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KOTOKO - Koi Kou Enishi

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Crystal
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年9月24日 at 19:43:44

Artist: KOTOKO
Title: Koi Kou Enishi
Source: 千恋*万花
Tags: Senren Banka yuzusoft opening sahuang [Crz]Sword ak74 yf_bmp Sword
BPM: 144
Filesize: 4086kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. ak74's Insane (3.65 stars, 312 notes)
  2. Another (4.08 stars, 358 notes)
  3. Hard (3.11 stars, 278 notes)
  4. Insane (4.27 stars, 368 notes)
  5. Murasame Extra (4.89 stars, 462 notes)
  6. sahuang's Easy (1.37 stars, 97 notes)
  7. Sword's Normal (2.04 stars, 193 notes)
Download: KOTOKO - Koi Kou Enishi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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小丛雨真可爱 我永远喜欢小丛雨.jpg

Easy - sahuang
Normal - [Crz]Sword
Insane - ak74
my waifu extra - yf_bmp

Thanks to:
  1. Garden - Hitsound help & Valuable ideas
  2. F D Flourite & Chaoslitz - Help with ranking process:
    Bubble - F D Flourite / Pop - Chaoslitz / Re-Bubble - Chaoslitz / Rank - F D Flourite
  3. You - Playing this map!
Garden
hi
Hakurei Yoru
sha fa ne
Mei
我想装逼
Kashima
Another

很喜欢这种风格 没啥问题 pass

Murasame

00:02:153 (2) - 移到127 208
00:05:070 (5) - NC
00:14:028 (3) - ctrl+g 前面类似节奏 这个音你是作为重音处理的 这里这样会比较好
00:17:361 (3,4,5,6) - 这一段的话感觉像图里这样处理会比较好 因为1和2已经定下了基本的视觉间距 后面如果没有符合的话直观看上去就是很乱 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303134
01:10:070 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303181
类似问题还挺多的 也许是风格不合我胃口:3

00:25:903 (7,8,9) - 把8移到9的右下方会比较好 因为这里4个音分2组 这样看着像2组的排列

水完
Topic Starter
Crystal

Kashima wrote:

Another

很喜欢这种风格 没啥问题 pass

Murasame

00:02:153 (2) - 移到127 208 可还行
00:05:070 (5) - NC k
00:14:028 (3) - ctrl+g 前面类似节奏 这个音你是作为重音处理的 这里这样会比较好 ctrl+g 轨迹有点怪 再考虑下
00:17:361 (3,4,5,6) - 这一段的话感觉像图里这样处理会比较好 因为1和2已经定下了基本的视觉间距 后面如果没有符合的话直观看上去就是很乱 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303134
01:10:070 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303181 感觉看不出什么区别啊.. 感觉没啥事 微调了下
类似问题还挺多的 也许是风格不合我胃口:3

00:25:903 (7,8,9) - 把8移到9的右下方会比较好 因为这里4个音分2组 这样看着像2组的排列 这样接1 2 flow不太顺 先keep

水完
thanks for modding!
Yousei
本来想找个BGA放上去
最后发现露了...
就很尴尬
Hakurei Yoru
真可爱
[Crz]Makii
我一圈打包红白 rip my 2kds
[Another]
  1. 这滑条玩法是不是hw玩过啊(
  2. 00:05:382 (6,7) - 其实吧这个我不建议往右拐,应该顺着滑条走向,这样的话前奏就是一个style了,顺完滑条走向的00:05:486 (7,1) - 是和00:02:153 (2,3,5,6) - 类似的(实际上歪了一点,如果改的话建议修一下)
  3. 00:28:611 (2,3,4) - 如果是我的话我会让00:28:403 (1,2,3,4,5) - 在一条直线上,这样就符合了00:25:903 (1,2,3,4) - 类似这种的直线style,看起来更有特点.现在的小w型跳整张图中并没有类似的,就有点不符合style
  4. 01:02:986 (1) - ..这个歪了吧, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8436324 我拿那根滑条量了一下
  5. 01:25:903 (1,2,3,4) - ...我觉得还不如就让它顺着转,那种四方跳大概更适合
  6. 我觉得这个ar8就好吧,这种风格不大概都是ar8嘛 反正能dt这个的我个人认为肯定能打10.3
[从雨]
  1. 00:46:111 (7) - 我觉得还是NC一下吧
  2. 基本不用摸
我先预定好主难度dt的pp
Elira
OWO
ak74






