Victrix wrote:

o^o/ from your m4m ques ~.~

[General]
- You do not need to include "スカイガールズ オープニングテーマ" in the song title. That's what the song album says. http://www.konamistyle.jp/item/31368
- I tried to find a better background, but unfortunately there is no image.
- I wanted to encode in high definition, but I do not have a 720p file. The video ratio is 4:3 Offest 2314 / Download
When you insert a movie in the current state, it appears as a 16: 9 ratio. Add the following code to .osb and disable Widescreen Support in Song Setup Design.

SPOILER

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<3

[Easy]
00:55:043 (1) - Cover in circle ???
00:56:455 (2) - Add Hitsound to this circle. Use Drum and Soft-whistle in the Sampleset to create a melody. idk why drum wasnt there but added a whistle there

[Hard]
- Overall, it would be better to widen the distance of the distance snaps. The spacing of the distance snap is shorter than the basic difficulty. theyre actually both 1x ds but hard has smaller beat snap divisors so it seems shorter, no change
00:57:690 (5,6) - The normal seem to be better than the drums. wut? anyway changed from stack to slight movement
00:57:161 (4) - change slide with another one. not going to split this slider into 2
01:20:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - How about switching to a circle in the middle? There are too many slides. yea

[Insane]
00:13:396 - circle add / You can hear the melody of the song here, but you need to add it. nah following synth only
00:17:631 (3,4) - whistle add / And I think we need a jump pattern here. That makes it even more fun. 00:17:631 (3,4,5) - agreed

SPOILER

00:33:072 (8,1) - Increase the spacing of sudden distance snaps / Please keep with stream distance snap. nah it fits

pefect map(aimod) lol..

p.s you need to add something easier than the existing Insane._. IMO added ;p

Dinshego wrote:

Hey, a m4m req!

Easy

00:47:984 (3) - Fix the tail position fixed
01:03:514 (1,2,3,4) - This part right here contains only sliders, and it could be tiring for beginners to play. I suggest to change 01:04:925 (2) like this (also you can apply the same suggestion for 00:47:984 (3) - ) owo thats good

...

01:23:984 (4) - I think this slider tail should be facing towards next slider for a better flow. no cuz then flow from prev slider is not good,
this is fine

Hard

00:15:514 (2,3,4,5) - This part kinda out from the music in my opinion... here's my suggestion

...

00:33:161 - I think it's better to put a circle instead of slider tail to emphasizing the sound effect
00:54:161 (3,4) - I don't feel this one should have a jump

i redid the entire beginning of this diff

Sidetail wrote:

[easy]
00:13:749 - & 00:16:572 - for places like this, it feels better with circle present there since you are following melody in first part and you didn't map the melody there. Parts like 00:18:337 (3,4) - where there isn't separate melody (at 00:19:396), it is fine to leave it blank as current suggests. yea added

[hard]
01:08:808 (5,6,7,8,1) - might as well use two 1/4 sliders to express this since 5circle stack seems overkill here. this in insane diff looks better. k

[insane]
00:34:219 (2,3) - seems too easy as i compare with later parts. atleast delete the reverse, move slider to 00:34:572 - and add circle where slider started. so that at least kick drum is clickable so it doesnt feel out of place with next objects yea u smart, mapped that part a couple months ago so xd

Sonic Divers diff is good. after my modding partner, - yoshimaro - , mods this map, ask if he wants to send this map off to kibbleru to check.

Kyuukai wrote:

late m4m
General

I had black bars on the left & right corner of ur map while I was modding, there must be a problem with ur map (but idk what is the problem lo)
Remove the sound from your video, it will reduce the size of the video yea there is black bars because its a standard size video, gotta love anime from 2006, also idk how do that lul

Easy

00:14:102 (4,5) - could be improved k
00:25:396 (4,6) - try to make the same blanket distance for both blankets not possible because stacking
00:47:631 (3,4) - very little overlap xd k

