This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, August 17, 2017 at 9:54:29 AM

Artist: PinocchioP
Title: I'm glad you're evil too
Tags: hatsune miku 初音ミク vocaloid ボーカロイド yuma saito kimi mo warui hito de yokatta HUMAN
BPM: 88
Filesize: 11029kb
Play Time: 06:17
Difficulties Available:

1. Our deviant love story (5.04 stars, 1119 notes)

Download: PinocchioP - I'm glad you're evil too
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hi

"romanised" means latinizing from the original title, shouldn't it be Kimi Mo Warui Hito De Yokatta instead?


I am a good modder :^)

Hikan wrote:

"romanised" means latinizing from the original title, shouldn't it be Kimi Mo Warui Hito De Yokatta instead?
No since the official title on PinocchioP's youtube's channel is written in English so it should stay the same here reference

dif

00:21:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - can have a better stack but who know what is your intention https://puu.sh/wPw65/490849b2d0.png i like how your puush is broken :>, but ye did sth to it
00:29:885 (6,2,4) - 1/4 reverse? To fill up the piano 00:57:840 (3,5) - nic
00:39:772 (4) - nc? f
00:43:692 (1,2,3,4) - make it smoother, the current one looks gay f
01:14:374 (1,2,3) - blanket would look nice here i'd prefer to keep it, since all the slider shapes are copy and patse lol
01:18:124 (1) - circle is enough imo, sounds overmapped at tail i wanted to create a lead-in kinda movement to represent the hold vocal there better, but i do agree that the slidertail is a bit overmapped so muted it instead
01:20:851 (4,1) - swap nc? f
01:30:738 (1,2,3) - spacing is odd i think its fine 01:31:419 (3) - vocal here is less intense so it should have lower spacing than the rest
01:37:556 (1,3) - try ctrl g them, flow would be funner, although gay flow is not the goal here, since i want to emphasize those heavy piano notes
01:47:101 (3) - nc? doesnt work well with followpoint at 01:47:101 (3,4) - nah,its a whole vocal line
01:56:988 (1,2,3) - rearrange to a better triangle, also 01:58:010 (4) - nc to differentiate the previous pattern maybe, it would be even more better if you placed it in the triangle center or else f
01:58:181 - 02:00:397 - spinner?
02:10:880 - dragging breaktime here for what? seems uneccessary dont want to map instrument ><
02:25:794 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - better turning a couple 60 degrees repetitively to make a perfect hexagon? >_> nope,im good
02:55:027 - map cool
03:08:238 (2,3,1,2) - these different patterns look unconnected, try another pattern or rearrange them to a better place the 2 represent 2 completely different vocal lines with the latter being much more intense, so there should be more emphasis put into it, hence the patterns
03:21:192 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - https://puu.sh/wPxhE/cb4e6140c8.png , reverse slider would work i want to express the piano in a more interesting way here but i'll wait for more opinions maybe :thinking:
03:34:828 (2) - nc yes
04:28:692 (1) - end it on yellow tick to make it more unexpected idk yes
04:32:442 (3,1) - swap nc for pattern since you nc for pattern f
04:33:124 (2) - nc would be nice 04:41:647 (3) - 04:44:374 (3) - f , yea I find no reason to not nc them 04:49:147 (3) - 04:48:806 (1,2,3) - want to keep this 04:49:828 (5) - 05:00:738 (3) - 05:06:192 (3) - f
too long I stop modding kds ples bai ahh you miss the best part

I am a good modder :^) the goodest

thx.>>>>>>>

plaeshuldor

Some nonsensical general stuff that might be helpful for the mapper discussed via irc:


Nice start, good luck with the set

Hello, m4m

theonlydiff:

1. 00:02:612 (5,1) - 00:09:430 (5,1) - the only places where you did such stacks
2. 00:14:885 (4) - are you sure about this offscreen?
3. 00:33:465 (1,2,3,4) - maybe dont stack these?
4. 00:38:238 (1,2) - pretty hard to read imo
5. 00:40:453 (3,4) - i think this flow doesn't fit there
6. 00:53:919 (1,2) - this gap is pretty weird
7. 00:56:988 (6,1) - keep ds consistent?
8. 01:08:578 - im pretty sure there should be click
9. 02:16:760 (1,2,3,1) - wrong rhythm (listen on 25-50% speed) (same for future instances)
10. 02:32:783 (3,4,5,6) - i suggest using short sliders 1/8 instead since these sounds stand out
11. 02:33:465 - i think you should map weird sounds in this section, it would be much cooler
12. 03:01:760 (4,1) - don't ignore sound between these
13. 03:21:192 - i suggest mapping those 1/6 sounds here
14. 03:57:669 (1,2) - make those like previous 1,2 since its the same piano notes
15. 04:00:397 (1,2) - don't make gap between these so small
16. 04:08:919 - you started mapping drum sounds here all of a sudden, but ignored them previously, feels unnatural
17. 04:30:056 - this sv change is very unexpected, i think you should prepare player somehow for it (with combo colours for example)
18. 04:55:453 - are you sure your whistle should be here?

