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HoneyWorks meets TrySail - Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]

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0109-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, August 08, 2017 at 10:01:17 PM

Artist: HoneyWorks meets TrySail
Title: Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]
Source: 好きになるその瞬間を。~告白実行委員会~
Tags: suki ni naru sono shunkan wo kokuhaku jikkou iinkai natsukawa shiina asakura momo amamiya sora hokichi gaia astarte
BPM: 162
Filesize: 9120kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Astarte's Normal (2.19 stars, 181 notes)
  2. Collab Hard (3.31 stars, 271 notes)
  3. Easy (1.55 stars, 102 notes)
  4. Insane (4.44 stars, 332 notes)
  5. Notice me! (4.93 stars, 371 notes)
Download: HoneyWorks meets TrySail - Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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need mods :)
No pp here, please skip this map if you're looking for some pp xdd

Hokichi's Special Thanks


  1. ezek for editing the bg for me
  2. GhostFY for the help with the wave script
  3. Damnae for storybrew
normal by astarte
hard by hokichi (00:00:000 – 00:48:967) - gaia (00:48:967 – 1:40:835)
sb: Hokichi <3
Thanks yamicchi, gaia for hitsounding things <3
Hokichi

0109- wrote:

GD?
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Hikan
diff
00:03:768 (1,2) - 00:00:805 (1,2) - inconsi-
00:03:768 (1,2,3) - bend lại cho đẹp
00:08:585 (2,3) - symmetri-
00:12:290 (6,7) - thử để 2 cái này nằm ngang để nó comfortable hơn https://puu.sh/wkIfm/8f796c2985.png
00:13:401 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:16:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsist-
00:24:700 (2,1) - blanke-
00:28:961 (3,5,1) - có thể nào làm cho 2 cái blanket này bằng nhau để nó đẹp hơn k
00:36:556 (5) - tại vì kick ở đây, thử cho 00:36:926 (1,2) - cái này kick luôn
00:46:003 (1,2,3,1) - flow ở đây có hơi đơn giản quá, với lại ở đây 00:46:188 - có tiếng nên thử sửa chút
01:00:452 (6) - ctrl g? Để cho nó hợp vs 2 cái slider trước đó 00:59:155 (1,2) - , đồng thời emphasis 1 hơn là linear flow
01:00:823 (1,2) - symmetric
01:18:050 (5) - nc? stream dài
01:21:570 (1,2) - 01:18:606 (1) - inconsistent, để 2 circle sau stream không tạo thêm độ khó gì cả, đã chứng minh qua wata shinose kai
01:29:535 (5,6,7) - stack clearer
01:30:276 (10) - để đâu đó 370 350 để hợp vs slider 1
01:30:461 (1,3) - inconsistent shape man
01:32:684 (1,2) - blan-
01:34:722 (1,2) - blanket
01:38:797 (1,1) - blanket. 01:39:353 (1) - cái này đơn giản quá không đẹp
dif
00:19:884 (3,4) - blanket
00:26:738 (1) - lấy cái này rotate -120 độ rồi để lên 2? như vậy sẽ cân đối hơn
00:28:220 (1) - thử như vầy https://puu.sh/wkJjd/a37135541b.png , 00:28:220 (1,3) - như vậy nó symmetric hơn
00:31:184 (1,2) - ukr
01:39:353 - cho click một cái đi rồi hẵng spin
map dơ vl gl
Topic Starter
0109-

Hikan wrote:

diff
00:03:768 (1,2) - 00:00:805 (1,2) - inconsi- đoạn này sao phải consistent? vocal không giống nhau đến thế
00:03:768 (1,2,3) - bend lại cho đẹp tức là phải bend ra sao :|
00:08:585 (2,3) - symmetri- dạ
00:12:290 (6,7) - thử để 2 cái này nằm ngang để nó comfortable hơn https://puu.sh/wkIfm/8f796c2985.png đoạn jump build-up này nhạc nó cùng một âm chứ không có biến đối gì khác mà tự nhiên đặt ngang ra như thế ;)
00:13:401 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:16:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsist- tại đoạn này mở đầu nên muốn làm rhythm thoáng ra 1 chút rồi mới dày lên =)), để đợi thêm chút ý kiến xem nhưng khả năng cao phải sửa :)
00:24:700 (2,1) - blanke- để đó cho nó có flow thôi ko định blanket :)
00:28:961 (3,5,1) - có thể nào làm cho 2 cái blanket này bằng nhau để nó đẹp hơn k ok
00:36:556 (5) - tại vì kick ở đây, thử cho 00:36:926 (1,2) - cái này kick luôn vậy trông cũng ngon nhưng cái kick ở đây đang muốn nhấn cái baka, với lại ko biết nên để cái kick nữa ở đâu :|
00:46:003 (1,2,3,1) - flow ở đây có hơi đơn giản quá, với lại ở đây 00:46:188 - có tiếng nên thử sửa chút đã remap lại đoạn này chút
01:00:452 (6) - ctrl g? Để cho nó hợp vs 2 cái slider trước đó 00:59:155 (1,2) - , đồng thời emphasis 1 hơn là linear flow oki trông ổn ạ
01:00:823 (1,2) - symmetric ok
01:18:050 (5) - nc? stream dài không cần thiết lắm vì cũng không ảnh hưởng nhiều
01:21:570 (1,2) - 01:18:606 (1) - inconsistent, để 2 circle sau stream không tạo thêm độ khó gì cả, đã chứng minh qua wata shinose kai dạ
01:29:535 (5,6,7) - stack clearer rõ rồi mà
01:30:276 (10) - để đâu đó 370 350 để hợp vs slider 1 dạ
01:30:461 (1,3) - inconsistent shape man cần j phải consistent
01:32:684 (1,2) - blan- tek
01:34:722 (1,2) - blanket tưởng vậy ổn rồi
01:38:797 (1,1) - blanket. 01:39:353 (1) - cái này đơn giản quá không đẹp fk everything i go generic
dif
00:19:884 (3,4) - blanket dạ
00:26:738 (1) - lấy cái này rotate -120 độ rồi để lên 2? như vậy sẽ cân đối hơn không hiểu lắm @@
00:28:220 (1) - thử như vầy https://puu.sh/wkJjd/a37135541b.png , 00:28:220 (1,3) - như vậy nó symmetric hơn sao cần phải làm cho đối xứng?
00:31:184 (1,2) - ukr dạ :(
01:39:353 - cho click một cái đi rồi hẵng spin không cần thiết lắm, để như vầy cho spin đỡ khó hơn chút
map dơ vl gl speedmap ạ
<3 <3
LMT
m4m deal, mod dis https://osu.ppy.sh/s/555454
chọn tầm 2 diff là được, top diff, bouyaaa với another ko cần thiết phải mod nhưng mod được thì tốt


