EMILIA(CV: Rie Takahashi) - Stay Alive · forum

jeanbernard8865

Joined December 2014

jeanbernard8865 2017-04-30T17:49:14+00:00

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[Normal]

00:03:482 (1,2) - why is the slidershape different from 00:00:054 (1,2) ? 00:00:054 (1,2) was a curved slider into a straight one and here it’s the opposite while nothing in the song calls for a clear change in shapes ; inconsistencies within slider shapes happen regularly in the map so I suggest you look out for them throughout

00:06:911 (1) - inconsistent rhythm with 00:00:054 (1,2)

00:18:482 (2,3,4) - rhythm getting different here as well for no reason

00:35:625 (2,3) - stacked notes into a slider are already being used for other hitsounds ( 00:18:482 (2,3) ), so it might get confusing to use them here

00:43:768 (3) - I don’t know how I feel about putting piano and vocals within the same slider… maybe remove reverse arrow and add a circle at 00:44:625 ?

00:51:482 (1,1) - why 1/1 sliders here ? it’s being inconsistent with 00:48:053 (1,2) as well as missing the drums at 00:51:911 while it’s perfectly doable to catch them in a normal. Also, it leaves the snare un-clickable while it’s clickable before, so the emphasis is inconsistent as well

00:53:196 (3) - same thing with snare being un-clickable

Again all the rhythm problems I’ve talked about are here as well afterwards so I’m not gonna mention the same thing twice

[Metaku’s Hard]

00:07:768 (2,3) - the transition between those 2 looks different than the one at 00:00:911 (2,3), because 00:00:911 (2) is at an angle that looks kinda like the continuity of 00:01:339 (3)’s curve, while here the angle looks otherwise ; should be fixed with a rotation of 00:01:339 (3)

00:21:482 (2,3) - here the flow isn’t changed while it was earlier at 00:14:625 (3,4) for example, so it should be for the sake of consistency

00:23:839 - I think you’re missing on a cymbal here

00:58:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you were following the vocals for the entire kiai, why did you not carry on here ?

01:01:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - rhythm here is inconsistent with 01:01:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) while both measures are identical

[Hazu’s Light Insane]

00:30:911 (1,2,3,4) - this is a different rhythm from 00:27:482 (1,2,3,4,5) while it’s the same drum pattern, should be more consistent

00:35:839 (4) - red tick slider feels weird here since you’re following the drums which traditionally emphasise white ticks

00:42:053 (2) - I don’t really like having piano and vocal on the same slider here but it’s up to you here

00:44:625 (1) - could be more polished

00:48:911 (3) - pretty sure you wanted to make a very slightly curved slider but this is a straight one despite having 3 anchors

00:54:911 (1) - this one feels a bit out of place cause it’s the only slider that starts a measure and has clear curves

01:09:482 (3) - once again this feels out of place due to being the only one with such a clear curve

01:23:542 (3,4) - why a stack here ? it’s the only time in the phrase there’s one so it feels out of place

[Fate]

00:03:482 (1) - not correctly centered, move it up there

00:04:339 (3) - once again there are rhythm inconsistencies ; there were 2 sliders at 00:00:911 (3,4) for an identical measure, so there should be 2 sliders here as well

00:18:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - where’s the pattern from 00:14:625 (1,2,3,4,5) ?

00:38:625 (3) - idk this looks kinda weird for some reason

01:02:411 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - back at it again with inconsistencies in rhythm

01:10:339 (1,2,1) - curves here feel out of place since all the rest of the phrase is made out of straight sliders

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-04-30T17:56:34+00:00

AyanokoRin wrote:
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[Normal]

00:03:482 (1,2) - why is the slidershape different from 00:00:054 (1,2) ? 00:00:054 (1,2) was a curved slider into a straight one and here it’s the opposite while nothing in the song calls for a clear change in shapes ; inconsistencies within slider shapes happen regularly in the map so I suggest you look out for them throughout that's not really a problem imo

00:06:911 (1) - inconsistent rhythm with 00:00:054 (1,2) rhythm diversity

00:18:482 (2,3,4) - rhythm getting different here as well for no reason rhythm diversity