Cool song, decent map. Good luck with this one!

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hello, m4m

theonlydiff:

1. 00:02:612 (5,1) - 00:09:430 (5,1) - the only places where you did such stacks i dont see much wrong with it :thinking:
2. 00:14:885 (4) - are you sure about this offscreen? pretty sure
3. 00:33:465 (1,2,3,4) - maybe dont stack these? i feel like the stack should represent the reduce in intensity of the piano pretty well
4. 00:38:238 (1,2) - pretty hard to read imo so far nobody has had problem with this, so i'll keep it for now
5. 00:40:453 (3,4) - i think this flow doesn't fit there did sth
6. 00:53:919 (1,2) - this gap is pretty weird i want to emphasize the vocal there, hence the gap
7. 00:56:988 (6,1) - keep ds consistent? vocal emphasis
8. 01:08:578 - im pretty sure there should be click nah, i just want to follow the piano here
9. 02:16:760 (1,2,3,1) - wrong rhythm (listen on 25-50% speed) (same for future instances) fixed
10. 02:32:783 (3,4,5,6) - i suggest using short sliders 1/8 instead since these sounds stand out this nice enough imo
11. 02:33:465 - i think you should map weird sounds in this section, it would be much cooler i actually want to make the whole section in a more progressive style (as you can see from the bookmark), so the density just go up, thats why its just slider in this section, the weird sound is mapped in the next section
12. 03:01:760 (4,1) - don't ignore sound between these it would be a bit too intense for the song imo
13. 03:21:192 - i suggest mapping those 1/6 sounds here that would be a bit too much, the rhythm here is actually simplified so that it is more playable but still being able to represent the heavy piano
14. 03:57:669 (1,2) - make those like previous 1,2 since its the same piano notes technically the same thing c:
15. 04:00:397 (1,2) - don't make gap between these so small less intense piano note, smaller spacing
16. 04:08:919 - you started mapping drum sounds here all of a sudden, but ignored them previously, feels unnatural the drum here is signal by the slider, also the drum in the previous part is much quieter than in this section, so its fairly suitable imo
17. 04:30:056 - this sv change is very unexpected, i think you should prepare player somehow for it (with combo colours for example) yes
18. 04:55:453 - are you sure your whistle should be here? pretty sure

Cool song, decent map. Good luck with this one!

thx!!

Hello mod from my queue~
Good luck!

TheKingHenry wrote:

Hello mod from my queue~

Our evil little love story

1. From AiMod: objects' ends not snapped at 00:31:248 (4) - 01:31:759 (4) - 02:31:248 (7) - fixed
2. 00:31:930 (6) - I'd break this into circle so that you get the piano like you've done before (00:15:738 (1,2,3,4) - and so on). ok
3. 00:38:238 (1,2,1) - stacking looks fucked up (same at 00:40:624 (4,1,2) - 00:45:226 (4,1,2) - and so on) I think you should find some slightly different alternative, since these don't look good. You could either make them clearly "not stacked" patterns or change leniency so that they actually stack (which could possibly fuck up some things tho), but anyways the way they currently look is more like they'd just be randomly somewhat on top of each other but not really fixed everything except 00:40:624 (4,1,2) - this since it looks fine to me
4. 00:51:363 (7,1) - connecting these 2 as slider would be cool here imo, it'd also express that prolonged vocal between them cool
5. 00:55:794 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - would look and play better if it continued in that cyclic manner, like now there is this random linear part 00:56:135 (1,2,3,4) - the random linear part is to emphasize the vocal at that point, if continued in a cyclic manner then the vocal there wouldn't be properly emphasiszed
6. 00:59:204 (7) - same as earlier somewhere (and same for the following ones tbh if there are such ¯\_(ツ)_/¯) yep
7. 01:08:749 (1) - NC the slider instead of this. During this low density part here, always NC the ones on the emphasised (white) ticks, since that's how it's read (so this can be read as if 01:08:749 (1) - would be on the white tick, which it isn't) Same for the following ones sure
8. 01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - is it necessary that this pattern overlaps itself? I don't really mind it but I think it'd look better without im fine with this one
9. 01:30:397 (7,1) - fix blanket ye
10. 01:40:624 (7,1) - same (01:41:306 (1) - is way too close to 01:40:624 (7) - due the very slight curve of 01:40:624 (7) - ) a little bit better now
11. 02:22:215 (3,4,1) - I guess it's fine either way, but why are you ignoring these sounds? They are pretty clear (there was similar stuff couple secs ago too) they are a bit too dense for the section, also following the piano would be nicer imo
12. 02:35:510 (4,1) - these could be easily blanketed tbh not even remotely intentional in any sense
13. 03:00:738 - lot of ignored sounds here and there from now on as well, but I guess since there are so many of them (and probably more to come on the more dense sections later) it's intentional so whatever ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ exactly, thats why the vocal is always the main priority
14. 03:10:283 (1,2,1) - this is not really the correct rhythms here, you hear that prolonged first one? So basically 03:10:453 (2) - should be at 03:10:539 - instead since the rhythm is kinda weird here, i tried to simplified it and use pattern to represent it instead, but i'll ask around and see how it goes
15. 03:11:306 (1,2,3) - 1/12 instead of 1/8. Could map with either 3 kicksliders of 2 notes, burst of 3 + kickslider of 3 or just one/two kicksliders. But preferably don't use wrong rhythms changed it into one reverse slider instead
16. 03:21:192 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - identical stuff here lol. Seems like this might repeat more times, so just the same drill same
17. 03:44:885 (1,2,3) - you have almost all the screen free, so don't put these so that they overlap crudely the only pattern that is on the screen lul oops
18. 03:46:249 (1,4) - overlap due the stack, just change the direction of the stack and it's fine fixed
19. 04:54:431 (1,1) - not really necessary overlap either im fine with this one
20. 05:53:919 (3,5,1) - perhaps position these better in comparison to each other (so that the circles for example blanket the slider or are perfectly on it's body and so on) yes
21. 06:05:510 (1) - tune the ending little, it doesn't look good how it looks like it's eating into itself (basically it's probably enough if you just open the last curve little) fixed