sahuang
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[Crz]Makii
交作业交作业
音效我直接复制了主难度 嘻嘻
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33,133,18820,2,0,L|26:69,2,65,10|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,160,19445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,160,19653,2,0,L|189:147,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,90,20070,6,0,P|291:96|367:84,1,130,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,36,20695,2,0,P|424:122|396:155,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,187,21320,2,0,L|340:259,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,318,21736,5,0,0:0:0:0:
390,318,21945,2,0,L|468:325,2,65,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,329,22570,2,0,L|246:334,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,262,22986,2,0,L|149:264,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,325,23403,6,0,P|69:264|91:212,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,159,24028,2,0,L|218:159,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,117,24445,2,0,P|276:78|277:45,2,65,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,181,25070,2,0,P|327:220|326:253,2,65,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,115,25695,5,2,0:0:0:0:
366,115,25903,2,0,P|364:67|368:39,1,65,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,18,26320,1,10,0:0:0:0:
486,78,26528,1,2,0:0:0:0:
454,149,26736,6,0,P|449:198|453:295,1,130,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,348,27361,2,0,L|346:346,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,284,27778,2,0,P|300:246|304:214,2,65,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,344,28403,6,0,P|180:352|124:334,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,266,29028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,266,29236,2,0,L|91:202,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,29653,2,0,L|164:123,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,80,30070,6,0,P|296:114|374:98,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,91,30695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
426,91,30903,2,0,L|503:88,2,65,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,169,31528,1,2,0:0:0:0:
405,169,31736,6,0,L|407:243,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,244,32153,2,0,L|480:328,1,65,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,311,32570,2,0,P|310:324|281:287,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,233,33195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,233,33403,6,0,L|246:149,1,65,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,105,33820,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,86,34028,2,0,P|349:90|420:86,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,105,35070,6,0,L|134:110,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,32,35486,2,0,L|44:36,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
18,99,35903,2,0,P|9:168|37:240,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,267,36528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,267,36736,6,0,L|177:269,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,310,37153,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,233,37361,2,0,P|234:163|236:94,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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382,355,38820,2,0,L|460:352,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
489,287,39236,2,0,P|500:213|490:150,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,87,39861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,87,40070,6,0,L|391:92,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,39,40486,1,10,0:0:0:0:
316,115,40695,2,0,P|312:186|329:253,2,130,2|4|4,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
175,47,41945,6,0,L|173:121,1,65,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,177,42361,2,0,L|217:253,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,310,42778,2,0,B|129:319|129:319|103:308|103:308|51:316,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,241,43403,6,0,P|13:207|16:171,2,65,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,194,44028,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,118,44236,2,0,P|66:79|67:53,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,24,44653,2,0,L|214:27,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,88,45070,6,0,P|244:158|258:229,2,130,2|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,40,46111,2,0,L|443:48,1,130,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,115,46736,6,0,P|490:182|471:250,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,275,47361,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,275,47570,2,0,P|336:279|273:281,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,354,48403,6,0,L|132:288,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,236,48820,2,0,L|77:170,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,131,49236,2,0,P|201:169|271:158,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,38,50070,6,0,P|91:32|35:54,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,128,50695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
13,128,50903,2,0,L|18:215,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,243,51320,2,0,L|74:326,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,349,51736,6,0,P|242:350|277:341,2,130,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,216,52986,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,297,53403,6,0,P|423:320|483:289,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,142,54236,2,0,P|399:119|339:150,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,218,55070,2,0,B|219:283|219:283|207:356,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,282,55903,2,0,B|59:217|59:217|71:144,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,79,56736,6,0,P|288:84|364:74,2,130,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,152,57986,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,261,58403,2,0,P|237:209|475:356,1,390,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60070,12,8,61111,0:1:0:0:
60,77,61736,5,4,0:2:0:0:
60,77,62153,2,0,P|56:176|58:222,2,130,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,41,63403,2,0,L|293:47,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,122,63820,2,0,L|364:119,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,60,64236,2,0,P|435:123|398:184,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,315,65070,6,0,P|398:344|338:319,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,274,65695,2,0,P|240:263|183:291,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,350,66320,2,0,L|59:353,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,290,66736,5,2,0:0:0:0:
17,290,66945,2,0,L|14:194,2,65,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,276,67570,2,0,P|119:205|97:151,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,10,68403,6,0,P|122:46|178:35,1,130,4|10,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,30,69028,2,0,P|306:27|361:60,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,125,69653,2,0,L|407:197,1,65,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,245,70070,5,2,0:0:0:0:
469,245,70278,2,0,B|469:328,2,65,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,261,70903,2,0,L|316:268,1,65,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,338,71320,2,0,L|211:337,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,271,71736,6,0,P|180:183|192:125,2,130,2|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,347,72986,2,0,L|41:274,1,65,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
25,206,73403,6,0,P|24:170|26:136,1,65,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,72,73820,2,0,P|100:63|132:60,1,65,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,107,74236,1,2,0:0:0:0:
226,38,74445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
271,100,74653,2,0,L|346:98,1,65,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,151,75070,6,0,P|397:223|388:288,2,130,4|10|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,105,76111,2,0,L|448:35,2,65,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
485,177,76736,2,0,P|490:249|481:314,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,358,77361,2,0,P|348:367|280:349,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,296,77986,1,10,0:0:0:0:
106,367,78403,6,0,P|89:297|101:239,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,184,79028,2,0,P|163:120|147:58,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,23,79653,1,10,0:0:0:0:
9,163,80070,6,0,L|82:168,1,65,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,241,80486,2,0,L|107:324,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,285,80903,2,0,P|202:204|188:154,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,22,81736,6,0,L|398:36,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,85,82361,1,2,0:0:0:0:
461,85,82570,2,0,P|474:169|460:218,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,263,83195,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,263,83403,6,0,P|336:264|260:271,2,130,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,186,84445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,186,84653,2,0,L|364:105,1,65,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,45,85070,6,0,P|323:25|240:26,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,101,85695,2,0,P|164:103|104:80,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,111,86320,2,0,L|28:179,1,65,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,224,86736,5,2,0:0:0:0:
97,224,86945,2,0,P|95:264|97:292,1,65,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,343,87361,2,0,L|220:345,1,65,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,282,87778,2,0,L|262:205,2,65,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,348,88403,6,0,P|382:361|444:341,1,130,4|10,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,278,89028,2,0,P|475:215|470:146,2,130,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,254,90070,5,0,0:0:0:0:
393,254,90278,2,0,L|382:169,1,65,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,125,90695,2,0,P|267:107|206:189,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,204,91320,2,0,L|195:276,1,65,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,328,91736,6,0,L|328:308,2,65,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,350,92361,2,0,P|120:321|107:255,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,177,92986,1,10,0:0:0:0:
123,177,93195,6,0,P|123:109|113:41,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,32,93820,1,10,0:0:0:0:
194,32,94028,2,0,P|303:44|341:37,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,89,94653,2,0,L|383:153,1,65,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,197,95070,6,0,P|452:269|432:327,1,130,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,350,95695,2,0,P|296:360|230:349,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,280,96320,2,0,L|129:278,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,231,96736,6,0,P|56:157|63:102,1,130,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,61,97361,2,0,P|204:71|272:61,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,109,97986,2,0,L|320:178,1,65,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,225,98403,6,0,L|183:222,2,65,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,249,99028,2,0,P|407:254|448:196,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
466,140,99653,2,0,L|469:68,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,47,100278,6,0,L|246:46,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,122,100695,2,0,L|159:117,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,87,101111,2,0,L|86:19,2,65,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
64,240,101945,2,0,L|57:308,2,65,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
-Eriri-
来水摸了>_<