00:35:625 (2,3) - stacked notes into a slider are already being used for other hitsounds ( 00:18:482 (2,3) ), so it might get confusing to use them here it's fine like this

00:43:768 (3) - I don’t know how I feel about putting piano and vocals within the same slider… maybe remove reverse arrow and add a circle at 00:44:625 ? guess it doesn't need a change right here aswell

00:51:482 (1,1) - why 1/1 sliders here ? it’s being inconsistent with 00:48:053 (1,2) as well as missing the drums at 00:51:911 while it’s perfectly doable to catch them in a normal. Also, it leaves the snare un-clickable while it’s clickable before, so the emphasis is inconsistent as well simplifying the rhythm

00:53:196 (3) - same thing with snare being un-clickable ^

Again all the rhythm problems I’ve talked about are here as well afterwards so I’m not gonna mention the same thing twice

[Fate]

00:03:482 (1) - not correctly centered, move it up there fixed

00:04:339 (3) - once again there are rhythm inconsistencies ; there were 2 sliders at 00:00:911 (3,4) for an identical measure, so there should be 2 sliders here as well rhythm diversity

00:18:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - where’s the pattern from 00:14:625 (1,2,3,4,5) ? ^

00:38:625 (3) - idk this looks kinda weird for some reason well, it is not

01:02:411 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - back at it again with inconsistencies in rhythm rhythm diversity

01:10:339 (1,2,1) - curves here feel out of place since all the rest of the phrase is made out of straight sliders playing the same slider shapes for like 10 secs would be boring

ty for modding wlh

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2017-05-26T12:28:21+00:00

fate
00:02:625 (1,1) - aaa pls dont blanket like this it triggers me so much ;w;
00:09:482 (1,1) -
00:22:125 (3,4) - inconsistent visual spacing, space it something similar to 00:21:482 (1,2) -
00:34:982 (2,1) - it looks better to just stack these imo
00:56:625 (6) - might as well NC here for the stacking sliders pattern
00:53:196 (6,7) - this is like the only time u do anything similar to these slider end stacking patterns. i would just change it tbh
01:07:768 (5,7) - overlap :U
visual spacing needs some work imo. try to make everything look more even.

hazu
ayy wats up
01:28:205 (1,3) - just one minor thing i guess, space this apart just a bit more ;p

otaku's hard
jeesus overlapping 1/2s kill me pls
00:13:339 (6,1) - u might as well just space this out even more, if that was ur intention. go big or go home man
00:48:053 - why dont u just map the entire map with this spacing.. having overlapped 1/2s look so retarded.
in fact i think its even worse when u have some 1/2s that are overlapping and some that are spaced out. ik its for emphasis but it throws ppl off and it looks ugly
besides, normal is already decently hard enough so u dont need to worry too much about making it a bit harder

normal
00:48:053 - the kiai is like the easiest part in this map.. why? you could at least map some of the vocals out like 00:52:125 - 00:54:268 -
00:55:339 - u totaly don't need to simplify this

Kyuukai

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Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-05-26T13:41:20+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
fate
00:02:625 (1,1) - aaa pls dont blanket like this it triggers me so much ;w;
00:09:482 (1,1) -
00:22:125 (3,4) - inconsistent visual spacing, space it something similar to 00:21:482 (1,2) -
00:34:982 (2,1) - it looks better to just stack these imo
00:56:625 (6) - might as well NC here for the stacking sliders pattern
00:53:196 (6,7) - this is like the only time u do anything similar to these slider end stacking patterns. i would just change it tbh
01:07:768 (5,7) - overlap :U
visual spacing needs some work imo. try to make everything look more even.
EDIT : Alright, I've reworked some things on my map and fixed everything !

normal
00:48:053 - the kiai is like the easiest part in this map.. why? you could at least map some of the vocals out like 00:52:125 - 00:54:268 -
00:55:339 - u totaly don't need to simplify this
changed all

Thanks for modding !