Good luck!

thx!!!

Hi from my mod q ~

I couldn't find lot's of issues, though I still have some things to point out.

00:33:465 (1,2,3,4) - It would be more appropriate to replace this 4 notes with 1 reverse slider. It's not really important but, since vocal stops I think it's a good idea to represent a new section of the map this way.

00:40:624 (4) - this slider represents vocal right ? You should do the same here 00:46:249 (4).

00:45:226 (4) - mb replace this note with a slider ?

00:49:147 (1,2,3) - notes placed like this aren't really comfortable while playing.

00:56:306 (2,3,4) - ^

01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - it would be more appropriate to replece this moment with 1/2 sliders because piano here is quiet.

01:26:647 (1,2) - I also have a bit concerns about this moment, but I can't think of anything better right now, sry.

01:34:147 (5,6) - I think it'll be a bit better to place this 2 sliders like this, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677315 . I just feel like this section 01:33:124 - 01:34:828 - should have a circular flow. Btw you don't need to place them exactly like I did. Just make circular flow in this part, that's all

01:40:113 (4,5,6) - This also should have circular flow ( example > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677347 )

01:49:488 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern rotates to the left and making a good circular flow. However this part breaks this 01:50:851 (1,2,3). It's easily fixed by placeng objects like this > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677360.

01:51:874 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part looks messy.

Also 01:53:238 (3) - you probably should turn this 1/4 slider into 1/2 slider.

02:11:647 - 02:33:465 - This whole section looks messy. + It's also have a bad flow. And by bad I mean it constantly keeps changing making an unpleasent feeling while playing. Patterns aren't the best either. So far the most unpolished section of the map.

02:41:476 (1) - this slider is 70% random, When I played this map I didn't even unterstand why is it here. Though now I know what sound it represents. However, it's better to focus on vocal, this little bg sound will only distarct you, making player feel uneasy with all this 1/8 sliders.

02:43:522 (1) - ^ you could simply replace this with a circle.

Btw 02:43:522 (1,2,3) - messy pattern

02:55:283 (1) - remove NC

02:55:965 (2) - start NC

02:55:965 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - replace this moment with 1/2 sliders. ( same as here 01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) )

02:59:374 (1) - Lmao is this Monstrata easter egg ? > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677420. Messy pattern tbh, just make some jumps.

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03:00:738 - 03:33:465 - Amazing circular and linear flow, feels insanly comfortable while playing. still looks a bit unpolished , but you've made a really gj on this one ~ !

04:30:056 - 05:54:601 - ^ same, this last 2 sections of them map were my greatest pleasure.

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Overall really good map, though I'm not sure if it's ready for rank yet. There're still things to be fixed.

871 wrote:

Hi from my mod q ~

I couldn't find lot's of issues, though I still have some things to point out.