额.. 图有点牛逼本渣不太会摸,我就来学习学习

[Hard]

音效方面感觉kiai一开始明明很激烈的为什么听起来却感觉有点空空的,怀疑是故意的
01:02:986 (5) - 像这儿我觉得加个clap?这个clap音效感觉整个kiai都不断会比较带感 01:11:111 (4) - 像这儿也可以加

额..然后01:26:945 (2) - 01:27:361 (3) - 01:27:778 (4) - 这三个地方把clap加上去感觉也很带感w

[Murasame]

音效和上面的都一样clap中间断了一下好难受 肯定是故意的

00:23:195 (7,8,1) - 这3连会不会有点扭一起不太好看

01:14:861 (9,10,1) - ^

01:22:153 (2,3) - 01:22:987 (2,3) - 01:23:820 (3,4) - 这我觉得三个的关系应该是间距越来越大的,不过第一个却是最大的而且我看起来好像觉得有点太大了..有点突然.. :o


幼刀好萌啊
祝早日飞升
Gust
昨天太嗨了没时间摸,补上。
小星星无敌

[Hard]
01:04:445 (4,1) - 如果想用小间距的话,可以考虑间距设置成和全图的连打部分的0.4x一致。否则就叠上。
01:06:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同
01:20:070 (1,1) - 01:19:653 (4,5) - 间距统一一下
01:37:986 (8,1,4) - 一是不太好看,二还是间距问题

[Another]
铺面美观问题,下面的分别是例子,类似的不再重复说了
00:22:153 (3,5,6) - 3,5头,6尾这种可以摆一条直线
00:46:736 (1,3) - 平行?
00:47:570 (3,4,1) - 一是3头4尾1尾不是等间距,二是00:46:736 (1,1) - 不是完全的重合
00:55:486 (6,7) - 一是7是重音然而和前边的ds太小,二是67和45也不是对称的,不太好看。。
01:02:361 (2,3,4,1) - 没有在一条直线上

其他的:
01:18:611 - 我是感觉没有理由空音
01:05:903 (5,6) - 我觉得可以改成slider,单note不太合曲

[Murasame]
00:46:111 (7) - NC
00:57:570 (4) - 长白线推荐改成note
01:11:111 (1,2) - NC应该在2

BN Please
yf_bmp
buhei
我不摸yf
Murasame
00:36:320 - 00:39:653 - 这两个地方总感觉一个clap不是很够,要不然加个whistle? 像ak的难度这里就挺好
00:44:653 (6,7) - 不是很懂为什么跳这么大
00:46:111 (7) - 感觉弄弯一点更配合背景音 感觉ak是真的懂我
00:51:736 (1,2,3,4) - 不建议在这种地方放这种小跳,本来sv就低,这样真的难受极了。00:57:153 (2,3,4) - 这种就舒服很多
00:52:570 (4) - 建议弄成1/2滑条+二连,00:52:778 - 00:52:882 - 有音。顺便如果你要改的话,00:52:570 (4) - 加个finish有奇效
00:59:028 - 漏鼓了好难过
01:05:070 (1,2) - 建议弄成1/2滑条+二连的节奏,因为01:05:382 - 这里有音,按你现在的摆法,和01:05:903 (4,5) - 的区别体现不出来

Another
00:06:632 (7,1) - 后面的这种拆分都没啥问题,但这里感觉有点突然,还是放近一点比较好
00:36:320 - 00:39:653 - 加whistle
00:52:986 - 加个finish吧
00:59:028 - 漏鼓。。好吧当我没说
01:41:111 (2,1) - 可以放远一点,配合背景音

ak
00:40:695 (4) - 小跳一下
00:52:778 (3) - 改成短折返
01:00:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不建议用默认音效
01:05:070 (1) - 01:18:403 (1) - 你这两个地方用一样的节奏处理,但是前面的节奏不一样啊,还是区分一下吧

hard
00:35:382 - 不是很明白这个note哪来的
00:38:299 - 倒是这个地方缺了个note,能不能三连堆叠处理一下
00:38:299 - 加finish
01:39:445 (6) - 这种很不好读啊 七连的开头还用滑条尾来处理了 我觉得还不如4个note+短折返


低难度不会摸
Hakurei Yoru
电脑把我垃圾到了 我换个好看的头像来
Adol Christin
水一篇

yf

  1. 00:06:111 (1,2,3,1) - 这个1/6感觉有点强行,我在原曲并没有找到什么1/6的依据,1/4倒还有个乐器作凭据。建议改1/4。
  2. 00:13:195 (1,2,3,1) - 基本同理,这里还有明显的1/4敲击声

Mura

  1. 00:13:195 (7,1) - 虽然现在这个也可以,不过我觉得试着做成3连会更有趣,毕竟主难度,而且音乐也允许。
  2. 00:52:153 (3) - 拆成2圈好。因为滑条尾那个点的鼓点跟后面1头连成了连续两声鼓。做成一个跟后面排列联系紧密一点的,可以点到的圈比较好。比如这样:https://puu.sh/wZGzb/545df7e425.png