  • [top diff]
  1. 00:03:398 (4) - kiểu đang follow vocals xong rồi tự dưng thêm cái slider này thấy loãng quá. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8387551 . Mấy chỗ sau cũng thế
  2. 00:03:768 (1) - sao k map thành circle + slider luôn? rõ giai điệu hơn.
  3. 00:09:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - cái này đáng ra phải làm nổi bật hơn, thế này chẳng khác gì mấy chỗ khác. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8387696 ví dụ thôi
  4. 00:17:291 (4) - stack chỗ nào khác đẹp hơn đc ko -_-
  5. 00:25:256 (1,2) - sao k theo vocals?
  6. 00:28:961 (3,4,5) - theo gì vậy? guitar thì đánh đều 1/2 rồi k đáng để emphasise.
  7. 00:37:852 (5) - 2 circle? spacing nhỏ thôi để tách biệt với (4)
  8. 01:33:425 (1,2,3,4,5) - hòa âm đặc biệt, flow khác chút đc k ? thử ctrl+g (2)

    :c sao map nhạt thế, kiểu thấy flow êm quá, nên dùng movement để nhấn mạnh các chỗ cần nhấn trong bài nhiều hơn.

    [insnae]
  9. 00:06:362 (4) - uh kiểu giống top diff. Insane thì càng nên để density thấp hơn. Cái đống piano đằng sau đánh đều 1/2 rồi, ko cần phải emphasise.
  10. 00:28:220 (1) - sao chỗ này tự dưng bẻ flow lol, ctrl+g?
  11. 01:23:422 (2,4) - che mất reverse arrow là unrankable nha, 01:23:607 (3,4) - ctrl+g mỗi cái là ok.

    [collab hard]
    idk which part is hoki's and which is gaia's so I hope it's not too inconvenient figuring out which is whose.
  12. 00:16:179 (6,2) - is this supposed to be a blanket? Please fix if that's the case.
  13. 00:21:366 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - note density is too high all of a sudden, (5,6) being a 1/2 slider makes more sense considering the note on (6) is pretty weak.
  14. 00:50:819 (2,3,4) - confusing spacing in a Hard imo and i'm not sure what you're trying to emphasise either.
  15. 01:02:119 (4,5,1) - triple in a calm section is not reflective of the song imo, also the 1/4 note kinda dilutes the emphasis on the vocals that the previous objects have built.
  16. 00:24:330 (4) - yo i think 1/4 kickslider is not allowed for a Hard. Also the violin is actually 1/6 (which is dumb to follow anyway) not 1/4 so i'd rather just map a 1/2 circle here.
  17. 00:43:965 (2,1) - make it more aesthetically consistent with overlaps like 00:36:000 (3,1) - ? That looks awfully odd considering other overlap choices.
  18. 00:51:190 (4,5) - some more equal spacing? spacing looks a little random here.

    [astarte]
  19. 00:12:290 (6,1) - dùng stack cho 2/1 gap rồi thì ở đây không nên dùng stack, đặc biệt là khi người mới chơi read approach circle chưa tốt lắm
  20. 01:21:199 (6) - nên để circle -> 1/1 gap hơn tại vì thế này làm loãng mất emphasis của cái 1/2 slider sau đó cho vocal
    nice diff

    [easy]
  21. cắt bớt rhythm ra, người mới chơi toàn kiểu đứt 1 cái là ko biết theo rhythm sau như thế nào mà ông đánh đều cả dãy thế này. Dùng nhiều 2/1 gap hơn nữa. Với cả slider với người mới chơi thực sự là khó theo nên dùng slider để thay cho gap là không nên.
  22. 01:03:786 (1) - đang sợ hơi ngắn cho Easy, thường là phải 1 measure. Hỏi mấy ông bn xem thế này đủ dài chưa
  23. 01:18:235 (4) - để sang tick đỏ? tick này nghe lệch quá
  24. 01:30:091 (4) - ^

    quan trọng nhất là cắt bớt rhythm, gap 2/1 nhiều hơn thì có nhiều cách để xử lí 3/2 rhythm hơn, mấy cái gap 3/2 xong rồi 1/1 lẫn lộn linh tinh khó bắt cho ng mới chơi lắm.
Hokichi

LMT wrote:

[collab hard]

  • idk which part is hoki's and which is gaia's so I hope it's not too inconvenient figuring out which is whose.
  1. 00:16:179 (6,2) - is this supposed to be a blanket? Please fix if that's the case. // Yes, sure. At first, I thought it was a good blanket lol
  2. 00:21:366 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - note density is too high all of a sudden, (5,6) being a 1/2 slider makes more sense considering the note on (6) is pretty weak. // Like this perharps?
  3. 00:24:330 (4) - yo i think 1/4 kickslider is not allowed for a Hard. Also the violin is actually 1/6 (which is dumb to follow anyway) not 1/4 so i'd rather just map a 1/2 circle here. // Works for me. Fixed
  4. 00:43:965 (2,1) - make it more aesthetically consistent with overlaps like 00:36:000 (3,1) - ? That looks awfully odd considering other overlap choices. // Ok I tried my best to center 00:43:965 (2) - lul
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Source:好きになるその瞬間を。~告白実行委員会~
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Hikan

LMT wrote:

:c sao map nhạt thế
Topic Starter
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LMT wrote:

m4m deal, mod dis https://osu.ppy.sh/s/555454
chọn tầm 2 diff là được, top diff, bouyaaa với another ko cần thiết phải mod nhưng mod được thì tốt


  • [top diff]
  1. 00:03:398 (4) - kiểu đang follow vocals xong rồi tự dưng thêm cái slider này thấy loãng quá. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8387551 . Mấy chỗ sau cũng thế Vậy thì có sao, hết vocal rồi có tiếng piano nổi vậy thì map theo thôi, chứ để không đó cảm giác không tốt
  2. 00:03:768 (1) - sao k map thành circle + slider luôn? rõ giai điệu hơn. ok ạ
  3. 00:09:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - cái này đáng ra phải làm nổi bật hơn, thế này chẳng khác gì mấy chỗ khác. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8387696 ví dụ thôi dạ
  4. 00:17:291 (4) - stack chỗ nào khác đẹp hơn đc ko -_- đâu nhất thiết phải stack :) cái tam giác 00:17:291 (4,1,3) - trông cũng đc mà
  5. 00:25:256 (1,2) - sao k theo vocals? ok ạ
  6. 00:28:961 (3,4,5) - theo gì vậy? guitar thì đánh đều 1/2 rồi k đáng để emphasise. đâu phải gọi gì là emphasise, spacing giữa 2 cái 00:28:590 (2,3) - vẫn nhỏ còn đến 00:29:146 (4) - là tiếp tục follow vocal nên để spacing ra hơn chút thôi
  7. 00:37:852 (5) - 2 circle? spacing nhỏ thôi để tách biệt với (4) dạ
  8. 01:33:425 (1,2,3,4,5) - hòa âm đặc biệt, flow khác chút đc k ? thử ctrl+g (2) sửa lại linh tinh chút rồi ạ

    :c sao map nhạt thế, kiểu thấy flow êm quá, nên dùng movement để nhấn mạnh các chỗ cần nhấn trong bài nhiều hơn. dạ :(

    [insnae]
  9. 00:06:362 (4) - uh kiểu giống top diff. Insane thì càng nên để density thấp hơn. Cái đống piano đằng sau đánh đều 1/2 rồi, ko cần phải emphasise. pitch thay đổi, 2 cái 00:05:621 (2,3) - piano nâng lên cao dần, còn cái này 00:06:362 (4) - tiếng piano hạ xuống nên spacing khác chút có sao đâu, ko ảnh hưởng nhiều khi chơi lắm
  10. 00:28:220 (1) - sao chỗ này tự dưng bẻ flow lol, ctrl+g? vocal hạ hẳn xuống nên bẻ xuống chút
  11. 01:23:422 (2,4) - che mất reverse arrow là unrankable nha, 01:23:607 (3,4) - ctrl+g mỗi cái là ok. đã nhích cái 4 ra chút ạ

    [easy]
  12. cắt bớt rhythm ra, người mới chơi toàn kiểu đứt 1 cái là ko biết theo rhythm sau như thế nào mà ông đánh đều cả dãy thế này. Dùng nhiều 2/1 gap hơn nữa. Với cả slider với người mới chơi thực sự là khó theo nên dùng slider để thay cho gap là không nên. đã remap đoạn đầu chút giảm instensity
  13. 01:03:786 (1) - đang sợ hơi ngắn cho Easy, thường là phải 1 measure. Hỏi mấy ông bn xem thế này đủ dài chưa sau break mà nên ổn thôi
  14. 01:18:235 (4) - để sang tick đỏ? tick này nghe lệch quá dạ
  15. 01:30:091 (4) - ^ <^>

    quan trọng nhất là cắt bớt rhythm, gap 2/1 nhiều hơn thì có nhiều cách để xử lí 3/2 rhythm hơn, mấy cái gap 3/2 xong rồi 1/1 lẫn lộn linh tinh khó bắt cho ng mới chơi lắm.
cảm ơn ạ :)
Astarte

LMT wrote:

m4m deal, mod dis https://osu.ppy.sh/s/555454
chọn tầm 2 diff là được, top diff, bouyaaa với another ko cần thiết phải mod nhưng mod được thì tốt
[astarte]
  1. 00:12:290 (6,1) - dùng stack cho 2/1 gap rồi thì ở đây không nên dùng stack, đặc biệt là khi người mới chơi read approach circle chưa tốt lắm ko sao. gap khá xa + ds cao nen chả có chỗ nào để. mà diff nay định là khó hơn normal bình thường cho spread đẹp
  2. 01:21:199 (6) - nên để circle -> 1/1 gap hơn tại vì thế này làm loãng mất emphasis của cái 1/2 slider sau đó cho vocal có tính trước lúc map và cũng thử rồi nhưng thấy ko hợp lắm tại khúc này dense thì hay hơn (khó hơn normal chút). Nếu ko dc thì sẽ consider 2 circle vô cài slider sau. dù gì thì cũng chỉ là normal nên mấy cái này chắc ko quan trọng mấy
nice diff
tks
Seaweed
hi hokichi
nm

Check with ranking criteria - adding stuff like [Movie Ver.] is not allowed anymore, put it in tags instead

[notice me]
00:24:330 (3) - i would put this at a sharper angle because it's smoother to play. maybe have a blanket with 00:24:700 (2,3,4,5,6) -

[Insane]
00:00:805 (1,2) - make spacing same as 00:01:360 (2,3) -
00:04:509 (3,1) - these two are visibly further apart than 00:03:954 (2,3) - I think it looks nicer if they had same spacing
00:58:229 (3,4) - looks better if you ctrl j + ctrl g 00:57:859 (1,2) - instead
Topic Starter
0109-

Seaweed wrote:

hi hokichi
nm

Check with ranking criteria - adding stuff like [Movie Ver.] is not allowed anymore, put it in tags instead im not alter-ing the title, as the official CD wrote