Last edited by Kyuukai 2017-05-29T18:30:51+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-05-27T01:51:26+00:00

AyanokoRin wrote:
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[Hazu’s Light Insane]

00:30:911 (1,2,3,4) - this is a different rhythm from 00:27:482 (1,2,3,4,5) while it’s the same drum pattern, should be more consistent The sound in 00:30:911 (1,2,3,4) - is more lower than 00:27:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - So I don't see it convenient to follow.

00:35:839 (4) - red tick slider feels weird here since you’re following the drums which traditionally emphasise white ticks To emphasize the sound in 00:35:839 (4) - (too prominent sound).

00:42:053 (2) - I don’t really like having piano and vocal on the same slider here but it’s up to you here xd

00:44:625 (1) - could be more polished It isn't my intention.

00:48:911 (3) - pretty sure you wanted to make a very slightly curved slider but this is a straight one despite having 3 anchors no. xd

00:54:911 (1) - this one feels a bit out of place cause it’s the only slider that starts a measure and has clear curves Mmm... 00:51:482 (1) -
00:58:339 (1) - ?

01:09:482 (3) - once again this feels out of place due to being the only one with such a clear curve And 01:11:196 (3) - ?

01:23:542 (3,4) - why a stack here ? it’s the only time in the phrase there’s one so it feels out of place asd Fixed.

Kibbleru wrote:
hazu
ayy wats up hai
01:28:205 (1,3) - just one minor thing i guess, space this apart just a bit more ;p Fixed.

Tenkiu

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Metaku 2017-05-29T16:10:17+00:00

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FruityEnLoops wrote:
[Metaku's Hard]
00:40:339 (1,2,3,4,1) - just an idea https://puu.sh/vAVyK/c69d8beeec.png Ehh... I've done it in similar way before so idk why change here

00:48:482 (2,3) - the (2) is on top of the (3)I'm not sure what you're trying to say...

AyanokoRin wrote:
[Metaku’s Hard]

00:07:768 (2,3) - the transition between those 2 looks different than the one at 00:00:911 (2,3), because 00:00:911 (2) is at an angle that looks kinda like the continuity of 00:01:339 (3)’s curve, while here the angle looks otherwise ; should be fixed with a rotation of 00:01:339 (3) And this matters because..? I really don't see an issue here they both play the same anyway and the visuals are fine regardless. Just because they aren't identical doesn't mean it's bad.

00:21:482 (2,3) - here the flow isn’t changed while it was earlier at 00:14:625 (3,4) for example, so it should be for the sake of consistency It's still consistent with the other one at 00:24:911 (3,4) -, just some variation so it's not the same exact thing for 4 times. I don't see an issue here.

00:23:839 - I think you’re missing on a cymbal here To be honest I didn't even notice there was a cymbal here. Won't change for now, I like how it currently is as it put's more emphasis for the piano

00:58:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you were following the vocals for the entire kiai, why did you not carry on here ? I think it follows the vocals fairly well?

01:01:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - rhythm here is inconsistent with 01:01:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) while both measures are identical You had the same timestamp twice ^^'

Kibbleru wrote:
otaku's hard
jeesus overlapping 1/2s kill me pls aaa
00:13:339 (6,1) - u might as well just space this out even more, if that was ur intention. go big or go home man Okay
00:48:053 - why dont u just map the entire map with this spacing.. having overlapped 1/2s look so retarded.
in fact i think its even worse when u have some 1/2s that are overlapping and some that are spaced out. ik its for emphasis but it throws ppl off and it looks ugly
besides, normal is already decently hard enough so u dont need to worry too much about making it a bit harder Meh I thought it'd have nice contrast for the calmer sections and the more intense kiai. I personally don't think it looks too bad so I'll keep it for now, but I'll change it if it's necessary.

