea650.png //emphasize 01:13:228 by placing triple and LN because it has big and long sound.
01:13:751 (73751|1,73751|0,73926|2,73926|3) - now you know what I want to suggest :^)
01:15:147 - add a note on column 3 //to make it double -> Reference: 01:09:565 (69565|3,69565|2) - 01:12:356 (72356|1,72356|3) - etc
01:15:670 (75670|2) - move to column 2 //you know, right? :^)
01:15:844 (75844|0) - make it a LN which ends on 01:15:931 :^)
01:16:542 (76542|0,76542|2,76716|1,76716|3) - :^)
01:17:937 - add a note on column 3 :^)
01:18:461 ~ 01:29:972 - perfect :^)
(o, wait. There are too many faces)01:31:368 (91368|0,91368|3,91455|2,91542|1,91716|3,91804|2,91891|1) - is there reason to make this and 01:53:693 (113693|2,113780|1,113868|0,114042|3,114129|2,114216|1) - this different? :thenk: for various pattern or mood?
01:34:158 (94158|2) - make it a LN which ends on 01:34:333 //01:34:333 (94333|0,94507|2) - for following this sound. Also, Reference: 01:34:681 (94681|0) -
01:34:158 (94158|1,94681|3) - set those LNs' end point and start point at 01:34:856 //the wind sound changes at there.
01:38:868 (98868|2) - move to column 4 //jack -> Reference: 01:33:112 (93112|2,93286|2) -
01:38:955 ~ 01:39:740 - how about this?:
https://puu.sh/xW1Pt/65431d01a1.png //to follow the sound which you've followed at 01:32:065 (92065|0,92152|1,92240|0,92240|2,92327|1,92414|3,92414|0,92414|2) - this part.
01:44:449 (104449|1) - move to column 1 //same suggestion I did before (jack)
01:45:495 (105495|0) - shorten this LN till 01:45:670 //only this one has 01:45:495 (105495|0,105670|1) - this kind of pattern in that section
01:46:193 - add a note on column 1 //as you did at 01:35:030 (95030|1) -
01:50:030 (110030|1) - move to column 3 //same suggestion :^)
01:55:612 (115612|2) - move to column 1 ^
02:01:280 and 02:01:455 - add a note for each //missing note
02:06:774 (126774|3) - move to column 1 //same suggestion I did before
02:07:647 (127647|3,128170|0) - set those LNs' end point and start point at 02:08:344 //the wind sound changes at there
02:12:356 (132356|1) - move to column 1 //jack
02:20:554 (140554|3) - delete //no reason to double -> Reference: 02:14:972 (134972|3) -
03:03:286 - add a note on column 2 //missing note
03:08:519 - add a note on column 4 //as you did in previous kiai section
03:19:594 - add a note //missing note
03:30:495 (210495|2) - move to column 1 //jack
03:31:803 (211803|1) - delete //there's no sound
03:31:629 (211629|3) - move to column 2 if you applied the previous suggestion //to emphasize high pitch of 03:31:891 (211891|3) -
03:36:077 (216077|3) - move to column 2 //jack
03:36:251 (216251|0) - move to column 4 if you applied the previous suggestion //hand balance
03:36:949 (216949|2,217821|3) - set those LNs' end point and start point at 03:37:647 //following the wind sound
03:42:356 - add a note on column 3 //in this kiai section, you've put a note in this part.
03:43:926 ~ 04:04:856 - Aren't those LNs following the melody? if it is, 03:44:449 (224449|1,224623|3) - This should be one LN (you would be know why if you listen to the music)