Hard

00:38:631 (2,3) - Might be hard to read for a Hard player, looks like a Light Insane pattern imo think this is fine as you can tell where to hit, the circles are in expected slider flow and player can clearly see slider body in all of these
00:47:101 (2,3) - ^
00:49:926 (2,3) - ^
00:54:161 (2,3) - ^
01:08:808 (5,6,7,8,1) - Too hard for a Hard diff, that's a Light Insane pattern changed to 2 1/4
01:19:749 (3,1) - not rotated the same cant tell
01:25:749 (5,2) - overlap can be avoided k
General thoughts about that diff : It looks more like a Light Insane pattern than a Hard diff because of the patterning, consider nerfing some things like 01:16:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or make a Advanced diff for the spread

Insane

00:27:690 (3,4) - Distance between thoses 2 should have the same as 00:24:867 (3,4) - since the music is not intense atm k
00:30:337 (3,4) - ^ reduced a bit
00:31:749 (4,5) - no reason to flowbreak here doesnt break flow tho, slider leniency
00:34:219 (2,3,4,1) - triple flowbreaking here, it should only flowbreak 00:34:396 (3,4) - to emphasize 00:34:925 (4) - and 00:34:925 (4,1) - to emphasize the new combo different pattern now
00:38:808 (3) - Why is there a 1/1 slider out of nowhere, you mapped with 1/2 rhythm then suddently put a 1/1 slider the loud clap sound in the music
01:18:514 (3,1,2,3) - that flows really bad imo, you suddently break the circular movement into a very linear movement. The beginning of ur jump is making a circular movement, and the music is repeating the same sound, but right here you suddently change it to something else even tho the rhythm hasn't changed. Moreover, the distance between thoses is really high. one its an insane, and two its the climax of course it changed

Sonic Drivers

00:15:514 (1,3) - Unrankable, overlap it to make it rankable it isnt though...
00:16:925 (1,2,3,4) - why is there a jump here, we're still in the calm part the harp
00:28:925 (3) - CTRL+G would flow better but it doesnt emphasize better
01:15:690 (6,7) - this should be the same as 01:04:396 (6,7) - since you've done that everytime that rhythm appears spacing increased because its building to climax

gl xd

Kisses wrote:

Easy

1. Personally, I think it would be more ideal to have an NC every 2 measures instead of every 4
2. Since this is the easiest diff in the set I would avoid using stacks at all costs. Stacks do make it a bit more challenging for the absolute beginners and I don't feel it necessary i think having the stacks are fine since everthing in the map is a 1/1 spacing and the slider leniency below it would compensate for any slight confusion causing a delay or rush in hit
3. 00:47:631 (3,4) - small aesthetics thing, ever so slight overlaps like these tend to look a bit tacky and can sometimes look as if they were unintentional. It would be better to either increase the overlap or just don't overlap it at all imo but it was on purpose ;/
4. 01:31:075 (2) - I don't feel like an NC is necessary here. Yh there's a slight offset change but it's not going to be misinterpreted in any other way in accordance with the music, especially at this level. yea

Hard

1. 00:06:514 (3) - I have no idea what this circle is mapping lol, I would just delete it. It flows better rhythmically without it anyways its mapping the "mu" in mugen from the vocals that was slightly late
2. I don't agree with a lot of the spacing inconsistencies in the verse. They seem to just throw a player off. for example 00:34:572 (3,4,1) you have 3 and 4 really close with bigger spacing at 1. Hard diffs do use bigger spacings for objects but generally not in this way. 00:35:808 (2,3) are spaced when 00:34:572 (3,4) and 00:37:396 (3,4) aren't. And then there are cases where the circle -> slider pattern is spaced such as 00:41:455 (2,3) and 00:42:867 (2,3) but no where else. I think this section would be much more well received if you used the same spacings between objects like you did at this section 01:20:455 k
3. 00:38:631 (2,3) - I personally would avoid patterns like these because it flows pretty bad and visually it can trick people. i mean, the hit circle is always in the implied flow of the slider so it is the most obvious one to hit, then the slider behind it has a number on it so its the next one to hit and there is a slider body so you can tell which way to move across the slider
4. 01:08:808 (5,6) - I feel like kick sliders are just a bit too much for this difficulty changed to hit circles
5. 00:58:837 (4,5) - correct me if I'm wrong but I don't hear anything here on the blue tick. I'm guessing you went to emphasis the vocals..? If this is the case then you should at least hitsound the objects mapped on blue since there's nothing in the song to follow and there's no feedback so it ends up feeling like a complete ghost note. A whistle would be fine. there is a tamberine-like sound there so ;p and i think a whistle would be a bit much
6. 00:59:278 (1) - playing this pattern actually takes quite a bit of skill, because of that I do think that the small jump 00:59:278 (1) - is a bit overkill. It ends up playing like your Insane with lower spacing. I think taking out the jump element would make it more appropriate for the spread and the players playing this diff yea removed all those jumps every like measure, added in jumps else where i thought it needed them though