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Battle

2,862 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2017-06-05T04:11:27+00:00

[Normal]
00:06:911 (1,2,3) - Rhythm like this doesn't really work well, it's best to stick with rhythms like 00:00:054 (1,2) - since as it properly emphasizes the sounds like 00:00:911 - which keep repeating during the beginning section
00:18:482 (2,3) - I find it awkward that u have this stacked then immediately have something like 00:20:196 (5,6,1) - have a lot of movement, to me it's somewhat counter-intuitive
00:28:982 - tbh you would expect one of those like muffled hitsounds on sounds like this for the music
tbh it's just really awkward that you're switching from really dense to really simplified on and off, 00:33:482 (4,5,1,2,3) - something like this is extremely dense for the first part then goes to 1/1 is just awkward imo
00:53:196 (3,4,5) - This rhythm isn't really doing too much, it would be better to have a pause and then emphasize the vocals, currently 4,5 isn't exactly on strong beats worth clicking so it's more confusing when the players are just going past the stronger, more emphasized vocals here

Kinda just repeats the same problems

[Hard]
00:28:982 (4,5) - Why have a repeat for 5? or put something where 5 is, the red tick after the blue tick is more significant beat-wise, so it would be better to make 4 a 1/1 slider and the 5 a 1/2 slider imo
00:30:911 (1) - I prefer it if the slider tail were on the right since it would read more intuitively
00:32:411 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Spacing feels somewhat messy here, you should try to decide if you want to keep your spacing fairly spread out or touching, because a mix of them just looks cluttered
00:54:911 (1,2) - Low stack leniency makes patterns like this pretty hard to read, I feel you should bump it up so that players are more aware of how to play this
01:05:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I haven't really been feeling what exactly you've been following for the chorus but this is probably the most confusing rhythm out of all of them, it feels like a bunch of 1/4 rhythms without a real goal, I can't tell if this is supposed to be going along with the vocals, drums or guitar, but it feels like it's a combination of all 3 which leads to ambiguous gameplay that doesn't feel very fulfilling
01:14:625 (1,2) - Somewhat of a personal problem, but you should probably try moving this around in a way where the slider bodies aren't touching like it is right now, it always looked messy to me
01:17:602 (5,6,7,1) - While the intensity does die down here, the sudden stop in moment seems rather abrupt and awkward

I'll stop here, the diffs I did mod felt like they still needed quite a bit of work.

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-06-05T11:51:38+00:00

Battle wrote:

[Normal]
00:06:911 (1,2,3) - Rhythm like this doesn't really work well, it's best to stick with rhythms like 00:00:054 (1,2) - since as it properly emphasizes the sounds like 00:00:911 - which keep repeating during the beginning section
00:18:482 (2,3) - I find it awkward that u have this stacked then immediately have something like 00:20:196 (5,6,1) - have a lot of movement, to me it's somewhat counter-intuitive
00:28:982 - tbh you would expect one of those like muffled hitsounds on sounds like this for the music
tbh it's just really awkward that you're switching from really dense to really simplified on and off, 00:33:482 (4,5,1,2,3) - something like this is extremely dense for the first part then goes to 1/1 is just awkward imo
00:53:196 (3,4,5) - This rhythm isn't really doing too much, it would be better to have a pause and then emphasize the vocals, currently 4,5 isn't exactly on strong beats worth clicking so it's more confusing when the players are just going past the stronger, more emphasized vocals here

Kinda just repeats the same problems
All fixed, changed alot of things to make it consistant

I'll stop here, the diffs I did mod felt like they still needed quite a bit of work.