Another

  1. 00:31:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以试着整个梗顺时针旋转10度,显得更加方正

ak74

  1. 00:11:736 - 有鼓,建议不空拍。空拍会有点难读。
  2. 00:18:611 (1) - 00:19:028 (3) - 00:19:028 (3) - 这里并没有snare音啊,只是镲的音稍微变重了而已,用这个clap感觉违和感强烈,最好删去。
  3. 01:41:528 (1) - 01:42:153 (2) - 这两个点的敲击声感觉也不合曲,建议找一个地鼓音效替换掉

Hard感觉很好,没什么好说的。E和N懒看了。就这样吧
DeletedUser_3638005
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[Hard]
  1. 01:15:695 (2,3) - I'm not sure if an overlap like that is ok in a Hard difficulty, you should ask someone else so you don't run into problems.
[ak74's Insane]
  1. 00:11:528 - You should consider making this beat clickable. It's too intense to have on a slider end, so I suggest you place a hitcircle 00:11:320 - here, and a 1/2 slider 00:11:528 - here.
[Another]
  1. 00:52:153 (3,1) - This rhythm is a bit questionable, and the spacing can be deceiving. The reason for that is because you ignore 00:52:361 - this beat and it becomes weird. Apparently you are following the vocals, so how about making 00:52:153 (3) - this into a slider?
  2. 01:05:278 - Why do you ignore this note ;w;
  3. 01:05:903 (5,6) - I would personally make those sliders instead. It's the kiai time, and this kiai is arguably the most intense part of the song, so it's generally encouraged use low note density on them.
[Murasame]
  1. 00:44:028 (4,5) - Ctrl + G those mainly for the rhythm choice, if you don't like the placement then you could move adjust that but I think it's nice.
  2. 01:23:403 (1) - You should consider making this a slider, it probably follows the song's rhythm better, as you have been doing sliders on every 2/1 beat here 01:21:736 (1,1,1) - .
[yf's Extra]
  1. 00:17:361 (4,1,3,1) - Is there any particular reason you decided to stack these notes? In the previous sections you did fullscreen transitions like this 00:11:528 (7,1) - and 00:08:195 (7,1) - . So I recommend that you change likewise. A suggestion would be to take these 3 notes 00:17:778 (1,2,3) - and move them to the bottom right of the screen.
  2. There are no beats on these notes 00:31:215 - and 00:31:424 - , so I highly suggest you remove them, as it's currently overmapped. You could potentially even remove 00:30:799 (2) - even though there is a sound here and it's not overmapped, however would compliment the song's rhythm better if you did.
  3. 01:05:278 - You should probably place a note to this beat and make it a triple instead. Currently it seems weird and the spacing is confusing. If you still don't want to place a note there, then I suggest you increase the spacing of the double.

Good luck! ()
ak74

buhei wrote:

ak
00:40:695 (4) - 小跳一下 o
00:52:778 (3) - 改成短折返 o
01:00:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不建议用默认音效 orz不想和murasame的音效重复 就加了soft的clap音效
01:05:070 (1) - 01:18:403 (1) - 你这两个地方用一样的节奏处理,但是前面的节奏不一样啊,还是区分一下吧 我觉得没事

Adol Christin wrote:

ak74

  1. 00:11:736 - 有鼓,建议不空拍。空拍会有点难读。 我后面也是这个节奏啊,跟的不是鼓的轨,我觉得没事
  2. 00:18:611 (1) - 00:19:028 (3) - 00:19:028 (3) - 这里并没有snare音啊,只是镲的音稍微变重了而已,用这个clap感觉违和感强烈,最好删去。 emmmmmm为啥我觉得这里加的还不错呢,keep
  3. 01:41:528 (1) - 01:42:153 (2) - 这两个点的敲击声感觉也不合曲,建议找一个地鼓音效替换掉 这个是为了配合突然的高音,我觉得没事

Riven wrote:

[ak74's Insane]
  1. 00:11:528 - You should consider making this beat clickable. It's too intense to have on a slider end, so I suggest you place a hitcircle 00:11:320 - here, and a 1/2 slider 00:11:528 - here.
    Surely I've thought about dealing with the rhythm just as your mod,but such way makes the notes unnessarily "lengthy".OTOH the pause I made here suits the instrument well imo,so keep
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Topic Starter
Crystal

[Crz]Sword wrote:

我一圈打包红白 rip my 2kds
[Another]
  1. 这滑条玩法是不是hw玩过啊(
  2. 00:05:382 (6,7) - 其实吧这个我不建议往右拐,应该顺着滑条走向,这样的话前奏就是一个style了,顺完滑条走向的00:05:486 (7,1) - 是和00:02:153 (2,3,5,6) - 类似的(实际上歪了一点,如果改的话建议修一下) 没想那么多 感觉变化一下比较有意思
  3. 00:28:611 (2,3,4) - 如果是我的话我会让00:28:403 (1,2,3,4,5) - 在一条直线上,这样就符合了00:25:903 (1,2,3,4) - 类似这种的直线style,看起来更有特点.现在的小w型跳整张图中并没有类似的,就有点不符合style 还行 其他地方也是有w型的只不过不是顺序
  4. 01:02:986 (1) - ..这个歪了吧, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8436324 我拿那根滑条量了一下 算了下坐标 偏了1个格鸽子
  5. 01:25:903 (1,2,3,4) - ...我觉得还不如就让它顺着转,那种四方跳大概更适合 啊 不要啊 超卡手
  6. 我觉得这个ar8就好吧,这种风格不大概都是ar8嘛 反正能dt这个的我个人认为肯定能打10.3 改成8.5了
[从雨]
  1. 00:46:111 (7) - 我觉得还是NC一下吧 kk
  2. 基本不用摸
我先预定好主难度dt的pp