[notice me]
00:24:330 (3) - i would put this at a sharper angle because it's smoother to play. maybe have a blanket with 00:24:700 (2,3,4,5,6) - looks good but current pattern is fine

[Insane]
00:00:805 (1,2) - make spacing same as 00:01:360 (2,3) - why?
00:04:509 (3,1) - these two are visibly further apart than 00:03:954 (2,3) - I think it looks nicer if they had same spacing it needs to be emphasized since the pitch went up
00:58:229 (3,4) - looks better if you ctrl j + ctrl g 00:57:859 (1,2) - instead lol it looks worse :(
Thanks for modding :)
-NanoRIPE-
m4m i guess

easy
nice

normal
01:06:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - at least gave player a space minimum 1/2 rhythm cuz usually player who play normal cant handle a dense rhythm,like this rhythm.my suggestion change 1/2 slider at 01:09:344 (6) - and 01:12:308 - into a circle for give player a space
01:18:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

hard
00:11:549 (2,3) - the flow is kinda rough for me,cuz the movement isnt represent the drum well.im prefer you follow ds here and make a small jump at 00:11:919 (3,4) - cuz i feel the drum and guitar quite strong here.example : https://prnt.sc/fpzpqc
00:21:366 (2) - it looks like you tried emphasised the drum here but at the same it feels odd if you didnt emphasised the guitar here cuz the guitar's sound more stronger here.so my suggestion is put 2 circles here 00:21:366 - and then a 1/1 slider on the white tick 00:21:551 -
00:24:515 (5,6,7,8,9) - the issue same as above,its about the way you emphasis the music.so maybe 1/2 slider here 00:24:515 - for guitar and then 1/4 reverse slider at 00:24:793 - for the drum?
00:46:559 (2,1) - ugly overlap actually :/.the overlap is not structured well.just stack the tail on both of that slider instead
00:48:041 (3) - theres no drum sound that have to emphasis with these 1/4 reverse slider,so just use 1/2 slider instead
00:58:414 - if i were you i'd make clickable here for represent the vocal here and on the next tick
01:16:198 (3) - move this slider a bit down (make the jump more bigger) for represent the drum and vocal better

insane
00:21:366 (8) - same as hard
00:27:108 (2) - make this slider a bit farther and give more space for better pattern
01:05:639 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the jump you used here is quite represent the drum here but the flow is kinda meh for me.especially the linear flow on circle (4,5,6) - is not a bit ugly and rough imo,i feel uncomfortable on gameplay.try my pattern if you dont mind : https://prnt.sc/fq034u
01:22:866 (6,1) - just make it closer a lil bit,cuz these jump more bigger if you compared with 01:18:606 (1,2) - that have strong cymbal and vocal on it
01:34:166 (3,4,5) - i think the flow could be polished more (this flow is kinda old and unattractive imo).try this flow instead : http://prntscr.com/fq06kp

notice meh
00:36:000 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the current pattern is a bit weird for me,i mean why you have to ctrl g this slider 00:36:556 (5) - ? and make a jump on it. i know you tried to emphasised the lyric "baka" with those jump but it makes a big weird jump between (5,6) - if you testplay it,you can feel the awkwardness on those jump.so at first you have to make slider object (5,6) - closer cuz the rhythm is 1/4 rhythm and then make a jump on object (6,1) - for the drum.my suggestion : https://prnt.sc/fq0bze

thats all from me
sorry for my broken english xd (now im in training to mod with explanation)
GL!
if you were not satisfied with my mod you can cancelled my m4m
Astarte

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

m4m i guess

normal
01:06:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - at least gave player a space minimum 1/2 rhythm cuz usually player who play normal cant handle a dense rhythm,like this rhythm.my suggestion change 1/2 slider at 01:09:344 (6) - and 01:12:308 - into a circle for give player a space
01:18:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
no diff is intentionally dense in the kiai. makes a nice contrast between intense kiai and calmer parts. true dat its not easy which is why i mainly use sliders and a rly high ds to get rid of overlaps. the whole point, after all, is to make the spread even, as typical normals only get about 1.9* for this song

if the host want to rename it advanced its up to him, otherwise no changes from me
tks for mod
Underforest
completing an m4m req you did time ago, modding back~
short mod

[General]
BPM is not 161.95, correct is 162 plus offset +10

[Easy]
00:10:993 (1) - why map with a reverse? besides drums, there's no notable beat
00:47:300 (1) - there's absolutely no need for NC
01:03:786 (1) - clap?

[Astarte's Normal]
leaving behind the high spacing, the diff is pretty good, good job

[Collab Hard]
00:24:886 (6,7,8,9) - can't you just do a reversing slider? an stream is pretty intense for a hard nor needed
00:31:091 - skipping this beat is not a good idea
01:25:830 (1,3) - 01:26:942 (4,1) - try to avoid overlaps like this

[Insane]
00:13:771 (2,3) - this has no emphasis and its flow is pretty bad

[Notice me!]
00:36:185 (3,5) - no emphasis, might confuse players
01:38:427 - 01:39:353 - between these parts are beats that you can convert them to stream, not mapping them would be a waste

this map still needs stuff to be polished before it can be ranked, but is not that bad
good luck~
Topic Starter
0109-
holy shit i got the blue screen error after replying to all of these oh gosh :(
im so sorry if you really need my explanation i'll try to do it again :(((

Thanks for modding :)
Affirmation
Q

[Notice me]
00:00:815 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - set consistent DS
00:11:555 (2) - 00:13:037 (3) - I suggest you add NC for divide 00:11:555 (2,3,1,2,1,2) -
00:47:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - why don't you make a star(pentagon) pattern for better structure?
00:51:559 (4) - I don't know why you added SV here, you didn't added at other parts.
01:15:633 (1,2) - because of this pattern, 01:16:188 (1,2) - can be hard to read, my suggestion is adding NC on 01:16:559 (2) -