00:33:465 (1,2,3,4) - It would be more appropriate to replace this 4 notes with 1 reverse slider. It's not really important but, since vocal stops I think it's a good idea to represent a new section of the map this way. imo a reverse slider wouldn't emphasize the piano transition here as well as 4 circles do

00:40:624 (4) - this slider represents vocal right ? You should do the same here 00:46:249 (4). the slider represent a more dragged out vocal while the second uses circle because the vocal there stop quite abruptly, so the circle should do a better job

00:45:226 (4) - mb replace this note with a slider ? ok

00:49:147 (1,2,3) - notes placed like this aren't really comfortable while playing. i believe they do a pretty a good job emphasizing the piano there

00:56:306 (2,3,4) - ^ same but for vocal this time

01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - it would be more appropriate to replece this moment with 1/2 sliders because piano here is quiet. nah 1/2 sliders wouldn't feel as well imo

01:26:647 (1,2) - I also have a bit concerns about this moment, but I can't think of anything better right now, sry. same,so i fixed the blanket

01:34:147 (5,6) - I think it'll be a bit better to place this 2 sliders like this, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677315 . I just feel like this section 01:33:124 - 01:34:828 - should have a circular flow. Btw you don't need to place them exactly like I did. Just make circular flow in this part, that's all i just feel that this kind of flow is much more fitting for the vocal,

01:40:113 (4,5,6) - This also should have circular flow ( example > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677347 ) vocal emphasis, circular flow would be too comfortable

01:49:488 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern rotates to the left and making a good circular flow. However this part breaks this 01:50:851 (1,2,3). It's easily fixed by placeng objects like this > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677360. nic

01:51:874 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part looks messy. looks fine to me lel

Also 01:53:238 (3) - you probably should turn this 1/4 slider into 1/2 slider. that would make the rhythm a bit awkward imo

02:11:647 - 02:33:465 - This whole section looks messy. + It's also have a bad flow. And by bad I mean it constantly keeps changing making an unpleasent feeling while playing. Patterns aren't the best either. So far the most unpolished section of the map. so far nobody has complain about this so its good?Flow and aesthetics is ok for me too

02:41:476 (1) - this slider is 70% random, When I played this map I didn't even unterstand why is it here. Though now I know what sound it represents. However, it's better to focus on vocal, this little bg sound will only distarct you, making player feel uneasy with all this 1/8 sliders. idk, it seems fine to me but i'll think about it

02:43:522 (1) - ^ you could simply replace this with a circle. same

Btw 02:43:522 (1,2,3) - messy pattern :thinking: the whole thing looks pretty okayish for me

02:55:283 (1) - remove NC ok

02:55:965 (2) - start NC ^

02:55:965 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - replace this moment with 1/2 sliders. ( same as here 01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) ) ^

02:59:374 (1) - Lmao is this Monstrata easter egg ? > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677420. Messy pattern tbh, just make some jumps. i think its fine the way it is

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03:00:738 - 03:33:465 - Amazing circular and linear flow, feels insanly comfortable while playing. still looks a bit unpolished , but you've made a really gj on this one ~ !

04:30:056 - 05:54:601 - ^ same, this last 2 sections of them map were my greatest pleasure.
Thx!!!

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Overall really good map, though I'm not sure if it's ready for rank yet. There're still things to be fixed.

Thx for the mod!!

Đc.

1. 00:12:158 (3,4) - tại sao lại stack? mấy chỗ khác ko stack?
2. 00:49:828 (5) - Nên move đến X:350, Y:361 cho trông nó đều đều với mấy cái kia hơn
3. 01:14:374 (1,2,3) - Is this supposed to be blankets?
4. 01:19:488 (2,3) - Stack trên đầu 01:19:828 (4) - đi
5. 01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Đừng cho đụng nhau đc ko?
6. 01:32:442 (7) - Slider 1/2 for consistency
7. 01:33:124 (1) - Why not 2 circles? Hợp vocal và consistent nữa
8. 02:41:647 (2,3) - Blanket
9. 02:49:488 (3) - Lệch. Đặt ở X:475, Y:25 thì đc hơn
10. 03:10:113 - Chỗ này có cảm giác như là 1/12 đúng hơn. Thử nghe lại đi. 03:21:022 (8,9) - as well
11. 03:33:124 (3) - Chỗ này t ko nghĩ nó là 1/4. Mà là 1/mấy thì t cũng chịu!
12. 04:40:283 (3,6) - Khoảng cách giữa 2 cái này khác mấy cái kia. Chỉnh nha!