Metaku

524 posts

Joined August 2015

Metaku 2017-06-13T18:37:11+00:00

Battle wrote:
[Hard]
00:28:982 (4,5) - Why have a repeat for 5? or put something where 5 is, the red tick after the blue tick is more significant beat-wise, so it would be better to make 4 a 1/1 slider and the 5 a 1/2 slider imo I can't see why the red tick is more significant here as I've had click focus on drums
00:30:911 (1) - I prefer it if the slider tail were on the right since it would read more intuitively I like it better this way tho and it doesn't have any significant effect on reading imo...
00:32:411 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Spacing feels somewhat messy here, you should try to decide if you want to keep your spacing fairly spread out or touching, because a mix of them just looks cluttered I don't really see an issue here?
00:54:911 (1,2) - Low stack leniency makes patterns like this pretty hard to read, I feel you should bump it up so that players are more aware of how to play this Changed
01:05:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I haven't really been feeling what exactly you've been following for the chorus but this is probably the most confusing rhythm out of all of them, it feels like a bunch of 1/4 rhythms without a real goal, I can't tell if this is supposed to be going along with the vocals, drums or guitar, but it feels like it's a combination of all 3 which leads to ambiguous gameplay that doesn't feel very fulfilling Reworked the rhythm on the kiai (again)
01:14:625 (1,2) - Somewhat of a personal problem, but you should probably try moving this around in a way where the slider bodies aren't touching like it is right now, it always looked messy to me Hmm I rather keep it since to have a clear visual difference on the 1/3
01:17:602 (5,6,7,1) - While the intensity does die down here, the sudden stop in moment seems rather abrupt and awkward Hmm, changed it a bit

I'll stop here, the diffs I did mod felt like they still needed quite a bit of work.

Thanks for modding!

trashdiff

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Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2017-06-24T08:48:41+00:00

M4M from my queue

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
your current soft-hitfinish2.wav and soft-hitwhistle2.wav are too quiet compared to the music and the other hitsounds in the map, please turn the volume of these two hitsound files up to make them fit in the song and map

Normal
00:49:768 (4,5,6) - don't know what are they following, better change 00:49:768 (4,5) - into a single 1/2 slider instead

Metaku's Hard
00:13:339 (6,1) - I'm not against the jump here, it's necessary, but I think you could make it a bit smaller to around 2.0x as the jump currently feels too big, much bigger than other spacing throughout the map
00:30:911 (1,2) - this is quite confusing being in a low level Hard diff, the reverse arrow of 1 told the players to turn back but then you put 2 just in the opposite way its going. better do CTRL+H to 00:30:911 (1) - and move it back to avoid confusion
00:34:339 (1,2) - ^ please try to point 1 to other way instead of the current which leads to 2
00:37:768 (1,2) - ^
00:38:625 (2,3,1) - don't really like this inconsistent spacing, I know you may be trying to use a jump on 1 but such small spacing difference doesn't even feel like a jump but rather seems pretty messy and confusing. you'd better jusdt keep the spacing even for this point
00:49:768 (5,6) - why changing the rhythm? the beats in the music is like exactly the same with that at 00:48:053 (1,2,3,4) - but you broke that consistency with 00:49:768 (5) - with no proper reason. there's no such snaredrum beat at 00:49:982 (6) - in the music and it doesn't deserve that clap sound. you should just try to make 00:49:768 (5) - a 1/2 slider like 00:48:053 (1,3) - instead and move the circle 00:50:196 (6) - to 00:50:411 - just like 00:48:696 (2,4) -
01:22:266 (1,2) - I think using such 1/2 stack like this right after a 1/4 stack 01:21:842 (7,8) - is quite confusing for new players, you should consider to avoid the stack or to replace 01:21:842 (7,8) - with a 1/4 slider and have a slider jump at 01:21:418 (6,7,1) -

Hazu's Light Insane
00:26:196 (6,7,8,9,10) - having a regular star pattern here would be nice
00:40:982 (10,1) - maybe use smaller spacing between them as the beat on 1 is actually quite soft
01:28:099 (7) - I don't there's such drumbeat in the music, better remove this note and have a jump at 01:28:205 (1) - instead
I like the rhythm arrangement

Fate
OD8.5 is simply overkill for this slow song and map, please use at most 7.5 instead
00:02:625 (1) - could you please mute the slider end, it sounds really annoying especially when you extended it to the 1/8 snap
00:09:482 (1) - ^
00:31:768 (3,4,5) - spacing feels so messy, would you please make them even
00:40:768 (1) - unnecessary NC, better remove it
01:01:339 (1) - ^
01:07:768 (5,6,7,1) - flow feels quite weird to me, consider reworking this point
01:28:099 (2) - I don't there's such drumbeat in the music, better remove this note and have a jump at 01:28:205 (3) - instead

call me back after the above are addressed

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-06-29T17:32:34+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
M4M from my queue