-Eriri- wrote:

来水摸了>_<

额.. 图有点牛逼本渣不太会摸,我就来学习学习

[Hard]

音效方面感觉kiai一开始明明很激烈的为什么听起来却感觉有点空空的,怀疑是故意的 都是24clap 下面提到的是24线但是漏掉的加上了 其他的没加
01:02:986 (5) - 像这儿我觉得加个clap?这个clap音效感觉整个kiai都不断会比较带感 01:11:111 (4) - 像这儿也可以加

额..然后01:26:945 (2) - 01:27:361 (3) - 01:27:778 (4) - 这三个地方把clap加上去感觉也很带感w

[Murasame]

音效和上面的都一样clap中间断了一下好难受 肯定是故意的

00:23:195 (7,8,1) - 这3连会不会有点扭一起不太好看 没有啊..故意的 直线三连看厌了

01:14:861 (9,10,1) - ^

01:22:153 (2,3) - 01:22:987 (2,3) - 01:23:820 (3,4) - 这我觉得三个的关系应该是间距越来越大的,不过第一个却是最大的而且我看起来好像觉得有点太大了..有点突然.. :o fixed


幼刀好萌啊 <龙图>
祝早日飞升

Gust wrote:

昨天太嗨了没时间摸,补上。
小星星无敌

[Hard]
01:04:445 (4,1) - 如果想用小间距的话,可以考虑间距设置成和全图的连打部分的0.4x一致。否则就叠上。
01:06:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同
01:20:070 (1,1) - 01:19:653 (4,5) - 间距统一一下 这个没看懂 其他三个改了
01:37:986 (8,1,4) - 一是不太好看,二还是间距问题

[Another]
铺面美观问题,下面的分别是例子,类似的不再重复说了
00:22:153 (3,5,6) - 3,5头,6尾这种可以摆一条直线
00:46:736 (1,3) - 平行?
00:47:570 (3,4,1) - 一是3头4尾1尾不是等间距,二是00:46:736 (1,1) - 不是完全的重合
00:55:486 (6,7) - 一是7是重音然而和前边的ds太小,二是67和45也不是对称的,不太好看。。
01:02:361 (2,3,4,1) - 没有在一条直线上 都改了

其他的:
01:18:611 - 我是感觉没有理由空音 我是觉得没理由加上 是突出vocal
01:05:903 (5,6) - 我觉得可以改成slider,单note不太合曲 这里之前的二连是着重突出3/4的vocal的 这里也是 所以都是单点 然而6前面如果加上的话就会非常非常卡手 考虑到那个音比较轻我就带过去了

[Murasame]
00:46:111 (7) - NC
00:57:570 (4) - 长白线推荐改成note
01:11:111 (1,2) - NC应该在2 都改了

BN Please

buhei wrote:

我不摸yf
Murasame
00:36:320 - 00:39:653 - 这两个地方总感觉一个clap不是很够,要不然加个whistle? 像ak的难度这里就挺好 ok
00:44:653 (6,7) - 不是很懂为什么跳这么大 那小点
00:46:111 (7) - 感觉弄弯一点更配合背景音 感觉ak是真的懂我
00:51:736 (1,2,3,4) - 不建议在这种地方放这种小跳,本来sv就低,这样真的难受极了。00:57:153 (2,3,4) - 这种就舒服很多 感觉还行啊..
00:52:570 (4) - 建议弄成1/2滑条+二连,00:52:778 - 00:52:882 - 有音。顺便如果你要改的话,00:52:570 (4) - 加个finish有奇效 考虑过 然而这里不想打破一致性
00:59:028 - 漏鼓了好难过 主要是跟背景那个弦 这里加上有点奇怪
01:05:070 (1,2) - 建议弄成1/2滑条+二连的节奏,因为01:05:382 - 这里有音,按你现在的摆法,和01:05:903 (4,5) - 的区别体现不出来 没关系啊 这两个都有vocal

Another
00:06:632 (7,1) - 后面的这种拆分都没啥问题,但这里感觉有点突然,还是放近一点比较好 ok
00:36:320 - 00:39:653 - 加whistle
00:52:986 - 加个finish吧
00:59:028 - 漏鼓。。好吧当我没说 这三条都同上
01:41:111 (2,1) - 可以放远一点,配合背景音 ok

hard
00:35:382 - 不是很明白这个note哪来的 emmm
00:38:299 - 倒是这个地方缺了个note,能不能三连堆叠处理一下 ok
00:38:299 - 加finish ?
01:39:445 (6) - 这种很不好读啊 七连的开头还用滑条尾来处理了 我觉得还不如4个note+短折返 5连有点坑 先keep


低难度不会摸

Adol Christin wrote:

水一篇

Mura

  1. 00:13:195 (7,1) - 虽然现在这个也可以,不过我觉得试着做成3连会更有趣,毕竟主难度,而且音乐也允许。连续三连有点难摆的美观 先keep
  2. 00:52:153 (3) - 拆成2圈好。因为滑条尾那个点的鼓点跟后面1头连成了连续两声鼓。做成一个跟后面排列联系紧密一点的,可以点到的圈比较好。 考虑过 然而摆不出想要的 比如这样:https://puu.sh/wZGzb/545df7e425.png

Another

  1. 00:31:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以试着整个梗顺时针旋转10度,显得更加方正 ok