LeKhanhHoa wrote:

Đc. NGon

1. 00:12:158 (3,4) - tại sao lại stack? mấy chỗ khác ko stack? oops
2. 00:49:828 (5) - Nên move đến X:350, Y:361 cho trông nó đều đều với mấy cái kia hơn f
3. 01:14:374 (1,2,3) - Is this supposed to be blankets? not the slightest
4. 01:19:488 (2,3) - Stack trên đầu 01:19:828 (4) - đi cảm giác có chút chuyển dộng thì hợp vocal hơn
5. 01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Đừng cho đụng nhau đc ko? nhìn hay hơn mà :v
6. 01:32:442 (7) - Slider 1/2 for consistency nó giống vs 01:29:715 (6) - mà :thinking:, also hợp vocal hơn
7. 01:33:124 (1) - Why not 2 circles? Hợp vocal và consistent nữa nic
8. 02:41:647 (2,3) - Blanket f
9. 02:49:488 (3) - Lệch. Đặt ở X:475, Y:25 thì đc hơn f
10. 03:10:113 - Chỗ này có cảm giác như là 1/12 đúng hơn. Thử nghe lại đi. 03:21:022 (8,9) - as well nic
11. 03:33:124 (3) - Chỗ này t ko nghĩ nó là 1/4. Mà là 1/mấy thì t cũng chịu! ok 1/12
12. 04:40:283 (3,6) - Khoảng cách giữa 2 cái này khác mấy cái kia. Chỉnh nha! f...chắc thế :/

<3

yo, from my queue

good song, gl

fk u u ruined the song
[General]
• 00:00:738 - 2 timing point khác volume này con
• Chắc tao chết =)))))
[Tên diff như cc]
• 00:01:590 (1) - 00:02:953 (1) - 00:04:317 (1) - 00:07:044 (1) - ... mấy cái object chỗ này mày nên giãn spacing ra gấp đôi hoặc gấp 3 gì đó, để dễ đọc hơn. Chứ chỗ thì m stack với cục cũ, chỗ m tăng tí xíu, inconsistent và khó read vl
• 00:11:306 (1,1) - Cục này m có thể bố trí cho nó đẹp đẹp tí hơm, nhìn nó kì cục vl
• Tao cảm thấy mod tiếng Việt tao kh có chuyên nghiệp, để đổi
• 00:16:760 (3,4,1,2) - As you're going into a different pattern of both instrument and vocal on 00:17:101 (1,2) - I think you should have some kind of flow break to emphasize that
• 00:17:101 (1) - You NCed here but not 00:22:556 (5) - here?
• 00:32:612 (1,2) - Should swap NC here
• 00:34:317 (5,5) - inconsistent because 1 is stacked, other is not
• 00:37:556 (4,1) - I think this might be a better solution tho http://puu.sh/wU5KT/4c0b711d77.jpg
• 00:49:147 (1,2,3,4) - Right it's a nice pattern aesthetically, but why do you have such a flow break on 3>4?
• 00:56:647 (4) - For stronger beat like this in a circle train, why didn't you turn the flow somewhere instead of a linear from 2>3>4?
• 01:23:238 (1,1,1) - Overlapping? Seriously? :d
• 01:26:647 (1) - Might wanna remove the sliderwhistle on sliderbody. Also stacking it to 01:26:817 (2) - might be better because the piano isn't strong enough to have such spacing
• 01:26:817 (2) - Also why doesn't this end on 01:27:669 - ?
• 01:28:010 (1,2) - You need more spacing to emphasize the beat tho
• 01:33:465 (3,4) - Break flow, and I think you understand why now
• 01:37:556 (1) - at least it should have spacing like this imo. http://puu.sh/wU5Yx/fea7e7625f.jpg
• 01:48:465 (1) - same, because comparing to 01:50:510 (4) - you used the same concept and same spacing for 2 different thing, which is kinda weird.
• 01:58:010 (1) - higher spacingggg, stacking it to 01:55:283 (1) - maybe?
• 02:22:897 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - pattern như cc, nhìn dơ vãi man, polish lại đi
• 02:28:010 (1) - Again, small spacing for strong beat. You know what, you should go check them all out again
• 03:07:897 (1) - you didn't NC this before tho
• 03:16:760 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ngon
• 03:21:192 (1,2,3) - unexpected concept, how about NC them all to warn players?
• 03:36:192- ok giờ tới cái section này, tao nói thẳng luôn là mấy cái kick slider m có thể tạo shape khác nhau các kiểu thay vì cứ 1 đường thẳng mà quơ, nó rất là khó chịu. Vài kiểu mà t nghĩ ra là http://puu.sh/wU6eI/e7676d6d6f.jpg http://puu.sh/wU6gY/9dad903962.jpg chẳng hạn, chỉ là m cần phải thêm 1 ít sự đa dạng vào cái section này, vì nhìn nó rất là chán.
• 04:23:919 (1) - a bit tricky in flow of the slider. Everyone will see as it will going to go downward, but then it goes upward instead. I think you shoud adjust it a bit. Also the sliderend is pointing too much into the sliderbody, as it might look bad in other skin tho
• 04:51:874 (1) - tbh the flow of 04:51:533 (5,6,1) - is kinda tricky af. To make it easier to understand, ctrl+g would create a better flow, but it's up to you on how to change it
• 05:02:783 (1) - Sao spacing nhỏ bất chợt :v
• 05:17:442 (4) - 2 circles maybe
• 05:30:056 (1,2,3,4) - ugly vl
• 06:05:510 (1) - ferk this http://puu.sh/wU6uy/468afb9fac.jpg nhin nhu cai dau khac
• 06:17:783 (1) - nghe tới đây tao mới thấy m cần phải có 1 cái file sliderslide câm, chứ m tăng volume cho tick ở đây mà sliderslide thì ồn vãi má.