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
your current soft-hitfinish2.wav and soft-hitwhistle2.wav are too quiet compared to the music and the other hitsounds in the map, please turn the volume of these two hitsound files up to make them fit in the song and map done

Normal
00:49:768 (4,5,6) - don't know what are they following, better change 00:49:768 (4,5) - into a single 1/2 slider instead done

Fate
OD8.5 is simply overkill for this slow song and map, please use at most 7.5 instead I've sat it to 8 since Hard to LI has 1 OD difference.
00:02:625 (1) - could you please mute the slider end, it sounds really annoying especially when you extended it to the 1/8 snap done
00:09:482 (1) - ^ done
00:31:768 (3,4,5) - spacing feels so messy, would you please make them even tried to, hope it works better
00:40:768 (1) - unnecessary NC, better remove it helps the reading
01:01:339 (1) - ^ helps the reading
01:07:768 (5,6,7,1) - flow feels quite weird to me, consider reworking this point tried to fix that
01:28:099 (2) - I don't there's such drumbeat in the music, better remove this note and have a jump at 01:28:205 (3) - instead yea,done

call me back after the above are addressed

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-06-29T18:25:50+00:00

All fixed, Thanks~

a

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Stay Alive
Artist:EMILIA (CV: Rie Takahashi)
ArtistUnicode:エミリア (CV：高橋李依)
Creator:Kyuukai
Version:Hazu's Light Insane
Source:Re:ゼロから始める異世界生活
Tags:re: zero kara hajimeru isekai seikatsu life in a different world from re:zero tv size ed ending metaku hazu- yaleufeu
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Metaku

524 posts

Joined August 2015

Metaku 2017-06-29T20:32:57+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
Metaku's Hard

00:13:339 (6,1) - I'm not against the jump here, it's necessary, but I think you could make it a bit smaller to around 2.0x as the jump currently feels too big, much bigger than other spacing throughout the map Lowered spacing
00:30:911 (1,2) - this is quite confusing being in a low level Hard diff, the reverse arrow of 1 told the players to turn back but then you put 2 just in the opposite way its going. better do CTRL+H to 00:30:911 (1) - and move it back to avoid confusion
00:34:339 (1,2) - ^ please try to point 1 to other way instead of the current which leads to 2
00:37:768 (1,2) - ^ fixed both
00:38:625 (2,3,1) - don't really like this inconsistent spacing, I know you may be trying to use a jump on 1 but such small spacing difference doesn't even feel like a jump but rather seems pretty messy and confusing. you'd better jusdt keep the spacing even for this point Okay
00:49:768 (5,6) - why changing the rhythm? the beats in the music is like exactly the same with that at 00:48:053 (1,2,3,4) - but you broke that consistency with 00:49:768 (5) - with no proper reason. there's no such snaredrum beat at 00:49:982 (6) - in the music and it doesn't deserve that clap sound. you should just try to make 00:49:768 (5) - a 1/2 slider like 00:48:053 (1,3) - instead and move the circle 00:50:196 (6) - to 00:50:411 - just like 00:48:696 (2,4) - Oops, I had some changes here after hitsounding (which is just copied from other diffs) so I assumed the snare was part of the song, fixed.
01:22:266 (1,2) - I think using such 1/2 stack like this right after a 1/4 stack 01:21:842 (7,8) - is quite confusing for new players, you should consider to avoid the stack or to replace 01:21:842 (7,8) - with a 1/4 slider and have a slider jump at 01:21:418 (6,7,1) - Changed 7 8 into a slider

Thanks for the mod!

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Last edited by Metaku 2017-06-29T21:05:34+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Kyuukai 2017-06-29T20:36:02+00:00

alright, all updated !

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2017-07-03T12:59:29+00:00

recheck, no kd

Metaku's Hard
00:34:339 (1) - this wasn't fixed according to my mod, maybe try something like this

nothing else

Metaku

524 posts

Joined August 2015

Metaku 2017-07-03T13:23:36+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
recheck, no kd

Metaku's Hard
00:34:339 (1) - this wasn't fixed according to my mod, maybe try something like this

nothing else

Oops, thought I fixed that

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2017-07-03T13:37:37+00:00

Fine now
Bubbled.