Hard感觉很好,没什么好说的。E和N懒看了。就这样吧

Riven wrote:

hello

[notice][Hard]
  1. 01:15:695 (2,3) - I'm not sure if an overlap like that is ok in a Hard difficulty, you should ask someone else so you don't run into problems. adjusted the 3rd to overlap less
[Another]
  1. 00:52:153 (3,1) - This rhythm is a bit questionable, and the spacing can be deceiving. The reason for that is because you ignore 00:52:361 - this beat and it becomes weird. Apparently you are following the vocals, so how about making 00:52:153 (3) - this into a slider? ok!
  2. 01:05:278 - Why do you ignore this note ;w; i specially emphasize vocal here
  3. 01:05:903 (5,6) - I would personally make those sliders instead. It's the kiai time, and this kiai is arguably the most intense part of the song, so it's generally encouraged use low note density on them. as mentioned above i emphasize vocal here. so i mapped only circles which snap every vocal sound. but the sound at 01:06:215 is ignored because it's, in any way, awkward to hit a double and then wait a full 1/1, plus the vocal sound here is relatively soft so i gave this no attention to make the whole pattern more playing-friendly
[Murasame]
  1. 00:44:028 (4,5) - Ctrl + G those mainly for the rhythm choice, if you don't like the placement then you could move adjust that but I think it's nice. sure
  2. 01:23:403 (1) - You should consider making this a slider, it probably follows the song's rhythm better, as you have been doing sliders on every 2/1 beat here 01:21:736 (1,1,1) - . i simply want to make these 3 "2/1 patterns" each harder, including increasing spacing, and converting sliders into circles
Good luck! ()
thanks for modding!!
yf_bmp

Riven wrote:

[yf's Extra]
  1. 00:17:361 (4,1,3,1) - Is there any particular reason you decided to stack these notes? In the previous sections you did fullscreen transitions like this 00:11:528 (7,1) - and 00:08:195 (7,1) - . So I recommend that you change likewise. A suggestion would be to take these 3 notes 00:17:778 (1,2,3) - and move them to the bottom right of the screen. ok
  2. There are no beats on these notes 00:31:215 - and 00:31:424 - , so I highly suggest you remove them, as it's currently overmapped. You could potentially even remove 00:30:799 (2) - even though there is a sound here and it's not overmapped, however would compliment the song's rhythm better if you did. remove the first one
  3. 01:05:278 - You should probably place a note to this beat and make it a triple instead. Currently it seems weird and the spacing is confusing. If you still don't want to place a note there, then I suggest you increase the spacing of the double. 01:05:382 (1,2) - 01:18:715 (1,2) - they're consistent
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F D Flourite
Mark,这周还在改皮安定,会挑时间摸的
Adol Christin
555yf不理我
F D Flourite
讲道理我骗顶还没改完,都咕都咕

[General]
  1. Metadata already confirmed?
  2. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
    normal-hitclap.wav
    normal-hitnormal.wav
    normal-hitnormal10.wav
    soft-hitclap10.wav
[sahuang's Easy]
  1. 00:19:445 (4) - 这个其实单独一个circle在白线上效果还好一些。
  2. 你这个break的懒偷的不好。除了节奏慢了之外,鼓点音乐的强度其实都没有太大幅度的减少。而且本来就那么短一首歌,还是把这一段糊上比较好。
  3. 01:11:736 (1,2) - 这个blanket有点丑
  4. 01:05:070 (1) - 这个滑条尾叠起来的音效很奇怪,两个鼓点从风格上都是不搭的。建议不要这样下,留clap就好了
  5. 01:07:153 (4) - ^
  6. 01:39:861 (3) - 拆成note+滑条?本来01:40:278 - 绿线前后两部分音乐就是切割开的。
[Sword's Normal]
  1. 00:04:028 (2) - 节奏处理很莫名。滑条头的音和slidertick及滑条尾的音是属于两个音乐section的。现在这样连起来没道理。拆成放在00:04:028 - 的一个circle,停顿1/1拍再下节奏
  2. 00:05:486 (2,3) - 两个drum-hitclap要处理音效的音量。现在这样太突兀了
  3. 00:14:653 (3,1) - 参考00:08:611 (2,3) - 的节奏
  4. 00:53:403 (1) - 为何从这里开始就忽视1/2 vocal了?如果你真要这样做就要考虑简化00:46:736 - 到00:51:736 - 的节奏,否则在前后乐曲变化不大的情况下有明显的节奏密度差别是不行的。
  5. 01:05:695 (2) - 越过了vocal重音 01:09:028 (2) - same。最好拆节奏:这样直接跟音乐不好吗?
  6. 01:18:403 (1,2,3) - ^ similar issue
  7. 01:26:736 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方节奏明显是滑条头下白线吧。这种打乱滑条和圈的节奏下法在乐曲鼓点不鲜明的时候还可以用,但是这里明显就没跟上音乐。
  8. 01:00:070 (1) - 这个转盘无论是持续时间还是恢复时间都和现在的RC不符,需要去掉换成其它的
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:486 (4) - 嗯,这个音效,处理一下音量吧
  2. 00:06:111 (6) - ^
  3. 00:20:278 (2,3) - 这个梗变距有点大,比几个重音处理的距离还大
  4. 01:03:195 (6) - 这个好像摆的离01:02:570 (3,4,5) - 近一点会比较好
  5. 00:57:361 (2) - 也加上whistle
[ak74's Insane]
  1. 00:05:486 (3,4,5) - 1/4重音安排刚好和音乐反了
  2. 00:06:320 (1) - 拆成1/2节奏
  3. 00:09:653 (1,2) - 考虑和00:10:486 (4) - 叠起来,或者至少换一个位置。因为00:09:861 (2,3) - 是两个小节
  4. 00:16:320 (1,2,3) - 01:31:320 (1,2,3) - ^
  5. 00:46:736 (1) - 怎么从这里开始没音效了?
  6. 01:06:320 (4,1) - 这里不要做3/4+1/4,就标准的1/2节奏。后面的vocal比较轻,做这种强调节奏不好听
  7. 01:19:653 (4,1) - ^
  8. 01:20:903 (5,6,7,8) - 减少01:20:903 (5,6,7) - stream距离,加大滑条跳距离。现在这样很丑
[Another]
  1. 00:05:486 (7,4) - 同Hard,音效音量
  2. 00:19:861 (3,4,1) - 作为一个这么简单的diff,把这个弄成滑条跳?
  3. 00:45:695 (1,2,3) - 没必要NC
  4. 00:52:570 (1) - ^
  5. 啊你这图NC乱七八糟的,比如00:18:195 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - 哪要这么多NC啊。你自己检查一下
  6. 01:41:528 (1,2) - 摆歪了
[Insane]
  1. 00:49:028 - 可以加whistle
  2. 00:55:695 - 00:57:361 - ^
  3. 01:19:236 (4,5) - 丑
  4. 00:07:986 (3) - 放(0,223)左右?
  5. 00:25:695 (6,7) - 这个距离上4.0了,控制一下。尽量让大跳和普通跳有个区分
  6. 00:37:361 (2,3) - ^ 同
[Murasame Extra]
  1. 00:31:632 (4) - 考虑去掉这个note。这个跟的不是乐器,和其它地方不一样,听起来有明显的不同
  2. 00:06:320 (1,2,1,2,1) - 丑。在editor里看都觉得不舒服。你做成这样至少editor里能看吧。
  3. 00:25:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - 考虑至少和00:24:445 (5,6,7,1) - 叠上2个吧,现在这样overlap也看起来没polish的样子
  4. 00:47:986 (4,1) - 隔得太远了。在这种安静的段落缩小一点
  5. 01:03:195 (5,6,1) - 在跟完乐器后感觉不要下这种yy的三连比较好,有点让我产生误解以为这也是跟乐器的三连。去掉01:03:299 (6) - 然后改一下间距吧
  6. 01:16:632 (6) - 同理^
  7. 01:16:736 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这一段节奏拆成2个五连要自然一些,即空出01:17:465 - 。因为明显后面(01:17:986 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - )的节奏比你这里的overmap要空了太多。对比太明显了,和乐曲本身的感觉不符
  8. 怎么最后一段塞爆了?感觉01:29:340 (5) - 01:30:174 (4) - 这种连起来其实没有必要。因为最后这一段的音乐明显是要喘一口气的,塞爆听起来挺奇怪的。
感觉最后一个diff的节奏可以再review一下。consistency有点差
review完之后Call me back
[Crz]Makii