Remap kudos please

thx!!

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YokesPai wrote:

From my queue~

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• Our evil little love story

1. 00:13:351 (4,1) - If this is a blanket you can make it better.
2. 00:15:397 (5) - Move a tiny bit up for better blanket.
3. 00:16:931 (4) - Move to x:330 y:134 so it fits better with 00:16:249 (4,1,2,3) - ?
4. 00:21:192 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This shape looks a bit weird (most likely since you didn't have enough space to map), you should adjust it a bit so it doesn't seem so messy. May I suggest something like this? (Though you'll need to adjust the objects after that) looks fine for me tho
5. 00:28:692 (4,1,2,3) - You could make this more symmetric maybe? (Right now 00:29:203 (3) - seems really off) reworked abit
6. 00:29:885 (6) - Change this to a reverse like 00:23:238 (4) - ? The 1/4 slider into a 1/2 pause just feels unexpected. yes
7. 00:32:782 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a curve? The zigzag stands out too much for a part that really doesn't feel special. (Because you didn't use zigzags until here) it fits the piano pretty well imo
8. 00:49:658 (4) - Pretty much the same as over, this sharp angle after linear placement (which isn't even on a white tick) stands out, you've used curves for these parts and you shouldn't break that when the song repeats the same sounds. I'd suggest something like this. cool
9. 01:26:647 (1) - Ctrl+G? nah
10. 02:55:027 (4) - This could be hard to hit for players in this skill range, as they have to hit a slider 1/8 beat off what they've gotten used to. I know you want to keep the symmetry of 02:53:919 (1,2,3,4) - but you should consider changing this. its not that unexpected imo since no test players have had problems with this
11. 04:13:522 (4) - Weird placement you got there. I'm pretty sure this should be on the right with 04:14:203 (4) - .100% intentional
12. 04:28:010 (1) - Barely noticable imo, should delete this. but i want to map her breath :c
13. 05:08:919 (3) - Blanket can be better.
14. 05:13:522 (6) - This doesn't really fit with the star pattern, you could put it on 05:13:351 (5) - and still get the effect of uncomfortable flow? it looks good for me tho
15. 05:15:397 (4) - Blanket can be better.
16. 05:21:533 (3) - Emphasize this? not necessary imo, since i want to emphasize the synth in this section
17. 05:37:556 (3) - Blanket can be better.
18. 05:53:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm sure you can come up with a better pattern for the last jumps in the map. This doesn't look very good. ye
19. 06:00:056 (1) - The red anchor in the loop annoys me (the little bump), please fix. how lol
20. 06:15:056 (1) - Blanket can be better.
21. 06:17:783 (1) - Imo a spinner would be more fitting here. this slider fits better imo

Good luck!

thx!!