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2017-07-17T15:19:53+00:00

m4m

[General]

Artist should be 'エミリア(CV：高橋李依)' (without space), according to http://re-zero-anime.jp/product/music.html
```
Artist: エミリア(CV：高橋李依)
Romanised Artist: EMILIA(CV: Rie Takahashi)
```
You can use background in .jpg to reduce file size

[Normal]

00:49:768 (4,5,6) - 01:03:482 (4,5,6,7) - Try to keep this two consistent? the two section are similar but the two rhythm differ too much in my opinion

[Metaku's Hard]

00:48:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It is not a good idea to stack all the notes under each slider, the music/vocal doesn't support for this repetitive pattern. I would prefer using rhythm like 01:02:625 (3,4,5,6) instead to solve the stack problems as well as for consistency between two sections

[Fate]

AR8? 8.3 looks too high in such bpm
00:40:339 (1,2,1,2,1) - I don't think you need such large distance for this jump, it shouldn't have same emphasize as drums in kiai section like 01:00:911 (1,2,1,2)
01:26:515 (3) - Missing NC since you add ncs after 1/6 snapping
01:21:418 (1,2,3) - Try to rearrange the position? Because the difference of distance for 00:19:982 (3,4) - 01:21:630 (2,3) - is too large

popped due to the metadata issue
call zerowind to rebub so that i can qualify

Metaku

524 posts

Joined August 2015

Metaku 2017-07-17T16:04:37+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
[Metaku's Hard]
00:48:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It is not a good idea to stack all the notes under each slider, the music/vocal doesn't support for this repetitive pattern. I would prefer using rhythm like 01:02:625 (3,4,5,6) instead to solve the stack problems as well as for consistency between two sections I personally felt that the 2nd part of the kiai was more intense than the first one (there's slight variation in the drums too) so hence the differences in rhythm but I do agree that stacking every note under slider there is not probably the best idea so I changed 00:48:053 (1,2,3) -

Thanks for the mod!

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osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47089
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Stay Alive
TitleUnicode:Stay Alive
Artist:EMILIA (CV: Rie Takahashi)
ArtistUnicode:エミリア (CV：高橋李依)
Creator:Kyuukai
Version:Metaku's Hard
Source:Re:ゼロから始める異世界生活
Tags:re: zero kara hajimeru isekai seikatsu life in a different world from re:zero tv size ed ending metaku hazu- yaleufeu
BeatmapID:1207312
BeatmapSetID:568865

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Kyuukai

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Kyuukai 2017-07-17T22:24:17+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
m4m
[General]
Artist should be 'エミリア(CV：高橋李依)' (without space), according to http://re-zero-anime.jp/product/music.html
Artist: エミリア(CV：高橋李依)
Romanised Artist: EMILIA(CV: Rie Takahashi)
You can use background in .jpg to reduce file size
[Normal]
00:49:768 (4,5,6) - 01:03:482 (4,5,6,7) - Try to keep this two consistent? the two section are similar but the two rhythm differ too much in my opinion
[Fate]
AR8? 8.3 looks too high in such bpm
00:40:339 (1,2,1,2,1) - I don't think you need such large distance for this jump, it shouldn't have same emphasize as drums in kiai section like 01:00:911 (1,2,1,2)
01:26:515 (3) - Missing NC since you add ncs after 1/6 snapping
01:21:418 (1,2,3) - Try to rearrange the position? Because the difference of distance for 00:19:982 (3,4) - 01:21:630 (2,3) - is too large
popped due to the metadata issue
call zerowind to rebub so that i can qualify

Everything fixed and updated !
I've changed the CS to 4.5 for the Fate diff, some ugly overlaps disappears with that CS

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2017-07-19T12:03:32+00:00

fine

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Chaoslitz 2017-07-21T20:02:28+00:00

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