GL
Topic Starter
0109-

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Notice me]
00:00:815 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - set consistent DS they are different
00:11:555 (2) - 00:13:037 (3) - I suggest you add NC for divide 00:11:555 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - ok
00:47:299 (1,2,3,4,5) - why don't you make a star(pentagon) pattern for better structure? adjusted a bit
00:51:559 (4) - I don't know why you added SV here, you didn't added at other parts. removed
01:15:633 (1,2) - because of this pattern, 01:16:188 (1,2) - can be hard to read, my suggestion is adding NC on 01:16:559 (2) - ok

GL
thank you :)
Yamicchi
Sempoi
[Insane]
• 00:01:370 (2,3,1) - intensity bằng nhau mà, spacing lại khác thì hơi kì nhỉ?
• 00:02:666 (2,3,4) - Pattern hơi dị :)) kiểu piano đang đi ngang ngang như kia, thì 00:03:037 (3,4) - trông đẹp rồi mà tự nhiên 00:02:666 (2) - lại nằm lỗi như thế :v
• 00:05:629 (2,3,4) - đây cũng cần chỉnh nè
• 00:06:740 (1,2) - spacing hơi lỗi tí xíu, cho tụi nó gần lại là đc
• 00:11:000 (1) - fck blanket
• 00:19:151 (8,9,1) - đặt cái 8 đẹp á, nhưng để spacing cho triple thì coi bộ hơi khó nhìn. Stack luôn được không nhỉ?
• 00:21:373 (8,1) - Spacing vầy sợ người ta nhìn lộn là 1/4 gap...
• 00:23:966 (1,2,3) - cái jump pattern cứ mỗi 3 cục là ông đổi chiều 1 lần, mà cái này đi tiếp chiều của 00:23:411 (1,2,3) - à? Kì vậy
• 00:36:559 (5,6,7) - stack luôn nhỉ? 2 cái triple thể hiện cùng loại drum mà khác spacing thì kh ổn
• 00:38:596 (1,2,3) - hmm, vocal đang 1/1, cái cuối cùng cao độ lại đi xuống, mà dùng tới 1 circle ở red tick và 1/2 slider? Thái thấy vậy hợp lý không?
• 00:43:040 (1,2) - spacing hơi nhỏ
• 01:13:225 (1) - không nhất thiết phải NC ở đây đâu
[Noticed]
• 00:11:555 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Jump pattern có vẻ không ổn... Nên dùng cái nào mà thấy rõ được cái intensity đi lên ấy, kiểu tăng spacing chẳng hạn, mà theo 1 concept nhất định, chứ đừng nhảy tròn tròn như này :v 00:12:296 (1) - giống như chỗ này thì spacing tự nhiên nhỏ lại tí này, nó không rõ ràng.
• 01:39:336 (1) - không cần spinner luôn hử

Ok diff cuối ổn, có insane cần chăm chút thêm thôi :3
Topic Starter
0109-

Yamicchi wrote:

Sempoi
[Insane]
• 00:01:370 (2,3,1) - intensity bằng nhau mà, spacing lại khác thì hơi kì nhỉ? dạ
• 00:02:666 (2,3,4) - Pattern hơi dị :)) kiểu piano đang đi ngang ngang như kia, thì 00:03:037 (3,4) - trông đẹp rồi mà tự nhiên 00:02:666 (2) - lại nằm lỗi như thế :v oki
• 00:05:629 (2,3,4) - đây cũng cần chỉnh nè ^
• 00:06:740 (1,2) - spacing hơi lỗi tí xíu, cho tụi nó gần lại là đc ok
• 00:11:000 (1) - fck blanket ko định đặt blanket lắm nhưng đã fix ạ
• 00:19:151 (8,9,1) - đặt cái 8 đẹp á, nhưng để spacing cho triple thì coi bộ hơi khó nhìn. Stack luôn được không nhỉ? stack nhìn trông tệ lắm, với cả gameplay bấm cái biến mất luôn mà ko ảnh hưởng đâu
• 00:21:373 (8,1) - Spacing vầy sợ người ta nhìn lộn là 1/4 gap... insane ko ai nghĩ 1/4 lại xa thế đâu.. với cả (1) là slider nên dù bấm sớm chút cũng ko ảnh hưởng xd
• 00:23:966 (1,2,3) - cái jump pattern cứ mỗi 3 cục là ông đổi chiều 1 lần, mà cái này đi tiếp chiều của 00:23:411 (1,2,3) - à? Kì vậy jump thuận tay là đc rồi mà, đi xin testplay các thứ xem cũng ko vấn đề gì lắm
• 00:36:559 (5,6,7) - stack luôn nhỉ? 2 cái triple thể hiện cùng loại drum mà khác spacing thì kh ổn 1 cái có vocal 1 cái không có là khác nhau rồi, để 2 cái triple stack chơi cảm giác awkward thế nào ấy
• 00:38:596 (1,2,3) - hmm, vocal đang 1/1, cái cuối cùng cao độ lại đi xuống, mà dùng tới 1 circle ở red tick và 1/2 slider? Thái thấy vậy hợp lý không? tức là đang muốn thế nào :|, vậy trông ổn mà .. ở 00:39:522 (2) - cũng có tiếng drum nhẹ đồng thời emphasize cái (3) có tiếng gõ với vocal
• 00:43:040 (1,2) - spacing hơi nhỏ đã chỉnh lại chút
• 01:13:225 (1) - không nhất thiết phải NC ở đây đâu ây
[Noticed]
• 00:11:555 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Jump pattern có vẻ không ổn... Nên dùng cái nào mà thấy rõ được cái intensity đi lên ấy, kiểu tăng spacing chẳng hạn, mà theo 1 concept nhất định, chứ đừng nhảy tròn tròn như này :v 00:12:296 (1) - giống như chỗ này thì spacing tự nhiên nhỏ lại tí này, nó không rõ ràng. để xem thêm ý kiến đã, vì đoạn này cũng có đặt NC để chia intensity của từng đoạn rồi, với cả có movement cũng ko làm nó nổi bật quá
• 01:39:336 (1) - không cần spinner luôn hử ừ có khi để spinner trông cho đỡ ngu

Ok diff cuối ổn, có insane cần chăm chút thêm thôi :3
Cảm ơn ạ <3
YukiZura-
M4M :)

Hi~~ xD

Notice me!