F D Flourite wrote:

讲道理我骗顶还没改完,都咕都咕

[Sword's Normal]
  1. 00:04:028 (2) - 节奏处理很莫名。滑条头的音和slidertick及滑条尾的音是属于两个音乐section的。现在这样连起来没道理。拆成放在00:04:028 - 的一个circle,停顿1/1拍再下节奏 fixed.
  2. 00:05:486 (2,3) - 两个drum-hitclap要处理音效的音量。现在这样太突兀了减弱了第一个drumclap的音量
  3. 00:14:653 (3,1) - 参考00:08:611 (2,3) - 的节奏 fixed.
  4. 00:53:403 (1) - 为何从这里开始就忽视1/2 vocal了?如果你真要这样做就要考虑简化00:46:736 - 到00:51:736 - 的节奏,否则在前后乐曲变化不大的情况下有明显的节奏密度差别是不行的。 跟好了1/2.
  5. 01:05:695 (2) - 越过了vocal重音 01:09:028 (2) - same。最好拆节奏:这样直接跟音乐不好吗?fixed.
  6. 01:18:403 (1,2,3) - ^ similar issue done.
  7. 01:26:736 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方节奏明显是滑条头下白线吧。这种打乱滑条和圈的节奏下法在乐曲鼓点不鲜明的时候还可以用,但是这里明显就没跟上音乐。done.
  8. 01:00:070 (1) - 这个转盘无论是持续时间还是恢复时间都和现在的RC不符,需要去掉换成其它的换了,但不确定是否可以,因为中间间隔较长.
感觉最后一个diff的节奏可以再review一下。consistency有点差
review完之后Call me back
小星星顺手把tags里加个sword吧..因为"[]"这个东西点进去不会显示qwq
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PreviewTime: 60903
Countdown: 0
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Title:Koi Kou Enishi
TitleUnicode:恋ひ恋ふ縁
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Source:千恋*万花
Tags:Senren Banka yuzusoft opening sahuang [Crz]Sword ak74 yf_bmp
BeatmapID:1383741
BeatmapSetID:622780

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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ak74

F D Flourite wrote:

[ak74's Insane]
  1. 00:05:486 (3,4,5) - 1/4重音安排刚好和音乐反了 ??? 没听出来哪里反了
  2. 00:06:320 (1) - 拆成1/2节奏 用滑条表示这里的音作为开场我觉得挺不错的,调了一下NC看起来更舒服一点,节奏就算了
  3. 00:09:653 (1,2) - 考虑和00:10:486 (4) - 叠起来,或者至少换一个位置。因为00:09:861 (2,3) - 是两个小节
  4. 00:16:320 (1,2,3) - 01:31:320 (1,2,3) - ^
    ????? 我是根据旋律做的这些梗,小节我觉得不是太重要
  5. 00:46:736 (1) - 怎么从这里开始没音效了? 加了,总体音效都加了一点
  6. 01:06:320 (4,1) - 这里不要做3/4+1/4,就标准的1/2节奏。后面的vocal比较轻,做这种强调节奏不好听 别吧,我对这梗还挺满意的,keep
  7. 01:19:653 (4,1) - ^ ^
  8. 01:20:903 (5,6,7,8) - 减少01:20:903 (5,6,7) - stream距离,加大滑条跳距离。现在这样很丑 o
星星学习性信息.epub
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Title:Koi Kou Enishi
TitleUnicode:恋ひ恋ふ縁
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Topic Starter
Crystal