Insane

1. Same about hitsounding blue tick objects in kiai
2. Nice structure

[]I hope this mod was useful, GL!

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Avoid overlapping circles, slider heads, and slider tails. These can be confusing for new players. 1/1 overlaps due to distance snapping should be avoided with higher spacing or slider velocity.

Mir wrote:

asdf

please turn on widescreen support if you have an sb but it looks like not so yeas

[Easy]
- 00:08:455 - Break isn't really necessary.
- 00:23:631 (2,3) -

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Avoid overlapping circles, slider heads, and slider tails. These can be confusing for new players. 1/1 overlaps due to distance snapping should be avoided with higher spacing or slider velocity.

- 00:25:396 (4) 00:31:043 (5) - - NC these?
- 00:47:102 - Should end here just to make the rhythm more coherent cuz this is 3/2 rhythm and it is within the possibility to reflect that even in an easy diff. Applies for all sliders of this type.
- 00:47:631 (3,1) - Overlap is kinda unsightly
- 01:16:219 (2,3,1,2) - Movement here is kinda radical, and could be hard for players to read the sliders properly due to the clutter.

Idk.. overall it feels very cluttered and could follow the song a bit better like I mentioned. remapped easy following your suggestions

[Hard]
- 00:55:131 (1,1) - ... Ideally you'd want a 1/1 gap after a spinner on a Hard diff. How about this? http://i.imgur.com/dMYJOGo.png ya

[Insane]
- 01:19:749 (1,2,3) - Might be misread for 1/2 spacing like 01:05:631 (5,6,7) - 01:16:925 (3,4) - i think it is fine considering theres one of it previously and slider leniency helps

fine

[Sonic Divers]
- 00:15:514 (1,3) - Edging on unrankable. While it has 29 milliseconds of extra time you could probably offset it slightly to avoid issues altogether. sure
- 00:28:925 (3,4,5) - This flow felt a little awkward.. I feel like 4 should be more comfortable ok

00:57:867 - 01:20:455 - From here I can't tell when you want to use 00:59:543 (2,3) - or 01:00:955 (2,3) - stacking or if you just wanna use a 1/4 slider 01:04:396 (6,7). It's fine overall but this variation isn't making sense to me. when it is stacked the vocals are a bit staccato, when it isnt stacked they are flowy, and the 1/4 slider is used because the rhythm of the vocals changed.

Hmm... if you do something about the easy you can maybe pm me to look at it again.

Mir wrote:

[Flask's Normal]
- 00:11:984 (1,2) - Blanket
- 00:38:102 - Having this on a slider reverse is a bit weird when it's the last vocal of the phrase.
- 00:50:808 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be the same rhythm cuz the rhythm in the song didn't change, right? I want to emphasize 00:52:925 -

osu file format v14

[General]
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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:Baby's Tears
Artist:Riyu Kosaka
ArtistUnicode:小坂りゆ
Creator:Aeril
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Ranking Criteria wrote:

Avoid overlapping circles, slider heads, and slider tails. These can be confusing for new players. 1/1 overlaps due to distance snapping should be avoided with higher spacing or slider velocity.

Mir wrote:

im a nazi

[Easy]
- 00:25:396 (1) - Can you do this? lol ok
- 00:39:514 (1,3) - o shit FIXed LOl

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Avoid overlapping circles, slider heads, and slider tails. These can be confusing for new players. 1/1 overlaps due to distance snapping should be avoided with higher spacing or slider velocity.