00:02:666 (2,3) - better the blanket please
00:06:000 (3,4) - just a suggestion .. i think better do it like this

-because the map change from voice to intrument .. it fit perfectly in my opinion :)
00:13:037 (3) - idk what this slider represent .. if you follow the voice, you should start from here 00:12:852 - my suggestion i think you should delete that slider .. no need to be there
00:09:333 (4,2,4) - better balnket this all
00:48:410 - nc here?
01:05:077 (1,2) - blanket this would be nice
01:18:040 - nc here

Insane

00:13:037 (1) - same as i mention above
00:40:633 - feel like missing something.. yeah i know there is no voice but consistency must have.. this is just a suggestion .. why dont you turn this slider 00:40:077 (1) - into reverse slider and delete this one 00:40:077 (1) - ..

00:42:670 (4,1) - can be better blanket
00:43:040 (1,2) - same as i mention on this 00:40:077 (1) -
00:48:225 (4,3) - might wanna fix this
00:51:188 (1,2) - move this two a bit up ...


that all from me :)
actually what a coincidence .. i also been working on the same song but the longer one :o
this one https://osu.ppy.sh/s/634082 xD bit it still WIP
btw goodluck with your map
Topic Starter
0109-

YukiZura- wrote:

M4M :)

Hi~~ xD

Notice me!

00:02:666 (2,3) - better the blanket please why i have to blanket? i didnt intend to make them blanket
00:06:000 (3,4) - just a suggestion .. i think better do it like this

-because the map change from voice to intrument .. it fit perfectly in my opinion :) i don't think so :( , 1/2 sliders would reflect both the vocal and the piano sounds better imo
00:13:037 (3) - idk what this slider represent .. if you follow the voice, you should start from here 00:12:852 - my suggestion i think you should delete that slider .. no need to be there first point that you said it should start from 00:12:852 - , well just test the map and you'll feel how awkward it is. And the second one, deleting the slider and replace with a note instead would feel somehow really empty, just by placing a slider, 00:13:411 (1) - can also be emphasized a lot
00:09:333 (4,2,4) - better balnket this all this completely fine
00:48:410 - nc here? ok
01:05:077 (1,2) - blanket this would be nice i don't think so, need some spacing for the build-up jumps
01:18:040 - nc here unnecessary

Insane

00:13:037 (1) - same as i mention above same
00:40:633 - feel like missing something.. yeah i know there is no voice but consistency must have.. this is just a suggestion .. why dont you turn this slider 00:40:077 (1) - into reverse slider and delete this one 00:40:077 (1) - .. skipping vocal at 00:40:818 (2) - is not a good idea

00:42:670 (4,1) - can be better blanket i didn't intend to make a blanket, that flows fine
00:43:040 (1,2) - same as i mention on this 00:40:077 (1) - same
00:48:225 (4,3) - might wanna fix this ??
00:51:188 (1,2) - move this two a bit up ... why?


that all from me :)
actually what a coincidence .. i also been working on the same song but the longer one :o
this one https://osu.ppy.sh/s/634082 xD bit it still WIP
btw goodluck with your map
Thanks for modding :) i'll try to deliver u a mod soon
_handholding

Easy
  1. 00:13:037 (2) - Being such a minor vocal I feel it would play better if you delete this circle. It would also put more emphasis on 00:13:411 (1)
  2. 00:03:777 (1) - because of the low object density it would be perfectly ok to delete the NC here
  3. 00:09:703 (1) - ^
  4. 00:34:151 (1) - I think it would be good to add a whistle on the slider end with it being part of the vocal pattern you're following. It would provide a bit more feedback and make the rhythm a bit more natural. Same with this circle 00:35:077 (2)
  5. 00:46:003 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:48:966 (1) to 01:00:818 (3) - In this section I feel it would be more appropriate to follow the vocals like you have done for the rest of the map. A lot of places you can turn them into 3/2 reverse sliders to do this. example 00:54:892 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/wGcLc/291ea99e5d.jpg
  7. 00:59:151 (1) - This NC isn't needed
  8. 01:33:411 (3,1) - Maybe swap NCs for the sake of combo length?
  9. 01:39:336 (1) - imo it would play better if you deleted this circle and had the spinner start here. Having objects right before spinners can put you off a bit which is want you to avoid in the lowest diff

Normal
  1. 00:08:222 (2) - I would start this at 00:08:037 to map the vocals and the melody. If you do this make sure to add a whistle too
  2. 00:29:522 (3) - I feel it would be much more natural to end this on 00:30:077 where the drum beat is. Creating a 1/2 beat between 00:29:522 (3,4) feels rather forced
  3. 00:32:670 (3,4) - suggestion ~ http://puu.sh/wGdmC/6d741e5e9d.jpg
  4. My only real problem with this is that places like 01:05:077 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - you have a massive train of objects with no 1/1 gaps. This can be quite overwhelming. I would suggest turning some 1/2 sldiers into circles. for example 01:09:336 (6) and 01:12:299 (6) . The same also occurs at 01:17:670 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2)
  5. OD 4 would be better with the object density this diff has

Hard
  1. 00:12:481 (5) - It would flow better if you moved it the left https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8556807
  2. 00:24:892 (6,7,8,9) - I strongly recommend not doing a stream here. It makes for a bad spread between normal and hard and streams like this are really hard when grouped up with other objects. You can map 00:24:522 (5,6,7,8,9) - as 2 reverse sliders
  3. 00:34:151 (1,2,3) - This would follow the vocals better http://puu.sh/wGdyX/32fa1f0c35.png . There aren't any vocals at 00:34:892 so mapping it as a clickable object would lead you to mapping something else
  4. 00:50:818 (2,3,4) - This is a bit weird because this kind of pattern only happens here and no where else in the map; because of this I would recommend against it
  5. 00:37:114 (1) to 00:48:966 (1) - I would appreciate some some whistles on vocal sounds in this section like the rest of the map has.
[]Well that's all from me. Some nice clean mapping ~