F D Flourite wrote:

讲道理我骗顶还没改完,都咕都咕

[General]
  1. Metadata already confirmed? 有ranked版本是这样我想应该没问题
  2. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms: kk gt fix soon
    normal-hitclap.wav
    normal-hitnormal.wav
    normal-hitnormal10.wav
    soft-hitclap10.wav
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:486 (4) - 嗯,这个音效,处理一下音量吧
  2. 00:06:111 (6) - ^
  3. 00:20:278 (2,3) - 这个梗变距有点大,比几个重音处理的距离还大 我倒是觉得没关系 因为这个结尾是折返过的滑条尾 按键密度并不大 可以支撑这样的间距 倒不如说放紧的话反而会奇怪
  4. 01:03:195 (6) - 这个好像摆的离01:02:570 (3,4,5) - 近一点会比较好
  5. 00:57:361 (2) - 也加上whistle
[Another]
  1. 00:05:486 (7,4) - 同Hard,音效音量
  2. 00:19:861 (3,4,1) - 作为一个这么简单的diff,把这个弄成滑条跳? 不觉得这个是简单的diff啊..弄点新意的感觉吧 keep
  3. 00:45:695 (1,2,3) - 没必要NC
  4. 00:52:570 (1) - ^
  5. 啊你这图NC乱七八糟的,比如00:18:195 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - 哪要这么多NC啊。你自己检查一下 这整个diff由于斜线摆法会比较limited 很多placement是重复的 短时间内重复的摆法我加了NC一是不容易视觉疲劳二是分割更清楚 这边说到的3处大约都是上面说的情况
  6. 01:41:528 (1,2) - 摆歪了
[Insane]
  1. 00:49:028 - 可以加whistle
  2. 00:55:695 - 00:57:361 - ^
  3. 01:19:236 (4,5) - 丑 倒是觉得还好 如果5放平的话反而flow折的有点怪
  4. 00:07:986 (3) - 放(0,223)左右?
  5. 00:25:695 (6,7) - 这个距离上4.0了,控制一下。尽量让大跳和普通跳有个区分
  6. 00:37:361 (2,3) - ^ 同 上面那个改了 这个没改 理由和hard那个差不多 上面是五连接跳点击密度比较高 这边简单相对简单我认为没什么问题
感觉最后一个diff的节奏可以再review一下。consistency有点差
review完之后Call me back
thanks for modding~
no reply = fixed! :)
sahuang

F D Flourite wrote:

讲道理我骗顶还没改完,都咕都咕

[sahuang's Easy]
  1. 00:19:445 (4) - 这个其实单独一个circle在白线上效果还好一些。
    fixed
  2. 你这个break的懒偷的不好。除了节奏慢了之外,鼓点音乐的强度其实都没有太大幅度的减少。而且本来就那么短一首歌,还是把这一段糊上比较好。
    这个break不准备去掉,虽然歌曲很短但是这边的副歌明显是过渡段。。(full的话大部分人都会省掉,我感觉tv size空个10s也没事)
    顺便以前几张easy gd都是这样空掉的orz
  3. 01:11:736 (1,2) - 这个blanket有点丑
    changed a little bit, tried my best zzz
  4. 01:05:070 (1) - 这个滑条尾叠起来的音效很奇怪,两个鼓点从风格上都是不搭的。建议不要这样下,留clap就好了
  5. 01:07:153 (4) - ^
  6. 01:39:861 (3) - 拆成note+滑条?本来01:40:278 - 绿线前后两部分音乐就是切割开的。all fixed
review完之后Call me back
谢啦

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F D Flourite wrote:

[Murasame Extra]
  1. 00:31:632 (4) - 考虑去掉这个note。这个跟的不是乐器,和其它地方不一样,听起来有明显的不同 我加了个hit-hats音效
  2. 00:06:320 (1,2,1,2,1) - 丑。在editor里看都觉得不舒服。你做成这样至少editor里能看吧。 re
  3. 00:25:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - 考虑至少和00:24:445 (5,6,7,1) - 叠上2个吧,现在这样overlap也看起来没polish的样子 re
  4. 00:47:986 (4,1) - 隔得太远了。在这种安静的段落缩小一点re,re之后这种情况是故意的
  5. 01:03:195 (5,6,1) - 在跟完乐器后感觉不要下这种yy的三连比较好,有点让我产生误解以为这也是跟乐器的三连。去掉01:03:299 (6) - 然后改一下间距吧 hit-hats
  6. 01:16:632 (6) - 同理^
  7. 01:16:736 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这一段节奏拆成2个五连要自然一些,即空出01:17:465 - 。因为明显后面(01:17:986 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - )的节奏比你这里的overmap要空了太多。对比太明显了,和乐曲本身的感觉不符 re
  8. 怎么最后一段塞爆了?感觉01:29:340 (5) - 01:30:174 (4) - 这种连起来其实没有必要。因为最后这一段的音乐明显是要喘一口气的,塞爆听起来挺奇怪的。re
感觉最后一个diff的节奏可以再review一下。consistency有点差
review完之后Call me back
问题应该都已经解决了
http://puu.sh/xwjOy/c1928fce33.zip
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