- 01:02:102 (3) - Are these not parallel? TRIGGERED then again neither are my lines so.. xd cLOse enuf

[Sonic Divers]
- 00:29:278 (4) - 248,170? ye but then it looks ugly overlapping xd
- 00:33:161 (1,2,3,4) - I may be blind but 1>3 has different visual spacing than 2>4? idk but i remade it so it was a star again with same spacing lo

Provided the slidertick hitsound stuff is taken care of you can call me back.

Kisses wrote:

looking at your easy again as requested.

It's ok for the most part but I think having hitsound additions on the slider ends that end on red ticks such as 00:40:925 (3) - 00:52:219 (2) - 01:20:455 (1) - etc, would be more well received. That bit extra feedback would work great for distinguishing beats

1. You should strongly consider making the combo color 3 and 4 more different. They look quite the similar right now.

1. 00:24:690 (2,3,4,5) - Can you try polishing the placement more? Compared with 00:27:514 (2,3,4,5), it seems less neat.
2. 01:11:543 (5,6) - Let's avoid this unnecessary manual stack.

Sonnyc wrote:

Video contains audio. removed

General.

1. You should strongly consider making the combo color 3 and 4 more different. They look quite the similar right now. k

Sonic Divers.

1. 00:24:690 (2,3,4,5) - Can you try polishing the placement more? Compared with 00:27:514 (2,3,4,5), it seems less neat. uhh.. made it neater?
2. 01:11:543 (5,6) - Let's avoid this unnecessary manual stack. ? dont know what you mean but i restacked it ontop of eachother

Fine work.

• 
  [General]

1. Turn on widescreen support, I don't see a reason why it's off, the video is not 3:4 lol
2. The .osu specific storyboarding doesn't appear to have any effect, is this intentional? The sprite is being faded out instantly from what I can see.
   
   [Sonic Divers]
3. 00:22:572 - Would be nice to see lower SV here so it would contrast 00:33:867 - better. At the moment they're basically the same yet the song sounds completely different. Density is already somewhat different, but applying an SV change would make patterning easier with the lower density as well as contrasting more with the surrounding parts.
4. 00:40:043 (3,4) - Could probably space these further, (4) is pretty strong in terms of vocals. Just make sure the spacing between 00:40:219 (4,5) - doesn't get too large. Might be able to stack the circle under the head of 00:39:514 (1) - , for example.
5. 00:46:043 (3,4,5) - Not really sure what's supposed to be the strongest beat here. It looks like 00:46:396 (5) - in the map but it sounds like 00:46:219 (4) - in the song. Maybe I'm missing something?
6. 00:55:925 (10,11,12,13) - Seems a bit strange that these have one type of spacing and 00:55:661 (8,9) - another, in terms of spacing between the overlapping notes. Would at the very least make it look better by being more consistent.
7. 01:04:396 (6,7) - This is pretty noticeable visually, so only doing it here and at 01:07:219 (6,7) - and not anywhere after that, makes it seem a bit inconsistent. There's 01:15:690 (6,7) - , which looks good on it's own, but it's nothing like the other two and again isn't seen anywhere else. The more one-offs like this that you have, the more random and messy your structure will look. Even when varying patterns, you'd want to maintain some pattern in them as to make it seem like it's organized well.
8. 01:09:514 (3,4) - Comparing this to 00:58:219 (3,4) - 00:59:631 (3,4) - 01:10:925 (3,4) - , it's spacing is noticeably different and the pattern sort of breaks there because of that. Would just reduce the spacing, for example by having 01:09:867 (4) - flipped vertically and stacked on 01:08:984 (2) - . Not really the most ideal solution but it's better than what is there at the moment at least. Maybe you know some better way.
9. 01:03:514 (1,2,3) - I don't think doing this here will really emphasize the vocal properly, especially when considering that 01:02:808 (1,2,3,4) - was done the same way. Although doesn't look like vocals are taken too much into account so idk, could at least differentiate 01:03:514 (1,2,3) - from 01:02:808 (1,2,3,4) - .
   
   Overall most concerns are in the kiai, but there are some earlier on as well in terms of contrast with SV changes and all that. Basically from what I can tell, spacing needs work, and contrast can be built better in turn. If all non-important sounds have noticeably smaller spacing than the stronger sounds, it will make the stronger sounds stand out more in accordance to the song. Similarly if something is done where it isn't warranted, it could misrepresent the song and be misleading, for example if some spacing is inconsistent or some recognizable pattern only appears in one of multiple analogous parts.