đẩy thôi

1. màu xấu quá e ơi
2. 00:01:249 (2,1) - , 00:02:612 (5,1) - , 00:03:976 (5,1) - concept ko đều hay cố tình đây
   00:06:703 (6,1) - , 00:08:067 (5,1) - , 00:09:430 (5,1) - ít ra thì ba cái này rời stack rời như cái pattern trên hoặc stack hết hoặc rời hết chứ để tùy hứng vậy kì lắm.
3. 00:11:561 - mute slider end
4. 00:14:033 (1) - ctrl+g cái này
   00:14:374 (2) - ctrl+g cái này. Tại vì cái âm ở slider(1) nó ko cần spacing xa, để ở slider(2) có lý hơn
5. 00:11:647 (1,2,3) - và 00:17:101 (1,2,3) - inconsistent này. Thấy để rhythm 1 slider cho piano rồi circle cho vocal ổn hơn
6. 00:33:294 (4,1) - chỗ này đâu cần jump nhỉ
7. Với cả concept ko đồng đều 00:33:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - , 00:34:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:36:192 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . Mấy cái này chắc cho stack hết được hoặc là spacing không có khoảng trống ( tức là overlap lên nhau ). Để làm cho nó khác cái phần trước
8. 01:27:840 - từ đây cho tới cái chỗ nghỉ, nhiều cách sắp xếp slider hơi robotic. Giống như copy pattern nhưng lại không nghĩ tới lúc nào để spacing xa, gần để nhấn mạnh âm cho tốt.
9. 01:53:238 (3) - như slider này ko dc nhấn mạnh trong cái pattern như vầy và flow cái này ko thoải mái lắm
10. 01:49:147 (3,4,3) - stack error
    02:29:715 (2,3) - stack
    02:31:078 (6,7) -
11. 02:59:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - cực sharp angle jump chỗ này ko hợp. Vì tiếng piano không mạnh và cũng ko to, nó emphasize kì lắm. Đang có đà của triangle pattern trước thì làm cái này star jump thử xem
12. 04:13:010 (1,2,3,4) - sao spacing ở 4 thấp vậy? Âm 4 nó nghe giống 2 mà, có thể để 4 cái này thành 1 square nhỏ. 04:13:692 (1,2,3,4,5) - cái này thành 1 square lớn ở ngoài rồi nốt 5 cuối ở giữa hoặc hay hơn là 5 cái này thành star pattern, cứ để cái circle(5) nó spacing xa đi, tuy là âm trên đó nó yếu nhưng mà nối đuôi cái 04:14:374 (5,1) - bằng cách overlap. Như vậy phần tiếp theo sẽ có cảm giác dc bắt vô mượt hơn.
13. 04:53:919 (1,1,1,1) - cái này có đổi SV gì đâu, combo từng cái chi
14. 05:30:056 (1,2,3,4) - pattern emphasize ko đều vì âm nào cũng mạnh mà cái 3,4 nó yếu quá
    
    Khi mà copy pattern ấy, nên suy nghĩ coi là cái pattern đó có phù hợp trong trường nhạc của mình hay không, nếu không thì đi kiếm cái khác lắp vào và để cái mà bỏ ra ấy vào bộ nhớ tạm. Khi nào gặp đúng trường hợp mình có thể xài thì lấy ra. Chứ đừng thấy hay rồi đem vào map mình hết.
15. 05:11:647 (1,2,3) - caí này wide angle trong khi slider(3) nó có Finish hs thì xem có hợp lý ko? Âm càng mạnh thì nên dùng gốc càng nhỏ (và/hoặc spacing xa) để nhấn mạnh tốt hơn, mapping cơ bản 101. 05:03:294 (2,3) - Cái này thì có thể chấp nhận vì vocal cũng còn yếu

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Asaiga wrote:

đẩy thôi

1. màu xấu quá e ơi chọn đại chị e
2. 00:01:249 (2,1) - , 00:02:612 (5,1) - , 00:03:976 (5,1) - concept ko đều hay cố tình đây
   00:06:703 (6,1) - , 00:08:067 (5,1) - , 00:09:430 (5,1) - ít ra thì ba cái này rời stack rời như cái pattern trên hoặc stack hết hoặc rời hết chứ để tùy hứng vậy kì lắm. ok,bỏ stack 1 số chỗ cho hạp concept
3. 00:11:561 - mute slider end yep
4. 00:14:033 (1) - ctrl+g cái này
   00:14:374 (2) - ctrl+g cái này. Tại vì cái âm ở slider(1) nó ko cần spacing xa, để ở slider(2) có lý hơn f
5. 00:11:647 (1,2,3) - và 00:17:101 (1,2,3) - inconsistent này. Thấy để rhythm 1 slider cho piano rồi circle cho vocal ổn hơn ok
6. 00:33:294 (4,1) - chỗ này đâu cần jump nhỉ e nghĩ là cần để nhấn cái piano transistion, nhưng thôi giảm spacing xuống 1 chút
7. Với cả concept ko đồng đều 00:33:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - , 00:34:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:36:192 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . Mấy cái này chắc cho stack hết được hoặc là spacing không có khoảng trống ( tức là overlap lên nhau ). Để làm cho nó khác cái phần trước did sth else
8. 01:27:840 - từ đây cho tới cái chỗ nghỉ, nhiều cách sắp xếp slider hơi robotic. Giống như copy pattern nhưng lại không nghĩ tới lúc nào để spacing xa, gần để nhấn mạnh âm cho tốt.
9. 01:53:238 (3) - như slider này ko dc nhấn mạnh trong cái pattern như vầy và flow cái này ko thoải mái lắm ctrl+g và để nó ra xa hơn 1 chút
10. 01:49:147 (3,4,3) - stack error f
    02:29:715 (2,3) - stack
    02:31:078 (6,7) -
11. 02:59:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - cực sharp angle jump chỗ này ko hợp. Vì tiếng piano không mạnh và cũng ko to, nó emphasize kì lắm. Đang có đà của triangle pattern trước thì làm cái này star jump thử xem rip illuminati
12. 04:13:010 (1,2,3,4) - sao spacing ở 4 thấp vậy? Âm 4 nó nghe giống 2 mà, có thể để 4 cái này thành 1 square nhỏ. 04:13:692 (1,2,3,4,5) - cái này thành 1 square lớn ở ngoài rồi nốt 5 cuối ở giữa hoặc hay hơn là 5 cái này thành star pattern, cứ để cái circle(5) nó spacing xa đi, tuy là âm trên đó nó yếu nhưng mà nối đuôi cái 04:14:374 (5,1) - bằng cách overlap. Như vậy phần tiếp theo sẽ có cảm giác dc bắt vô mượt hơn. reworked the whole thing
13. 04:53:919 (1,1,1,1) - cái này có đổi SV gì đâu, combo từng cái chi maximum empahsis, vs lại có follow point nhìn ko đẹp
14. 05:30:056 (1,2,3,4) - pattern emphasize ko đều vì âm nào cũng mạnh mà cái 3,4 nó yếu quá f
    