I hope this mod was useful, GL!
Astarte

Kisses wrote:

Normal
  1. 00:08:222 (2) - I would start this at 00:08:037 to map the vocals and the melody. If you do this make sure to add a whistle too I'd prefer to leave 1/1 gaps for the intro
  2. 00:29:522 (3) - I feel it would be much more natural to end this on 00:30:077 where the drum beat is. Creating a 1/2 beat between 00:29:522 (3,4) feels rather forced I feel like the guitar note is more interesting to map, which is what the next slider is trying to follow
  3. 00:32:670 (3,4) - suggestion ~ http://puu.sh/wGdmC/6d741e5e9d.jpg sounds good
  4. My only real problem with this is that places like 01:05:077 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - you have a massive train of objects with no 1/1 gaps. This can be quite overwhelming. I would suggest turning some 1/2 sldiers into circles. for example 01:09:336 (6) and 01:12:299 (6) . The same also occurs at 01:17:670 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) alright heard this many times now, tried making 1/1 gaps here and there
  5. OD 4 would be better with the object density this diff has lets give it a try then
[]Well that's all from me. Some nice clean mapping ~

I hope this mod was useful, GL!
Thanks. not sure why sr went up after reducing density tho
osu file format v14

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Topic Starter
0109-

Kisses wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:13:037 (2) - Being such a minor vocal I feel it would play better if you delete this circle. It would also put more emphasis on 00:13:411 (1) it feels somehow really empty imo, also placing that (2) makes new players easy to catch the white lines as the previous one ended at the red
  2. 00:03:777 (1) - because of the low object density it would be perfectly ok to delete the NC here ok
  3. 00:09:703 (1) - ^ ^
  4. 00:34:151 (1) - I think it would be good to add a whistle on the slider end with it being part of the vocal pattern you're following. It would provide a bit more feedback and make the rhythm a bit more natural. Same with this circle 00:35:077 (2) yeah ...
  5. 00:46:003 (1,2) - ^ ^
  6. 00:48:966 (1) to 01:00:818 (3) - In this section I feel it would be more appropriate to follow the vocals like you have done for the rest of the map. A lot of places you can turn them into 3/2 reverse sliders to do this. example 00:54:892 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/wGcLc/291ea99e5d.jpg remapped
  7. 00:59:151 (1) - This NC isn't needed ok
  8. 01:33:411 (3,1) - Maybe swap NCs for the sake of combo length? ok
  9. 01:39:336 (1) - imo it would play better if you deleted this circle and had the spinner start here. Having objects right before spinners can put you off a bit which is want you to avoid in the lowest diff fixed


I hope this mod was useful, GL!
Thank you :)
Gaia
I'll leave the hitsound mods to whoever hitsounded this diff :P
ty4 mods
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Artist:HoneyWorks meets TrySail
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Creator:0109-
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Source:好きになるその瞬間を。~告白実行委員会~
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Kurai
[General]
  1. The title of the song should be "センパイ。 [MOVIE Ver.]", then you can add "Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]" as the romanised title.
[Easy]
  1. 00:13:037 (2) - Since the rhythm here is not that obvious, you should consider starting the combo here to help the player notice that it does not follow the logical pattern of the song.
  2. 00:13:037 (2) - Why didn't you map this part?
[Collab Hard]
  1. 00:13:407 (1) - This slider is not properly snapped on the new red line.
  2. 00:58:596 (3) - This jump does not make any sense and seems out of place. You should use the normal spacing here.
  3. 01:11:744 (3) - This jump might be a bit too huge considering you barely use them in this difficulty. However having a jump here fits perfectly the song and it would help the player getting used to playing jumps. I would advise you to keep it but please, reduce the jump a little bit.
[Notice me.]
  1. 00:36:559 (5,6) - This jump is a no go, even if I can understand why you did this, it still isn't intuitive to play and is even quite confusing. Please change this.
Gaia
fixed both points for my part, thx for modding ^^

SPOILER
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Title:Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]
TitleUnicode:Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]
Artist:HoneyWorks meets TrySail
ArtistUnicode:HoneyWorks meets TrySail
Creator:0109-
Version:Collab Hard
Source:好きになるその瞬間を。~告白実行委員会~
Tags:suki ni naru sono shunkan wo kokuhaku jikkou iinkai natsukawa shiina asakura momo amamiya sora
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Topic Starter
0109-
Oh gosh im on vacation gonna reply when im back uwu
Topic Starter
0109-

Kurai wrote:

[General]
  1. The title of the song should be "センパイ。 [MOVIE Ver.]", then you can add "Senpai. [MOVIE Ver.]" as the romanised title. Ok
[Easy]
  1. 00:13:037 (2) - Since the rhythm here is not that obvious, you should consider starting the combo here to help the player notice that it does not follow the logical pattern of the song.Ok
  2. 00:13:037 (2) - Why didn't you map this part? What do you mean? I already placed a note there

[Notice me.]
  1. 00:36:559 (5,6) - This jump is a no go, even if I can understand why you did this, it still isn't intuitive to play and is even quite confusing. Please change this.Ok
Thx :)
Hokichi

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

m4m i guess

hard
00:11:549 (2,3) - the flow is kinda rough for me,cuz the movement isnt represent the drum well.im prefer you follow ds here and make a small jump at 00:11:919 (3,4) - cuz i feel the drum and guitar quite strong here.example : https://prnt.sc/fpzpqc // Something like this may work.
00:21:366 (2) - it looks like you tried emphasised the drum here but at the same it feels odd if you didnt emphasised the guitar here cuz the guitar's sound more stronger here.so my suggestion is put 2 circles here 00:21:366 - and then a 1/1 slider on the white tick 00:21:551 - // Hmm, how about 2 kicksliders at 00:21:366 - then a circle at 00:21:736 - ?
00:24:515 (5,6,7,8,9) - the issue same as above,its about the way you emphasis the music.so maybe 1/2 slider here 00:24:515 - for guitar and then 1/4 reverse slider at 00:24:793 - for the drum? // No thanks, I don't wanna add too much stuff to a Hard diff
00:46:559 (2,1) - ugly overlap actually :/.the overlap is not structured well.just stack the tail on both of that slider instead // Fixed