Naxess wrote:

Greetings,
we meet again

• 
  [General]

1. Turn on widescreen support, I don't see a reason why it's off, the video is not 3:4 lol the video is 4:3 though...
2. The .osu specific storyboarding doesn't appear to have any effect, is this intentional? The sprite is being faded out instantly from what I can see. idk what ur talking about but i think thats just the cropping
   
   [Sonic Divers]
3. 00:22:572 - Would be nice to see lower SV here so it would contrast 00:33:867 - better. At the moment they're basically the same yet the song sounds completely different. Density is already somewhat different, but applying an SV change would make patterning easier with the lower density as well as contrasting more with the surrounding parts. yea
4. 00:40:043 (3,4) - Could probably space these further, (4) is pretty strong in terms of vocals. Just make sure the spacing between 00:40:219 (4,5) - doesn't get too large. Might be able to stack the circle under the head of 00:39:514 (1) - , for example. yea
5. 00:46:043 (3,4,5) - Not really sure what's supposed to be the strongest beat here. It looks like 00:46:396 (5) - in the map but it sounds like 00:46:219 (4) - in the song. Maybe I'm missing something? i spaced it that way because there is a slight crescendo as she leads into the next phrase
6. 00:55:925 (10,11,12,13) - Seems a bit strange that these have one type of spacing and 00:55:661 (8,9) - another, in terms of spacing between the overlapping notes. Would at the very least make it look better by being more consistent. the latter 2 are spaced that way because of the added double beats in that are different from before
7. 01:04:396 (6,7) - This is pretty noticeable visually, so only doing it here and at 01:07:219 (6,7) - and not anywhere after that, makes it seem a bit inconsistent. There's 01:15:690 (6,7) - , which looks good on it's own, but it's nothing like the other two and again isn't seen anywhere else. The more one-offs like this that you have, the more random and messy your structure will look. Even when varying patterns, you'd want to maintain some pattern in them as to make it seem like it's organized well. i dont see how this is "random" or "messy"? the kickslider used was to have more emphasis on the vocals and the unique visual pattern was to have the offbeat vocals stand out more in comparison to the original very standard (1, 2, 3, 4 te) rhythm, the one that was spaced off was like that because i wanted it to have increased spacing while having a similar structure but xd... changed the spaced one to look similar to the previous 2
8. 01:09:514 (3,4) - Comparing this to 00:58:219 (3,4) - 00:59:631 (3,4) - 01:10:925 (3,4) - , it's spacing is noticeably different and the pattern sort of breaks there because of that. Would just reduce the spacing, for example by having 01:09:867 (4) - flipped vertically and stacked on 01:08:984 (2) - . Not really the most ideal solution but it's better than what is there at the moment at least. Maybe you know some better way. k
9. 01:03:514 (1,2,3) - I don't think doing this here will really emphasize the vocal properly, especially when considering that 01:02:808 (1,2,3,4) - was done the same way. Although doesn't look like vocals are taken too much into account so idk, could at least differentiate 01:03:514 (1,2,3) - from 01:02:808 (1,2,3,4) - . changed the triples to kick sliders and move sliders over to the right beat of the vocal
   
   Overall most concerns are in the kiai, but there are some earlier on as well in terms of contrast with SV changes and all that. Basically from what I can tell, spacing needs work, and contrast can be built better in turn. If all non-important sounds have noticeably smaller spacing than the stronger sounds, it will make the stronger sounds stand out more in accordance to the song. Similarly if something is done where it isn't warranted, it could misrepresent the song and be misleading, for example if some spacing is inconsistent or some recognizable pattern only appears in one of multiple analogous parts.

Anyway there's a lot of things here that I've shortly explained in some examples. I've spoken with Mir and they agree that it would need more work, so I'll be popping the bubble they set on their demand. If you have any questions or would like to hear my opinion after applying things, feel free to ask. Me and Mir can probably help you push this if things are applied well, although I'll probably need to drop another mod before that happens if you're up for it, for the other diffs, that is.