    Khi mà copy pattern ấy, nên suy nghĩ coi là cái pattern đó có phù hợp trong trường nhạc của mình hay không, nếu không thì đi kiếm cái khác lắp vào và để cái mà bỏ ra ấy vào bộ nhớ tạm. Khi nào gặp đúng trường hợp mình có thể xài thì lấy ra. Chứ đừng thấy hay rồi đem vào map mình hết.
15. 05:11:647 (1,2,3) - caí này wide angle trong khi slider(3) nó có Finish hs thì xem có hợp lý ko? Âm càng mạnh thì nên dùng gốc càng nhỏ (và/hoặc spacing xa) để nhấn mạnh tốt hơn, mapping cơ bản 101. 05:03:294 (2,3) - Cái này thì có thể chấp nhận vì vocal cũng còn yếu tăng khoảng cách và tạo góc nhỏ hơn 1 chút

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Hello it's mod from my queue

[Our deviant love story]
00:19:828 (3) - I would make something like that
00:37:556 (4) - You can make 1/8 longer imo.
00:42:669 (5) - Make this slider linear.
01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I would make bigger distances between 01:23:238 (1,1,1) <-- These circles. Leave the angles like they are just make a bit bigger spacing between 1st circles.
01:26:647 (1) - Unnecessary 1/8. Put a single circle.
01:32:442 (7) - WTF? This 2 middle anchors??
01:53:919 (5,6,7) - Maybe an 1/8 repeat slider?
02:25:965 (4,5,6,7) - Make jumps 4 and 5, 6 and 7 at the same length.
02:28:010 (1) - Reverse Selection (Ctrl+G)
03:36:192 (1) - Put it on a same place like 2 previous circles.
04:39:942 (1,2,3) - Make an ideal triangles. (Copy 2 circles, Paste it. Rotate by 120 degrees.)
04:40:453 (4,5,6) - ^ Same.

If I have to compare it to my other mods... This mod is extremely short. Really Great Map. Got a Star from me. Keep going man. You are doing good job.
*Tbh I wanted to decline it cause of Star Priority limit, but you got me by CS 5 *

Hi! from my queue

[Our deviant love story]

1. 00:14:033 (1) - blanket is a bit off
2. 00:50:510 (3,4) - why are these stacked? maybe just separate them, because too me there are no real noticeable changes in music
3. 00:50:851 - there is a sound here
4. 02:33:465 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - maybe put some circles on the blue tick, there is still a sound there
5. 04:51:874 (1) - this SV seems to me a bit high maybe lower it a bit
6. 05:17:783 (1) - ctrl-g this so its the same as the sliders after it
7. 05:28:692 (1) - ^

That's it, sorry for such a short mod nothing much for me to point out, good job on the map!

Thx for the mods guys!!

01:40:453 (6) - you could bring this in just a little so visually its the same distance from 01:40:283 (5) - as the slider
04:43:351 (3) - you could increase the spacing before this since it's a pretty loud note

you dont have to kds this lol
really cool map tho

Nevo wrote:

01:40:453 (6) - you could bring this in just a little so visually its the same distance from 01:40:283 (5) - as the slider yes

like

04:43:351 (3) - you could increase the spacing before this since it's a pretty loud note did sth simliar

you dont have to kds this lol still found this helpful enough
really cool map tho

Thx for the polish mod