Underforest wrote:

[Collab Hard]
00:24:886 (6,7,8,9) - can't you just do a reversing slider? an stream is pretty intense for a hard nor needed // Yes
00:31:091 - skipping this beat is not a good idea // Added a kickslider

this map still needs stuff to be polished before it can be ranked, but is not that bad
good luck~

Kisses wrote:

Hard
  1. 00:12:481 (5) - It would flow better if you moved it the left https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8556807 // I changed due to previous mod
  2. 00:24:892 (6,7,8,9) - I strongly recommend not doing a stream here. It makes for a bad spread between normal and hard and streams like this are really hard when grouped up with other objects. You can map 00:24:522 (5,6,7,8,9) - as 2 reverse sliders // Changed due to Underforest's mod
  3. 00:34:151 (1,2,3) - This would follow the vocals better http://puu.sh/wGdyX/32fa1f0c35.png . There aren't any vocals at 00:34:892 so mapping it as a clickable object would lead you to mapping something else // Fixed
[]Well that's all from me. Some nice clean mapping ~

I hope this mod was useful, GL!

Kurai wrote:

[Collab Hard]
  1. 00:13:407 (1) - This slider is not properly snapped on the new red line. // Fixed

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Storyboard stuff
https://puu.sh/wNfcm/275dfe2470.rar

[centre][heading][color=#02ff85]Hokichi's Special Thanks[/color][/heading][/centre]
[list]
[*]ezek for editing the bg for me
[*]GhostFY for the help with the wave script
[*]Damnae for storybrew[/list]
Kurai
Bubbled!
Topic Starter
0109-
Thank you <3 <3 :)
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[General]
offset sounds too early, most noticeable in the kiai. i'd add like +15 ms to ur timing points

hitsounding feels really bare too, since you dont have anything representing the kick drums. it makes sections like 00:37:114 - feel really empty since you only use claps throughout while there is a lot more going on instrumentally that could have feedback. i'd recommend getting a normal-hitclap and using that for any kick drums you hear, and if u do you'll need a copy of a soft whistle so you can have the kick drum + whistle together in places like 00:25:262

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[Notice me!]
  1. 00:13:966 (3) - 00:16:929 (3) - strong offbeats like these deserve to have whistles
  2. 00:17:485 (4,5,1) - flow gets pretty uncomfortable here cos of right angles, i'd try have this slightly higher and to the left https://puu.sh/wSJPX/656ea9a499.png
  3. 00:19:151 (7,8) - 00:21:373 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:24:707 (2,3,4,5,6) - should look to hitsound 1/4s appropriately too. double snare at 00:19:151 (7,8) - so claps would work, snares on 00:21:466 (2,3,4) - etc.
  4. 00:42:299 (3,4,5) - would look neater if u spaced these evenly
  5. 01:07:670 (6,7,1,2) - movement ends up being really sharp here making the jump to 01:08:411 (3) - feel really out of place because of the wider angle. try sticking to similar movement by having 3 somewhere like https://puu.sh/wSLud/f46a27bf1e.png that keeps it sharp
  6. 01:08:040 (1,2) - also should prob swap the nc here for downbeat
  7. 01:12:855 - 01:24:707 - sections like these are missing claps completely on slider ends, the snares still exist 01:13:410 - 01:13:781 - and should be hitsounded with claps
  8. 01:31:929 (5) - should be nced?
  9. 01:38:781 (1) - surprising that you end on the blue tick here and skip the downbeat, while the insane has it ending on the downbeat :d
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:373 (8) - 00:24:707 (2) - etc. 1/4s dont need to be simplified this much in an insane, especially cos the hard uses denser rhythm. mapping out the quintuplet is fine, just dont have it too spaced
  2. 00:19:151 (8,9,1) - spacing seems kinda uneven
  3. 00:24:336 (3,1,2) - using the wider angles when previous stuff was much sharper makes for really uncomfortable movement
  4. 01:07:670 (6) - try keep ur comboing strategies consistent, compared to 01:10:633 (1)
  5. 01:20:633 (3,4,5) - spacing on this stuff feels so big and make stronger beats 01:18:966 (2) - feel weaker in comparison :(
  6. 01:29:151 (1,2,3) - 01:34:151 (3,4,5) - eek with the angles again
you have patterns that would look so much more structured if you used the same sliders, things like 00:05:629 (2,3,4) - 00:34:707 (2,3) - look visually inconsistent because you recreate the slider each time instead of just using flipped copies. also noticed this in the top diff 00:26:744 (1,2) - 00:30:448 (3,4)

[Collab Hard]
  1. 00:00:815 - sv is rly low but spacing seems to be that of a more intense section? should probably use similar spacing to 00:25:262 - imo
  2. 00:24:336 (4,5,6,7) - 1/4s start from 00:24:707 - and end at 00:25:077 - the overmapping seems pretty unnecessary in a hard
  3. 00:29:151 (2,3,4) - problem with mapping vocals is that it doesnt represent intensity too well, the circles here make this part feel more intense compared to 00:26:744 (1,2) - cause of density, but in fact theyre the same. should try to balance out the density and simplify the vocals
  4. 00:31:003 (4) - kickslider is rly short in physical length here and can be misleading, id just stick to triplets lol
  5. 00:37:114 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing on this stuff seems a bit ridiculous when compared to latter parts of the same section 00:40:077 (1,2,3)
  6. 01:33:410 (1) - unsnapped rip
[]
biggest room for improvement would definitely be the hitsounding, try adding on the additional layer of hitsounds that follow kick drums and also listening more closely for whenever snares are present in the music

popping for now cos unrankable stuff, poke me again whenever youve made progress and we'll see how it goes from there
Astarte
oh boy

if you decide to change hitsounding pls copy it to my diff thankss o/
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