• 00:11:914 (2,3,4) - 00:13:740 (1,2,3,4) - not a big fan of how you heavily alternate between prioritizing drums vs. vocals in general
that's okay imo• 00:17:914 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - same idea as above, first combo seems to focus vocals then you introduce hold rhythms for the synth in the background. would rather you place more of a priority of what you want to map to throughout the map. i like what you did from 00:26:261 - to 00:32:914 - because what you're following in the music (vocals) feels a lot more cohesive when playing
fixed• 00:23:131 (5) - shouldnt nc be here because of downbeat?
fixed• 00:55:348 (3,4) - shouldnt this circle-slider rhythm happen on 00:54:957 (2) - and 00:56:001 (5) - ? thats where the drum plays that you follow with this
from my perspective current is better or the rhythm would be lack of variety• 01:16:609 - why do you ignore this drum + bass note here? its very strong and seems to just get drowned out by the repeat slider. same for 01:20:522 (1) - and etc.
the main concern here is to emphasize 01:16:740 - and 01:16:870 - , which is of more importance than 01:16:609 - . For the sake of creating a sense of dragging, I decided to cover 01:16:609 - with whistled repeat slider• 02:08:392 (4) - 02:09:435 (4) - 02:12:566 (4) - dont feel like this circle is applicable here because i dont hear the same drum rhythm as i do under 02:07:871 (2,3) - 02:08:914 (2,3) - (on blue tick + white tick)
I fixed the first one only• 02:22:740 (4) - same kind of thing here, the triple sounds overmapped. dont hear anything underneath this. and for 03:12:827 (4) - too
I tried to fulfill the rhythm here so as to make it fun to play• 02:35:783 (2) - what is this 1/2 slider mapped to? i only hear notable sounds on the white and red ticks surrounding this slider
fixed• 03:10:088 (1,2,3,4) - this stream seems to come out in the middle of nowhere from your slider-based rhythms. I don't hear a change in the music that would call for this change in rhythm density, and no note at all on 03:10:218 (2) -
make sense, fixed• 03:18:957 (3,4) - consider using another pattern here to represent this new vocal section. This whole line of vocals seems to be misrepresented by the repetitive movement throughout 03:17:914 (3,4,1,2,3,4) -
fixed• 03:21:175 (4) - 03:23:261 (4) - same here with triples, this doesn't sound like the place for them. These fit better on more 1/4 based parts of the song, eg. the rap parts
same as above• 03:43:479 (1,2,3,4) - i see your intention with the 1/8 sliders, but a stream rhythm doesn't feel like it fits here because the notes are very subtle. a couple repeat sliders or smth would feel better to this
listen carefully to get the idea beneath it!