ugh those are some weird values why not just go for hp/od 8.5 the lns are rather simple
for starters these lns seems very arbitrary. You randomly drop lns for the guitar sounds and also randomly mix in vocals so it seems. Fairly inconsistent if you ask me
00:25:534 (25534|0,25534|3,25708|1,25883|0) - unnecessarily heavy on the left hand and the current pattern is awk for left thumb space users like me
https://puu.sh/wW8Qh/e1763547ab.png should be a rather simple fix ignoring pr
00:26:929 (26929|4) - consider the what i said above, this can be a 1/2 ln
00:28:325 (28325|4) - ^ wont list more of these simple examples
00:29:720 (29720|5,30069|6) - move to the left once so that it doesnt feel as awkward to play
00:35:999 (35999|1,36043|0,36174|2,36174|3) - another overly heavy pattern 00:36:174 (36174|3) - move to 7
00:38:441 (38441|5,38557|6) - weird snap and weird placement. 00:38:441 (38441|5,38964|4) - swap
00:43:150 (43150|1,43194|2,43325|1) - unnecessary tech
https://puu.sh/wW90R/4e1185e085.png00:44:197 (44197|4) - some balancing weight on the left hand so move this to 4
00:45:592 (45592|0,45767|1,45941|2,46028|3) - awkward transitioning so 00:45:767 (45767|1) - to 5 or 6
00:48:732 (48732|5,48775|4,48906|5) - more unnecessary tech
00:52:046 (52046|6,52046|4,52162|5,52394|2,52394|0,52478|1) - awful. do [67]5 and [12]3 respectively
00:52:562 (52562|4,52731|5,52899|4,53068|5) - swap columns
00:52:731 (52731|2,52731|0,52899|1) - very awkward pattern 00:52:731 (52731|2,52899|1) - swap should do the trick
00:53:320 (53320|1,53320|3,53405|2,53405|0) - unnecessary bms stuff 00:53:236 - should be a double and 00:53:320 - should be a single
00:54:332 (54332|3,54332|1) - yeah you better avoid these transitions they're unnecessarily difficult to play
00:55:343 (55343|0,55343|2,55427|1,55427|3) - wont list more of these do take note that in situations like these, it is very likely that there is an actual drum sound in the 1/2 snap below it take 00:53:236 - as an example
00:57:450 - jesus christ it doesnt have to be this way ;w;
https://puu.sh/wWahi/7133c98f09.png01:00:736 (60736|5,60736|3,60820|4) - [67]5 pls
01:03:349 (63349|5) - for consistency with this, 01:03:686 (63686|4,64023|4,64360|4,64697|5,65034|5) - swap columns
01:03:180 - lasts 4/1 and 01:04:528 - lasts for 2/1 so why does 01:05:877 - last for 11/2
01:08:573 - if you keep this 11/2 it would be inconsistent with this too
01:11:607 (71607|3,71607|6,71776|6,71944|3,71944|5,72113|2,72281|5,72281|3) - too much anchorage on the middle column makes the right hand rather imbalanced especially for right thumb users
01:12:450 (72450|3,72534|1,72618|0,72618|3) - awkward combination
01:12:618 (72618|0,72618|3,72702|6,72787|4,72871|6,72955|4) - this transition doesnt make it any better here's a quickfix
01:21:551 (81551|6,81635|2,81719|3,81719|5,81804|0,81888|1,81888|6,81972|4) - quite hard to read considering there werent a lot of broken stairs beforehand
01:23:405 (83405|6,83405|4,83405|1,83742|4,83742|6,83742|0) - imbalanced. double should go in 01:23:742 (83742|0) -
01:25:090 - e d g y
01:45:483 - better off as
https://puu.sh/wWbq8/95cb0e3e94.pngdidnt nitpick but there could be issues in the last kiai that might need to be addressed as it is similar to the first kiai